RI.6.9: Comparing Two Authors' Accounts of the Same Events
In plain English: RI.6.9 is the Common Core grade 6 ELA standard that asks students to compare and contrast how two authors present the same events, for example a memoir written by a person and a biography written about that person. Students look at what each author includes and leaves out, the point of view, the word choice and the judgments each adds. It builds on RI.5.6.
Compare and contrast one author's presentation of events with that of another (e.g., a memoir written by and a biography on the same person).
Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts & Literacy · Domain: Reading Standards for Informational Text · Cluster: Integration of Knowledge and Ideas · Official standard
RI.6.9 asks students to compare (tell how two things are alike) and contrast (tell how they are different) the way two authors present the same events. The standard's own example is the pair used here: a memoir, a true story of events told by the person who lived them, and a biography, a true story of a person's life written by someone else. An author's presentation of events is how he tells them: which details he includes or leaves out, whose eyes we see through, which words he chooses, and what explanations or judgments he adds.
The events are Frederick Douglass's escape from slavery in September 1838 and his first days of freedom. Douglass told how he escaped in his autobiography, Life and Times of Frederick Douglass (1881), a memoir of his whole life. Booker T. Washington told the same events in his biography Frederick Douglass (1907). Students watch the teacher compare the two accounts of boarding the train, compare the accounts of the conductor with a partner, and then compare the accounts of Douglass's new name on their own. The homework compares the two accounts of his first days in New York.
Learning Objectives
By the end of this lesson, students will be able to:
Tell a memoir from a biography by its point of view and by what the author could know
Compare two authors' accounts of the same event by finding the facts both include, with a quotation from each
Contrast two accounts by naming details only one author includes, and explain what each choice shows
Tell a fact that could be checked from an author's judgment or guess about a person
Explain in writing why a memoir and a biography present the same events differently
Prior Knowledge Required
Students should already be comfortable with:
Noting similarities and differences in the point of view of two accounts of the same event RI.5.6
Quoting accurately from a text when explaining what it says RI.5.1
First-person point of view (the narrator says "I") and third-person point of view (the narrator says "he" or "she")
Basic facts about slavery in the United States before the Civil War
"Think of a time you got lost, or almost missed a bus. Write two sentences about it as you would tell it: 'I...'. Then write two sentences a classmate might write about the same moment for the school newsletter: 'She...' or 'He...'. What could you say that the classmate could not?"
Take a few pairs of answers. Students usually notice that only the person who lived the moment can say what he or she felt and thought ("my heart was pounding"), while the classmate has to guess or ask, and may add a judgment the person would not make ("She stayed calm, like always"). Tell students that these are the two kinds of true stories they will compare today: a memoir, told by the person who lived the events, usually in the first person ("I"), and a biography, told by someone else, in the third person ("he" or "she"). A memoir that covers a whole life is also called an autobiography.
Direct Instruction15 minutes
Teach the terms and leave them on the board:
Compare: tell how two things are alike. Contrast: tell how they are different.
Presentation of events: how an author tells what happened. Look at four things: what is included or left out, point of view (whose eyes we see through), word choice, and judgments (what the author thinks the events mean or what they show about the person).
A fact can be checked (a date, a place, what someone did). A judgment is the author's opinion or guess, such as "he was brave."
Background. Frederick Douglass was born into slavery in Maryland around 1818. As a young man he was sent to work in the shipyards of Baltimore as a calker (a worker who seals the seams of wooden ships). On September 3, 1838, he escaped north by train and boat. He became a famous speaker, writer and newspaper editor against slavery. Free Black people in Maryland had to carry free papers, official papers that described them and proved they were free; a Black traveler without papers could be arrested. In his first book (1845), Douglass would not say how he escaped, because telling could hurt the people who helped him and close the route to others. Once slavery had ended, he told the story in Life and Times (Source 1). Booker T. Washington, who was born into slavery in Virginia in 1856 and later led Tuskegee Institute in Alabama, wrote a biography of Douglass that appeared in 1907, twelve years after Douglass died (Source 2).
Words to know: sailor's protection (a paper that described a sailor and said he was a free American); address (here, an old meaning: skill and cleverness in dealing with people); hackman (the driver of a carriage for hire); scrutiny (a close, careful look). Read Source 1 aloud while students follow, then Source 2. Say out loud each time you notice that the two authors tell the same thing, or tell it differently.
1I should perhaps have yielded to that feeling sooner, had there been anything very heroic or thrilling in the incidents connected with my escape, for I am sorry to say I have nothing of that sort to tell; and yet the courage that could risk betrayal and the bravery which was ready to encounter death if need be, in pursuit of freedom, were essential features in the undertaking. My success was due to address rather than courage; to good luck rather than bravery. My means of escape were provided for me by the very men who were making laws to hold and bind me more securely in slavery.
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2I was not so fortunate as to sufficiently resemble any of my free acquaintances as to answer the description of their papers. But I had one friend--a sailor--who owned a sailor’s protection, which answered somewhat the purpose of free papers--describing his person, and certifying to the fact that he was a free American sailor. The instrument had at its head the American eagle, which gave it the appearance at once of an authorized document. This protection did not, when in my hands, describe its bearer very accurately. Indeed, it called for a man much darker than myself, and close examination of it would have caused my arrest at the start. In order to avoid this fatal scrutiny on the part of the railroad official, I had arranged with Isaac Rolls, a hackman, to bring my baggage to the train just on the moment of its starting, and jumped upon the car myself when the train was already in motion. Had I gone into the station and offered to purchase a ticket, I should have been instantly and carefully examined, and undoubtedly arrested.
Frederick Douglass, Life and Times of Frederick Douglass, Second Part, chapter I, "Escape from Slavery" (Source 1: the plan; one cut marked [...]) (1881; this edition 1882). Public domain (published 1882). Source text.
