RL.11-12.3: Analyzing an Author's Choices About Setting, Order and Character
In plain English: RL.11-12.3 is the Common Core ELA standard that asks students in grades 11-12 to analyze the impact of an author's choices in developing and relating the elements of a story or drama, such as where it is set, how the action is ordered, and how the characters are introduced and developed. It is usually taught in English 11 and English 12 with short stories, novels and plays.
Analyze the impact of the author's choices regarding how to develop and relate elements of a story or drama (e.g., where a story is set, how the action is ordered, how the characters are introduced and developed).
Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts & Literacy · Domain: Reading Standards for Literature · Cluster: Key Ideas and Details · Official standard
Students move from asking what characters are like to asking why an author built a story the way it is, and what difference that makes. The lesson uses two short works whose effects depend on deliberate choices. In James Joyce's story "Araby" (1914), a boy on a dead-end Dublin street falls silently in love with his friend's older sister, promises to bring her a gift from a bazaar, and arrives as it is closing. In Susan Glaspell's one-act play "Trifles" (1916), set entirely in the kitchen of a farmhouse where a man has been killed, the wife accused of killing him never appears on stage.
The standard names three kinds of choices, and the lesson works through each in both texts: where a story is set, how the action is ordered, and how the characters are introduced and developed. Students practice one habit throughout: name the choice, imagine an alternative the author could have made, and explain the impact of the choice the author actually made. "Trifles" involves a violent death; see the teacher note in Closure.
Learning Objectives
By the end of this lesson, students will be able to:
Identify an author's choices about setting, the order and pacing of the action, and how characters are introduced and developed
Explain the impact of a choice by comparing it with an alternative the author could have made
Analyze how an author relates elements to each other, such as setting to character or pacing to the reader's expectations
Apply the same analysis to a story and to a drama, including stage directions as an author's choices
Prior Knowledge Required
Students should already be comfortable with:
Analyzing how complex characters develop, interact and advance the plot RL.9-10.3
Analyzing how structure, order of events and time create mystery, tension or surprise RL.9-10.5
Citing strong and thorough textual evidence RL.11-12.1
Reading a play script, including speaker labels and stage directions
"Think of a movie or series that lingers on a long wait, or saves its most important moment for the very last shot. What would have been lost if it had hurried past the wait, or put that moment in the middle?"
Collect two or three examples. Name what students are describing: an author's choice, a decision that could have gone another way. Tell students that RL.11-12.3 asks them to analyze the impact of such choices, not only to spot them.
Direct Instruction20 minutes
Key terms.
Author's choice: any decision about how a story is built: where it is set, what comes first, how long the telling lingers, what is held back, who is shown and who is only described.
Impact: what the choice does to the reader or audience (suspense, sympathy, irony, a shift in judgment) and to the meaning.
Order and pacing: the sequence of events and how much space the telling gives each one. A writer can race through weeks and slow down for an hour.
Retrospective narrator: a narrator who tells events from later in life, so the telling can carry judgments the younger self could not make.
Relate elements: the standard asks how authors connect elements, such as a setting that mirrors a character's mind or a pace that controls what a reader expects.
The method. For every choice, ask three questions (Diagram 2): What did the author do? What else could the author have done? What does the actual choice do that the alternative would not?
Before Excerpt 1. "Araby" is from Joyce's collection Dubliners. The narrator looks back on his boyhood in Dublin. A "blind" street is a dead end; Mangan is a friend who lives across the street. Read the opening aloud.
1North Richmond Street, being blind, was a quiet street except at the hour when the Christian Brothers’ School set the boys free. An uninhabited house of two storeys stood at the blind end, detached from its neighbours in a square ground. The other houses of the street, conscious of decent lives within them, gazed at one another with brown imperturbable faces.
2The former tenant of our house, a priest, had died in the back drawing-room. Air, musty from having been long enclosed, hung in all the rooms, and the waste room behind the kitchen was littered with old useless papers. Among these I found a few paper-covered books, the pages of which were curled and damp: The Abbot, by Walter Scott, The Devout Communicant and The Memoirs of Vidocq. I liked the last best because its leaves were yellow. The wild garden behind the house contained a central apple-tree and a few straggling bushes under one of which I found the late tenant’s rusty bicycle-pump. He had been a very charitable priest; in his will he had left all his money to institutions and the furniture of his house to his sister.
3When the short days of winter came dusk fell before we had well eaten our dinners. When we met in the street the houses had grown sombre. The space of sky above us was the colour of ever-changing violet and towards it the lamps of the street lifted their feeble lanterns. The cold air stung us and we played till our bodies glowed. Our shouts echoed in the silent street. The career of our play brought us through the dark muddy lanes behind the houses where we ran the gauntlet of the rough tribes from the cottages, to the back doors of the dark dripping gardens where odours arose from the ashpits, to the dark odorous stables where a coachman smoothed and combed the horse or shook music from the buckled harness. When we returned to the street light from the kitchen windows had filled the areas. If my uncle was seen turning the corner we hid in the shadow until we had seen him safely housed. Or if Mangan’s sister came out on the doorstep to call her brother in to his tea we watched her from our shadow peer up and down the street. We waited to see whether she would remain or go in and, if she remained, we left our shadow and walked up to Mangan’s steps resignedly. She was waiting for us, her figure defined by the light from the half-opened door. Her brother always teased her before he obeyed and I stood by the railings looking at her. Her dress swung as she moved her body and the soft rope of her hair tossed from side to side.
4Every morning I lay on the floor in the front parlour watching her door. The blind was pulled down to within an inch of the sash so that I could not be seen. When she came out on the doorstep my heart leaped. I ran to the hall, seized my books and followed her. I kept her brown figure always in my eye and, when we came near the point at which our ways diverged, I quickened my pace and passed her. This happened morning after morning. I had never spoken to her, except for a few casual words, and yet her name was like a summons to all my foolish blood.
