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RL.11-12.3Common CoreELAReading LiteratureGrades 11-12

RL.11-12.3: Analyzing an Author's Choices About Setting, Order and Character

In plain English: RL.11-12.3 is the Common Core ELA standard that asks students in grades 11-12 to analyze the impact of an author's choices in developing and relating the elements of a story or drama, such as where it is set, how the action is ordered, and how the characters are introduced and developed. It is usually taught in English 11 and English 12 with short stories, novels and plays.

Analyze the impact of the author's choices regarding how to develop and relate elements of a story or drama (e.g., where a story is set, how the action is ordered, how the characters are introduced and developed).

Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts & Literacy · Domain: Reading Standards for Literature · Cluster: Key Ideas and Details · Official standard

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Lesson Plan

70-75 min

Overview

Students move from asking what characters are like to asking why an author built a story the way it is, and what difference that makes. The lesson uses two short works whose effects depend on deliberate choices. In James Joyce's story "Araby" (1914), a boy on a dead-end Dublin street falls silently in love with his friend's older sister, promises to bring her a gift from a bazaar, and arrives as it is closing. In Susan Glaspell's one-act play "Trifles" (1916), set entirely in the kitchen of a farmhouse where a man has been killed, the wife accused of killing him never appears on stage.

The standard names three kinds of choices, and the lesson works through each in both texts: where a story is set, how the action is ordered, and how the characters are introduced and developed. Students practice one habit throughout: name the choice, imagine an alternative the author could have made, and explain the impact of the choice the author actually made. "Trifles" involves a violent death; see the teacher note in Closure.

Learning Objectives

By the end of this lesson, students will be able to:

  • Identify an author's choices about setting, the order and pacing of the action, and how characters are introduced and developed
  • Explain the impact of a choice by comparing it with an alternative the author could have made
  • Analyze how an author relates elements to each other, such as setting to character or pacing to the reader's expectations
  • Apply the same analysis to a story and to a drama, including stage directions as an author's choices

Prior Knowledge Required

Students should already be comfortable with:

  • Analyzing how complex characters develop, interact and advance the plot RL.9-10.3
  • Analyzing how structure, order of events and time create mystery, tension or surprise RL.9-10.5
  • Citing strong and thorough textual evidence RL.11-12.1
  • Reading a play script, including speaker labels and stage directions

Lesson Procedure

70-75 minutes of class time across 5 phases.

  1. Warm-Up5 minutes

    Warm-Up Prompt

    "Think of a movie or series that lingers on a long wait, or saves its most important moment for the very last shot. What would have been lost if it had hurried past the wait, or put that moment in the middle?"

    Collect two or three examples. Name what students are describing: an author's choice, a decision that could have gone another way. Tell students that RL.11-12.3 asks them to analyze the impact of such choices, not only to spot them.

  2. Direct Instruction20 minutes

    Key terms.

    • Author's choice: any decision about how a story is built: where it is set, what comes first, how long the telling lingers, what is held back, who is shown and who is only described.
    • Impact: what the choice does to the reader or audience (suspense, sympathy, irony, a shift in judgment) and to the meaning.
    • Order and pacing: the sequence of events and how much space the telling gives each one. A writer can race through weeks and slow down for an hour.
    • Retrospective narrator: a narrator who tells events from later in life, so the telling can carry judgments the younger self could not make.
    • Relate elements: the standard asks how authors connect elements, such as a setting that mirrors a character's mind or a pace that controls what a reader expects.

    The method. For every choice, ask three questions (Diagram 2): What did the author do? What else could the author have done? What does the actual choice do that the alternative would not?

    Before Excerpt 1. "Araby" is from Joyce's collection Dubliners. The narrator looks back on his boyhood in Dublin. A "blind" street is a dead end; Mangan is a friend who lives across the street. Read the opening aloud.

    North Richmond Street, being blind, was a quiet street except at the hour when the Christian Brothers’ School set the boys free. An uninhabited house of two storeys stood at the blind end, detached from its neighbours in a square ground. The other houses of the street, conscious of decent lives within them, gazed at one another with brown imperturbable faces.

    The former tenant of our house, a priest, had died in the back drawing-room. Air, musty from having been long enclosed, hung in all the rooms, and the waste room behind the kitchen was littered with old useless papers. Among these I found a few paper-covered books, the pages of which were curled and damp: The Abbot, by Walter Scott, The Devout Communicant and The Memoirs of Vidocq. I liked the last best because its leaves were yellow. The wild garden behind the house contained a central apple-tree and a few straggling bushes under one of which I found the late tenant’s rusty bicycle-pump. He had been a very charitable priest; in his will he had left all his money to institutions and the furniture of his house to his sister.