1Douglass had not many friends among the free colored people in Baltimore who resembled him sufficiently to make it safe for him to use their papers. Fortunately, however, he had one who owned a “sailor’s protection,” a document describing the holder and certifying to the fact that he was a “free American sailor.” This “protection” did not describe its bearer very accurately. But, it called for a man very much darker than himself, and a close examination would have betrayed him at the start. In the face of all these conditions young Douglass was relying upon something beside a dubious written passport. This something was his desperate courage. He had learned to act the part of a freeman so well that no one suspected him of being a slave. He had early acquired the habit of studying human nature. As he grew to understand men, he no longer dreaded them. No one knew better than he the kind of human nature that he had to deal with in this perilous undertaking. He knew the speech, manner, and behavior that would excite suspicion; hence he avoided asking for a ticket at the railway station because this would subject him to examination. He so managed that just as the train started he jumped on, his bag being thrown after him by some one in waiting. He knew that scrutiny of him in a crowded car en route would be less exacting than at the station. He had borrowed a sailor’s shirt, tarpaulin, cap and black cravat, tied in true sailor fashion, and he acted the part of an “old salt” so perfectly that he excited no suspicion. When the conductor came to collect his fare and inspected his “free papers,” Douglass, in the most natural manner, said that he had none but promptly showed his “sailor’s protection,” which the railway official merely glanced at and passed on without further question. Twice on the trip he thought he was detected. Once when his car stood opposite a south-bound train, Douglass observed a well-known citizen of Baltimore who knew him well, sitting where he could see him distinctly. At another time, while still in Maryland, he was noticed by a man who had met him frequently at the ship-yards. In neither of these cases, however, was he interfered with or molested. When he got into the free state of Pennsylvania, he felt more joy than he dared express. He had by his cool temerity and address passed every sentinel undetected and no slave, to his knowledge, he afterward said, ever got away from bondage on so narrow a margin of safety.
Booker T. Washington, Frederick Douglass, chapter III, "Escape from Slavery; Learning the Ways of Freedom" (Source 2: the escape) (1907). Public domain (published 1907). Source text.
Compare: the same fact in nearly the same words
What do both authors say about the sailor's protection? Put a sentence from each side by side.
Result: Both say the paper did not fit Douglass. Douglass: "This protection did not, when in my hands, describe its bearer very accurately" and "it called for a man much darker than myself" (Source 1, paragraph 2). Washington: "This 'protection' did not describe its bearer very accurately. But, it called for a man very much darker than himself." The wording is so close that Washington was almost certainly working from Douglass's own book. A biographer who was not there has to get his facts from somewhere.
Contrast: luck or courage?
How does each author explain why the escape worked?
Result: Douglass plays down his own bravery: "My success was due to address rather than courage; to good luck rather than bravery" (Source 1, paragraph 1). Washington says the opposite: Douglass "was relying upon something beside a dubious written passport. This something was his desperate courage." Same events, different explanation: the memoir is modest, and the biography presents Douglass as a hero.
Contrast: point of view
Douglass writes "I had arranged with Isaac Rolls, a hackman, to bring my baggage to the train." How does Washington tell the same step?
Result: In the third person, with the name gone: "He so managed that just as the train started he jumped on, his bag being thrown after him by some one in waiting." Douglass can name his helper and explain his own plan ("Had I gone into the station ... I should have been ... arrested"). Washington tells it from outside, and he adds claims about Douglass's mind that only a biographer would make, such as "He had early acquired the habit of studying human nature."
Where the biographer's facts come from
Find the words in Source 2 that show Washington is passing on what Douglass himself said.
Result: The last sentence: "no slave, to his knowledge, he afterward said, ever got away from bondage on so narrow a margin of safety." "He afterward said" tells the reader that this claim comes from Douglass. When a biography repeats what its subject said, it can repeat the subject's view, but it chooses which parts to keep.
Teacher tip. Model the chart in Diagram 2 as you go: sort each detail into "only in the memoir," "in both" or "only in the biography," and write the source and paragraph next to it. Students will fill a blank copy of the same chart in Guided Practice.
Guided Practice15 minutes
Pairs read Source 3, the next part of Douglass's story, and compare it with the middle of Source 2, from "He had borrowed a sailor's shirt" to "passed on without further question." Words to know: tarpaulin hat (a sailor's waterproof hat); cravat (a scarf tied at the neck); old salt (an experienced sailor); peremptory (bossy, expecting to be obeyed at once); Havre de Grace (a town in Maryland on the Susquehanna River). Each pair fills a blank copy of the Diagram 2 chart for the conductor scene. Circulate and hear from each pair at least once.
1In my clothing I was rigged out in sailor style. I had on a red shirt and a tarpaulin hat and black cravat, tied in sailor fashion, carelessly and loosely about my neck. My knowledge of ships and sailor’s talk came much to my assistance, for I knew a ship from stem to stern, and from keelson to cross-trees, and could talk sailor like an “old salt.” On sped the train, and I was well on the way to Havre de Grace before the conductor came into the negro car to collect tickets and examine the papers of his black passengers. This was a critical moment in the drama. My whole future depended upon the decision of this conductor. Agitated I was while this ceremony was proceeding, but still externally, at least, I was apparently calm and self-possessed. He went on with his duty--examining several colored passengers before reaching me. He was somewhat harsh in tone, and peremptory in manner until he reached me, when, strangely enough, and to my surprise and relief, his whole manner changed. Seeing that I did not readily produce my free papers, as the other colored persons in the car had done, he said to me in a friendly contrast with that observed towards the others: “I suppose you have your free papers?” To which I answered: “No, sir; I never carry my free papers to sea with me.” “But you have something to show that you are a free man, have you not?” “Yes, sir,” I answered; “I have a paper with the American eagle on it, and that will carry me round the world.” With this I drew from my deep sailor’s pocket my seaman’s protection, as before described. The merest glance at the paper satisfied him, and he took my fare and went on about his business. This moment of time was one of the most anxious I ever experienced.
Frederick Douglass, Life and Times of Frederick Douglass, Second Part, chapter I, "Escape from Slavery" (Source 3: the conductor) (1881; this edition 1882). Public domain (published 1882). Source text.
Compare: what both include. Teacher note: both authors say Douglass dressed as a sailor, could pass for an "old salt," said he had no free papers, showed the sailor's protection, and that the conductor barely looked at it ("The merest glance at the paper satisfied him"; "merely glanced at").
