RI.7.9: How Two Authors Shape the Same Facts: Do Beavers Think?
In plain English: RI.7.9 is the Common Core grade 7 ELA standard that asks students to analyze how two or more authors writing about the same topic shape the key information, by emphasizing different evidence or by interpreting the same facts differently. Students separate the facts the texts share from what each author says they mean. It builds on RI.6.9.
Analyze how two or more authors writing about the same topic shape their presentations of key information by emphasizing different evidence or advancing different interpretations of facts.
Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts & Literacy · Domain: Reading Standards for Informational Text · Cluster: Integration of Knowledge and Ideas · Official standard
RI.7.9 asks students to analyze how two or more authors writing about the same topic shape their presentations of key information. Key information is the set of facts a reader needs about the topic. Authors shape it in two ways the standard names: by emphasizing different evidence (choosing which facts and observations to put first, tell in detail or leave out) and by advancing different interpretations of facts (saying different things about what the same facts mean).
The topic is an old question that seventh graders enjoy: do beavers think? Every author in the lesson agrees that beavers build dams, lodges and canals. They disagree about what that building shows. John Burroughs, in Ways of Nature (1905), says it is instinct. Enos Mills, who watched beaver colonies in the Colorado mountains for years, says in Watched by Wild Animals (1922) that beavers work for a purpose and plan ahead. The teacher models the analysis on one passage by each author, pairs analyze a second pair of passages with prompts, and students analyze a third pair on their own. For homework, a third author, William Davenport Hulbert, joins the conversation.
Learning Objectives
By the end of this lesson, students will be able to:
Identify the key information that two authors writing on the same topic both present
Explain which evidence each author emphasizes, and what he leaves out, with a quotation from each text
Tell a fact from an author's interpretation of it, using signal words such as "probably" and "evidently"
Analyze how two authors advance different interpretations of the same facts and how word choice supports each one
Write a paragraph that analyzes how two or more authors shape their presentations of the same topic
Prior Knowledge Required
Students should already be comfortable with:
Comparing and contrasting two authors' presentations of the same events RI.6.9
Analyzing multiple accounts of the same topic, noting similarities and differences in point of view RI.5.6
Citing textual evidence to support an analysis RI.6.1
Telling a statement that can be checked (a fact) from a statement of what something means (an opinion or judgment)
"A dog stands by the door and whines at 5:00 every afternoon, when its owner usually comes home. Write one sentence that tells only what someone could see or hear. Then write a sentence that says what the behavior means. Could a classmate write a different second sentence from the same first one?"
Take a few pairs of sentences. Students usually find that the first sentences match and the second ones do not: "The dog misses its owner," "The dog has learned the time," "The dog wants its dinner." Name the difference. A fact can be checked by watching or measuring. An interpretation is what someone says a fact means. Two careful people can accept the same fact and still interpret it differently, and they can also choose different facts to point to. Tell students that today they will read three writers who watched beavers and ask how each one shapes the facts.
Direct Instruction15 minutes
Teach the terms and leave them on the board:
Key information: the facts a reader needs about the topic.
Evidence: the facts, observations and examples an author gives to support a point. To emphasize evidence is to make it stand out: put it first, tell it in detail, repeat it, or give it more space than other facts.
Interpretation: what an author says the facts mean. Signal words such as "probably," "evidently" and "this is" often mark an interpretation.
Presentation: the whole way an author shapes the information: what is chosen, what is stressed, what is left out and what it is said to mean.
Background. The North American beaver is a large rodent that lives in ponds and streams. Beavers cut down small trees such as aspen and willow with their teeth, eat the bark, and use the branches, mud and stones to build dams. A dam holds back a stream and makes a pond. In the pond, beavers build a lodge, a home of sticks and mud whose entrances are under water. They also dig canals, narrow ditches of water, to float branches to the pond. John Burroughs (1837-1921) was a famous American nature writer. Beginning with an article in The Atlantic Monthly in March 1903, he argued in print against writers who, he said, gave wild animals human thoughts; the quarrel became known as the "nature fakers" controversy after President Theodore Roosevelt used that phrase in 1907. Enos Mills (1870-1922) lived near Estes Park, Colorado, studied beavers for many years, and worked to create Rocky Mountain National Park.
Words to know: avers (says firmly); deliberation (careful thought); inerrant (never wrong); inasmuch as (because); ever (here, an old meaning: always); aspen (a tree whose bark beavers eat). Read Source 1 aloud while students follow, then Source 2. Think aloud each time you notice a fact both authors accept, a fact only one author stresses, or a word that shows an interpretation.
1One of our well-known natural historians thinks that there is no difference between a man's reason and a beaver's reason because, he says, when a man builds a dam, he first looks the ground over, and after due deliberation decides upon his plan, and a beaver, he avers, does the same. But the difference is obvious. Beavers, under the same conditions, build the same kind of dams and lodges; and all beavers as a rule do the same. Instinct is uniform in its workings; it runs in a groove. Reason varies endlessly and makes endless mistakes. Men build various kinds of dams and in various kinds of places, with various kinds of material and for various kinds of uses. They exercise individual judgment, they invent new ways and seek new ends, and of course often fail.
2Every man has his own measure of reason, be it more or less. It is largely personal and original with him, and frequent failure is the penalty he pays for this gift.
3But the individual beaver has only the inherited intelligence of his kind, with such slight addition as his experience may have given him. He learns to avoid traps, but he does not learn to improve upon his dam or lodge building, because he does not need to; they answer his purpose. If he had new and growing wants and aspirations like man, why, then he would no longer be a beaver. He reacts to outward conditions, where man reflects and takes thought of things. His reason, if we prefer to call it such, is practically inerrant. It is blind, inasmuch as it is unconscious, but it is sure, inasmuch as it is adequate. It is a part of living nature in a sense that man's is not. If it makes a mistake, it is such a mistake as nature makes when, for instance, a hen produces an egg within an egg, or an egg without a yolk, or when more seeds germinate in the soil than can grow into plants.
