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RL.11-12.7Common CoreELAReading LiteratureGrades 11-12

RL.11-12.7: Evaluating Interpretations of Macbeth and O'Neill's Ile

In plain English: RL.11-12.7 is the Common Core ELA standard that asks students in grades 11-12 to analyze several interpretations of one story, play or poem, such as recorded or live productions, and to evaluate how each version interprets its source text. It requires at least one play by Shakespeare and one by an American dramatist, and it is usually taught in English 11 or English 12.

Analyze multiple interpretations of a story, drama, or poem (e.g., recorded or live production of a play or recorded novel or poetry), evaluating how each version interprets the source text. (Include at least one play by Shakespeare and one play by an American dramatist.).

Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts & Literacy · Domain: Reading Standards for Literature · Cluster: Integration of Knowledge and Ideas · Official standard

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Lesson Plan

65-70 min

Overview

Students learn that every production of a play is an argument about what the play means, and that they can judge that argument against the words on the page. The Shakespeare play is Macbeth. Students read the sleepwalking scene and then two documented interpretations of Lady Macbeth from the nineteenth century: William Hazlitt's 1817 account of Sarah Siddons in the part, and Ellen Terry's own diary and letters about her 1888 performance at the Lyceum Theatre, which divided critics because it rejected what she called the "fiend" reading. Because recordings of modern productions are under copyright, the lesson works from these public-domain eyewitness and actor accounts, and from class performances.

The American play is Eugene O'Neill's one-act Ile (first staged in 1917). Students read its ending and evaluate two imagined productions, written for this page as director's notes, that interpret the captain and his wife in opposite ways. For homework they return to Macbeth, Act I, scene 5, and plan and evaluate two stagings of their own. The standard's two examples run through the lesson: live productions of a play, and a recorded reading of a poem.

Learning Objectives

By the end of this lesson, students will be able to:

  • Identify the interpretive choices a production makes (line readings, cuts, blocking, design, added moments) and the reading of character each choice expresses
  • Compare two interpretations of the same role or scene, using documented accounts of performances and director's notes
  • Evaluate an interpretation against the source text: what it is supported by, what it brings out and what it has to ignore or contradict
  • Explain how the amount of direction a playwright writes, from Shakespeare's few stage directions to O'Neill's many, shapes what a production is free to decide

Prior Knowledge Required

Students should already be comfortable with:

  • Analyzing how far a filmed or live production stays faithful to or departs from the text RL.8.7
  • Analyzing a scene or subject in two artistic mediums, including what each emphasizes or leaves out RL.9-10.7
  • Citing strong and thorough textual evidence, including where the text leaves matters uncertain RL.11-12.1
  • Reading Shakespeare's verse and prose, and the basic vocabulary of theater: blocking, stage direction, line reading

Lesson Procedure

65-70 minutes of class time across 5 phases.

  1. Warm-Up5-10 minutes

    Warm-Up Prompt

    "In Act I of Macbeth, Macbeth asks his wife, 'If we should fail?' The Cambridge edition prints her two-word answer as 'We fail!' Say those two words three ways: as an exclamation, as a question and as a flat, quiet statement. What kind of woman does each reading suggest?"

    Have three volunteers say the line three ways and ask the class to describe the Lady Macbeth each one creates: scornful, doubtful, calmly ready for anything. Point out that editions punctuate those two words differently (the 1623 Folio prints a question mark), and that an actor must choose a reading whatever the page prints. Tell students that today they will study choices like this one, made by famous actors and by two imagined directors, and learn to judge them against the text.

  2. Direct Instruction20 minutes

    Interpretation and its tools. The source text is the script. An interpretation is a version of it in performance, a recording or a production plan, and it always argues for a reading of the play. Its tools are:

    • Line readings: tone, pace and stress ("We fail!" or "We fail?").
    • Cuts: lines or scenes left out, which remove evidence.
    • Blocking and stage business: where actors move and what they do with objects.
    • Design: set, costume, light and sound.
    • Added moments: actions or images the script does not ask for.

    Evaluating an interpretation means asking three questions: What in the text supports it? What does it bring out that a reader might miss? What does it have to ignore, cut or contradict? Then give the context: Macbeth and his wife have murdered King Duncan, and Macbeth has since had his friend Banquo and the family of Macduff, the Thane of Fife, killed. Lady Macbeth has not appeared for several scenes. Read the sleepwalking scene aloud.

    Doct. I have two nights watched with you, but can perceive no truth in your report. When was it she last walked?

    Gent. Since his majesty went into the field, I have seen her rise from her bed, throw her nightgown upon her, unlock her closet, take forth paper, fold it, write upon't, read it, afterwards seal it, and again return to bed; yet all this while in a most fast sleep.

    Doct. A great perturbation in nature, to receive at once the benefit of sleep and do the effects of watching! In this slumbery agitation, besides her walking and other actual performances, what, at any time, have you heard her say?