    When the short days of winter came dusk fell before we had well eaten our dinners. When we met in the street the houses had grown sombre. The space of sky above us was the colour of ever-changing violet and towards it the lamps of the street lifted their feeble lanterns. The cold air stung us and we played till our bodies glowed. Our shouts echoed in the silent street. The career of our play brought us through the dark muddy lanes behind the houses where we ran the gauntlet of the rough tribes from the cottages, to the back doors of the dark dripping gardens where odours arose from the ashpits, to the dark odorous stables where a coachman smoothed and combed the horse or shook music from the buckled harness. When we returned to the street light from the kitchen windows had filled the areas. If my uncle was seen turning the corner we hid in the shadow until we had seen him safely housed. Or if Mangan’s sister came out on the doorstep to call her brother in to his tea we watched her from our shadow peer up and down the street. We waited to see whether she would remain or go in and, if she remained, we left our shadow and walked up to Mangan’s steps resignedly. She was waiting for us, her figure defined by the light from the half-opened door. Her brother always teased her before he obeyed and I stood by the railings looking at her. Her dress swung as she moved her body and the soft rope of her hair tossed from side to side.

    Every morning I lay on the floor in the front parlour watching her door. The blind was pulled down to within an inch of the sash so that I could not be seen. When she came out on the doorstep my heart leaped. I ran to the hall, seized my books and followed her. I kept her brown figure always in my eye and, when we came near the point at which our ways diverged, I quickened my pace and passed her. This happened morning after morning. I had never spoken to her, except for a few casual words, and yet her name was like a summons to all my foolish blood.

    James Joyce, Araby (opening) (1914). Public domain (published 1914). Source text.
    • Where the story is set

      Paragraph 1: "North Richmond Street, being blind, was a quiet street ... An uninhabited house of two storeys stood at the blind end, detached from its neighbours in a square ground." What is the impact of opening on this street?

      Result: The first fact about the boy's world is that it goes nowhere: the street is a dead end, and an empty house stands at the closed end. Joyce starts with a place where nothing happens, so any excitement in the story will have to come from the boy's imagination. The word "blind" also prepares a story about not seeing clearly.

    • How a character is introduced

      In paragraph 3 the girl is introduced only as "Mangan's sister," and the boy notices pieces of her: "Her dress swung as she moved her body and the soft rope of her hair tossed from side to side." In paragraph 4 he says "her name was like a summons," yet the story never gives her name. What is the impact?

      Result: She is never named and never described as a whole person, only in fragments: a swinging dress, a rope of hair. She stays an image rather than a character, and the story becomes as much about the boy's imagination as about her.

    • Who tells the story, and when

      Paragraph 4: "I had never spoken to her, except for a few casual words, and yet her name was like a summons to all my foolish blood." Whose judgment is the word "foolish"?

      Result: It belongs to the adult telling the story, not to the boy living it; at the time, the boy felt only the "summons." Joyce chooses a retrospective narrator, so a verdict on the boy's feelings is already present in the telling. Readers can sense the irony long before the boy does.

    • Relating setting and character

      Paragraph 2: among the dead priest's papers the boy finds three old books. "I liked the last best because its leaves were yellow." What does this detail add?

      Result: He chooses a book for the look of its pages, not for what it says. Joyce uses an object from the setting to give a first hint about the character: the boy responds to how things look and feel. That habit will shape his romance.

  3. Guided Practice20 minutes

    Before Excerpt 2. Mangan's sister finally speaks to the boy. She asks whether he is going to Araby, a charity bazaar (a fair with stalls selling goods) coming to Dublin; she cannot go because of a retreat at her convent school. He promises to bring her something if he goes. For the rest of the week he can think of nothing else, and he arranges to go on Saturday night. The boy lives with his aunt and uncle. Read Excerpts 2 and 3 aloud. Pairs mark places where the telling slows down and places where it speeds up.

    On Saturday morning I reminded my uncle that I wished to go to the bazaar in the evening. He was fussing at the hallstand, looking for the hat-brush, and answered me curtly:

    “Yes, boy, I know.”

    As he was in the hall I could not go into the front parlour and lie at the window. I left the house in bad humour and walked slowly towards the school. The air was pitilessly raw and already my heart misgave me.

    When I came home to dinner my uncle had not yet been home. Still it was early. I sat staring at the clock for some time and, when its ticking began to irritate me, I left the room. I mounted the staircase and gained the upper part of the house. The high cold empty gloomy rooms liberated me and I went from room to room singing. From the front window I saw my companions playing below in the street. Their cries reached me weakened and indistinct and, leaning my forehead against the cool glass, I looked over at the dark house where she lived. I may have stood there for an hour, seeing nothing but the brown-clad figure cast by my imagination, touched discreetly by the lamplight at the curved neck, at the hand upon the railings and at the border below the dress.

    When I came downstairs again I found Mrs Mercer sitting at the fire. She was an old garrulous woman, a pawnbroker’s widow, who collected used stamps for some pious purpose. I had to endure the gossip of the tea-table. The meal was prolonged beyond an hour and still my uncle did not come. Mrs Mercer stood up to go: she was sorry she couldn’t wait any longer, but it was after eight o’clock and she did not like to be out late as the night air was bad for her. When she had gone I began to walk up and down the room, clenching my fists. My aunt said:

    “I’m afraid you may put off your bazaar for this night of Our Lord.”