Contrast: feelings. Teacher note: Douglass tells what he felt inside: "Agitated I was ... but still externally, at least, I was apparently calm," and "This moment of time was one of the most anxious I ever experienced." Washington shows only the calm outside: Douglass spoke "in the most natural manner" and "excited no suspicion." Ask: which author could know about the agitation?
Contrast: how much space. Teacher note: Douglass gives the conversation word for word and notices that the conductor, harsh with other passengers, was friendly to him, "strangely enough." Washington covers the scene in one sentence. A memoir can slow down on the moment its author remembers most; a biography of a whole life has to move on.
Contrast: a detail that does not match. Teacher note: Washington says Douglass "had borrowed a sailor's shirt." Source 3 describes "a red shirt" but does not say it was borrowed. Ask pairs what a careful reader should do with a detail that appears in only one account: note it, and ask where the author could have learned it.
Close with one question: which account would you use to learn how Douglass felt, and which to learn how others saw him? Pairs usually choose the memoir for feelings and notice that the biography's view of Douglass as calm and brave is Washington's judgment. Tell students that next they will compare two accounts on their own, with words to know but no teacher notes.
Independent Practice15 minutes
Each student reads Sources 4 and 5 alone. They tell what happened about two weeks after the escape, when Douglass and his new wife, Anna, reached New Bedford, Massachusetts, a whaling port where he hoped to work as a calker. They had come by steamboat to Newport, Rhode Island, and then by stage-coach, a horse-drawn coach for hire, without enough money for the fare. Words to know: fortnight (two weeks); mine host (an old way of saying "my host"); domicile (home); Lady of the Lake (a long poem by the Scottish writer Sir Walter Scott, published in 1810; one of its heroes is a Scottish lord named Douglas); fibre (here, a person's inner character). Students mark facts found in both sources in one color and details found in only one source in the other. Quiz questions 1-11 and 14-20 use these two sources.
1When, however, we reached New Bedford he took our baggage, including three music books,--two of them collections by Dyer, and one by Shaw,--and held them until I was able to redeem them by paying to him the sums due for our rides. This was soon done, for Mr. Nathan Johnson not only received me kindly, and hospitably, but, on being informed about our baggage, at once loaned me the two dollars with which to square accounts with the stage-driver. [...]
2Thus, in a fortnight after my flight from Maryland, I was safe in New Bedford,--a citizen of the grand old commonwealth of Massachusetts.
3Once initiated into my new life of freedom, and assured by Mr. Johnson that I need not fear recapture in that city, a comparatively unimportant question arose, as to the name by which I should be known thereafter, in my new relation as a free man. The name given me by my dear mother was no less pretentious and long than Frederick Augustus Washington Bailey. I had, however, while living in Maryland disposed of the Augustus Washington, and retained only Frederick Bailey. Between Baltimore and New Bedford, the better to conceal myself from the slave-hunters, I had parted with Bailey and called myself Johnson; but finding that in New Bedford the Johnson family was already so numerous as to cause some confusion in distinguishing one from another, a change in this name seemed desirable. Nathan Johnson, mine host, was emphatic as to this necessity, and wished me to allow him to select a name for me. I consented, and he called me by my present name,--the one by which I have been known for three and forty years,--Frederick Douglass. Mr. Johnson had just been reading the “Lady of the Lake,” and so pleased was he with its great character that he wished me to bear his name. Since reading that charming poem myself, I have often thought that, considering the noble hospitality and manly character of Nathan Johnson, black man though he was, he, far more than I, illustrated the virtues of the Douglas of Scotland. Sure am I that if any slave-catcher had entered his domicile with a view to my recapture, Johnson would have been like him of the “stalwart hand.”
Frederick Douglass, Life and Times of Frederick Douglass, Second Part, chapter II, "Life as a Freeman" (Source 4: New Bedford and a new name; one cut marked [...]) (1881; this edition 1882). Public domain (published 1882). Source text.
1His newly discovered friends decided it was best for him not to stay longer in New York, and that New Bedford, Mass., was a much safer place. There he could work at his trade without danger of re-capture. He cheerfully started on his journey, though he had not enough money to pay his way. The stage-driver, plying between Newport and New Bedford, held a part of his baggage as security for his unpaid passage and when he and his wife arrived at their destination they had nothing to live on except faith. In this New England town everything was strange to Douglass, but he was not long in finding a friend, a colored man named Nathan Johnson. The latter, the first important acquaintance the refugee made among Northern colored people, had a good home, good standing in the community, and more than ordinary intelligence. He very soon discovered that Frederick Douglass was a man of superior fibre and became his firm friend.
2Johnson’s house was well furnished with books and music, and bore other evidences of good taste and a cultivated mind. He was in a position to render just that kind of help which the young fugitive and his new wife needed at this time. He at once redeemed the baggage held by the stage-driver, and gave Douglass needed directions and advice as to how to get work and to establish himself.
3Nathan Johnson had the further distinction of being the man who gave to the Maryland slave the name he ever afterward bore. Douglass left the South as Frederick Augustus Washington Bailey. His new-found friend had just been reading Scott’s Lady of the Lake, and persuaded the young man that Douglas was a name of poetic and historical significance; he was sure it would be further glorified by its new owner. With so auspicious a beginning, the refugee started out bravely to seek work and make a living for himself and his wife.
Booker T. Washington, Frederick Douglass, chapter III, "Escape from Slavery; Learning the Ways of Freedom" (Source 5: New Bedford and a new name) (1907). Public domain (published 1907). Source text.
Closure5-10 minutes
Exit ticket: (1) Write one way Sources 4 and 5 are alike, with a quotation from each. (2) Write one way they differ, and explain why a memoir and a biography might differ in that way.
Teacher note on the language and the history. The passages are quoted exactly as published. They use words of their time: "colored" and "Negro," which were the usual terms then and are not used today, and "the negro car" (Source 3), a separate railroad car for Black passengers. When Douglass writes that Nathan Johnson showed noble character, "black man though he was" (Source 4), he is answering the prejudice of his own readers, many of whom doubted that a Black man could be a hero, not agreeing with it. The sources describe slavery, slave-catchers and the danger of being sent back; prepare students for that and give them room to ask questions. No words are removed for offensive language; the cuts marked [...] only shorten the passages.