    Gent. That, sir, which I will not report after her.

    Doct. You may to me, and 'tis most meet you should.

    Gent. Neither to you nor any one, having no witness to confirm my speech.

    Enter LADY MACBETH, with a taper.

    Lo you, here she comes! This is her very guise, and, upon my life, fast asleep. Observe her; stand close.

    Doct. How came she by that light?

    Gent. Why, it stood by her: she has light by her continually; 'tis her command.

    Doct. You see, her eyes are open.

    Gent. Ay, but their sense is shut.

    Doct. What is it she does now? Look, how she rubs her hands.

    Gent. It is an accustomed action with her, to seem thus washing her hands: I have known her continue in this a quarter of an hour.

    Lady M. Yet here's a spot.

    Doct. Hark! she speaks: I will set down what comes from her, to satisfy my remembrance the more strongly.

    Lady M. Out, damned spot! out, I say! One: two: why, then 'tis time to do't. Hell is murky. Fie, my lord, fie! a soldier, and afeard? What need we fear who knows it, when none can call our power to account? Yet who would have thought the old man to have had so much blood in him?

    Doct. Do you mark that?

    Lady M. The thane of Fife had a wife; where is she now? What, will these hands ne'er be clean? No more o' that, my lord, no more o' that: you mar all with this starting.

    Doct. Go to, go to; you have known what you should not.

    Gent. She has spoke what she should not, I am sure of that: heaven knows what she has known.

    Lady M. Here's the smell of the blood still: all the perfumes of Arabia will not sweeten this little hand. Oh, oh, oh!

    Doct. What a sigh is there! The heart is sorely charged.

    Gent. I would not have such a heart in my bosom for the dignity of the whole body.

    Doct. Well, well, well,--

    Gent. Pray God it be, sir.

    Doct. This disease is beyond my practice: yet I have known those which have walked in their sleep who have died holily in their beds.

    Lady M. Wash your hands; put on your nightgown; look not so pale: I tell you yet again, Banquo's buried; he cannot come out on 's grave.

    Doct. Even so?

    Lady M. To bed, to bed; there's knocking at the gate: come, come, come, come, give me your hand: what's done cannot be undone: to bed, to bed, to bed. [Exit.

    William Shakespeare, Macbeth, Act V, scene 1 (the sleepwalking scene) (1623; this edition 1865). Public domain (published 1865). Source text.
    • A cue in the text and a choice for the production

      The Doctor asks, "How came she by that light?" and the Gentlewoman answers, "she has light by her continually; 'tis her command" (paragraphs 9-10). What does the text fix, and what does it leave to the production?

      Result: The text fixes that she carries a taper and cannot bear the dark. It does not say whether she keeps it in her hand. An actor who sets it down can wash with both hands, so the guilt becomes the center of the scene; an actor who clings to it makes her fear of the dark the center. Diagram 2 traces both choices.

    • A reading of the character (the official example: live production)

      Hazlitt, describing the character before he turns to Siddons, calls Lady Macbeth "a great bad woman, whom we hate, but whom we fear more than we hate" (T2, paragraph 1). What reading of the role is this, and how would it shape a live production?

      Result: It reads her as grand and terrifying, a woman of "inexorable self-will." A production built on it would give her power and stillness rather than tenderness. Terry later called readings of this kind the "fiend" reading.

    • Evaluating a weak interpretation

      Imagine a production in which Lady Macbeth is awake and only pretending to sleepwalk, to trick the Doctor. Test it against the text.

      Result: The text contradicts it twice: the Gentlewoman has seen her "in a most fast sleep" (paragraph 2) and swears "upon my life, fast asleep" (paragraph 8). The interpretation is new, but it can stand only by ignoring what the play states, so it fails the first test.

    • Recorded poetry (the standard's second example)

      Two readers record the last line of Tennyson's "Ulysses": "To strive, to seek, to find, and not to yield." One gives the four verbs equal weight; the other speeds through the first three and slows sharply on "not to yield." How does each recording interpret the line?

      Result: The even reading makes the line a steady list of equal duties, a life of continuous effort. The second makes the refusal to give up the climax. Both keep every word, so the evaluation turns on the poem: an old man who admits he is "Made weak by time and fate" in the line before, which makes the stress on "not to yield" well supported.

    Siddons in the part. Read Hazlitt's two paragraphs. Hazlitt had seen Sarah Siddons (1755-1831), who first played Lady Macbeth in London in 1785, and his account is one of the best-known descriptions of her sleepwalking scene. Ask students to underline every detail of what Siddons did, as opposed to what Hazlitt felt.