John Burroughs, Ways of Nature, chapter XII, "A Beaver's Reason" (Source 1: the opening of the chapter) (1905). Public domain (published 1905). Source text.
1Did this repairing of the dam mean that this old colony was to be resettled by beavers? It probably did, for the beavers ever work for a purpose and not just to be working. It was mid-summer and all beavers who were not making emergency repairs or extensive improvements were off on a summer vacation.
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2A canal is one of the best exhibitions of beaver skill. About twenty feet of this canal was finished and it was about three feet wide and eighteen inches deep. It began in the northeast corner of the old pond and was being dug across a filled-in grass-grown pond which had been washed full of mud and sand. It pointed at an aspen grove out in the pines two hundred feet away. It was probable that this canal would be dug as close as possible to the aspen grove, then the canal filled with water from somewhere and used to float aspen poles down to the beginning--the lower end--of the canal. And close to the lower end a house was almost certain to be built.
3A buried log in the canal was gnawed in two and removed. The canal curved around a boulder too large to be removed. At a distance of eighty-one feet from the lower end the canal-builders came in contact with granite rock and brought the canal to a stop by enlarging the upper end into a basin about ten feet across.
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4With mud and willows the beavers repaired the breaks in the but-little-damaged dam of the old pond. Then they cut a ditch thirty or forty feet long through a ridge to a little pond to the north, and filled the old large pond. Its waters extended to within twelve or fifteen feet of the lower end of the canal. But as the canal was nearly two feet higher than the surface of this pond, water for the canal would have to come from a higher source, and I was puzzled as to where this might be. But beavers plan their work two or three moves ahead, and they probably knew what they were about.
Enos A. Mills, Watched by Wild Animals, chapter X, "Rebuilding a Beaver Colony" (Source 2: the canal; cuts marked [...]) (1922). Public domain (published 1922). Source text.
Key information: a fact both authors accept
What do both authors say beavers do? Find a sentence in each source.
Result: Both say beavers build dams and keep them in repair. Burroughs: "Beavers, under the same conditions, build the same kind of dams and lodges" (Source 1, paragraph 1). Mills: "With mud and willows the beavers repaired the breaks in the but-little-damaged dam of the old pond" (Source 2, paragraph 4). Neither author doubts the fact. The disagreement is about what the building means.
Different interpretations of the same fact
What does each author say the dam building shows about a beaver's mind?
Result: Burroughs says it shows instinct, not thought: "Instinct is uniform in its workings; it runs in a groove" (Source 1, paragraph 1). Mills says it shows purpose and planning: "the beavers ever work for a purpose and not just to be working" (Source 2, paragraph 1) and "beavers plan their work two or three moves ahead" (paragraph 4). Same fact, two readings of it.
Different evidence emphasized
What kind of evidence does each author put forward to support his reading?
Result: Burroughs stresses sameness: all beavers build alike, while "Men build various kinds of dams and in various kinds of places" (Source 1, paragraph 1). He describes no single beaver. Mills stresses what one colony did at one place: "The canal curved around a boulder too large to be removed," and it stopped where the builders "came in contact with granite rock" (Source 2, paragraph 3). Those details show beavers fitting their work to a site, which is exactly the kind of evidence Burroughs leaves out.
How sure is each author?
Find words that show how certain each author is about his interpretation.
Result: Burroughs sounds certain: "But the difference is obvious" (Source 1, paragraph 1), and the beaver's reason is "practically inerrant" (paragraph 3). Mills hedges, or softens his claims: "It probably did" (Source 2, paragraph 1), "It was probable" (paragraph 2), and he admits "I was puzzled as to where this might be" (paragraph 4). Certainty is part of a presentation too: it tells the reader how much weight the author puts on his own reading.
Teacher tip. Build the chart in Diagram 1 on the board as you go: the fact both authors accept goes in the middle, and each author's evidence and interpretation go under his name. Point out that Burroughs opens by stating the view he will argue against ("One of our well-known natural historians thinks...") and answers it with "But." An author who argues against another view shapes his own evidence to answer it.
Guided Practice15 minutes
Pairs read Sources 3 and 4 and fill a blank copy of the Diagram 1 chart for them, using the four questions in Diagram 2. Both passages tell of beavers facing a problem they did not expect. Words to know: automaton (a machine that moves by itself without thinking); stove-wood (wood cut small enough for a stove); coon (raccoon); enlightened (made to understand); deciduous (losing its leaves each fall); portage (carrying a load over land around a waterfall or rapids); thoroughfare (a main road). Circulate and hear from each pair at least once.
1I read of a beaver that cut down a tree which was held in such a way that it did not fall, but simply dropped down the height of the stump. The beaver cut it off again; again it dropped and refused to fall; he cut it off a third and a fourth time: still the tree stood. Then he gave it up. Now, so far as I can see, the only independent intelligence the animal showed was when it ceased to cut off the tree. Had it been a complete automaton, it would have gone on cutting--would it not?--till it made stove-wood of the whole tree. It was confronted by a new problem, and after a while it took the hint. Of course it did not understand what was the matter, as you and I would have, but it evidently concluded that something was wrong. Was this of itself an act of intelligence? Though it may be that its ceasing to cut off the tree was simply the result of discouragement, and involved no mental conclusion at all. It is a new problem, a new condition, that tests an animal's intelligence. How long it takes a caged bird or beast to learn that it cannot escape! What a man would see at a glance it takes weeks or months to pound into the captive bird, or squirrel, or coon. When the prisoner ceases to struggle, it is probably not because it has at last come to understand the situation, but because it is discouraged. It is checked, but not enlightened.
John Burroughs, Ways of Nature, chapter IX, "Do Animals Think and Reflect?" (Source 3: the tree that would not fall) (1905). Public domain (published 1905). Source text.