Teacher note on the biography. Washington did not write Frederick Douglass alone. In its preface he thanks S. Laing Williams, a Chicago lawyer who had known Douglass for many years, and his wife, Fannie Barrier Williams, for their "incalculable service" in preparing the book, and historians such as John Hope Franklin note that it has been attributed largely to Williams. Busy public figures often had such help. The book appeared under Washington's name, and this lesson calls him its author. Either way, the biographer was not present at the escape.
For homework: students compare Sources 6 and 7, the two accounts of Douglass's first days in New York, on September 4, 1838, and the days after. Words to know: succor (help); destitution (having nothing, not even food or shelter); vigilance committee (a group that hid people escaping slavery and helped them move on); "The Tombs" (a New York prison); oblivious (unaware).
1My free life began on the third of September, 1838. On the morning of the 4th of that month, after an anxious and most perilous but safe journey, I found myself in the big city of New York, a free man; one more added to the mighty throng which like the confused waves of the troubled sea, surged to and fro between the lofty walls of Broadway. Though dazzled with the wonders which met me on every hand, my thoughts could not be much withdrawn from my strange situation. For the moment the dreams of my youth, and the hopes of my manhood, were completely fulfilled. The bonds that had held me to “old master” were broken. No man now had a right to call me his slave or assert mastery over me. I was in the rough and tumble of an outdoor world, to take my chance with the rest of its busy number.
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2But my gladness was short lived, for I was not yet out of the reach and power of the slaveholders. I soon found that New York was not quite so free, or so safe a refuge as I had supposed, and a sense of loneliness and insecurity again oppressed me most sadly. [...] Every door seemed closed against me. I was in the midst of an ocean of my fellowmen, and yet a perfect stranger to every one. I was without home, without acquaintance, without money, without credit, without work, and without any definite knowledge as to what course to take, or where to look for succor.
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3I kept my secret to myself as long as I could, but was compelled at last to seek some one who should befriend me, without taking advantage of my destitution to betray me. Such an one I found in a sailor named Stuart, a warm-hearted and generous fellow, who from his humble home on Centre street, saw me standing on the opposite sidewalk, near “The Tombs.” As he approached me I ventured a remark to him which at once enlisted his interest in me. He took me to his home to spend the night, and in the morning went with me to Mr. David Ruggles, the secretary of the New York vigilance committee, a co-worker with Isaac T. Hopper, Lewis and Arthur Tappan, Theodore S. Wright, Samuel Cornish, Thomas Downing, Phillip A. Bell and other true men of their time. [...] Once in the hands of these brave and wise men, I felt comparatively safe.
Frederick Douglass, Life and Times of Frederick Douglass, Second Part, chapter II, "Life as a Freeman" (Source 6: the first days in New York; cuts marked [...]) (1881; this edition 1882). Public domain (published 1882). Source text.
1After reaching Philadelphia, he hurried on to New York. It took him just twenty-four hours to make the run from the slave city of Baltimore to the free city of New York. Measured by his intense anxiety, the distance and time must have seemed without end. For fifteen years he had been patiently planning to get his feet upon free soil and breathe the air of a free state. No one ever did more to free himself or to deserve the liberty into which he was now about to enter. He came to New York, his pulses throbbing with high hopes. He soon learned, however, that his stay there was not safe and that the slave-traders plied their vocation even in the free-states.
2Douglass’s instinct for right action seldom failed him. Although he was totally ignorant of New York and its people, and had never heard of a “Vigilance Committee,” he had managed, in a few days after his arrival, to put himself under the protection and guidance of such influential friends of the Negro race as Lewis and Arthur Tappan, Thomas Downing, and Theodore Wright, who were at that time high officials in that extensive Underground Railway system which had already safely carried thousands of passengers from bondage to freedom.
3He retained a keen remembrance of his former experiences in Baltimore and was conscious of a sense of protection in his Abolition friends; yet at the age of twenty-one years, in this new environment of freedom, he was in many respects as ignorant as a child. To what was north, or east, or west of New York, he was entirely oblivious neither did he know the kind and the condition of the people among whom he was to live and work out his destiny. Where to go, what to do, and how to use his freedom, were questions he could ask, but could not answer. It was enough, now, just to know that he was free. What was to be his relationship to these non-slave-holding people was yet to be discovered.
Booker T. Washington, Frederick Douglass, chapter III, "Escape from Slavery; Learning the Ways of Freedom" (Source 7: the first days in New York) (1907). Public domain (published 1907). Source text.
Differentiation Strategies
For Struggling Students
Give the chart from Diagram 2 with the three column headings and two details already placed, so the student starts by sorting, not by finding
Pre-highlight the sentences in Source 5 that match sentences in Source 4, and ask the student to find what each one changes
Read Sources 4 and 5 aloud with the student, one paragraph at a time, pausing after each to ask "Who is telling this? How do you know?"
Allow sentence frames: "Both authors say ____. Douglass writes ____, but Washington writes ____."
For Advanced Students
Ask students to find every place in Sources 2, 5 and 7 where Washington judges Douglass's character, and to explain what picture of Douglass the judgments build
Have students read the whole escape chapter of Life and Times and list the events Washington's biography leaves out
Ask students to write a short biography paragraph about Nathan Johnson using only facts from Source 4, then compare their choices with Washington's
Assessment Guidance
What to Look For
Strong answers name a specific similarity or difference and back it with a quotation from each source, instead of a general statement such as "one is longer." Look for students who can say why the accounts differ: the memoir writer knows his own feelings and chooses to sound modest, while the biographer has to rely on sources and chooses to praise. Watch for students who treat the biographer's judgments ("his desperate courage," "his cool temerity") as facts, who compare only length or style, or who quote one source and describe the other from memory. A student who notices that a detail appears in only one account, and asks where the author could have learned it, is reading like a historian.