James Joyce, Araby (opening) (1914). Public domain (published 1914). Source text.
Where the story is set
Paragraph 1: "North Richmond Street, being blind, was a quiet street ... An uninhabited house of two storeys stood at the blind end, detached from its neighbours in a square ground." What is the impact of opening on this street?
Result: The first fact about the boy's world is that it goes nowhere: the street is a dead end, and an empty house stands at the closed end. Joyce starts with a place where nothing happens, so any excitement in the story will have to come from the boy's imagination. The word "blind" also prepares a story about not seeing clearly.
How a character is introduced
In paragraph 3 the girl is introduced only as "Mangan's sister," and the boy notices pieces of her: "Her dress swung as she moved her body and the soft rope of her hair tossed from side to side." In paragraph 4 he says "her name was like a summons," yet the story never gives her name. What is the impact?
Result: She is never named and never described as a whole person, only in fragments: a swinging dress, a rope of hair. She stays an image rather than a character, and the story becomes as much about the boy's imagination as about her.
Who tells the story, and when
Paragraph 4: "I had never spoken to her, except for a few casual words, and yet her name was like a summons to all my foolish blood." Whose judgment is the word "foolish"?
Result: It belongs to the adult telling the story, not to the boy living it; at the time, the boy felt only the "summons." Joyce chooses a retrospective narrator, so a verdict on the boy's feelings is already present in the telling. Readers can sense the irony long before the boy does.
Relating setting and character
Paragraph 2: among the dead priest's papers the boy finds three old books. "I liked the last best because its leaves were yellow." What does this detail add?
Result: He chooses a book for the look of its pages, not for what it says. Joyce uses an object from the setting to give a first hint about the character: the boy responds to how things look and feel. That habit will shape his romance.
Guided Practice20 minutes
Before Excerpt 2. Mangan's sister finally speaks to the boy. She asks whether he is going to Araby, a charity bazaar (a fair with stalls selling goods) coming to Dublin; she cannot go because of a retreat at her convent school. He promises to bring her something if he goes. For the rest of the week he can think of nothing else, and he arranges to go on Saturday night. The boy lives with his aunt and uncle. Read Excerpts 2 and 3 aloud. Pairs mark places where the telling slows down and places where it speeds up.
1On Saturday morning I reminded my uncle that I wished to go to the bazaar in the evening. He was fussing at the hallstand, looking for the hat-brush, and answered me curtly:
2“Yes, boy, I know.”
3As he was in the hall I could not go into the front parlour and lie at the window. I left the house in bad humour and walked slowly towards the school. The air was pitilessly raw and already my heart misgave me.
4When I came home to dinner my uncle had not yet been home. Still it was early. I sat staring at the clock for some time and, when its ticking began to irritate me, I left the room. I mounted the staircase and gained the upper part of the house. The high cold empty gloomy rooms liberated me and I went from room to room singing. From the front window I saw my companions playing below in the street. Their cries reached me weakened and indistinct and, leaning my forehead against the cool glass, I looked over at the dark house where she lived. I may have stood there for an hour, seeing nothing but the brown-clad figure cast by my imagination, touched discreetly by the lamplight at the curved neck, at the hand upon the railings and at the border below the dress.
5When I came downstairs again I found Mrs Mercer sitting at the fire. She was an old garrulous woman, a pawnbroker’s widow, who collected used stamps for some pious purpose. I had to endure the gossip of the tea-table. The meal was prolonged beyond an hour and still my uncle did not come. Mrs Mercer stood up to go: she was sorry she couldn’t wait any longer, but it was after eight o’clock and she did not like to be out late as the night air was bad for her. When she had gone I began to walk up and down the room, clenching my fists. My aunt said:
6“I’m afraid you may put off your bazaar for this night of Our Lord.”
7At nine o’clock I heard my uncle’s latchkey in the halldoor. I heard him talking to himself and heard the hallstand rocking when it had received the weight of his overcoat. I could interpret these signs. When he was midway through his dinner I asked him to give me the money to go to the bazaar. He had forgotten.
8“The people are in bed and after their first sleep now,” he said.
9I did not smile. My aunt said to him energetically:
10“Can’t you give him the money and let him go? You’ve kept him late enough as it is.”
11My uncle said he was very sorry he had forgotten. He said he believed in the old saying: “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” He asked me where I was going and, when I had told him a second time he asked me did I know The Arab’s Farewell to his Steed. When I left the kitchen he was about to recite the opening lines of the piece to my aunt.
James Joyce, Araby (Saturday) (1914). Public domain (published 1914). Source text.
Before Excerpt 3. The uncle gives the boy a florin, a coin worth two shillings, and he sets off alone by train.
1I held a florin tightly in my hand as I strode down Buckingham Street towards the station. The sight of the streets thronged with buyers and glaring with gas recalled to me the purpose of my journey. I took my seat in a third-class carriage of a deserted train. After an intolerable delay the train moved out of the station slowly. It crept onward among ruinous houses and over the twinkling river. At Westland Row Station a crowd of people pressed to the carriage doors; but the porters moved them back, saying that it was a special train for the bazaar. I remained alone in the bare carriage. In a few minutes the train drew up beside an improvised wooden platform. I passed out on to the road and saw by the lighted dial of a clock that it was ten minutes to ten. In front of me was a large building which displayed the magical name.
2I could not find any sixpenny entrance and, fearing that the bazaar would be closed, I passed in quickly through a turnstile, handing a shilling to a weary-looking man. I found myself in a big hall girdled at half its height by a gallery. Nearly all the stalls were closed and the greater part of the hall was in darkness. I recognised a silence like that which pervades a church after a service. I walked into the centre of the bazaar timidly. A few people were gathered about the stalls which were still open. Before a curtain, over which the words Café Chantant were written in coloured lamps, two men were counting money on a salver. I listened to the fall of the coins.