1The beavers survived the fiery ordeal, but their near-by and prospective winter food-supply was destroyed. This grove of aspen and every deciduous tree that might have furnished a bark food-supply was consumed or charred by the fire.
2Instead of moving, the colony folks spent a number of days clearing the fire wreckage from their pond. With winter near and streams perilously low for travelling, it probably was unwise to go elsewhere and try to build a home and gather a harvest.
3One night, early in October, the colonists gnawed down a number of aspens that had escaped the fire. These were in a grove several hundred feet down stream from the pond. A few nights later they commenced to drag the felled aspens up stream into their pond. This was difficult work, for midway between the grove and the pond was a waterfall. The beaver had to drag each aspen out of the water and up a steep bank and make a portage around the falls.
4The second night of this up-stream transportation a mountain lion had lain in wait by the falls. Tracks and marks on the muddy slope showed that he had made an unsuccessful leap for two beavers on the portage. The following morning an aspen of eighty pounds’ weight which two beavers had evidently been dragging was lying on the slope. The lion had not only missed, but on the muddy slope he slipped and received a ducking in the deep water-hole below.
5Transportation up stream was stopped. The remainder of the felled aspens were piled into a near-by “safety pond.” A shallow stream which beavers use for a thoroughfare commonly has in it a safety pond which they maintain as a harbour, diving into it in case of attack. Usually winter food is stored within a few feet of the house, but in this case it was nearly six hundred feet away. In storing it in the safety pond, the beavers probably were making the best of a bad situation.
Enos A. Mills, Watched by Wild Animals, chapter IV, "The Persistent Beaver" (Source 4: after the forest fire) (1922). Public domain (published 1922). Source text.
Key information. Prompt: what situation do both passages describe? Teacher note: in each, beavers meet a problem their usual work does not solve: a cut tree that "refused to fall" (Source 3) and a winter food supply "consumed or charred by the fire" (Source 4, paragraph 1). Burroughs himself says why such moments matter: "It is a new problem, a new condition, that tests an animal's intelligence."
Evidence. Prompt: how does each author know what happened? Teacher note: Burroughs's evidence is one story he did not see: "I read of a beaver." Mills gives his own observations and the signs he read: "Tracks and marks on the muddy slope showed that he had made an unsuccessful leap for two beavers" (Source 4, paragraph 4), and "an aspen of eighty pounds' weight" left on the slope.
Interpretation. Prompt: what does each author say the beavers' actions mean? Teacher note: Burroughs gives the beaver a little credit and then takes it back: "it evidently concluded that something was wrong," but "it may be that its ceasing to cut off the tree was simply the result of discouragement." Mills reads the beavers' choices as sensible decisions: "it probably was unwise to go elsewhere" (Source 4, paragraph 2), and storing food in the safety pond was "making the best of a bad situation" (paragraph 5).
Why. Prompt: what word choices show each author's position? Teacher note: Burroughs compares the beaver with "a complete automaton" and with a "captive bird" that is "checked, but not enlightened." Mills calls the beavers "the colony folks" (paragraph 2), words for people. Each author's words lean the reader toward his reading before any argument is made.
Close with one question: could both authors accept every fact in Source 4? Pairs usually say yes, and then notice that Burroughs would explain the same facts as instinct and "discouragement." Tell students that next they will analyze two more passages on their own, with words to know but no prompts.
Independent Practice15 minutes
Each student reads Sources 5 and 6 alone. Source 5 comes later in Burroughs's beaver chapter; Source 6 continues Mills's story of the colony in Source 4 through the winter and the next summer. Words to know: specialized (suited to one kind of work); afterthought (something added later, not part of the first need); fulcrum (the point a lever rests and turns on); non-progressive (not improving over time); débris (broken rock and earth); sediment (mud and sand carried by water); moraine (a ridge of rock and soil left by a glacier). Students mark key information in one color, evidence in a second and interpretations in a third. Quiz questions 1-11 and 14-20 use these two sources.
1All animal life is specialized; each animal is an expert in its own line of work--the work of its tribe. Beavers do the work of beavers, they cut down trees and build dams, and all beavers do it alike and with the same degree of untaught skill. This is instinct, or unthinking nature.
2Of a hot day a dog will often dig down to fresh earth to get cooler soil to lie on. Or he will go and lie in the creek. All dogs do these things. Now if the dog were seen to carry stones and sods to dam up the creek to make a deeper pool to lie in, then he would in a measure be imitating the beavers, and this, in the dog, could fairly be called an act of reason, because it is not a necessity of the conditions of his life; it would be of the nature of an afterthought.
3All animals of a given species are wise in their own way, but not in the way of another species. The robin could not build the oriole's nest, nor the oriole build the robin's nor the swallow's. The cunning of the fox is not the cunning of the coon. The squirrel knows a good deal more about nuts than the rabbit does, but the rabbit would live where the squirrel would die. The muskrat and the beaver build lodges much alike, that is, with the entrance under water and an inner chamber above the water, and this because they are both water-animals with necessities much the same.
4Now, the mark of reason is that it is endlessly adaptive, that it can apply itself to all kinds of problems, that it can adapt old means to new ends, or new means to old ends, and is capable of progressive development. It holds what it gets, and uses that as a fulcrum to get more. But this is not at all the way of animal instinct, which begins and ends as instinct and is non-progressive.
John Burroughs, Ways of Nature, chapter XII, "A Beaver's Reason" (Source 5: instinct and reason) (1905). Public domain (published 1905). Source text.
1One winter day a beaver came swimming down into the safety pond. I watched him through the ice. He dislodged a small piece of aspen from the pile in the bottom of the pond and with it went swimming up stream beneath the ice. At the bottom of the icy falls I found a number of aspen cuttings with the bark eaten off. While examining these, I discovered a hole or passageway at the bottom of the falls. This tunnel extended through the earth into the pond above. This underground portage route enabled the beavers to reach their supplies down stream.