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Classroom Activities
3 Activities
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Memoir or Biography? Sentence Sort
10 minPairs
Pairs sort eight sentences from parts of the two books that this lesson does not print. Four are from Douglass's memoir and four from Washington's biography. Deciding which is which, and saying why, builds the habit of noticing who is telling a story and what that teller could know.
The Eight Strips
"Minutes were hours, and hours were days during this part of my flight."
"Young Douglass’s flight had not outward semblance of dramatic incident or thrilling episode"
"He was a “hand” on the boat, but instead of minding his business, he insisted upon knowing me"
"“Murder itself,” he says, “was not more severely and surely punished in the state of Maryland than aiding and abetting the escape of a slave.”"
"The last point of imminent danger, and the one I dreaded most, was Wilmington."
"It is an evidence of his self-reliance and honor, as well as his loyalty to his past, that, almost the first step in his new life, was to send for his promised wife."
"I really believe he knew me, but had no heart to betray me."
"He cherished this “free money,” for it was the first he had ever earned that he could call his own."
Procedure
Pairs label each strip M (memoir, by Douglass) or B (biography, by Washington) and underline the clue that decided it
For each B strip, pairs decide whether the sentence gives a fact or Washington's judgment
Two pairs compare labels and settle any disagreement by pointing to the clue
Answer Key for the Teacher
M: 1, 3, 5, 7. B: 2, 4, 6, 8. Strip 3 is the tricky memoir strip: it says "he" about another man, a worker on the ferry, but "knowing me" shows that the writer is in the story. Strip 4 is the tricky biography strip: the words inside the quotation marks are Douglass's, but "he says" shows that someone else is reporting them. Strips 2 and 6 give Washington's judgments (the flight had no "dramatic incident"; sending for his promised wife showed his "self-reliance and honor"); strip 8 mixes a fact (his first earned money) with a claim about his feelings ("cherished").
Discussion Questions
Which clue was more reliable, "I" and "me" or "he"? Why can "he" appear in a memoir too?
Strips 1 and 7 tell what Douglass felt and believed. Could a biographer write those sentences? What would he need first?
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Near Misses on the Train
15 minGroups of 3-4
Douglass's memoir describes three moments on the trip when someone who knew him almost gave him away. Washington's biography (Source 2) covers the same part of the trip in four sentences, beginning "Twice on the trip." Groups compare the memoir's three cards, quoted exactly from Life and Times, with Washington's sentences, and decide how the two accounts line up.
The Three Cards (Douglass, Life and Times)
"The passage of the Susquehanna river at Havre de Grace was made by ferry boat at that time, on board of which I met a young colored man by the name of Nichols, who came very near betraying me. He was a “hand” on the boat, but instead of minding his business, he insisted upon knowing me, and asking me dangerous questions as to where I was going, and when I was coming back, etc."
"Only a few days before I had been at work on a revenue cutter, in Mr. Price’s ship-yard, under the care of Captain McGowan. On the meeting at this point of the two trains, the one going south stopped on the track just opposite to the one going north, and it so happened that this Captain McGowan sat at a window where he could see me very distinctly, and would certainly have recognized me had he looked at me but for a second. Fortunately, in the hurry of the moment, he did not see me"
"A German blacksmith whom I knew well, was on the train with me, and looked at me very intently as if he thought he had seen me somewhere before in his travels. I really believe he knew me, but had no heart to betray me. At any rate he saw me escaping and held his peace."
Words to know: hand (a worker on a boat); revenue cutter (a government patrol ship).
Procedure
Groups read Washington's four sentences in Source 2, from "Twice on the trip" to "interfered with or molested"
For each card, groups decide whether Washington's account includes that moment, and copy the words that match
Groups write one sentence that compares the accounts and one that contrasts them
Answer Key for the Teacher
Douglass tells of three people; Washington says "Twice." Card 2 matches Washington's first moment: a man on a south-bound train, sitting where he could see Douglass. Douglass names him, Captain McGowan, and says "he did not see me"; Washington describes him only as "a well-known citizen of Baltimore who knew him well." Washington's second moment, "a man who had met him frequently at the ship-yards," is harder to match: in Douglass's account the shipyard is where he worked under McGowan, so groups may match it to card 3, the German blacksmith, or argue that the two accounts do not line up neatly. Card 1, Nichols on the ferry, does not appear in Washington's sentences. Both accounts agree that no one stopped him. Accept any match a group supports with words from both texts.
Discussion Questions
Why might a biographer drop the names of the three men?
Douglass says of the blacksmith, "I really believe he knew me." Why can only Douglass tell us this?
Modification
For groups who need support, match card 2 together as a class, and have groups decide about cards 1 and 3.
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Check the Quotation
15 minPairs
A biography often quotes its subject. Pairs compare Washington's quotation of Douglass, printed in the biography just before Source 2, with what Douglass wrote in Source 1, paragraph 1, word by word. Checking a quotation against the original shows students that even the words a biographer quotes are part of his presentation.
The Quotation Card (Washington, Frederick Douglass)
Washington writes that Douglass's flight was not dramatic, "and yet, as he modestly says, “the courage that could risk betrayal and the bravery which was ready to encounter death, if need be, in pursuit of freedom, were features in the undertaking. My success was due to address rather than to courage, to good luck rather than bravery. My means of escape were provided by the very means which were making laws to hold and bind me more securely to slavery.”
Procedure
One partner reads the card aloud slowly while the other follows Source 1, paragraph 1, and raises a hand at every difference
Pairs list each difference in a two-column table: Douglass's words and Washington's words
Pairs decide which differences change the meaning and which do not
Answer Key for the Teacher
Differences: Douglass wrote "essential features," Washington "features"; Douglass "address rather than courage; to good luck," Washington "address rather than to courage, to good luck"; Douglass "provided for me by the very men who were making laws," Washington "provided by the very means which were making laws"; Douglass "more securely in slavery," Washington "more securely to slavery"; Douglass "if need be," Washington adds a comma. Most do not change the meaning, but "the very men" versus "the very means" does: Douglass's point is that the lawmakers' own papers gave him his way out, and "means which were making laws" loses the people. Washington may have worked from a later printing of the memoir, so do not tell students he made an error; the point is that a careful reader checks a quotation against the original when it can be found. Washington also introduces the words with "as he modestly says," which adds his own judgment of Douglass.