    At nine o’clock I heard my uncle’s latchkey in the halldoor. I heard him talking to himself and heard the hallstand rocking when it had received the weight of his overcoat. I could interpret these signs. When he was midway through his dinner I asked him to give me the money to go to the bazaar. He had forgotten.

    “The people are in bed and after their first sleep now,” he said.

    I did not smile. My aunt said to him energetically:

    “Can’t you give him the money and let him go? You’ve kept him late enough as it is.”

    My uncle said he was very sorry he had forgotten. He said he believed in the old saying: “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” He asked me where I was going and, when I had told him a second time he asked me did I know The Arab’s Farewell to his Steed. When I left the kitchen he was about to recite the opening lines of the piece to my aunt.

    James Joyce, Araby (Saturday) (1914). Public domain (published 1914). Source text.

    Before Excerpt 3. The uncle gives the boy a florin, a coin worth two shillings, and he sets off alone by train.

    I held a florin tightly in my hand as I strode down Buckingham Street towards the station. The sight of the streets thronged with buyers and glaring with gas recalled to me the purpose of my journey. I took my seat in a third-class carriage of a deserted train. After an intolerable delay the train moved out of the station slowly. It crept onward among ruinous houses and over the twinkling river. At Westland Row Station a crowd of people pressed to the carriage doors; but the porters moved them back, saying that it was a special train for the bazaar. I remained alone in the bare carriage. In a few minutes the train drew up beside an improvised wooden platform. I passed out on to the road and saw by the lighted dial of a clock that it was ten minutes to ten. In front of me was a large building which displayed the magical name.

    I could not find any sixpenny entrance and, fearing that the bazaar would be closed, I passed in quickly through a turnstile, handing a shilling to a weary-looking man. I found myself in a big hall girdled at half its height by a gallery. Nearly all the stalls were closed and the greater part of the hall was in darkness. I recognised a silence like that which pervades a church after a service. I walked into the centre of the bazaar timidly. A few people were gathered about the stalls which were still open. Before a curtain, over which the words Café Chantant were written in coloured lamps, two men were counting money on a salver. I listened to the fall of the coins.

    Remembering with difficulty why I had come I went over to one of the stalls and examined porcelain vases and flowered tea-sets. At the door of the stall a young lady was talking and laughing with two young gentlemen. I remarked their English accents and listened vaguely to their conversation.

    “O, I never said such a thing!”

    “O, but you did!”

    “O, but I didn’t!”

    “Didn’t she say that?”

    “Yes. I heard her.”

    “O, there’s a ... fib!”

    Observing me the young lady came over and asked me did I wish to buy anything. The tone of her voice was not encouraging; she seemed to have spoken to me out of a sense of duty. I looked humbly at the great jars that stood like eastern guards at either side of the dark entrance to the stall and murmured:

    “No, thank you.”

    The young lady changed the position of one of the vases and went back to the two young men. They began to talk of the same subject. Once or twice the young lady glanced at me over her shoulder.

    I lingered before her stall, though I knew my stay was useless, to make my interest in her wares seem the more real. Then I turned away slowly and walked down the middle of the bazaar. I allowed the two pennies to fall against the sixpence in my pocket. I heard a voice call from one end of the gallery that the light was out. The upper part of the hall was now completely dark.

    Gazing up into the darkness I saw myself as a creature driven and derided by vanity; and my eyes burned with anguish and anger.

    James Joyce, Araby (the bazaar) (1914). Public domain (published 1914). Source text.
    1. "I sat staring at the clock for some time and, when its ticking began to irritate me, I left the room" (Excerpt 2, paragraph 4). Teacher note: Joyce slows the telling to the speed of the boy's waiting. One Saturday gets more words than the evening she spoke to him and the days that followed put together (Diagram 1), so readers feel the hours drag and the hope drain.
    2. "I heard him talking to himself and heard the hallstand rocking when it had received the weight of his overcoat. I could interpret these signs" (Excerpt 2, paragraph 7). Teacher note: the uncle is introduced into the scene through sounds, not statements. The narrator never says he has been drinking; readers interpret the signs, as the boy does.
    3. "Gazing up into the darkness I saw myself as a creature driven and derided by vanity; and my eyes burned with anguish and anger" (Excerpt 3, paragraph 14). Teacher note: Joyce places the boy's judgment of himself at the very end, at the moment the lights go out, so the setting and the realization arrive together. Nothing comes after it: the story stops at the insight and leaves readers there.

    Pairs fill in one row of the choice-alternative-impact chart for the pacing of Excerpt 2 and one for the ending, then compare with another pair.