    [...] The magnitude of her resolution almost covers the magnitude of her guilt. She is a great bad woman, whom we hate, but whom we fear more than we hate. She does not excite our loathing and abhorrence like Regan and Goneril. She is only wicked to gain a great end; and is perhaps more distinguished by her commanding presence of mind and inexorable self-will, which do not suffer her to be diverted from a bad purpose, when once formed, by weak and womanly regrets, than by the hardness of her heart or want of natural affections.

    [...]

    In speaking of the character of Lady Macbeth, we ought not to pass over Mrs. Siddons's manner of acting that part. We can conceive of nothing grander. It was something above nature. It seemed almost as if a being of a superior order had dropped from a higher sphere to awe the world with the majesty of her appearance. Power was seated on her brow, passion emanated from her breast as from a shrine; she was tragedy personified. In coming on in the sleeping-scene, her eyes were open, but their sense was shut. She was like a person bewildered and unconscious of what she did. Her lips moved involuntarily--all her gestures were involuntary and mechanical. She glided on and off the stage like an apparition. To have seen her in that character was an event in every one's life, not to be forgotten.

    William Hazlitt, Characters of Shakespear's Plays, on Lady Macbeth and Mrs. Siddons (1817; this edition 1916). Public domain (published 1916). Source text.
  3. Guided Practice15 minutes

    Read the passages from Ellen Terry's memoir together. Terry (1847-1928) played Lady Macbeth opposite Henry Irving in 1888, and John Singer Sargent painted her in the costume in a portrait finished in 1889; project a public-domain image of the portrait from Tate's website or another museum source. Work through the three steps with the class.

    "The picture of me is nearly finished, and I think it magnificent. The green and blue of the dress is splendid, and the expression as Lady Macbeth holds the crown over her head is quite wonderful.

    [...]

    Since then it has gone over nearly the whole of Europe, and now is resting for life at the Tate Gallery. Sargent suggested by this picture all that I should have liked to be able to convey in my acting as Lady Macbeth.

    [...]

    "It ('Macbeth') is a most tremendous success, and the last three days' advance booking has been greater than ever was known, even at the Lyceum. Yes, it is a success, and I am a success, which amazes me, for never did I think I should be let down so easily. Some people hate me in it; some, Henry among them, think it my best part, and the critics differ, and discuss it hotly, which in itself is my best success of all! Those who don't like me in it are those who don't want, and don't like to read it fresh from Shakespeare, and who hold by the 'fiend' reading of the character.... One of the best things ever written on the subject, I think, is the essay of J. Comyns Carr. That is as hotly discussed as the new 'Lady Mac'--all the best people agreeing with it. Oh, dear! It is an exciting time!"

    From a letter I wrote to my daughter, who was in Germany at the time:

    "I wish you could see my dresses. They are superb, especially the first one: green beetles on it, and such a cloak! The photographs give no idea of it at all, for it is in color that it is so splendid. The dark red hair is fine. The whole thing is Rossetti--rich stained-glass effects, I play some of it well, but, of course, I don't do what I want to do yet. Meanwhile I shall not budge an inch in the reading of it, for that I know is right. Oh, it's fun, but it's precious hard work for I by no means make her a 'gentle, lovable woman' as some of 'em say. That's all pickles. She was nothing of the sort, although she was not a fiend, and did love her husband. I have to what is vulgarly called 'sweat at it,' each night."

    Ellen Terry, The Story of My Life, from the chapter The Macbeth Period (1908; this edition 1909). Public domain (published 1909). Source text.
    1. An interpretation that divided its audience (paragraph 3). Teacher note: "Some people hate me in it; some, Henry among them, think it my best part, and the critics differ." Ask: why would a performance cause argument? Because it challenged what audiences expected of the role, and an interpretation that departs from tradition has to be judged on the text, not on habit.
    2. Design as interpretation (paragraph 5). Teacher note: the dress with "green beetles on it," the "dark red hair" and "rich stained-glass effects" belong to the look of Pre-Raphaelite painting, which Terry names through Rossetti. Ask what kind of woman such a costume suggests before she says a word: beautiful, rich, from legend, and not obviously a monster.
    3. Comparing two accounts. Teacher note: Hazlitt describes Siddons from the audience; Terry writes about herself. Ask pairs what each kind of source can and cannot tell us about a performance nobody alive has seen, then leave the question of which reading the text supports better for the quiz.
  4. Independent Practice20 minutes

    Students turn to the American play. Give this summary of what comes before the passage: in 1895, Captain David Keeney's whaling ship has been locked in Arctic ice for nearly a year with only four hundred barrels of oil ("ile") in the hold. The crew's two-year contract is over and they have tried to mutiny; Keeney knocked their leader down and drove them back at gunpoint. His wife Annie, who chose to come on the voyage although he warned her against it, has been worn down by the cold, the silence and the brutality, and she calls the cabin "this prison cell of a room." Keeney says he cannot go home without a full ship. In the moments before the passage, she pleads with him to take her home before she goes mad.