Discussion Questions
Washington calls these words modest. Do you agree? Which words show it?
Washington quotes Douglass's modest words and then, in Source 2, praises Douglass's "desperate courage." Does the biography agree with the memoir or argue with it?
Variation: Retell It Their Way
Pairs rewrite card 1 from Activity 2 (Nichols on the ferry) as a biographer would: third person, one sentence, with one judgment of Douglass. Then they list what the rewrite lost.
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Diagrams & Visual Aids
2 diagrams
Diagram 1: The Journey in the Sources
The places named in Sources 2-7, in the order Douglass traveled, with the sources that name each place. The line is a route, not a map drawn to scale. Douglass reached New York on the morning after he left Baltimore, and New Bedford about two weeks after he left. Only the memoir names Havre de Grace, where the train crossed the Susquehanna River by ferry.
Diagram 2: A Comparison Chart for Sources 1 and 2
The chart modeled in Direct Instruction for boarding the train. The middle column holds the facts both authors give; the side columns hold what only one author includes. Every item in the right-hand column is Washington's judgment of Douglass's character, not a fact about the trip. Students fill a blank copy for the conductor scene (Sources 2 and 3).
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Homework Assignment
~30 min
RI.6.9 Homework: Two Accounts of Douglass in New York
Directions: Read Sources 6 and 7 at the end of the lesson plan (in Closure). Source 6 is from Douglass's memoir and Source 7 is from Washington's biography. Their paragraphs are numbered; cite the source and paragraph for every quotation, for example (Source 6, paragraph 2). Answer in complete sentences.
Part 1: Compare (Problems 1-2)
Both authors say that New York was not safe for Douglass. Quote the words each author uses to say this, and explain in one sentence what danger each one means.
Both sources name some of the same men who helped people escape slavery. Name two men who appear in both sources, and explain how each author connects Douglass to them.
Part 2: Contrast (Problems 3-4)
According to Source 6, how did Douglass find someone to help him? Then explain what Washington says made the difference (Source 7, paragraph 2), and tell who is left out of Washington's account.
Compare how Douglass felt in his first days in New York, as each author presents it. Quote Source 6, paragraph 2, and Source 7, paragraph 3, and explain how the two pictures of his feelings differ.
Part 3: Facts, Judgments and Why (Problems 5-6)
Copy two sentences or phrases from Source 7, paragraph 1, that give facts someone could check, and two that give Washington's judgment or guess. For each judgment, write the word that shows it is not a checked fact.
Write a paragraph of 5-7 sentences that compares and contrasts how Douglass and Washington present Douglass's first days in New York. Use at least two quotations from each source, and end with a sentence that explains why a memoir and a biography might tell these days differently.
Rubric
Criterion
Full Credit (2 pts)
Partial Credit (1 pt)
No Credit (0 pts)
Comparing
Names real similarities and supports each with words from both sources
Names a similarity with evidence from only one source
No similarity, or one the sources do not support
Contrasting
Names real differences in details, point of view, feelings or judgments, with evidence from both sources
Names a difference in general terms only
No difference, or a difference the sources do not show
Fact and Judgment
Sorts facts from judgments correctly and names the signal words
Sorts some correctly, or without signal words
Treats judgments as facts
Evidence
Exact quotations with source and paragraph numbers
Quotations without locations, or one misquotation
No quotations
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Quiz: 20 Questions
Interactive, with answers
Instructions
Questions 1-11 and 14-20 use Sources 4 and 5 (in Independent Practice); question 17 also refers back to Source 1. Questions 12 and 13 need no passage. The paragraphs of each source are numbered. Your score updates as you answer, and Reset quiz clears everything.
Multiple choice: pick an option to check it. Short answer: write your answer, then reveal the model answer.
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Question 1 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which statement is true of both Source 4 and Source 5?
Answer: A
Both accounts include the baggage and Johnson's help: Douglass says the driver "took our baggage ... and held them" until Johnson "loaned me the two dollars" (Source 4, paragraph 1), and Washington says Johnson "at once redeemed the baggage held by the stage-driver" (Source 5, paragraph 2). Choice B names people who are not in either passage. Choice C is contradicted by both: Johnson chose the name. Choice D reverses Source 4, paragraph 3, where Johnson assures Douglass he "need not fear recapture in that city."
Question 2 of 20 · Multiple Choice
How do Sources 4 and 5 differ about paying for the baggage?
Answer: B
Douglass: Johnson "at once loaned me the two dollars with which to square accounts with the stage-driver" (Source 4, paragraph 1), so Douglass paid, with borrowed money. Washington: "He at once redeemed the baggage" (Source 5, paragraph 2), which makes Johnson the one who paid. Choice A misses that Douglass did "redeem" the baggage. Choice C mixes up the facts: the driver held the baggage because the fare was unpaid, and Washington says "a part of his baggage," not all of it. Choice D names a payer neither source mentions.
Question 3 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which pair of phrases shows that Source 4 is a memoir and Source 5 is a biography?
Answer: C
"Mine host" (Source 4, paragraph 3) means "my host": the word "mine" shows that the writer is the guest, the man who lived the event. "The young fugitive and his new wife" (Source 5, paragraph 2) is how someone else, writing in the third person, refers to Douglass. In choices A, B and D, neither phrase shows who is telling: there is no "I" or "he" in them, and in choice A the first phrase actually comes from Source 5 and the second from Source 4.
Question 4 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Washington writes, "Douglass left the South as Frederick Augustus Washington Bailey" (Source 5, paragraph 3). How does Source 4 present this differently?
Answer: D
Douglass writes that his mother gave him the long name, but "while living in Maryland" he "disposed of the Augustus Washington, and retained only Frederick Bailey," and then "called myself Johnson" between Baltimore and New Bedford (Source 4, paragraph 3). Washington's shorter version skips these steps. Choice A misreads what Johnson chose: Douglass, not Bailey. Choice B confuses Johnson, the name Douglass picked for himself on the trip, with his birth name, which was Bailey. Choice C ignores the steps Douglass describes.