  4. Independent Practice20 minutes

    Before Excerpt 4. "Trifles" is a one-act play first performed in 1916. A farmer, John Wright, has been found dead in his bed, and his wife has been taken to jail. The next morning the County Attorney (George Henderson), the Sheriff (Henry Peters) and a neighbor, Lewis Hale, come to the farmhouse to look for evidence, with Mrs. Peters and Mrs. Hale, who have come to collect a few things for Mrs. Wright. Before Excerpt 5, Hale finishes his account, and the men decide to search upstairs and the barn; the Sheriff says there is "Nothing here but kitchen things."

    Students read both excerpts on their own and complete a choice-alternative-impact chart with three rows: one choice about setting, one about how a character is introduced or developed, and one about the order of the action or what is held back. Each row needs a quotation (a line or a stage direction). Several quiz questions use these excerpts.

    SCENE: The kitchen is the now abandoned farmhouse of JOHN WRIGHT, a gloomy kitchen, and left without having been put in order--unwashed pans under the sink, a loaf of bread outside the bread-box, a dish-towel on the table--other signs of incompleted work. At the rear the outer door opens and the SHERIFF comes in followed by the COUNTY ATTORNEY and HALE. The SHERIFF and HALE are men in middle life, the COUNTY ATTORNEY is a young man; all are much bundled up and go at once to the stove. They are followed by the two women--the SHERIFF's wife first; she is a slight wiry woman, a thin nervous face. MRS HALE is larger and would ordinarily be called more comfortable looking, but she is disturbed now and looks fearfully about as she enters. The women have come in slowly, and stand close together near the door.

    COUNTY ATTORNEY: (rubbing his hands) This feels good. Come up to the fire, ladies.

    MRS PETERS: (after taking a step forward) I'm not--cold.

    SHERIFF: (unbuttoning his overcoat and stepping away from the stove as if to mark the beginning of official business) Now, Mr Hale, before we move things about, you explain to Mr Henderson just what you saw when you came here yesterday morning.

    COUNTY ATTORNEY: By the way, has anything been moved? Are things just as you left them yesterday?

    SHERIFF: (looking about) It's just the same. When it dropped below zero last night I thought I'd better send Frank out this morning to make a fire for us--no use getting pneumonia with a big case on, but I told him not to touch anything except the stove--and you know Frank.

    COUNTY ATTORNEY: Somebody should have been left here yesterday.

    SHERIFF: Oh--yesterday. When I had to send Frank to Morris Center for that man who went crazy--I want you to know I had my hands full yesterday. I knew you could get back from Omaha by today and as long as I went over everything here myself--

    COUNTY ATTORNEY: Well, Mr Hale, tell just what happened when you came here yesterday morning.

    HALE: Harry and I had started to town with a load of potatoes. We came along the road from my place and as I got here I said, I'm going to see if I can't get John Wright to go in with me on a party telephone.' I spoke to Wright about it once before and he put me off, saying folks talked too much anyway, and all he asked was peace and quiet--I guess you know about how much he talked himself; but I thought maybe if I went to the house and talked about it before his wife, though I said to Harry that I didn't know as what his wife wanted made much difference to John--

    COUNTY ATTORNEY: Let's talk about that later, Mr Hale. I do want to talk about that, but tell now just what happened when you got to the house.

    HALE: I didn't hear or see anything; I knocked at the door, and still it was all quiet inside. I knew they must be up, it was past eight o'clock. So I knocked again, and I thought I heard somebody say, 'Come in.' I wasn't sure, I'm not sure yet, but I opened the door--this door (indicating the door by which the two women are still standing) and there in that rocker--(pointing to it) sat Mrs Wright.

    Susan Glaspell, Trifles (opening) (1916). Public domain (published 1916). Source text.

    COUNTY ATTORNEY: Here's a nice mess.

    (The women draw nearer.)

    MRS PETERS: (to the other woman) Oh, her fruit; it did freeze, (to the LAWYER) She worried about that when it turned so cold. She said the fire'd go out and her jars would break.

    SHERIFF: Well, can you beat the women! Held for murder and worryin' about her preserves.

    COUNTY ATTORNEY: I guess before we're through she may have something more serious than preserves to worry about.

    HALE: Well, women are used to worrying over trifles.

    (The two women move a little closer together.)

    COUNTY ATTORNEY: (with the gallantry of a young politician) And yet, for all their worries, what would we do without the ladies? (the women do not unbend. He goes to the sink, takes a dipperful of water from the pail and pouring it into a basin, washes his hands. Starts to wipe them on the roller-towel, turns it for a cleaner place) Dirty towels! (kicks his foot against the pans under the sink) Not much of a housekeeper, would you say, ladies?

    MRS HALE: (stiffly) There's a great deal of work to be done on a farm.

    COUNTY ATTORNEY: To be sure. And yet (with a little bow to her) I know there are some Dickson county farmhouses which do not have such roller towels. (He gives it a pull to expose its length again.)

    MRS HALE: Those towels get dirty awful quick. Men's hands aren't always as clean as they might be.

    COUNTY ATTORNEY: Ah, loyal to your sex, I see. But you and Mrs Wright were neighbors. I suppose you were friends, too.

    MRS HALE: (shaking her head) I've not seen much of her of late years. I've not been in this house--it's more than a year.