    Students read the ending, then the director's notes for two imagined productions. On the chart handout they (1) list each staging's choices under line readings, cuts, blocking, design and added moments; (2) find the line or stage direction in O'Neill's text that each choice follows, changes or contradicts; (3) write two sentences evaluating each staging. Quiz questions 7-14 check this work.

    KEENEY (dragging out the words with an effort). I'll do it, Annie--for your sake--if you say it's needful for ye.

    MRS. KEENEY (with wild joy--kissing him). God bless you for that, David!

    [...]

    MATE (excitedly). The ice is breakin' up to no'th'rd, sir. There's a clear passage through the floe, and clear water beyond, the lookout says.

    (KEENEY straightens himself like a man coming out of a trance. MRS. KEENEY looks at the MATE with terrified eyes.)

    [...]

    KEENEY (his voice suddenly grim with determination). Then get her ready and we'll drive her through.

    [...]

    KEENEY (speaking aloud to himself--derisively). And I was a-goin' home like a yaller dog!

    MRS. KEENEY (imploringly). David!

    KEENEY (sternly). Woman, you ain't a-doin' right when you meddle in men's business and weaken 'em. You can't know my feelin's. I got to prove a man to be a good husband for ye to take pride in. I got to git the ile, I tell ye.

    [...]

    (He goes out. She cries after him in anguish, "David!" A pause. She passes her hand across her eyes--then commences to laugh hysterically and goes to the organ. She sits down and starts to play wildly an old hymn. KEENEY reenters from the doorway to the deck and stands looking at her angrily. He comes over and grabs her roughly by the shoulder.)

    KEENEY. Woman, what foolish mockin' is this? (She laughs wildly, and he starts back from her in alarm.) Annie! What is it? (She doesn't answer him. KEENEY'S voice trembles.) Don't you know me, Annie?

    (He puts both hands on her shoulders and turns her around so that he can look into her eyes. She stares up at him with a stupid expression, a vague smile on her lips. He stumbles away from her, and she commences softly to play the organ again.)

    KEENEY (swallowing hard--in a hoarse whisper, as if he had difficulty in speaking). You said--you was agoin' mad--God!

    [...]

    KEENEY (turning to his wife). Annie! Did you hear him? I'll git the ile. (She doesn't answer or seem to know he is there. He gives a hard laugh, which is almost a groan.) I know you're foolin' me, Annie. You ain't out of your mind--(anxiously) be you? I'll git the ile now right enough--jest a little while longer, Annie--then we'll turn hom'ard. I can't turn back now, you see that, don't ye? I've got to git the ile. (In sudden terror) Answer me! You ain't mad, be you?

    (She keeps on playing the organ, but makes no reply. The MATE'S face appears again through the skylight.)

    MATE. All ready, sir.

    (KEENEY turns his back on his wife and strides to the doorway, where he stands for a moment and looks back at her in anguish, fighting to control his feelings.)

    MATE. Comin', sir?

    KEENEY (his face suddenly grown hard with determination). Aye.

    (He turns abruptly and goes out. MRS. KEENEY does not appear to notice his departure. Her whole attention seems centred in the organ. She sits with half-closed eyes, her body swaying a little from side to side to the rhythm of the hymn. Her fingers move faster and faster and she is playing wildly and discordantly as the Curtain falls.)

    Eugene O'Neill, Ile, the ending (1921). Public domain (published 1921). Source text.

    Our production treats Ile as Annie Keeney's tragedy. The captain is her jailer and the cabin is her cell. Every choice below is meant to make the audience feel the walls close in on her.

    The set. The cabin walls lean slightly inward and are painted a dirty white. The skylight lets in only a thin strip of gray light, and the organ stands at the center of the stage, so that every scene has to be played around it.

    Keeney. The actor plays him loud and hard from start to finish. When he says "I'll do it, Annie," he speaks through his teeth, as if he already regrets the promise, so the audience never quite believes him. His speech about proving himself a man is delivered with a sneer, as an excuse.

    The exit. When the mate calls "Comin', sir?" Keeney strides straight out. We cut the moment in which he stops at the doorway to look back at his wife; in our production a jailer does not look back.

    Annie. At the organ, the actor follows the playwright's direction exactly: she plays the hymn wildly and out of tune, faster and faster.

    An added moment. After Keeney leaves, Annie stops playing for a few seconds, walks to the porthole and lifts the curtain toward the open water. Then she returns to the organ. The lights fade on her playing, and the hymn goes on in the dark after the curtain falls.

    Lesson author, Staging A: The Prison Ship (director's notes for Ile). Original passage written for this page.

    Our production treats Ile as the tragedy of two prisoners. Keeney is trapped by his pride as surely as Annie is trapped by the ice, and the audience should pity them both.

    The set. We build the cabin as the playwright describes it at the start of the play: a small, square room with a stove, a hanging lamp and an organ that looks brand-new. Nothing is exaggerated.