3Remembering with difficulty why I had come I went over to one of the stalls and examined porcelain vases and flowered tea-sets. At the door of the stall a young lady was talking and laughing with two young gentlemen. I remarked their English accents and listened vaguely to their conversation.
4“O, I never said such a thing!”
5“O, but you did!”
6“O, but I didn’t!”
7“Didn’t she say that?”
8“Yes. I heard her.”
9“O, there’s a ... fib!”
10Observing me the young lady came over and asked me did I wish to buy anything. The tone of her voice was not encouraging; she seemed to have spoken to me out of a sense of duty. I looked humbly at the great jars that stood like eastern guards at either side of the dark entrance to the stall and murmured:
11“No, thank you.”
12The young lady changed the position of one of the vases and went back to the two young men. They began to talk of the same subject. Once or twice the young lady glanced at me over her shoulder.
13I lingered before her stall, though I knew my stay was useless, to make my interest in her wares seem the more real. Then I turned away slowly and walked down the middle of the bazaar. I allowed the two pennies to fall against the sixpence in my pocket. I heard a voice call from one end of the gallery that the light was out. The upper part of the hall was now completely dark.
14Gazing up into the darkness I saw myself as a creature driven and derided by vanity; and my eyes burned with anguish and anger.
James Joyce, Araby (the bazaar) (1914). Public domain (published 1914). Source text.
"I sat staring at the clock for some time and, when its ticking began to irritate me, I left the room" (Excerpt 2, paragraph 4). Teacher note: Joyce slows the telling to the speed of the boy's waiting. One Saturday gets more words than the evening she spoke to him and the days that followed put together (Diagram 1), so readers feel the hours drag and the hope drain.
"I heard him talking to himself and heard the hallstand rocking when it had received the weight of his overcoat. I could interpret these signs" (Excerpt 2, paragraph 7). Teacher note: the uncle is introduced into the scene through sounds, not statements. The narrator never says he has been drinking; readers interpret the signs, as the boy does.
"Gazing up into the darkness I saw myself as a creature driven and derided by vanity; and my eyes burned with anguish and anger" (Excerpt 3, paragraph 14). Teacher note: Joyce places the boy's judgment of himself at the very end, at the moment the lights go out, so the setting and the realization arrive together. Nothing comes after it: the story stops at the insight and leaves readers there.
Pairs fill in one row of the choice-alternative-impact chart for the pacing of Excerpt 2 and one for the ending, then compare with another pair.
Independent Practice20 minutes
Before Excerpt 4. "Trifles" is a one-act play first performed in 1916. A farmer, John Wright, has been found dead in his bed, and his wife has been taken to jail. The next morning the County Attorney (George Henderson), the Sheriff (Henry Peters) and a neighbor, Lewis Hale, come to the farmhouse to look for evidence, with Mrs. Peters and Mrs. Hale, who have come to collect a few things for Mrs. Wright. Before Excerpt 5, Hale finishes his account, and the men decide to search upstairs and the barn; the Sheriff says there is "Nothing here but kitchen things."
Students read both excerpts on their own and complete a choice-alternative-impact chart with three rows: one choice about setting, one about how a character is introduced or developed, and one about the order of the action or what is held back. Each row needs a quotation (a line or a stage direction). Several quiz questions use these excerpts.
1SCENE: The kitchen is the now abandoned farmhouse of JOHN WRIGHT, a gloomy kitchen, and left without having been put in order--unwashed pans under the sink, a loaf of bread outside the bread-box, a dish-towel on the table--other signs of incompleted work. At the rear the outer door opens and the SHERIFF comes in followed by the COUNTY ATTORNEY and HALE. The SHERIFF and HALE are men in middle life, the COUNTY ATTORNEY is a young man; all are much bundled up and go at once to the stove. They are followed by the two women--the SHERIFF's wife first; she is a slight wiry woman, a thin nervous face. MRS HALE is larger and would ordinarily be called more comfortable looking, but she is disturbed now and looks fearfully about as she enters. The women have come in slowly, and stand close together near the door.
2COUNTY ATTORNEY: (rubbing his hands) This feels good. Come up to the fire, ladies.
3MRS PETERS: (after taking a step forward) I'm not--cold.
4SHERIFF: (unbuttoning his overcoat and stepping away from the stove as if to mark the beginning of official business) Now, Mr Hale, before we move things about, you explain to Mr Henderson just what you saw when you came here yesterday morning.
5COUNTY ATTORNEY: By the way, has anything been moved? Are things just as you left them yesterday?
6SHERIFF: (looking about) It's just the same. When it dropped below zero last night I thought I'd better send Frank out this morning to make a fire for us--no use getting pneumonia with a big case on, but I told him not to touch anything except the stove--and you know Frank.
7COUNTY ATTORNEY: Somebody should have been left here yesterday.
8SHERIFF: Oh--yesterday. When I had to send Frank to Morris Center for that man who went crazy--I want you to know I had my hands full yesterday. I knew you could get back from Omaha by today and as long as I went over everything here myself--
9COUNTY ATTORNEY: Well, Mr Hale, tell just what happened when you came here yesterday morning.
10HALE: Harry and I had started to town with a load of potatoes. We came along the road from my place and as I got here I said, I'm going to see if I can't get John Wright to go in with me on a party telephone.' I spoke to Wright about it once before and he put me off, saying folks talked too much anyway, and all he asked was peace and quiet--I guess you know about how much he talked himself; but I thought maybe if I went to the house and talked about it before his wife, though I said to Harry that I didn't know as what his wife wanted made much difference to John--
11COUNTY ATTORNEY: Let's talk about that later, Mr Hale. I do want to talk about that, but tell now just what happened when you got to the house.