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2Late this summer a huge landslide occurred on the stream above the Broken Tree pond. The slide material blocked the channel and formed a large, deep pond. From this dam of débris and the torn slope from which it slipped came such quantities of sediment that it appeared as though the pond might be filled. Every remaining colonist worked day and night to build a dam on the stream just above their pond. They worked like beavers. This new pond caught and stopped the sediment. It was apparently built for this purpose.
3The colonists who remained repaired only two of the five houses, and between these they piled green aspen and willow for winter food. But before a tree was cut they built a dam to the north of their home. Water for this was obtained by a ditch or canal dug from the stream at a point above the sediment-catching pond. When the new pond was full, a low grassy ridge about twenty feet across separated it from the old one. A canal about three feet wide and from one to two feet deep was cut through the ridge, to connect the two ponds. The aspens harvested were taken from the slope of a moraine beyond the north shore of the new pond. The canal and the new pond greatly shortened the land distance over which the trees had to be dragged, and this made harvesting safer, speedier, and easier.
Enos A. Mills, Watched by Wild Animals, chapter IV, "The Persistent Beaver" (Source 6: the tunnel and the landslide; one cut marked [...]) (1922). Public domain (published 1922). Source text.
Closure5-10 minutes
Exit ticket: (1) Name one fact that both Burroughs and Mills accept. (2) Write one sentence for each author telling what he says that fact means, with a short quotation from any of Sources 1-6.
Teacher note on the language. The passages are quoted exactly as published in 1905, 1914 and 1922. None of them contains a slur or offensive language. Some words are old-fashioned: "coon" (raccoon), "avers," "folks" for animals, and British spellings such as "harbour." Burroughs uses "man" and "men" for all people, as writers of his time did. Hulbert writes "God knows why he did it," an everyday expression meaning "no one knows." The homework passage comes near the end of Hulbert's story, in which the old beaver is later caught in a trap; that part is not printed.
Teacher note on the science. The lesson does not ask students to decide who is right about beavers, and the authors' claims are not today's science. Scientists still study how much of a beaver's building is inborn and how much beavers adjust to a site. Keep the focus on the standard: how each author chooses and interprets the facts.
For homework: students read Source 7, from William Davenport Hulbert's "The Biography of a Beaver" in Forest Neighbors (1902), and compare it with Burroughs and Mills. Hulbert tells the life of one beaver, "the Beaver," as a story, partly from his own watching in the northern woods. Words to know: buttress (a support built against a wall); faculties (powers of the mind and body); ruling passion (the strongest interest in a life); civil engineer (a person who designs dams, bridges and roads); befogged (confused).
1They wandered about for some time, looking for a suitable location, and examining several spots along the beds of various little rivers, none of which seemed to be just right. But at last they found, in the very heart of the wilderness, a place where a shallow stream ran over a hard stony bottom, and here they set to work. It was a very desirable situation in every respect. At one side stood a large tree, so close that it could probably be used as a buttress for the dam when the latter was sufficiently lengthened to reach it; while above the shallow the ground was low and flat on both sides for some distance back from the banks, so that the pond would have plenty of room to spread out. If they could have spoken they would probably have said that the place was a dam site better than any other they had seen.
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2Yet even now the old instinct flamed up and burned feebly for a little while. Or shall we say the old love of work, and of using the powers and faculties that God had given him? Why should the thing that is called genius in a man be set down as instinct when we see it on a somewhat smaller scale in an animal? Whatever it was, the ruling passion was still strong. All his life he had been a civil engineer; and now, one dark, rainy autumn night, he left his shallow burrow, swam down the pond to its outlet, and began to build a dam. The next day, pushing up the shallow stream in my dug-out canoe, I saw the alder-cuttings lying in its bed, with the marks of his dull teeth on their butts. God knows why he did it, or what he was thinking about as he cut those bushes and dragged them into the water. I don't; but sometimes I wonder if a wild dream of a new lodge, a new mate, a new home, and a new city was flitting through his poor, befogged old brain.
William Davenport Hulbert, Forest Neighbors, "The Biography of a Beaver" (Source 7: a dam site and a last dam; one cut marked [...]) (1902; this edition 1914). Public domain (published 1914). Source text.
Differentiation Strategies
For Struggling Students
Give the Diagram 1 chart for Sources 3 and 4 with the middle box already filled, so the student starts by sorting evidence, not by finding the shared fact
Pre-highlight the signal words in Source 4 ("probably," "evidently") and ask, for each, "What did Mills see, and what does he think it means?"
Read Source 5 aloud one paragraph at a time and ask the student to restate each in one plain sentence before comparing
Offer sentence frames: "Both authors say ____. Burroughs stresses ____, but Mills stresses ____. Burroughs says this means ____; Mills says it means ____."
For Advanced Students
Have students read the preface of Ways of Nature, where Burroughs says he once gave animals too much credit, and explain how his change of mind could shape the evidence he chooses
Ask students to find a fact in Sources 2, 4 or 6 that Burroughs could use for his own side, and to write the paragraph he might write with it
Ask students to write a short third presentation of the Broken Tree colony, as a scientist today might, that keeps every fact and marks each interpretation with a signal word
Assessment Guidance
What to Look For
Strong answers keep three things apart: the fact both authors accept, the evidence each one stresses, and what each says the facts mean. They back each point with a quotation and name the signal words that mark an interpretation. Watch for students who say only "they disagree" without naming the shared fact, who treat Mills's interpretations as things he saw, or who summarize each passage without comparing them. A student who notices that an author could use the other author's facts for his own side has understood that interpretation, not the facts, divides these writers.