    Keeney. "I'll do it, Annie" is spoken quietly, and he means it. When the mate reports clear water to the north, the actor waits a long moment before "Then get her ready and we'll drive her through," so that the audience watches him choose.

    A cut. We cut Keeney's whole speech that begins "Woman, you ain't a-doin' right when you meddle in men's business." It makes him sound like a bully, and we do not want the audience to stop caring about him.

    The exit. At the doorway the actor holds his look back at Annie for a full ten seconds before the hard "Aye."

    Annie. The final hymn is played slowly and softly, one quiet chord repeated, so that the last sound of the play is sad rather than frightening.

    Lesson author, Staging B: The Captain's Tragedy (director's notes for Ile). Original passage written for this page.
  5. Closure5 minutes

    Exit ticket: (1) Name one choice from Staging A or B and the line of O'Neill's text you would use to judge it. (2) In one sentence, explain why a Shakespeare production usually has more freedom in its stage business than a production of O'Neill.

    Teacher note on content and language: Macbeth deals with murder, and in the homework passage Lady Macbeth calls on evil spirits to change her body and mind. Ile includes violence against the crew and a woman's mental breakdown; the word "mad" and the phrase "a stupid expression" (meaning dazed) are the playwright's, and Keeney's line about "men's business" reflects his character's attitudes, which students may and should question. Treat Annie's breakdown with care, since some students may have personal experience of mental illness. O'Neill writes the whalers' speech in dialect ("ile," "yaller," "git"); the spellings are his. Hazlitt's and Terry's descriptions of women use the language of their time.

    For homework: students read the passage from Act I, scene 5 below, where Lady Macbeth reads her husband's letter about the witches' prophecy and then learns that King Duncan will stay the night. The homework uses it with Hazlitt's and Terry's accounts.

    Glamis thou art, and Cawdor, and shalt be
    What thou art promised: yet do I fear thy nature;
    It is too full o' the milk of human kindness
    To catch the nearest way: thou wouldst be great;
    Art not without ambition, but without
    The illness should attend it: what thou wouldst highly,
    That wouldst thou holily; wouldst not play false,
    And yet wouldst wrongly win: thou'ldst have, great Glamis,
    That which cries 'Thus thou must do, if thou have it;
    And that which rather thou dost fear to do
    Than wishest should be undone.' Hie thee hither,
    That I may pour my spirits in thine ear,
    And chastise with the valour of my tongue
    All that impedes thee from the golden round,
    Which fate and metaphysical aid doth seem
    To have thee crown'd withal.
    [...]
    The raven himself is hoarse
    That croaks the fatal entrance of Duncan
    Under my battlements. Come, you spirits
    That tend on mortal thoughts, unsex me here,
    And fill me, from the crown to the toe, top-full
    Of direst cruelty! make thick my blood,
    Stop up the access and passage to remorse,
    That no compunctious visitings of nature
    Shake my fell purpose, nor keep peace between
    The effect and it! Come to my woman's breasts,
    And take my milk for gall, you murdering ministers,
    Wherever in your sightless substances
    You wait on nature's mischief! Come, thick night,
    And pall thee in the dunnest smoke of hell,
    That my keen knife see not the wound it makes,
    Nor heaven peep through the blanket of the dark,
    To cry 'Hold, hold!'

    William Shakespeare, Macbeth, Act I, scene 5 (Lady Macbeth after reading the letter) (1623; this edition 1865). Public domain (published 1865). Source text.

Differentiation Strategies

For Struggling Students

  • Give the evaluation chart with three columns (Choice, Line it follows or changes, What it makes us think) and fill in the first row for the taper
  • Provide a glossary for the Ile passage (floe, companionway, skylight, school of whales) and read the stage directions aloud separately from the dialogue
  • Offer the frame "This production ___, which follows / changes / contradicts the line '___,' so it interprets the character as ___"

For Advanced Students

  • Ask students to find the words in Hazlitt's paragraphs that describe Siddons herself and argue whether his account is evidence of her performance or of his own reading of the play
  • Have students compare a licensed recorded production of Macbeth available through the school with the Siddons and Terry accounts, using the same three evaluation questions
  • Ask students to write a third staging of the Ile ending that keeps every word and every stage direction, and explain what interpretive freedom is left

Assessment Guidance

What to Look For

Check that students name a specific choice ("Staging B plays the hymn softly") and the exact line or stage direction it follows, changes or contradicts, and that they state the reading of character the choice expresses. Strong answers evaluate in both directions: what the interpretation reveals and what it costs. Watch for students who treat any departure from the script as a mistake, for students who judge a production by whether they like the characters, and for students who confuse what a critic felt with what an actor did.

02

Classroom Activities

3 Activities

1

Three Ways to Sleepwalk

20 minGroups of 3

Groups perform Lady Macbeth's speeches from the sleepwalking scene in three different interpretations, and the audience identifies and evaluates each one. Performing the choices, even briefly, shows students that an interpretation lives in specific decisions about voice, body and objects.