12HALE: I didn't hear or see anything; I knocked at the door, and still it was all quiet inside. I knew they must be up, it was past eight o'clock. So I knocked again, and I thought I heard somebody say, 'Come in.' I wasn't sure, I'm not sure yet, but I opened the door--this door (indicating the door by which the two women are still standing) and there in that rocker--(pointing to it) sat Mrs Wright.
Susan Glaspell, Trifles (opening) (1916). Public domain (published 1916). Source text.
1COUNTY ATTORNEY: Here's a nice mess.
2(The women draw nearer.)
3MRS PETERS: (to the other woman) Oh, her fruit; it did freeze, (to the LAWYER) She worried about that when it turned so cold. She said the fire'd go out and her jars would break.
4SHERIFF: Well, can you beat the women! Held for murder and worryin' about her preserves.
5COUNTY ATTORNEY: I guess before we're through she may have something more serious than preserves to worry about.
6HALE: Well, women are used to worrying over trifles.
7(The two women move a little closer together.)
8COUNTY ATTORNEY: (with the gallantry of a young politician) And yet, for all their worries, what would we do without the ladies? (the women do not unbend. He goes to the sink, takes a dipperful of water from the pail and pouring it into a basin, washes his hands. Starts to wipe them on the roller-towel, turns it for a cleaner place) Dirty towels! (kicks his foot against the pans under the sink) Not much of a housekeeper, would you say, ladies?
9MRS HALE: (stiffly) There's a great deal of work to be done on a farm.
10COUNTY ATTORNEY: To be sure. And yet (with a little bow to her) I know there are some Dickson county farmhouses which do not have such roller towels. (He gives it a pull to expose its length again.)
11MRS HALE: Those towels get dirty awful quick. Men's hands aren't always as clean as they might be.
12COUNTY ATTORNEY: Ah, loyal to your sex, I see. But you and Mrs Wright were neighbors. I suppose you were friends, too.
13MRS HALE: (shaking her head) I've not seen much of her of late years. I've not been in this house--it's more than a year.
14COUNTY ATTORNEY: And why was that? You didn't like her?
15MRS HALE: I liked her all well enough. Farmers' wives have their hands full, Mr Henderson. And then--
16COUNTY ATTORNEY: Yes--?
17MRS HALE: (looking about) It never seemed a very cheerful place.
18COUNTY ATTORNEY: No--it's not cheerful. I shouldn't say she had the homemaking instinct.
19MRS HALE: Well, I don't know as Wright had, either.
20COUNTY ATTORNEY: You mean that they didn't get on very well?
21MRS HALE: No, I don't mean anything. But I don't think a place'd be any cheerfuller for John Wright's being in it.
Susan Glaspell, Trifles (the kitchen cupboard) (1916). Public domain (published 1916). Source text.
Closure5-10 minutes
Exit ticket: (1) Name one choice Joyce made and one choice Glaspell made. (2) For one of them, write one sentence that begins "If the author had instead ..." and one that explains what the actual choice does.
Teacher note on content and language: "Trifles" centers on a man strangled with a rope in his bed, and the play later includes a pet bird that has been killed. Tell students before reading. In "Araby," the uncle's late arrival suggests that he has been drinking, and the story reflects the Catholic Dublin of Joyce's boyhood (a Christian Brothers' school, a convent retreat). In "Trifles," the Sheriff's phrase "that man who went crazy" reflects the language of 1916. The words are the authors', kept as published.
For homework: students read the excerpt from later in "Trifles," below. Before it, the men go upstairs; the women find Mrs. Wright's quilt pieces, one sewn very unevenly, and, in a cupboard, an empty bird-cage whose door has been pulled apart. After it, they find the family's canary dead in Mrs. Wright's sewing box, its neck wrung, and they hide the box from the men. Mrs. Wright's name before she married was Minnie Foster.
1MRS HALE: It would, wouldn't it? (dropping her sewing) But I tell you what I do wish, Mrs Peters. I wish I had come over sometimes when she was here. I--(looking around the room)--wish I had.
2MRS PETERS: But of course you were awful busy, Mrs Hale--your house and your children.
3MRS HALE: I could've come. I stayed away because it weren't cheerful--and that's why I ought to have come. I--I've never liked this place. Maybe because it's down in a hollow and you don't see the road. I dunno what it is, but it's a lonesome place and always was. I wish I had come over to see Minnie Foster sometimes. I can see now--(shakes her head)
4MRS PETERS: Well, you mustn't reproach yourself, Mrs Hale. Somehow we just don't see how it is with other folks until--something comes up.
5MRS HALE: Not having children makes less work--but it makes a quiet house, and Wright out to work all day, and no company when he did come in. Did you know John Wright, Mrs Peters?
6MRS PETERS: Not to know him; I've seen him in town. They say he was a good man.
7MRS HALE: Yes--good; he didn't drink, and kept his word as well as most, I guess, and paid his debts. But he was a hard man, Mrs Peters. Just to pass the time of day with him--(shivers) Like a raw wind that gets to the bone, (pauses, her eye falling on the cage) I should think she would 'a wanted a bird. But what do you suppose went with it?
8MRS PETERS: I don't know, unless it got sick and died.
9(She reaches over and swings the broken door, swings it again, both women watch it.)
10MRS HALE: You weren't raised round here, were you? (MRS PETERS shakes her head) You didn't know--her?
11MRS PETERS: Not till they brought her yesterday.
12MRS HALE: She--come to think of it, she was kind of like a bird herself--real sweet and pretty, but kind of timid and--fluttery. How--she--did--change.
Susan Glaspell, Trifles (the bird-cage) (1916). Public domain (published 1916). Source text.
Differentiation Strategies
For Struggling Students
Give the three kinds of choices as column headings on the chart (setting, order and pacing, character introduction) so students sort evidence into them
Supply the alternative for the first row of each chart, so students practice explaining impact before they invent alternatives
Offer a sentence frame: "The author chose to ___ instead of ___. This makes the reader ___ because ___."