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Classroom Activities
3 Activities
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Fact or Interpretation? Strip Sort
10 minPairs
Pairs sort eight sentences from parts of the two books that this lesson does not print. Each is quoted exactly from Burroughs's Ways of Nature or Mills's Watched by Wild Animals. Deciding what each sentence reports and what it claims builds the habit the standard depends on: separating the facts from what an author says they mean.
The Eight Strips
"The house wren will carry a twig three inches long through a hole of half that diameter."
"A few days after seeing the big old beaver at work on the dam I discovered him digging in a canal all alone."
"That these beavers were at work on a canal left no doubt about their having come to stay."
"What we call the intelligence of animals is limited for the most part to sense perception and sense memory."
"Two fallen tree trunks were gnawed into sections, and one section of each rolled out of the way."
"It may be that some of these beavers had visited this old colony and knew of its opportunities before coming to settle."
"The trained pig, or the trained dog, or the trained lion does its "stunt" precisely as a machine would do it--without any more appreciation of what it is doing."
"Beavers do most of their work at night--this probably is for safety from men."
Procedure
Pairs label each strip F (a fact someone could check by watching) or I (an interpretation of what facts mean), and underline the words that decided it
Pairs guess which author wrote each strip and give a reason
Two pairs compare labels and settle any disagreement by pointing to the words
Answer Key for the Teacher
F: 1, 2, 5. I: 3, 4, 6, 7. Strip 8 is both: the first half is a fact, and "this probably is for safety from men" is an interpretation marked by "probably." Burroughs wrote 1, 4 and 7; Mills wrote 2, 3, 5, 6 and 8. Strip 1 is the tricky one: it is a fact from Burroughs, who uses it to argue that the wren's skill is instinct. Strips 3 and 6 show that Mills interprets as well as observes; strip 6 is marked by "It may be." Both authors mix facts and interpretations.
Discussion Questions
Which strips were hardest to label, and what made them hard?
Strip 1 is a fact. How could Burroughs and Mills each interpret the wren's trick differently?
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Same Facts, Two Frames
15 minGroups of 3-4
Groups receive six facts about beavers and write two short paragraphs from them: one the way Burroughs might shape them, one the way Mills might. Then another group reads both and names the evidence each paragraph emphasizes and the interpretation it advances. Writing both versions shows students that the same facts can be shaped in two directions.
The Fact Card (written for this page)
A beaver family usually lives together in one lodge: two adults and their young from the last year or two.
Beavers do much of their work at dusk and at night.
When a dam starts to leak, beavers often patch the leak with mud and sticks within a night or two.
Beavers pack mud and sticks on the side of the dam that faces the pond.
In later experiments, beavers piled sticks and mud around a hidden loudspeaker that played the sound of running water, even where there was no leak.
Beaver dams in different places range from a few feet to hundreds of feet long.
Procedure
Each group writes a "Burroughs" paragraph and a "Mills" paragraph of 3-4 sentences each. Each paragraph uses at least three facts from the card and one sentence of interpretation with a signal word
Groups swap paragraphs without the labels. The readers decide which is which, list the facts each paragraph stresses, and underline the interpretation
Readers name one fact that could be used by both sides
Answer Key for the Teacher
Answers vary. A "Burroughs" paragraph usually stresses facts 4 and 5: every dam is packed the same way, and the sound of running water sets beavers building even with no leak, which looks like a fixed response rather than a plan. A "Mills" paragraph usually stresses facts 3 and 6: beavers find and fix leaks quickly and build dams to fit very different sites. Facts 1 and 2 can serve either side. Fact 3 is a good one to discuss: it fits both readings, a fixed response to leaking water or a repair made on purpose. That is the point of the standard: the facts alone do not settle the interpretation.
Discussion Questions
Which fact on the card was the hardest to use for the side it seemed to work against? How did you do it?
Did any group leave a fact out on purpose? What did leaving it out do to the paragraph?
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Where Do They Stand?
10 minWhole class, then pairs
Tape a line across the board, labeled "only instinct" at one end and "thinks as people do" at the other. Pairs get four quotation cards, quoted exactly from the two books, and place each author on the line. Placing a whole position, not just one sentence, helps students see how an author's overall view steers the evidence he picks.
The Four Cards
Burroughs, preface to Ways of Nature: "Heretofore I have made the most of every gleam of intelligence of bird or four-footed beast that came under my observation, often, I fancy, making too much of it, and giving the wild creatures credit for more "sense" than they really possessed."
Burroughs, preface: the nature lover's "tendency is to humanize the wild life about him, and to read his own traits and moods into whatever he looks upon."
Mills, preface to Watched by Wild Animals: "Animals use instinct and reason and also have curiosity--the desire to know."
Mills, chapter X: "Many a beaver colony, like many an ancient city, has one or more cities buried beneath it."
Words to know: heretofore (until now); I fancy (I think); humanize (treat as human).
Procedure
Pairs read the cards and mark on a small copy of the line where each author stands, with the card that shows it most clearly
Two pairs from the class place sticky notes on the board line and explain their choice
The class discusses how card 1 might affect what Burroughs looks for in beaver stories
Answer Key for the Teacher
Burroughs belongs near the "only instinct" end. Card 1 shows that he has changed his mind: he once gave animals "too much" credit and now sets out to correct it, so he looks for evidence of sameness and routine. Mills belongs toward the middle, a little on the "thinks" side. Card 3 names both instinct and reason, so he does not claim that animals think as people do; card 4 compares a beaver colony with a human city, which shows his habit of describing beavers in human terms. Accept other placements that are backed by a card.
Discussion Questions
Card 2 criticizes nature lovers who "humanize" animals. Which card by Mills could Burroughs point to as an example?
Does knowing an author's position make his evidence less believable, or only easier to understand?
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Diagrams & Visual Aids
2 diagrams
Diagram 1: One Fact, Two Presentations
The chart modeled in Direct Instruction for Sources 1 and 2. The top box holds the key information both authors accept. Under each name are the evidence that author stresses and what he says the facts mean. Burroughs's evidence is about all beavers; Mills's is about one colony. Students fill a blank copy for Sources 3 and 4.