    COUNTY ATTORNEY: And why was that? You didn't like her?

    MRS HALE: I liked her all well enough. Farmers' wives have their hands full, Mr Henderson. And then--

    COUNTY ATTORNEY: Yes--?

    MRS HALE: (looking about) It never seemed a very cheerful place.

    COUNTY ATTORNEY: No--it's not cheerful. I shouldn't say she had the homemaking instinct.

    MRS HALE: Well, I don't know as Wright had, either.

    COUNTY ATTORNEY: You mean that they didn't get on very well?

    MRS HALE: No, I don't mean anything. But I don't think a place'd be any cheerfuller for John Wright's being in it.

    Susan Glaspell, Trifles (the kitchen cupboard) (1916). Public domain (published 1916). Source text.
  5. Closure5-10 minutes

    Exit ticket: (1) Name one choice Joyce made and one choice Glaspell made. (2) For one of them, write one sentence that begins "If the author had instead ..." and one that explains what the actual choice does.

    Teacher note on content and language: "Trifles" centers on a man strangled with a rope in his bed, and the play later includes a pet bird that has been killed. Tell students before reading. In "Araby," the uncle's late arrival suggests that he has been drinking, and the story reflects the Catholic Dublin of Joyce's boyhood (a Christian Brothers' school, a convent retreat). In "Trifles," the Sheriff's phrase "that man who went crazy" reflects the language of 1916. The words are the authors', kept as published.

    For homework: students read the excerpt from later in "Trifles," below. Before it, the men go upstairs; the women find Mrs. Wright's quilt pieces, one sewn very unevenly, and, in a cupboard, an empty bird-cage whose door has been pulled apart. After it, they find the family's canary dead in Mrs. Wright's sewing box, its neck wrung, and they hide the box from the men. Mrs. Wright's name before she married was Minnie Foster.

    MRS HALE: It would, wouldn't it? (dropping her sewing) But I tell you what I do wish, Mrs Peters. I wish I had come over sometimes when she was here. I--(looking around the room)--wish I had.

    MRS PETERS: But of course you were awful busy, Mrs Hale--your house and your children.

    MRS HALE: I could've come. I stayed away because it weren't cheerful--and that's why I ought to have come. I--I've never liked this place. Maybe because it's down in a hollow and you don't see the road. I dunno what it is, but it's a lonesome place and always was. I wish I had come over to see Minnie Foster sometimes. I can see now--(shakes her head)

    MRS PETERS: Well, you mustn't reproach yourself, Mrs Hale. Somehow we just don't see how it is with other folks until--something comes up.

    MRS HALE: Not having children makes less work--but it makes a quiet house, and Wright out to work all day, and no company when he did come in. Did you know John Wright, Mrs Peters?

    MRS PETERS: Not to know him; I've seen him in town. They say he was a good man.

    MRS HALE: Yes--good; he didn't drink, and kept his word as well as most, I guess, and paid his debts. But he was a hard man, Mrs Peters. Just to pass the time of day with him--(shivers) Like a raw wind that gets to the bone, (pauses, her eye falling on the cage) I should think she would 'a wanted a bird. But what do you suppose went with it?

    MRS PETERS: I don't know, unless it got sick and died.

    (She reaches over and swings the broken door, swings it again, both women watch it.)

    MRS HALE: You weren't raised round here, were you? (MRS PETERS shakes her head) You didn't know--her?

    MRS PETERS: Not till they brought her yesterday.

    MRS HALE: She--come to think of it, she was kind of like a bird herself--real sweet and pretty, but kind of timid and--fluttery. How--she--did--change.

    Susan Glaspell, Trifles (the bird-cage) (1916). Public domain (published 1916). Source text.

Differentiation Strategies

For Struggling Students

  • Give the three kinds of choices as column headings on the chart (setting, order and pacing, character introduction) so students sort evidence into them
  • Supply the alternative for the first row of each chart, so students practice explaining impact before they invent alternatives
  • Offer a sentence frame: "The author chose to ___ instead of ___. This makes the reader ___ because ___."

For Advanced Students

  • Ask students to find every sentence in "Araby" that sounds like the adult narrator judging his younger self, and argue whether the ending is the boy's realization or the man's
  • Have students read the whole of "Trifles" and trace every entrance and exit, then explain how Glaspell controls when the women are alone
  • Ask students to compare "Trifles" with "A Jury of Her Peers," Glaspell's 1917 short-story version, and analyze one change the story form required

Assessment Guidance

What to Look For

The key difference from grades 9-10 is the word "impact": an answer that says "Joyce slows down" or "the play is set in a kitchen" has only named a choice. Look for the alternative (what else the author could have done) and the effect on the reader or the meaning. Strong answers also relate elements: a setting that mirrors a character's mind, or a pace that shapes what the reader expects. For drama, check that students treat stage directions as the author's words and cite them like lines.