For Advanced Students
Ask students to find every sentence in "Araby" that sounds like the adult narrator judging his younger self, and argue whether the ending is the boy's realization or the man's
Have students read the whole of "Trifles" and trace every entrance and exit, then explain how Glaspell controls when the women are alone
Ask students to compare "Trifles" with "A Jury of Her Peers," Glaspell's 1917 short-story version, and analyze one change the story form required
Assessment Guidance
What to Look For
The key difference from grades 9-10 is the word "impact": an answer that says "Joyce slows down" or "the play is set in a kitchen" has only named a choice. Look for the alternative (what else the author could have done) and the effect on the reader or the meaning. Strong answers also relate elements: a setting that mirrors a character's mind, or a pace that shapes what the reader expects. For drama, check that students treat stage directions as the author's words and cite them like lines.
02
Classroom Activities
3 Activities
1
Pacing Map
20 minGroups of 3-4
Groups compare how much time each part of "Araby" covers with how many words Joyce gives it (Diagram 1), then explain where and why he slows down or speeds up.
Setup
Each group gets a copy of Diagram 1, which lists the six parts of the story in order with their word counts
Groups also use Excerpts 1-3
Procedure
Groups rank the six parts by how much time each one covers, from longest to shortest, using the labels and the excerpts
Groups circle the part where the telling is slowest compared with the time it covers, and the part where it is fastest
Each group writes a two-sentence summary of Excerpt 2, reads it aloud next to the original, and names what the summary loses
Discussion Questions
Part 3, the one evening she speaks to him, gets fewer words than part 5, the Saturday wait. Why might Joyce spend more words on waiting than on the conversation itself?
What would happen to the ending if part 6 were cut to two sentences?
2
Stage the Kitchen
15 minPairs
Pairs draw a stage plan of the Wright kitchen from Glaspell's stage directions and use it to explain how the setting relates the characters to each other.
Setup
Each pair gets a blank sheet and Excerpts 4 and 5
Pairs mark the outer door, the stove, the sink with the pans, the bread-box, the rocker and the cupboard, using only details from the stage directions and the lines
Procedure
Pairs mark where the men and the women stand at the start of Excerpt 4, and how the women's positions change during Excerpt 5
Pairs write two sentences: what the arrangement shows about the two groups, and why Glaspell might have kept the whole play in this one room
Discussion Questions
Which object on your plan do the men ignore? Which one do the women notice?
How would the play change if a scene took place upstairs?
Modification
For students who need support, provide a plan with the door and stove already drawn, and a list of the objects to place.
3
The Road Not Taken
15 minGroups of 3
Groups rewrite a short passage with one choice changed, read it aloud, and compare its impact with the original. Writing the alternative makes the impact of the author's real choice concrete.
Choose One Rewrite
Begin "Araby" with the girl's first words to the boy instead of the street (5-6 sentences)
Begin "Trifles" with Mrs. Wright on stage, alone in the kitchen, before the others arrive (a short scene of 6-8 lines)
Retell the last paragraph of "Araby" as the boy on that night, in the present tense, without the adult narrator's words of judgment
Procedure
Groups draft for 7 minutes, then read their rewrite and the original aloud
Listeners name one thing the rewrite gains and one thing it loses
Each group writes a two-sentence claim about the impact of the author's actual choice
Discussion Questions
Did any rewrite improve on the original? What would the author have had to give up?
Which of the three kinds of choice in the standard (setting, order, character introduction) was hardest to change without changing the whole work?
03
Diagrams & Visual Aids
2 diagrams
Diagram 1: Space on the Page vs. Time in the Story ("Araby")
The six parts of "Araby" in the order Joyce tells them. Bar lengths are proportional to word counts in the source text (total 2,333 words); the labels give the time each part covers. Part 5, a single Saturday, is darker.
Diagram 2: Choice, Alternative, Impact
The method used throughout the lesson, shown with the Saturday wait in "Araby" from Guided Practice. Students apply it to "Trifles" in Independent Practice.
04
Homework Assignment
~30 min
RL.11-12.3 Homework: Glaspell's Choices in "Trifles"
Directions: Read the "Trifles" excerpt about the bird-cage at the end of the lesson plan (in Closure), along with the note before it. Answer in complete sentences, and cite paragraph numbers (the excerpt has twelve). For each answer, name the choice, and explain its impact.
Part 1: A Character Who Never Appears (Problems 1-2)
Mrs. Hale says, "I wish I had come over to see Minnie Foster sometimes" (paragraph 3), using Mrs. Wright's name from before her marriage. What is the impact of Glaspell introducing the younger Minnie through Mrs. Hale's memories?
John Wright is dead before the play begins. Using Mrs. Hale's description in paragraph 7, explain how Glaspell develops him through other characters, and how that portrait affects the audience's view of Mrs. Wright.
Part 2: Setting (Problems 3-4)
Mrs. Hale says the farmhouse is "down in a hollow and you don't see the road" and calls it "a lonesome place" (paragraph 3). How does Glaspell relate this setting to the characters' lives?
Paragraph 9 is a stage direction with no dialogue: Mrs. Peters swings the broken cage door, and both women watch it. Explain the impact of giving this moment to an object and to silence rather than to a speech.
Part 3: Order and Comparison (Problems 5-6)
Glaspell has the women find the empty cage first, talk about Minnie Foster next, and find the dead bird only later. Explain how this order shapes what the audience understands and feels by the end of paragraph 12.
Write a paragraph comparing one of Glaspell's choices in "Trifles" with one of Joyce's choices in "Araby." Use the choice-alternative-impact method for each, quote both texts, and argue which choice has the stronger impact on its audience.