Diagram 2: Four Questions for Two Authors
The four questions students ask in Guided Practice and on their own. Questions 1 and 2 are about the facts and which ones each author stresses; question 3 is about what each author says they mean; question 4 asks why the presentations differ. The signal words in box 3 mark many interpretations, but not all: an interpretation can also be stated as if it were plain fact.
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Homework Assignment
~30 min
RI.7.9 Homework: A Third Author on Beavers
Directions: Read Source 7 (Hulbert) at the end of the lesson plan, in Closure. You will compare it with Burroughs (Sources 1, 3 and 5) and Mills (Sources 2, 4 and 6). Cite the source and paragraph for every quotation, for example (Source 7, paragraph 2). Answer in complete sentences.
Part 1: A Third Author's Evidence (Problems 1-3)
In Source 7, paragraph 1, list two details Hulbert gives about the place the beavers chose for their dam. Explain what those details suggest about how the beavers chose it.
Copy the sentence in Source 7, paragraph 1, where Hulbert imagines what the beavers would say. Explain why this sentence is an interpretation and not evidence that someone could check.
In paragraph 2, what did Hulbert see himself the next day? Quote it, and explain how this kind of evidence is like the evidence Mills gives in Source 4.
Part 2: Comparing Three Presentations (Problems 4-6)
Hulbert asks: "Why should the thing that is called genius in a man be set down as instinct when we see it on a somewhat smaller scale in an animal?" Put the question in your own words. Then explain which author, Burroughs or Mills, it argues against, and support your answer with a quotation from Source 1, 3 or 5.
Make a chart with three rows, one for each author (Burroughs, Mills, Hulbert), and three columns: the evidence he emphasizes, what he says beaver building means, and how sure he sounds. Fill each box and include one short quotation per author.
Write a paragraph of 6-8 sentences that analyzes how Burroughs, Mills and Hulbert shape the same key information: that beavers build dams. Explain the evidence each one emphasizes and the interpretation each advances, quote each author at least once, and end with a sentence about why three careful writers could see the same facts so differently.
Rubric
Criterion
Full Credit (2 pts)
Partial Credit (1 pt)
No Credit (0 pts)
Key Information
Names the facts the authors share, accurately and in plain words
Names a shared fact vaguely, or one that only one author gives
No shared fact, or a wrong one
Evidence Emphasized
Explains which evidence each author stresses or leaves out, with a quotation for each
Names the evidence for some authors, or without quotations
Summarizes the texts without comparing their evidence
Interpretation
Explains what each author says the facts mean and names the words that signal it
States each interpretation without the signal words or without support
Treats interpretations as facts
Citations
Exact quotations with source and paragraph numbers
Quotations without locations, or one misquotation
No quotations
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Quiz: 20 Questions
Interactive, with answers
Instructions
Questions 1-11 and 14-20 use Sources 5 and 6 (Burroughs and Mills), printed in the Independent Practice phase of the lesson plan. Questions 12 and 13 need no passage. The paragraphs of each source are numbered. Your score updates as you answer, and Reset quiz clears everything.
Multiple choice: pick an option to check it. Short answer: write your answer, then reveal the model answer.
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Question 1 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which piece of key information about beavers appears in both Source 5 and Source 6?
Answer: C
Both authors report it: Burroughs writes that beavers "cut down trees and build dams" (Source 5, paragraph 1), and Mills tells how the colonists "worked day and night to build a dam" and that "before a tree was cut they built a dam" (Source 6, paragraphs 2 and 3). Choice A is only in Source 5 (paragraph 3), and choice B only in Source 6 (paragraph 1). Choice D is in neither; Burroughs even calls the skill "untaught."
Question 2 of 20 · Multiple Choice
According to Source 5, paragraph 1, what explains the way beavers build?
Answer: A
Burroughs writes that "all beavers do it alike and with the same degree of untaught skill. This is instinct, or unthinking nature." Choice B is the view he argues against. Choice C adds practice, which he denies with "untaught." Choice D ignores his point that the skill is real; he calls each animal "an expert in its own line of work."
Question 3 of 20 · Multiple Choice
In Source 6, paragraph 2, how does Mills interpret the dam the beavers built just above their pond after the landslide?
Answer: B
Mills writes: "This new pond caught and stopped the sediment. It was apparently built for this purpose." The sediment is the mud and sand that threatened to fill the home pond. Choice A confuses two ponds: the landslide made its own "large, deep pond" farther up. Choice C is how Burroughs would explain it, not Mills. Choice D borrows the lion from Source 4.
Question 4 of 20 · Multiple Choice
What kind of evidence does Mills mainly use in Source 6?
Answer: D
Mills reports his own watching of the Broken Tree colony from winter to the next summer: "I watched him through the ice," and "I discovered a hole or passageway at the bottom of the falls" (Source 6, paragraph 1). Choice A describes Burroughs's evidence in Source 5. Choice B fits Burroughs in Source 3 ("I read of a beaver"). Choice C names experiments that neither passage describes.
Question 5 of 20 · Multiple Choice
What kind of evidence does Burroughs mainly use in Source 5?
Answer: B
Burroughs compares kinds of animals to make a general point: the dog in paragraph 2, and "The robin could not build the oriole's nest" and "The cunning of the fox is not the cunning of the coon" in paragraph 3. He describes no particular beaver or colony. Choice A is Mills's kind of evidence. Choices C and D name evidence that does not appear in Source 5.
Question 6 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Burroughs says the mark of reason is that it "can adapt old means to new ends" (Source 5, paragraph 4). Which fact in Source 6 most directly challenges his claim that beavers lack it?