The Three Interpretations

  • The apparition: follow Hazlitt's account of Siddons, with open, unseeing eyes and mechanical gestures
  • The wife: follow Terry's claim that she "did love her husband"; speak the lines to an absent Macbeth
  • Your own: choose one line to make the center of the scene and build the performance around it

Procedure

  • Each group assigns roles: Lady Macbeth, the Doctor and the Gentlewoman
  • Groups rehearse paragraphs 15-30 of the scene three times, once for each interpretation, and write on an index card the choice for the taper, the hands and the last line
  • Two groups perform for each other; the audience names the interpretation and the line that best supports it
  • Each group writes a two-sentence evaluation of its own third interpretation, using the three evaluation questions

Discussion Questions

  • Which interpretation made the Doctor and the Gentlewoman most important, and why?
  • Which line was hardest to fit into the apparition reading?
  • What did the "own" interpretations have in common?
2

The Director's Table

15 minGroups of 4

Groups plan their own staging of the ending of Ile by filling in six choice cards, and they must justify every card with a line or stage direction. Students experience how many decisions a production makes, and how O'Neill's detailed directions limit some of them.

The Six Choice Cards

  • Casting: age and manner of Keeney and Annie
  • A line reading: how Keeney says "Then get her ready and we'll drive her through"
  • A cut: one line or stage direction the group would cut, if any
  • Blocking: where Annie is when Keeney says "Don't you know me, Annie?"
  • Sound: how the hymn sounds at the end
  • The last image: what the audience sees as the lights go down

Procedure

  • Groups fill in each card with a choice and the paragraph number of the text it follows or changes
  • They mark every card on which O'Neill's stage directions already decide the question
  • Each group states its interpretation in one sentence and reads its six cards to another group, which challenges the weakest justification

Discussion Questions

  • On how many cards did O'Neill's directions leave the group no real choice?
  • Did any group cut a line? What did it lose?
  • Would the same six cards be harder or easier to fill in for the sleepwalking scene? Why?

Modification

For students who need support, give the group four cards instead of six (line reading, blocking, sound, last image) and a list of paragraph numbers to choose from.

3

The Critic's Column

15 minIndividual, then pairs

Students write a short review of a production in the style of Hazlitt, describing what the actors did and judging how well it served the play. Writing as a critic makes students separate description from evaluation, which is the heart of the standard.

The Task

Write a 150-word review of one group's performance from Activity 1 or of your own group's Activity 2 staging. First describe three specific choices, then evaluate one of them against a quoted line.

Procedure

  • Students draft alone for 10 minutes
  • Partners trade reviews and underline description in one color and evaluation in another
  • Each writer revises one sentence that mixed the two

Discussion Questions

  • Which is harder to write, the description or the evaluation?
  • How is your review like Hazlitt's paragraph on Siddons, and how is it different?

Variation: Recorded Reading

Pairs record two audio readings of Lady Macbeth's speech in paragraph 30 of the sleepwalking scene, change only pace and stress, and ask another pair to describe the interpretation in each recording.

03

Diagrams & Visual Aids

2 diagrams

Diagram 1: Three Readings of Lady Macbeth

Interpretations of Lady Macbeth on one line more monstrous more sympathetic The "fiend" reading as Terry names it Hazlitt on Siddons "a great bad woman" Terry, 1888 "not a fiend," yet "by no means" gentle "gentle, lovable woman" the view Terry rejects Positions are the lesson author's summary of each source; the line shows order, not measurement.
The line runs from the most monstrous reading of Lady Macbeth to the most sympathetic. Hazlitt calls her "a great bad woman" but says she does not "excite our loathing"; Terry refuses both the "fiend" reading and the "gentle, lovable woman." Positions are the lesson author's summary, not a measurement.

Diagram 2: One Cue, Two Productions

From a cue in the text to an interpretation: the taper What the text fixes A production chooses What the choice says She enters "with a taper"; "she has light by her continually" A. She sets the taper down and washes with both hands The washing matters most: guilt she cannot rub away B. She never lets go of the taper and washes around it Her fear of the dark matters most: she cannot face it Evaluate each choice against the lines that follow: "Look, how she rubs her hands."
The text of the sleepwalking scene fixes the taper and Lady Macbeth's need for light; it does not say whether she holds the taper while she washes. Two productions resolve the question in different ways, and each choice makes a different part of the scene the center.

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Homework Assignment

~30 min

RL.11-12.7 Homework: Two Stagings of Lady Macbeth's First Scene

Directions: Use the passage from Macbeth, Act I, scene 5, at the end of the lesson plan (in Closure), with numbered lines, and the Hazlitt and Terry passages in the lesson plan. Answer in complete sentences and cite line or paragraph numbers for every quotation.