Rubric
Criterion
Full Credit (2 pts)
Partial Credit (1 pt)
No Credit (0 pts)
Identifying Choices
Names a specific choice about setting, order or character introduction
Names a general feature ("it has symbolism")
No choice identified
Impact
Explains what the choice does to the audience or the meaning, compared with an alternative
States an effect without explaining how the choice produces it
Summary only
Relating Elements
Shows how one element shapes another (setting and character, order and judgment)
Treats each element separately
No connection between elements
Evidence
Exact quotations, including stage directions, with paragraph numbers
Quotations without locations or without explanation
No textual evidence
05
Quiz: 20 Questions
Interactive, with answers
Instructions
Question 1 is about the standard itself. Questions 2-10 use "Araby" (Excerpt 1 in Direct Instruction, Excerpts 2 and 3 in Guided Practice); questions 11-18 use "Trifles" (Excerpts 4 and 5 in Independent Practice); questions 19-20 compare the two. Paragraph numbers restart in each excerpt. Your score updates as you answer, and Reset quiz clears everything.
Multiple choice: pick an option to check it. Short answer: write your answer, then reveal the model answer.
0 of 20 answered · 0 correct
Question 1 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which question is most clearly an RL.11-12.3 question rather than an RL.9-10.3 question?
Answer: B
RL.11-12.3 asks about "the impact of the author's choices": choice B names a choice (introducing a character through others) and asks for its effect. Choices A, C and D are good character questions, but they ask about the character's wants, change and motives, which is the focus of RL.9-10.3. In grades 11-12 the question moves from "What is the character like?" to "Why did the author build the character this way, and what does it do?"
Question 2 of 20 · Multiple Choice
"The other houses of the street, conscious of decent lives within them, gazed at one another with brown imperturbable faces" (Excerpt 1, paragraph 1). What is the impact of describing the houses this way?
Answer: A
Joyce gives the houses faces and a smug awareness of their own "decent lives." "Imperturbable" means calm and unmoved, and "brown" gives the street a drab color. Choice B misreads "imperturbable," which is the opposite of warm. Choice C invents wrongdoing: the houses look "at one another," not at the boy. Choice D is contradicted: it is "a quiet street except at the hour when the Christian Brothers' School set the boys free."
Question 3 of 20 · Multiple Choice
"The former tenant of our house, a priest, had died in the back drawing-room. Air, musty from having been long enclosed, hung in all the rooms" (Excerpt 1, paragraph 2). Why might Joyce open with these details about the house?
Answer: D
A death, stale air, damp curled books and a rusty bicycle-pump: the house is full of things left over and decaying. Setting the boy's story in the dead priest's house surrounds his feelings with staleness before they begin. Choice A is contradicted: the priest "left all his money to institutions and the furniture of his house to his sister." Choice B expects a genre the story never turns into. Choice C invents a plan the text does not mention.
Question 4 of 20 · Multiple Choice
The boys play in "the dark muddy lanes," "the dark dripping gardens" and "the dark odorous stables," and then Mangan's sister appears, "her figure defined by the light from the half-opened door" (Excerpt 1, paragraph 3). What is the impact of this pattern?
Answer: B
Joyce repeats "dark" three times in one sentence and then frames the girl in light, so the setting prepares her entrance: she appears like a lit figure against the gloom. Choice A mixes up two moments: the boys hide from the uncle ("we hid in the shadow"), and they walk up to Mangan's steps when she stays. Choice C has no support. Choice D is contradicted by "the short days of winter."
Question 5 of 20 · Multiple Choice
"Every morning I lay on the floor in the front parlour watching her door. The blind was pulled down to within an inch of the sash so that I could not be seen" (Excerpt 1, paragraph 4). What is the impact of this detail?
Answer: A
The boy arranges to see without being seen, so everything readers learn about the girl comes through one watcher who never speaks to her ("I had never spoken to her, except for a few casual words"). The window blind also echoes the "blind" street of the first sentence. Choice B invents poverty. Choice C invents a conversation; they have barely spoken. Choice D misses the stated purpose: "so that I could not be seen."
Question 6 of 20 · Multiple Choice
While the boy waits for his uncle, Joyce brings in Mrs Mercer, "an old garrulous woman, a pawnbroker's widow, who collected used stamps for some pious purpose," and the boy says, "I had to endure the gossip of the tea-table" (Excerpt 2, paragraph 5). Why include a minor character at this point?
Answer: D
Mrs Mercer's talk, and her leaving "after eight o'clock," mark the evening slipping away while the boy can do nothing. Her small concerns (used stamps, the night air) show adult life as petty and tedious to a boy with one great errand. Choice A is contradicted: she leaves because "she did not like to be out late." Choice B has no support. Choice C invents a relationship the story never gives.
Question 7 of 20 · Short Answer
When the uncle finally comes home, he says, "The people are in bed and after their first sleep now." He then quotes "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy" and asks whether the boy knows "The Arab's Farewell to his Steed" (Excerpt 2, paragraphs 8-11). How does Joyce use these responses to develop the uncle and the boy's situation?
Model answer: Joyce develops the uncle indirectly, through the sounds of his arrival and the stale phrases he offers. "The people are in bed" treats the trip as over before it has begun. The proverb is a stock saying, not an apology, and the offer to recite a poem about an Arab and his horse shows that he has caught only the word "Araby" and none of the boy's urgency. By the time he is "about to recite the opening lines," the evening is nearly gone, so the uncle's character also drives the action: his forgetting is what makes the boy arrive late. Rubric: 2 points for explaining what the responses show about the uncle and how they affect the boy's situation, with quotations; 1 point for one of the two; 0 points otherwise.
Question 8 of 20 · Multiple Choice
"The high cold empty gloomy rooms liberated me and I went from room to room singing" (Excerpt 2, paragraph 4). What is the impact of this sentence?