Question 5 of 20 · Multiple Choice
According to Source 4, why was a new name needed in New Bedford?
Answer: A
Douglass says "the Johnson family was already so numerous as to cause some confusion in distinguishing one from another" (Source 4, paragraph 3). Choice B gives a reason the passage does not state for this change; Douglass had already dropped Bailey on the trip "to conceal myself." Choice C invents a feeling for Johnson. Choice D confuses the long birth name with Bailey. Washington's Source 5 gives no reason at all, which is one difference between the accounts.
Question 6 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Source 4 says Johnson "wished me to allow him to select a name for me. I consented." Source 5 says Johnson "persuaded the young man." What does the word "persuaded" add?
Answer: B
To persuade someone is to talk him into something. Douglass presents a simple request and agreement ("I consented"); Washington's word makes it sound like Johnson had to convince him. Choice A reverses who chose. Choice C is impossible: Washington was not there, and a word choice cannot prove presence. Choice D contradicts both sources, since Johnson chose "Douglass."
Question 7 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Both sources say Johnson "had just been reading" the Lady of the Lake. What does this matching wording suggest?
Answer: C
Douglass's memoir came out in 1881; Washington's biography appeared in 1907, after Douglass had died. A biographer who repeats the subject's words has probably read the subject's book. Choice B reverses the order: the memoir came first, so Douglass could not copy a book written later. Choices A and D invent sources neither text mentions.
Question 8 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which sentence from Source 5 gives Washington's judgment of Douglass, not a fact that could be checked?
Answer: D
"A man of superior fibre," meaning a person of fine inner character, is an opinion about Douglass; it praises him but cannot be checked like a date or a place. Choices A, B and C report events or names that could be checked against other records, even though one of them (C) differs from Douglass's own account.
Question 9 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which detail about the baggage appears only in Douglass's account?
Answer: A
Only Douglass lists "three music books,--two of them collections by Dyer, and one by Shaw" (Source 4, paragraph 1). Washington also says the driver held the baggage (B) "as security for his unpaid passage" (D), and that Johnson redeemed it (C), so those details are in both accounts. A memoir writer remembers his own belongings; a biographer summarizes.
Question 10 of 20 · Multiple Choice
On which point do the two sources agree about New Bedford?
Answer: B
Douglass says Johnson assured him "that I need not fear recapture in that city" (Source 4, paragraph 3); Washington says New Bedford "was a much safer place" where "he could work at his trade without danger of re-capture" (Source 5, paragraph 1). Choice A is not in either passage. Choice C invents Johnson's job. Choice D misreads "in a fortnight," which tells how long the journey took, not how long he would stay.
Question 11 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Source 4 tells the name story in a paragraph of more than 250 words; Source 5 tells it in fewer than 100. Which is the best explanation?
Answer: B
A biographer covers a whole life and chooses which events to tell briefly; Douglass is telling his own memory and can include every step and his later thoughts. Choice A is contradicted by the matching details, which show Washington knew Douglass's account. Choice C misreads Douglass, who calls the name "a comparatively unimportant question" (Source 4, paragraph 3). Choice D ignores that Washington spends two paragraphs on Johnson.
Question 12 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which pair of texts is an example of what RI.6.9 names in its official example?
Answer: C
The standard's example is "a memoir written by and a biography on the same person," which is exactly the Douglass and Washington pair. Choice A compares two accounts of one event, which RI.6.9 also covers, but it is not the official example. Choice B is fiction and poetry. Choice D is about two different people.
Question 13 of 20 · Multiple Choice
A student wants to compare how two authors present the same event. Which question would help most?
Answer: D
Presentation means how the event is told: what is included or left out, whose point of view, which words, and what judgments. Choices A, B and C are facts about the authors or the books, which do not show how the event is told.
Question 14 of 20 · Multiple Choice
How do both authors present Nathan Johnson?
Answer: A
Douglass praises Johnson's "noble hospitality and manly character" and says he would have defended him like the hero of the poem (Source 4, paragraph 3). Washington praises his "good home, good standing in the community, and more than ordinary intelligence" (Source 5, paragraph 1). Choice B shrinks the praise to money; the only sum named is two dollars. Choice C contradicts Washington's "firm friend." Choice D contradicts Douglass's gratitude.
Question 15 of 20 · Short Answer
Compare and contrast how Sources 4 and 5 present the choice of Douglass's new name. Give one similarity and one difference, each with a quotation from both sources.
Model answer: Both say Nathan Johnson picked the name because of the poem he was reading: Douglass writes that Johnson "had just been reading the 'Lady of the Lake'" (Source 4, paragraph 3), and Washington that he "had just been reading Scott's Lady of the Lake" (Source 5, paragraph 3). They differ on how it happened: Douglass explains why a change was needed, the many Johnsons, and says simply "I consented," while Washington gives no reason and says Johnson "persuaded the young man." Rubric: 2 points for a correct similarity and a correct difference, each supported from both sources; 1 point if one is missing or supported from only one source; 0 points otherwise.
Question 16 of 20 · Short Answer
Washington says that when Douglass and his wife reached New Bedford "they had nothing to live on except faith" (Source 5, paragraph 1). Is this a fact or the biographer's interpretation? Use Source 4 in your answer.
Model answer: It is mostly interpretation. The fact underneath it is that they had no money, which Source 4 supports: Douglass had to borrow "the two dollars with which to square accounts with the stage-driver" (paragraph 1). But "nothing to live on except faith" is Washington's way of describing their trust and courage; Douglass does not say this, and the phrase adds a feeling that only the people involved could confirm. Rubric: 2 points for separating the fact (no money) from the interpretation (faith) with evidence from Source 4; 1 point for a correct label without evidence; 0 points otherwise.
Question 17 of 20 · Short Answer
Washington writes that Johnson "was sure it would be further glorified by its new owner" (Source 5, paragraph 3). Douglass writes that Johnson, "far more than I, illustrated the virtues of the Douglas of Scotland" (Source 4, paragraph 3). Explain what each author's words show about how he wants readers to see Douglass.