Part 1: Testing Two Readings (Problems 1-2)

  1. Hazlitt calls Lady Macbeth "a great bad woman" of "inexorable self-will" (T2, paragraph 1). Find two phrases in lines 17-33 of Act I, scene 5 that best support his reading, and explain what each shows.
  2. Terry insists that Lady Macbeth "did love her husband" (T3, paragraph 5). Find the strongest evidence for Terry's reading in lines 1-16, and explain whether Lady Macbeth's worry about her husband's "nature" is love, contempt or both.

Part 2: Directing the Scene (Problems 3-4)

  1. Write director's notes (4-6 sentences) for lines 1-16 in a production that follows Terry's reading. Include one line reading, one gesture or movement, and one design choice, and name the line each choice depends on.
  2. Write director's notes (4-6 sentences) for lines 17-33 in a production that follows Hazlitt's reading. Include one cut you would or would not make, and explain what the cut would remove.

Part 3: Evaluating (Problems 5-6)

  1. Which of your two productions is better supported by the text of both Act I, scene 5 and the sleepwalking scene? Write one paragraph that uses at least one line from each scene and states what the weaker production would have to ignore.
  2. Shakespeare's scene gives the actor almost no stage directions; O'Neill's ending of Ile is full of them. In one paragraph, explain how this difference changes what a production of each play is free to decide, using one example from each text.

Rubric

CriterionFull Credit (2 pts)Partial Credit (1 pt)No Credit (0 pts)
Specific ChoicesNames concrete production choices (reading, gesture, cut, design)Choices are general ("make her evil")No choices
Textual SupportTies each choice or reading to a quoted line with its numberEvidence without line numbers, or loosely relatedNo evidence
EvaluationWeighs what an interpretation reveals and what it ignores or cutsJudges one side onlyOpinion without reasons
Both Playwrights (Problem 6)Accurate example from Shakespeare and from O'NeillExample from one play onlyNo examples

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Quiz: 20 Questions

Interactive, with answers

Instructions

Questions 1-6 use the sleepwalking scene (T1) and the Hazlitt and Terry passages (T2 and T3), and questions 7-14 use the ending of Ile (T4) and the two sets of director's notes (T5 and T6); all are in the lesson plan above, with paragraph numbers. Questions 15-17 need no passage, and questions 18-20 are short written evaluations. Your score updates as you answer, and Reset quiz clears everything.

Multiple choice: pick an option to check it. Short answer: write your answer, then reveal the model answer.

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  1. Question 1 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Hazlitt writes that in the sleeping-scene Siddons's "eyes were open, but their sense was shut" (T2, paragraph 2). Which part of the play's text does this acting choice follow?

  2. Question 2 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Hazlitt says Siddons "glided on and off the stage like an apparition" and that "all her gestures were involuntary and mechanical" (T2, paragraph 2). Which line from the scene would a critic use to argue that this ghostlike reading leaves something out?

  3. Question 3 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Which line from the sleepwalking scene gives more support to Terry's reading of Lady Macbeth ("not a fiend") than to Hazlitt's "great bad woman, whom we hate"?

  4. Question 4 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Terry writes, "I play some of it well, but, of course, I don't do what I want to do yet. Meanwhile I shall not budge an inch in the reading of it" (T3, paragraph 5). What distinction does she draw?

  5. Question 5 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Terry says that the people who dislike her performance "don't like to read it fresh from Shakespeare, and ... hold by the 'fiend' reading of the character" (T3, paragraph 3). What is she claiming about her interpretation?

  6. Question 6 of 20 · Short Answer

    Terry's diary describes Sargent's portrait, in which "Lady Macbeth holds the crown over her head" (T3, paragraph 1), and she writes that "Sargent suggested by this picture all that I should have liked to be able to convey in my acting" (paragraph 2). No scene in the play shows Lady Macbeth lifting a crown. Evaluate the portrait as an interpretation: what does it add, and is the addition supported by the play?

  7. Question 7 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Which stage direction in O'Neill's text does Staging A (T5) remove?

  8. Question 8 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Which choice in Staging B (T6) contradicts an explicit instruction in O'Neill's final stage direction?

  9. Question 9 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Staging B cuts Keeney's speech beginning "Woman, you ain't a-doin' right when you meddle in men's business" (T4, paragraph 8). What evidence about Keeney does this cut remove?

  10. Question 10 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Staging A adds a moment in which Annie stops playing, "walks to the porthole and lifts the curtain toward the open water" (T5, paragraph 6). How does this addition fit O'Neill's final stage direction?

  11. Question 11 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Staging B plays Keeney's "I'll do it, Annie" as sincere. Which detail in O'Neill's text best supports that reading?

  12. Question 12 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    The text ends Keeney's part with a look back "in anguish" and then "his face suddenly grown hard with determination," "Aye" (T4, paragraphs 16-18). Which staging follows this sequence more closely?