Answer: C
Joyce piles up four bleak adjectives and then gives the boy a joyful response ("liberated," "singing"). The setting does not match his mood, and a moment later he is "seeing nothing but the brown-clad figure cast by my imagination." Choice A reverses his state: he is waiting eagerly. Choice B is contradicted by "cold" and "gloomy." Choice D invents a plan.
Question 9 of 20 · Multiple Choice
At the bazaar, "Nearly all the stalls were closed and the greater part of the hall was in darkness. I recognised a silence like that which pervades a church after a service," and "two men were counting money on a salver" (Excerpt 3, paragraph 2). What is the impact of these details?
Answer: A
The building "displayed the magical name," but inside the service is over: stalls are closed, the hall is dark, and men count the takings on a tray. The setting takes the enchantment out of "Araby" before the boy says a word. Choice B misses "after a service," when the worship has ended. Choice C is contradicted by "Nearly all the stalls were closed." Choice D takes the simile literally.
Question 10 of 20 · Short Answer
Before the lights go out, the young lady speaks to the boy "out of a sense of duty," he lingers at her stall "though I knew my stay was useless," and he allows "the two pennies to fall against the sixpence in my pocket" (Excerpt 3, paragraphs 10-13). Explain how Joyce orders these small moments to prepare for the story's last sentence.
Model answer: Joyce lines up three small letdowns before the final judgment. First, the person who should serve his great errand meets him with indifference ("out of a sense of duty"). Next, he stays to "make my interest in her wares seem the more real," so he is already pretending and half knows it. Then the coins meant for a gift make a small sound in his pocket: all that is left of his promise. Only after these does the light go out and he sees himself "as a creature driven and derided by vanity." Because the letdowns come first, the last sentence feels earned rather than sudden. Rubric: 2 points for explaining at least two of the moments and how their order builds to the last sentence, with quotations; 1 point for describing the moments without the effect of their order; 0 points otherwise.
Question 11 of 20 · Multiple Choice
The opening stage direction of "Trifles" describes "a gloomy kitchen, and left without having been put in order--unwashed pans under the sink, a loaf of bread outside the bread-box, a dish-towel on the table--other signs of incompleted work" (Excerpt 4, paragraph 1). What is the impact of Glaspell's choice to set the whole play in this kitchen?
Answer: B
Every item in the stage direction is a sign of work interrupted, and the play is set where those signs are. Glaspell keeps the audience in the one room the investigators treat as unimportant. Choice A invents servants; the signs are of one woman's work left undone. Choice C is wrong on two counts: the audience never sees upstairs, and the kitchen is the center of the play. Choice D overstates: unfinished work raises questions but proves nothing.
Question 12 of 20 · Multiple Choice
In the same stage direction, the men "go at once to the stove," while the women "have come in slowly, and stand close together near the door" (Excerpt 4, paragraph 1). What does this choice about how the characters are introduced establish?
Answer: C
Glaspell introduces the characters as two groups through their movements: the men take the warm center; the women stay at the edge, "close together." The staging sets up the play's split between what the men and the women notice. Choice A invents guilt. Choice B treats the stove as the point; being cold is not what makes the men miss the evidence. Choice D does not fit "close together"; nothing suggests they are strangers waiting for introductions.
Question 13 of 20 · Short Answer
Mrs. Wright, the woman accused of the murder, never appears on stage. In Excerpt 4, the audience first meets her through Hale's account: "there in that rocker--(pointing to it) sat Mrs Wright" (paragraph 12). Explain the impact of Glaspell's choice to keep her offstage.
Model answer: Because Mrs. Wright is never seen, the audience must build her from other people's words and from her things. Hale's account points everyone to the rocker ("pointing to it"), and the empty chair stands in for her. Keeping her offstage also puts the audience in the same position as the women: they judge her from the kitchen. And it keeps the question of her guilt open, since she cannot be seen to act or to defend herself. Rubric: 2 points for two effects (on how the audience builds the character, on suspense or judgment) with evidence from the excerpt; 1 point for one effect; 0 points otherwise.
Question 14 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Hale says John Wright "put me off, saying folks talked too much anyway, and all he asked was peace and quiet," and the County Attorney answers, "Let's talk about that later, Mr Hale" (Excerpt 4, paragraphs 10-11). What is the impact of this exchange?
Answer: A
Hale's words introduce John Wright, who is already dead, as a silent man who wanted no telephone and no talk, and who ignored what his wife wanted ("I didn't know as what his wife wanted made much difference to John"). The attorney cuts him off because he wants facts about the body, not the marriage. Choice B has no support: the attorney asks Hale to go on with his story. Choice C invents a crime. Choice D reverses the portrait: Wright did not talk.
Question 15 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Mrs. Peters' first words are "I'm not--cold" (Excerpt 4, paragraph 3), spoken "after taking a step forward" when the County Attorney invites the women to the fire. What does this choice suggest about her?
Answer: C
The dash breaks the sentence, and the stage direction describes her "thin nervous face." In a house where a man has just been killed, "not--cold" suggests that what she feels is unease, not chill. Choice A adds an emotion the line does not show; she takes a step forward. Choice B invents a history: nothing suggests she knew the house. Choice D reads the line literally and ignores the pause.
Question 16 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Hale says, "Well, women are used to worrying over trifles" (Excerpt 5, paragraph 6). What is the impact of Glaspell's choice to put the play's title in this line?
Answer: C
A title points the audience to what matters. By taking it from a line that dismisses the women's concerns, Glaspell sets up an irony: the "trifles" will turn out to be the key to the case. Choice A misreads Hale's role and the play's direction. Choice B ignores that the play is about a killing. Choice D takes the preserves literally.
Question 17 of 20 · Multiple Choice
After Hale's remark about trifles, the stage direction says, "The two women move a little closer together," and after the County Attorney's compliment, "the women do not unbend" (Excerpt 5, paragraphs 7-8). How do these stage directions develop the characters?