Answer: C
A dam is an old means; catching the mud from a landslide is a new end, and Mills says the new pond "caught and stopped the sediment" (Source 6, paragraph 2). Choice A is not something the beavers did: the landslide made that pond. Choice B is ordinary repair of homes, the usual use of old means for an old end. Choice D describes a trip to stored food, which by itself shows nothing new.
Question 7 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Why does Mills write "apparently" in "It was apparently built for this purpose" (Source 6, paragraph 2)?
Answer: D
Mills saw the dam and saw that it "caught and stopped the sediment," but no one can watch a beaver's purpose. "Apparently" tells the reader that the purpose is his interpretation. Choice A misplaces the word: Mills describes the building itself plainly ("Every remaining colonist worked day and night to build a dam"), and "apparently" is attached only to the purpose. Choice B reverses his view. Choice C reads a meaning into the word that it does not have.
Question 8 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Why does Burroughs describe a dog that might "carry stones and sods to dam up the creek" (Source 5, paragraph 2)?
Answer: A
The dog is a thought experiment: "if the dog were seen" to build a dam, it "could fairly be called an act of reason, because it is not a necessity of the conditions of his life; it would be of the nature of an afterthought." Choice C misreads "if the dog were seen" as something that happened. Choices B and D claim things the paragraph does not say; in fact, he says all dogs simply dig or lie in the creek.
Question 9 of 20 · Multiple Choice
How does Burroughs interpret the fact that muskrats and beavers build lodges "much alike" (Source 5, paragraph 3)?
Answer: B
He says they build alike "because they are both water-animals with necessities much the same," which fits his view that each kind of animal is shaped by its needs, not by thought. Choice A adds copying, which he never mentions. Choice C is the interpretation he argues against. Choice D compares the lodges, which the paragraph does not do.
Question 10 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Source 6 ends: "The canal and the new pond greatly shortened the land distance over which the trees had to be dragged, and this made harvesting safer, speedier, and easier." How does this sentence help Mills's interpretation?
Answer: C
The sentence states results, but placing them last, as the point of the paragraph, leads the reader to see the canal as dug for those results. That is emphasis at work. Choice A is wrong: Mills never quotes Burroughs. Choice B misreads the sentence, which gives no measurements (the canal's size comes earlier), and measurements alone could not prove a plan. Choice D is the opposite of the sentence's confident tone.
Question 11 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which fact from Source 6 fits Burroughs's view best, that beavers do "the work of beavers" by untaught habit?
Answer: D
Storing branches near the lodge for winter is what beaver colonies do every fall, and Mills reports it without comment: "between these they piled green aspen and willow for winter food" (Source 6, paragraph 3). Burroughs could call that the untaught work of the tribe. Choices A, B and C are the facts Mills presents as responses to new problems, so they fit his interpretation better than Burroughs's.
Question 12 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Two students write about the school garden. Maya reports how many pounds of tomatoes it produced each month. Leo quotes three students about what they learned by working in it. Which idea from RI.7.9 does this show?
Answer: A
Both write about the garden, but each puts forward a different kind of evidence: harvest numbers or students' words. Neither interprets a shared fact differently (choice B), and they do not dispute any fact (choice C). Choice D is the opposite of what happens.
Question 13 of 20 · Multiple Choice
A class plant bends toward the window. One writer says, "The plant bends toward the window because it wants the light." Another says, "Light from one side makes the cells on the shaded side of the stem grow longer, so the stem bends." What does this pair show?
Answer: C
Both writers accept the fact that the plant bends; they explain it differently. The first gives the plant a wish, as Mills might give a beaver a purpose; the second explains it by growth, with no wish at all. Choice B is wrong because both accept the bending. Choice D is wrong because the explanations do not match. The writers do not bring different evidence (choice A); they read the same fact two ways.
Question 14 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Burroughs calls each animal "an expert in its own line of work" (Source 5, paragraph 1). How does the word "expert" fit his argument?
Answer: B
In the same paragraph he says beavers build "with the same degree of untaught skill" and calls it "instinct, or unthinking nature." He gives beavers skill and denies them thought, which lets him accept the facts about their building while rejecting Mills's kind of interpretation. Choice A adds study, which "untaught" rules out. Choice C misses that he admits the skill. Choice D contradicts "all beavers do it alike."
Question 15 of 20 · Short Answer
Burroughs says animal instinct "begins and ends as instinct and is non-progressive" (Source 5, paragraph 4). Explain how the evidence in Source 6 could be used to answer him. Cite two details.
Model answer: Mills gives examples of beavers doing something new when their situation changed. In winter, a beaver used "a hole or passageway at the bottom of the falls" to reach food stored downstream, "This underground portage route" (paragraph 1). After the landslide, the beavers built a dam that "caught and stopped the sediment" (paragraph 2), and they cut a canal through a ridge "to connect the two ponds" (paragraph 3). If beavers can change their work to meet new problems, then their building is not simply "non-progressive." Rubric: 2 points for two accurate details from Source 6 connected to Burroughs's claim; 1 point for one detail or no clear connection; 0 points otherwise.
Question 16 of 20 · Short Answer
How might Burroughs interpret the tunnel at the foot of the falls (Source 6, paragraph 1)? Use a quotation from Source 5 to support your answer.
Model answer: Burroughs would probably say the tunnel is ordinary beaver work, not a clever plan. Beavers dig burrows and lodge entrances under water, and he says the muskrat and the beaver build "with the entrance under water" because they have "necessities much the same" (Source 5, paragraph 3). He would call the tunnel the work of instinct: "all beavers do it alike and with the same degree of untaught skill. This is instinct, or unthinking nature" (paragraph 1). Rubric: 2 points for a reasonable instinct reading supported by a quotation from Source 5; 1 point for the reading without support; 0 points otherwise.
Question 17 of 20 · Short Answer
What kind of evidence does Mills include in Source 6 that Burroughs leaves out of Source 5? Why might Burroughs leave it out?