  13. Question 13 of 20 · Short Answer

    O'Neill's final stage direction says Mrs. Keeney "does not appear to notice his departure" and that "Her whole attention seems centred in the organ" (T4, paragraph 19). Earlier Keeney says, "I know you're foolin' me, Annie" (paragraph 13). Explain how the words "appear" and "seems" open the ending to more than one interpretation, and describe two ways a production could play her.

  14. Question 14 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Which statement best evaluates Staging A as a whole?

  15. Question 15 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Which sentence evaluates an interpretation, rather than only describing it?

  16. Question 16 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Terry's memoir quotes her own 1888 diary and letters (T3). What should a student keep in mind when using it as evidence of her performance?

  17. Question 17 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    In a recorded audiobook of a novel, the narrator reads a sarcastic character's lines in a warm, sincere voice. How should a listener evaluate this choice?

  18. Question 18 of 20 · Short Answer

    Compare Hazlitt's account of Siddons (T2) with Terry's account of her own Lady Macbeth (T3). State the reading of the character each expresses, and evaluate which reading the sleepwalking scene (T1) supports better, citing two lines from the scene.

  19. Question 19 of 20 · Short Answer

    Write a director's note (3-4 sentences) for a third staging of the Ile ending that keeps every line and every stage direction. Name one choice the text still leaves open, and explain what your choice says about Keeney or Annie.

  20. Question 20 of 20 · Short Answer

    In one paragraph, compare the set designs of Staging A (T5, paragraph 2) and Staging B (T6, paragraph 2). Explain the interpretation each design expresses before any actor speaks, and evaluate how well each is supported by the text of Ile.

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Frequently Asked Questions

10 Questions

What does RL.11-12.7 mean?

It means students in grades 11-12 study several interpretations of the same story, play or poem, such as live or recorded productions, and judge how each one interprets the original. Students do not only describe differences; they evaluate each version against the source text. The standard requires at least one play by Shakespeare and one by an American dramatist.

Which plays work for RL.11-12.7?

Any Shakespeare play with a performance history students can study, paired with a play by an American dramatist. This lesson uses Macbeth and Eugene O'Neill's one-act Ile, which is short enough to read and stage in class. Other common American choices, where the school has the texts, include plays by Arthur Miller, Lorraine Hansberry, Tennessee Williams and August Wilson.

Do students have to watch a recorded production for RL.11-12.7?

No. The standard names recorded or live productions as examples, but students can also work from documented performances, such as critics' eyewitness accounts, actors' memoirs, promptbooks and paintings of actors in their roles, and from productions they plan or perform in class. When a school has a licensed recording, the same evaluation questions apply to it.

How is RL.11-12.7 different from RL.9-10.7?

RL.9-10.7 compares one subject or scene in two different artistic mediums, such as a poem and a painting, and asks what each emphasizes or leaves out. RL.11-12.7 asks for several interpretations of one work, usually productions of a play, and adds evaluation: how well does each version interpret the source text?

What does "evaluating how each version interprets the source text" mean?

It means judging an interpretation against the words of the play. A useful test has three questions: What in the text supports this choice? What does it bring out that a reader might miss? What does it have to ignore, cut or contradict? A strong evaluation weighs both what the version reveals and what it costs.

Is a production that cuts or adds material always unfaithful?

No. Nearly every production cuts, and many add stage business or images the script does not mention. The question is what a cut removes and what an addition claims. A cut that removes a character's clearest explanation of himself changes the play more than a cut for time, and an added moment can be well or badly supported by the text around it.

How can students study a performance from the 1700s or 1800s?

Through the records it left: reviews and essays by people who saw it, the actors' own letters and memoirs, promptbooks with cuts and blocking, and paintings or photographs of actors in costume. Students should separate what a source says the actor did from what the writer felt about it, and treat each account as one person's view.

What is the "fiend" reading of Lady Macbeth?

It is Ellen Terry's name, in her memoir, for playing Lady Macbeth as a monster of ambition and cruelty. Terry rejected it in her 1888 performance, but she also refused to make the character "a gentle, lovable woman." The disagreement is a clear case of two interpretations that can each be tested against the text.

Why does this RL.11-12.7 lesson use O'Neill's Ile?

It is a complete one-act play by a major American dramatist, it is in the public domain, and its stage directions are detailed enough that students can see exactly where a production follows or departs from the playwright. The ending also leaves real questions open, such as whether Mrs. Keeney has truly lost her mind, which gives productions something to interpret.

How is RL.11-12.7 assessed?

Usually through writing: a comparison of two productions or performances, a review, or an essay that evaluates how a version interprets a scene. Strong responses name specific choices, tie each one to a line or stage direction, and judge what the interpretation gains and loses. Class performances and director's notes can also serve as evidence of the skill.