Model answer: Washington looks ahead to Douglass's fame: the name would become even more honored because Douglass would make it great, so the biography presents Douglass as a future hero. Douglass turns the praise away from himself and gives it to Johnson, whose hospitality and courage fit the hero of the poem better than he did. The memoir presents Douglass as modest and grateful, which matches his claim in Source 1 that his escape was due to "good luck rather than bravery." Rubric: 2 points for explaining both authors' purposes with the quoted words; 1 point for one author only; 0 points for restating the quotations.
Question 18 of 20 · Short Answer
Find a sentence in Source 4, paragraph 3, that only Douglass could have written, because it tells his own later thoughts. Explain why a biographer could not write it without a source.
Model answer: "Since reading that charming poem myself, I have often thought that, considering the noble hospitality and manly character of Nathan Johnson ... he, far more than I, illustrated the virtues of the Douglas of Scotland." It reports what Douglass thought many times over many years. A biographer cannot see inside another person's mind; he could only repeat this if Douglass had written or said it. Rubric: 2 points for a sentence about Douglass's own thoughts or feelings and a clear reason; 1 point for a correct sentence with a weak reason; 0 points otherwise.
Question 19 of 20 · Short Answer
Washington says Douglass "cheerfully started on his journey" (Source 5, paragraph 1) and "started out bravely" (paragraph 3). Find words in Source 4 that show Douglass's own feeling on reaching New Bedford, and explain whether the two authors present his mood in the same way.
Model answer: Douglass writes that "in a fortnight after my flight from Maryland, I was safe in New Bedford,--a citizen of the grand old commonwealth of Massachusetts" (Source 4, paragraph 2). "Safe" and "grand old commonwealth" show relief and pride. Both authors present a hopeful mood, so they are alike here, but Washington describes the mood from outside with his own words ("cheerfully," "bravely"), while Douglass shows it through what he chose to say about the place. Rubric: 2 points for a quotation from Source 4 and a comparison of how each author shows the mood; 1 point for a quotation with little comparison; 0 points otherwise.
Question 20 of 20 · Short Answer
If you wanted to know (a) exactly what happened with the baggage and (b) how Douglass's character looked to people who admired him, which source would you use for each? Explain your choices.
Model answer: (a) Source 4, because Douglass was there and gives exact details, such as the "three music books" and the "two dollars" Johnson lent him, while Washington summarizes that Johnson "redeemed the baggage." (b) Source 5, because Washington writes as an admirer looking back on Douglass's whole life and adds judgments such as "a man of superior fibre"; Douglass, writing about himself, plays his own part down. Rubric: 2 points for sensible choices for both parts with a reason and evidence for each; 1 point for one part explained; 0 points otherwise.
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Frequently Asked Questions
10 Questions
What does RI.6.9 mean?
It means sixth graders read two accounts of the same events by different authors and explain how they are alike and how they differ. The standard's example is a memoir written by a person and a biography written about that person. Students look at what each author includes or leaves out, the point of view, the word choice and the judgments each adds.
What is the difference between a memoir and a biography?
A memoir is told by the person who lived the events; a biography is told by someone else. A memoir is usually in the first person ("I") and can include the writer's own feelings and later thoughts. A biography is in the third person ("he" or "she") and depends on sources such as letters, interviews and the subject's own writing. A memoir of a whole life is called an autobiography.
Does "presentation of events" mean the facts?
Not only the facts. Two authors can agree on every fact and still present the events differently, by telling some parts at length and others briefly, by leaving things out, by choosing warm or cool words, or by adding their own judgments. Comparing presentation means looking at how the story is told as well as what happened.
How is RI.6.9 different from RI.6.6?
RI.6.6 asks students to find one author's point of view or purpose in one text. RI.6.9 asks them to put two authors side by side on the same events. The skills work together: noticing Douglass's modesty and Washington's praise (RI.6.6) is part of explaining why their accounts differ (RI.6.9).
Why use Frederick Douglass and Booker T. Washington?
They make a true memoir-and-biography pair on the same events, which is the standard's own example. Douglass's Life and Times (1881) tells his escape in his own words, and Washington's Frederick Douglass (1907) retells it. Both books were published before 1930, so they are in the public domain and can be printed in full, and the escape is a story sixth graders want to follow.
Are these passages too hard for sixth graders?
They are near the top of what sixth graders read, which is why the lesson adds background, words to know, a teacher model and a partner step before students read alone. The sentences are long, but the events are clear. For students who need more help, the differentiation section suggests reading one paragraph at a time and giving the comparison chart partly filled.
What should students do when two accounts disagree on a fact?
Note the difference, then ask where each author could have learned it. In this lesson Douglass describes three people who almost recognized him on the train, while Washington writes "Twice." Douglass was there; Washington was working from sources. At grade 8, RI.8.9 asks students to analyze such conflicts in more depth.
How is RI.6.9 assessed?
By giving students two new accounts of the same events and asking them to name similarities and differences with evidence from both, as in the quiz and homework on this page. Short written comparisons show more than multiple choice alone: look for a quotation from each source and an explanation of why the accounts differ.
What comes after RI.6.9 in grade 7?
RI.7.9 asks students to analyze how two or more authors writing about the same topic shape their presentations by emphasizing different evidence or advancing different interpretations of facts. It builds directly on the comparisons in this lesson, such as Douglass explaining his escape by luck and Washington by courage.
How should teachers handle the language about slavery in these sources?
Keep the words exactly as the authors printed them and explain them. The sources use "colored" and "Negro," the usual terms of their time, and describe slave-catchers and a separate railroad car for Black passengers. A short note before reading, and time for questions after, helps students understand the history the words come from.
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Related Standards
5 standards
These standards connect to RI.6.9: prerequisites to review first, parallel standards at the same level, and next steps that build on it.
Before this lesson
RI.5.6Prerequisite
Analyze multiple accounts of the same event, noting similarities and differences in point of view
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Alongside
RI.6.6Parallel
Determine an author's point of view or purpose and explain how it is conveyed