02

Classroom Activities

3 Activities

1

Pacing Map

20 minGroups of 3-4

Groups compare how much time each part of "Araby" covers with how many words Joyce gives it (Diagram 1), then explain where and why he slows down or speeds up.

Setup

  • Each group gets a copy of Diagram 1, which lists the six parts of the story in order with their word counts
  • Groups also use Excerpts 1-3

Procedure

  • Groups rank the six parts by how much time each one covers, from longest to shortest, using the labels and the excerpts
  • Groups circle the part where the telling is slowest compared with the time it covers, and the part where it is fastest
  • Each group writes a two-sentence summary of Excerpt 2, reads it aloud next to the original, and names what the summary loses

Discussion Questions

  • Part 3, the one evening she speaks to him, gets fewer words than part 5, the Saturday wait. Why might Joyce spend more words on waiting than on the conversation itself?
  • What would happen to the ending if part 6 were cut to two sentences?
2

Stage the Kitchen

15 minPairs

Pairs draw a stage plan of the Wright kitchen from Glaspell's stage directions and use it to explain how the setting relates the characters to each other.

Setup

  • Each pair gets a blank sheet and Excerpts 4 and 5
  • Pairs mark the outer door, the stove, the sink with the pans, the bread-box, the rocker and the cupboard, using only details from the stage directions and the lines

Procedure

  • Pairs mark where the men and the women stand at the start of Excerpt 4, and how the women's positions change during Excerpt 5
  • Pairs write two sentences: what the arrangement shows about the two groups, and why Glaspell might have kept the whole play in this one room

Discussion Questions

  • Which object on your plan do the men ignore? Which one do the women notice?
  • How would the play change if a scene took place upstairs?

Modification

For students who need support, provide a plan with the door and stove already drawn, and a list of the objects to place.

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The Road Not Taken

15 minGroups of 3

Groups rewrite a short passage with one choice changed, read it aloud, and compare its impact with the original. Writing the alternative makes the impact of the author's real choice concrete.

Choose One Rewrite

  • Begin "Araby" with the girl's first words to the boy instead of the street (5-6 sentences)
  • Begin "Trifles" with Mrs. Wright on stage, alone in the kitchen, before the others arrive (a short scene of 6-8 lines)
  • Retell the last paragraph of "Araby" as the boy on that night, in the present tense, without the adult narrator's words of judgment

Procedure

  • Groups draft for 7 minutes, then read their rewrite and the original aloud
  • Listeners name one thing the rewrite gains and one thing it loses
  • Each group writes a two-sentence claim about the impact of the author's actual choice

Discussion Questions

  • Did any rewrite improve on the original? What would the author have had to give up?
  • Which of the three kinds of choice in the standard (setting, order, character introduction) was hardest to change without changing the whole work?

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Diagrams & Visual Aids

2 diagrams

Diagram 1: Space on the Page vs. Time in the Story ("Araby")

"Araby": space on the page vs. time in the story Words in the story (bar length) Part of the story, in order 1. Street, house, winter evenings 468 words 2. Weeks of watching her 429 words 3. One evening: she speaks 191 words 4. The days until Saturday 162 words 5. Saturday, morning to 9 p.m. 522 words 6. The trip and the bazaar 561 words Part 5 covers one day but takes more words than parts 3 and 4 together.
The six parts of "Araby" in the order Joyce tells them. Bar lengths are proportional to word counts in the source text (total 2,333 words); the labels give the time each part covers. Part 5, a single Saturday, is darker.

Diagram 2: Choice, Alternative, Impact

A three-step method for any author's choice 1. The choice One Saturday's wait gets more words than the days before it. 2. An alternative Summarize it: "My uncle came home late, and then I went." 3. The impact Readers wait with the boy, and his hope drains before he reaches the bazaar. Step 2 is what turns a description of a choice into an analysis of its impact.
The method used throughout the lesson, shown with the Saturday wait in "Araby" from Guided Practice. Students apply it to "Trifles" in Independent Practice.

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Homework Assignment

~30 min

RL.11-12.3 Homework: Glaspell's Choices in "Trifles"

Directions: Read the "Trifles" excerpt about the bird-cage at the end of the lesson plan (in Closure), along with the note before it. Answer in complete sentences, and cite paragraph numbers (the excerpt has twelve). For each answer, name the choice, and explain its impact.

Part 1: A Character Who Never Appears (Problems 1-2)

  1. Mrs. Hale says, "I wish I had come over to see Minnie Foster sometimes" (paragraph 3), using Mrs. Wright's name from before her marriage. What is the impact of Glaspell introducing the younger Minnie through Mrs. Hale's memories?
  2. John Wright is dead before the play begins. Using Mrs. Hale's description in paragraph 7, explain how Glaspell develops him through other characters, and how that portrait affects the audience's view of Mrs. Wright.

Part 2: Setting (Problems 3-4)

  1. Mrs. Hale says the farmhouse is "down in a hollow and you don't see the road" and calls it "a lonesome place" (paragraph 3). How does Glaspell relate this setting to the characters' lives?
  2. Paragraph 9 is a stage direction with no dialogue: Mrs. Peters swings the broken cage door, and both women watch it. Explain the impact of giving this moment to an object and to silence rather than to a speech.