Model answer: Mills describes what one colony did when something unusual happened, a winter with food stored far away and a landslide full of mud, and he tells it as he saw it: "I watched him through the ice" (paragraph 1). Burroughs gives no single beaver or unusual event; he writes about beavers in general: "Beavers do the work of beavers" (Source 5, paragraph 1). He may leave out single cases because his point is that all beavers act alike, and one colony that did something unusual would not fit that point easily. Rubric: 2 points for naming the kind of evidence with support from both sources and a sensible reason; 1 point for the evidence or the reason only; 0 points otherwise.
Question 18 of 20 · Short Answer
In Source 6, paragraph 2, find a phrase other than "apparently" that shows Mills is judging what he saw rather than simply reporting it. Explain what the phrase shows.
Model answer: Mills writes that "it appeared as though the pond might be filled." He did not see the pond fill; he judged from the "quantities of sediment" that it might. The words "appeared as though" mark his judgment of a danger, and that judgment sets up his interpretation that the new dam was built to meet it. Rubric: 2 points for the phrase and a clear explanation; 1 point for the phrase alone; 0 points otherwise.
Question 19 of 20 · Short Answer
Rewrite the landslide event (Source 6, paragraph 2) in two or three sentences as Burroughs might present it. Keep the facts the same and change the interpretation.
Model answer: A landslide sent mud down the stream, and the beavers built a new dam just above their pond, as beavers dam any running water they live on. The new pond happened to catch the mud. The beavers did not need to foresee this; damming a stream is "the work of beavers" (Source 5, paragraph 1), and it served them here as it always does. Rubric: 2 points for keeping Mills's facts (landslide, sediment, new dam, mud caught) and giving an instinct interpretation; 1 point for changing the interpretation but dropping or changing a fact; 0 points otherwise.
Question 20 of 20 · Short Answer
In one paragraph, explain how Burroughs (Source 5) and Mills (Source 6) each shape the key information that beavers build dams. Name the evidence each emphasizes and what each says it means, and quote each source once.
Model answer: Both authors accept that beavers build dams, but they shape that fact differently. Burroughs emphasizes how all beavers are alike and compares them with dogs, robins and foxes; he says beavers "cut down trees and build dams, and all beavers do it alike," and he calls this "instinct, or unthinking nature" (Source 5, paragraph 1). Mills emphasizes what one colony did after a landslide and presents the new dam as a solution to a problem: "This new pond caught and stopped the sediment" (Source 6, paragraph 2). Burroughs reads the building as a fixed habit of the whole kind; Mills reads it as a choice made for a purpose. Rubric: 2 points for the shared fact, each author's evidence and interpretation, and a quotation from each source; 1 point if one author's evidence or interpretation is missing; 0 points otherwise.
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Frequently Asked Questions
10 Questions
What does RI.7.9 mean?
It means seventh graders read two or more texts by different authors on the same topic and explain how each author shapes the key information. The standard names two ways: an author can emphasize different evidence, or advance a different interpretation of the same facts. Students have to show both with quotations.
What is "key information" in RI.7.9?
Key information is the set of facts a reader needs about the topic. In this lesson, it includes the fact that beavers build dams, lodges and canals. Students start by finding the facts both authors accept, because the differences only make sense against what the texts share.
What is the difference between emphasizing different evidence and advancing different interpretations?
Evidence is about which facts an author puts forward; interpretation is about what the author says the facts mean. Burroughs puts forward the sameness of all beavers, and Mills the choices of one colony: that is different evidence. Both accept that beavers build dams, and one calls it instinct while the other calls it planning: that is a different interpretation.
How is RI.7.9 different from RI.6.9 and RI.8.9?
RI.6.9 compares two authors' presentations of events, such as a memoir and a biography. RI.7.9 asks why the presentations differ: which evidence each author stresses and how each interprets the facts. RI.8.9 goes further, to texts that give conflicting information, and asks students to find where they disagree on fact or on interpretation.
Why use old nature writing about beavers?
Because the authors really disagreed about the same facts. Around 1900, American nature writers argued in print about whether wild animals think, and beavers, with their dams and canals, were a favorite example. The passages are short, concrete and free to print, and seventh graders can picture every fact in them.
Which author is right about beavers?
The lesson does not decide, and RI.7.9 does not ask students to. The standard is about how the authors shape the facts, not about settling the science. Scientists today still study how much of a beaver's building is inborn and how much is adjusted to a site. Students who want to argue for one side can do so in writing (W.7.1), with evidence from the texts.
Are these passages too hard for seventh graders?
They sit in the upper part of the grades 6-8 range. Burroughs uses long sentences and old words ("avers," "inerrant"), and Mills's facts are easy to follow but his judgments are woven into them. Each phase gives words to know, and the passages get harder to analyze as support is removed. Reading aloud and the Diagram 1 chart help students who find the language dense.
How is RI.7.9 assessed?
Usually with paired passages on one topic. Questions ask which facts both texts share, which evidence each author stresses, what an author suggests a fact means, and how a word or detail supports that meaning. Written answers are scored on accurate quotations from both texts. The quiz on this page follows the same pattern.
How can students tell a fact from an interpretation?
Ask whether someone could check it by watching or measuring. "The canal curved around a boulder" can be checked; "beavers plan their work two or three moves ahead" cannot be seen, only concluded. Signal words such as "probably," "evidently" and "apparently" often mark an interpretation, but not always: Burroughs states his interpretations as plain fact.
What comes after RI.7.9 in grade 8?
RI.8.9, which asks students to analyze texts that give conflicting information on the same topic and to say whether they disagree on fact or on interpretation. The habit built here, separating the facts from what each author says they mean, is the tool students need for that next step.
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Related Standards
5 standards
These standards connect to RI.7.9: prerequisites to review first, parallel standards at the same level, and next steps that build on it.
Before this lesson
RI.6.9Prerequisite
Compare and contrast one author's presentation of events with another's