Part 3: Order and Comparison (Problems 5-6)

  1. Glaspell has the women find the empty cage first, talk about Minnie Foster next, and find the dead bird only later. Explain how this order shapes what the audience understands and feels by the end of paragraph 12.
  2. Write a paragraph comparing one of Glaspell's choices in "Trifles" with one of Joyce's choices in "Araby." Use the choice-alternative-impact method for each, quote both texts, and argue which choice has the stronger impact on its audience.

Rubric

CriterionFull Credit (2 pts)Partial Credit (1 pt)No Credit (0 pts)
Identifying ChoicesNames a specific choice about setting, order or character introductionNames a general feature ("it has symbolism")No choice identified
ImpactExplains what the choice does to the audience or the meaning, compared with an alternativeStates an effect without explaining how the choice produces itSummary only
Relating ElementsShows how one element shapes another (setting and character, order and judgment)Treats each element separatelyNo connection between elements
EvidenceExact quotations, including stage directions, with paragraph numbersQuotations without locations or without explanationNo textual evidence

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Quiz: 20 Questions

Interactive, with answers

Instructions

Question 1 is about the standard itself. Questions 2-10 use "Araby" (Excerpt 1 in Direct Instruction, Excerpts 2 and 3 in Guided Practice); questions 11-18 use "Trifles" (Excerpts 4 and 5 in Independent Practice); questions 19-20 compare the two. Paragraph numbers restart in each excerpt. Your score updates as you answer, and Reset quiz clears everything.

Multiple choice: pick an option to check it. Short answer: write your answer, then reveal the model answer.

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  1. Question 1 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Which question is most clearly an RL.11-12.3 question rather than an RL.9-10.3 question?

  2. Question 2 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    "The other houses of the street, conscious of decent lives within them, gazed at one another with brown imperturbable faces" (Excerpt 1, paragraph 1). What is the impact of describing the houses this way?

  3. Question 3 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    "The former tenant of our house, a priest, had died in the back drawing-room. Air, musty from having been long enclosed, hung in all the rooms" (Excerpt 1, paragraph 2). Why might Joyce open with these details about the house?

  4. Question 4 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    The boys play in "the dark muddy lanes," "the dark dripping gardens" and "the dark odorous stables," and then Mangan's sister appears, "her figure defined by the light from the half-opened door" (Excerpt 1, paragraph 3). What is the impact of this pattern?

  5. Question 5 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    "Every morning I lay on the floor in the front parlour watching her door. The blind was pulled down to within an inch of the sash so that I could not be seen" (Excerpt 1, paragraph 4). What is the impact of this detail?

  6. Question 6 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    While the boy waits for his uncle, Joyce brings in Mrs Mercer, "an old garrulous woman, a pawnbroker's widow, who collected used stamps for some pious purpose," and the boy says, "I had to endure the gossip of the tea-table" (Excerpt 2, paragraph 5). Why include a minor character at this point?

  7. Question 7 of 20 · Short Answer

    When the uncle finally comes home, he says, "The people are in bed and after their first sleep now." He then quotes "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy" and asks whether the boy knows "The Arab's Farewell to his Steed" (Excerpt 2, paragraphs 8-11). How does Joyce use these responses to develop the uncle and the boy's situation?

  8. Question 8 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    "The high cold empty gloomy rooms liberated me and I went from room to room singing" (Excerpt 2, paragraph 4). What is the impact of this sentence?

  9. Question 9 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    At the bazaar, "Nearly all the stalls were closed and the greater part of the hall was in darkness. I recognised a silence like that which pervades a church after a service," and "two men were counting money on a salver" (Excerpt 3, paragraph 2). What is the impact of these details?

  10. Question 10 of 20 · Short Answer

    Before the lights go out, the young lady speaks to the boy "out of a sense of duty," he lingers at her stall "though I knew my stay was useless," and he allows "the two pennies to fall against the sixpence in my pocket" (Excerpt 3, paragraphs 10-13). Explain how Joyce orders these small moments to prepare for the story's last sentence.

  11. Question 11 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    The opening stage direction of "Trifles" describes "a gloomy kitchen, and left without having been put in order--unwashed pans under the sink, a loaf of bread outside the bread-box, a dish-towel on the table--other signs of incompleted work" (Excerpt 4, paragraph 1). What is the impact of Glaspell's choice to set the whole play in this kitchen?

  12. Question 12 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    In the same stage direction, the men "go at once to the stove," while the women "have come in slowly, and stand close together near the door" (Excerpt 4, paragraph 1). What does this choice about how the characters are introduced establish?

  13. Question 13 of 20 · Short Answer

    Mrs. Wright, the woman accused of the murder, never appears on stage. In Excerpt 4, the audience first meets her through Hale's account: "there in that rocker--(pointing to it) sat Mrs Wright" (paragraph 12). Explain the impact of Glaspell's choice to keep her offstage.

  14. Question 14 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Hale says John Wright "put me off, saying folks talked too much anyway, and all he asked was peace and quiet," and the County Attorney answers, "Let's talk about that later, Mr Hale" (Excerpt 4, paragraphs 10-11). What is the impact of this exchange?

  15. Question 15 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Mrs. Peters' first words are "I'm not--cold" (Excerpt 4, paragraph 3), spoken "after taking a step forward" when the County Attorney invites the women to the fire. What does this choice suggest about her?

  16. Question 16 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Hale says, "Well, women are used to worrying over trifles" (Excerpt 5, paragraph 6). What is the impact of Glaspell's choice to put the play's title in this line?

  17. Question 17 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    After Hale's remark about trifles, the stage direction says, "The two women move a little closer together," and after the County Attorney's compliment, "the women do not unbend" (Excerpt 5, paragraphs 7-8). How do these stage directions develop the characters?

  18. Question 18 of 20 · Short Answer

    The County Attorney wipes his hands, finds "Dirty towels!" and asks, "Not much of a housekeeper, would you say, ladies?" Mrs. Hale answers that "Men's hands aren't always as clean as they might be" (Excerpt 5, paragraphs 8-11). Explain how Glaspell uses the setting to develop the conflict between these characters.

  19. Question 19 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Which choice do Joyce and Glaspell have in common in these excerpts?

  20. Question 20 of 20 · Short Answer

    Choose one author's choice from "Araby" and one from "Trifles" (about setting, the order of the action, or how a character is introduced) that this page has not already analyzed in the worked examples, Guided Practice or questions 2-18. For each, name the choice, describe an alternative the author could have made, and explain the impact of the choice the author actually made.

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Frequently Asked Questions

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What does RL.11-12.3 mean?

It means students in grades 11-12 must analyze the impact of an author's choices in building a story or play: where it is set, how the action is ordered, how the characters are introduced and developed, and how these elements are related to each other. The key word is "impact": students explain what a choice does, not only what it is.

What counts as an "author's choice" under RL.11-12.3?

Any decision about how the work is built that could have been made differently. The standard's examples are setting, the order of the action, and how characters are introduced and developed. Other common ones are pacing, what information is held back, who tells the story and from when, which character is shown and which is only described, and, in drama, what the stage directions ask the audience to see.

How is RL.11-12.3 different from RL.9-10.3?

RL.9-10.3 focuses on the characters: how complex characters develop, interact and advance the plot or theme. RL.11-12.3 shifts the focus to the author and to all the elements of a story or drama: students ask why the work is built as it is and what those decisions do. A 9-10 question asks "How does this character change?"; an 11-12 question asks "Why does the author introduce this character this way, and what is the effect?"

How is RL.11-12.3 different from RL.11-12.5?

They overlap on structure. RL.11-12.5 is about how the structure of specific parts of a text, such as where to begin or end or whether to give a comedic or tragic resolution, contributes to meaning and aesthetic impact. RL.11-12.3 is broader: it covers how the author develops and relates all the elements, including setting and characters. An analysis of where a story ends can serve both.

What does "impact" mean in this standard?

The effect a choice has on the reader or audience and on the work's meaning: suspense, surprise, sympathy, irony, a change in how a character is judged, or an emphasis on an idea. A useful test is to imagine an alternative: if the author had made a different choice, what would readers lose? The answer describes the impact.

Does RL.11-12.3 apply to plays as well as stories?

Yes; the standard says "a story or drama." In a play, the author's choices include the stage directions: where the play is set, who enters first, where characters stand and what the audience sees in silence. Students should quote stage directions as evidence, just as they quote lines.

How do students avoid just listing an author's techniques?

By tying each choice to an effect and to evidence. "The story begins with a flashback" is a label. "The story opens on the morning after the accident and shows the accident itself only later, so readers judge the narrator before they know what she did" is analysis. The choice-alternative-impact chart in this lesson builds that habit.

What texts work well for teaching RL.11-12.3?

Short works with clear, deliberate construction: stories with a retrospective narrator or an ending that turns on one moment, one-act plays with a single setting, and works that delay or withhold a character. "Araby" and "Trifles" are both short enough to read in class. Novels and full-length plays often read in English 11 and 12 suit a unit-long study of one author's choices.

How is RL.11-12.3 usually assessed?

Reading tests often ask why an author places an event or detail where it is, what effect a choice of setting or narration has, or how an author develops a character, and constructed responses ask students to analyze the effect of a structural choice with evidence. Practice with both multiple-choice and short-answer items, like the quiz on this page, prepares students for either form.

Are "Araby" and "Trifles" appropriate for grades 11-12?

Yes, for most classes, with a brief content note. "Trifles" is about a killing, and "Araby" suggests an uncle who drinks. Both are short, and both reward rereading, which suits an analysis of choices. The teacher note in Closure suggests how to introduce them.