Answer: D
Glaspell uses movement rather than speech: each dismissive line pushes the women physically closer, and they stay stiff at the attorney's flattery. This is how the play develops their relationship before they say anything to each other about the case. Choice A ignores what the movement is responding to. Choice B has no support. Choice C reverses "do not unbend."
Question 18 of 20 · Short Answer
The County Attorney wipes his hands, finds "Dirty towels!" and asks, "Not much of a housekeeper, would you say, ladies?" Mrs. Hale answers that "Men's hands aren't always as clean as they might be" (Excerpt 5, paragraphs 8-11). Explain how Glaspell uses the setting to develop the conflict between these characters.
Model answer: Glaspell turns a kitchen object into a test of judgment. The attorney reads the towel as proof that Mrs. Wright was a poor housekeeper; Mrs. Hale reads the same towel as a sign of hard farm work and of men's dirty hands, including, the audience may notice, those of the men who have been in the house. The setting lets the conflict between the attorney and Mrs. Hale stay polite on the surface while it grows sharper: she answers "stiffly" and he calls her "loyal to your sex." Rubric: 2 points for explaining the two readings of the same object and how the exchange sharpens the conflict, with quotations; 1 point for one reading or no link to the conflict; 0 points otherwise.
Question 19 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which choice do Joyce and Glaspell have in common in these excerpts?
Answer: B
Mangan's sister is known only through the boy's watching and is never named; Mrs. Wright is known only through Hale, the women and her kitchen. In both, what the observers notice tells the audience about them as well. Choice A fits neither opening: "Araby" begins with the street, "Trifles" with the empty kitchen. Choice C fits only "Araby"; a play has no narrator. Choice D fits neither work: the girl is not at the bazaar, and Mrs. Wright never appears.
Question 20 of 20 · Short Answer
Choose one author's choice from "Araby" and one from "Trifles" (about setting, the order of the action, or how a character is introduced) that this page has not already analyzed in the worked examples, Guided Practice or questions 2-18. For each, name the choice, describe an alternative the author could have made, and explain the impact of the choice the author actually made.
Model answer: Joyce: he sends the boy to the bazaar alone on "a deserted train"; when a crowd presses to the doors, the porters move them back, and "I remained alone in the bare carriage" (Excerpt 3, paragraph 1). Alternative: a train full of cheerful people going to Araby. Impact: the journey is as empty as the bazaar will be, so the setting isolates the boy and hints at the letdown before he arrives. Glaspell: the first thing the women notice in the kitchen is Mrs. Wright's frozen fruit: "She worried about that when it turned so cold. She said the fire'd go out and her jars would break" (Excerpt 5, paragraph 3). Alternative: have Mrs. Peters report what Mrs. Wright said about the murder. Impact: the accused woman is introduced through an ordinary household worry, which the men at once mock ("worryin' about her preserves"), so the audience starts to side with the women's way of seeing. Other choices not yet analyzed on the page: the young lady's "English accents" at the stall (Excerpt 3, paragraph 3); Hale's uncertainty, "I wasn't sure, I'm not sure yet" (Excerpt 4, paragraph 12). Rubric: 2 points for each text: a named choice not already analyzed on the page, a realistic alternative and an impact tied to evidence (4 points total).
0 of 20 answered · 0 correct
06
Frequently Asked Questions
10 Questions
What does RL.11-12.3 mean?
It means students in grades 11-12 must analyze the impact of an author's choices in building a story or play: where it is set, how the action is ordered, how the characters are introduced and developed, and how these elements are related to each other. The key word is "impact": students explain what a choice does, not only what it is.
What counts as an "author's choice" under RL.11-12.3?
Any decision about how the work is built that could have been made differently. The standard's examples are setting, the order of the action, and how characters are introduced and developed. Other common ones are pacing, what information is held back, who tells the story and from when, which character is shown and which is only described, and, in drama, what the stage directions ask the audience to see.
How is RL.11-12.3 different from RL.9-10.3?
RL.9-10.3 focuses on the characters: how complex characters develop, interact and advance the plot or theme. RL.11-12.3 shifts the focus to the author and to all the elements of a story or drama: students ask why the work is built as it is and what those decisions do. A 9-10 question asks "How does this character change?"; an 11-12 question asks "Why does the author introduce this character this way, and what is the effect?"
How is RL.11-12.3 different from RL.11-12.5?
They overlap on structure. RL.11-12.5 is about how the structure of specific parts of a text, such as where to begin or end or whether to give a comedic or tragic resolution, contributes to meaning and aesthetic impact. RL.11-12.3 is broader: it covers how the author develops and relates all the elements, including setting and characters. An analysis of where a story ends can serve both.
What does "impact" mean in this standard?
The effect a choice has on the reader or audience and on the work's meaning: suspense, surprise, sympathy, irony, a change in how a character is judged, or an emphasis on an idea. A useful test is to imagine an alternative: if the author had made a different choice, what would readers lose? The answer describes the impact.
Does RL.11-12.3 apply to plays as well as stories?
Yes; the standard says "a story or drama." In a play, the author's choices include the stage directions: where the play is set, who enters first, where characters stand and what the audience sees in silence. Students should quote stage directions as evidence, just as they quote lines.
How do students avoid just listing an author's techniques?
By tying each choice to an effect and to evidence. "The story begins with a flashback" is a label. "The story opens on the morning after the accident and shows the accident itself only later, so readers judge the narrator before they know what she did" is analysis. The choice-alternative-impact chart in this lesson builds that habit.
What texts work well for teaching RL.11-12.3?
Short works with clear, deliberate construction: stories with a retrospective narrator or an ending that turns on one moment, one-act plays with a single setting, and works that delay or withhold a character. "Araby" and "Trifles" are both short enough to read in class. Novels and full-length plays often read in English 11 and 12 suit a unit-long study of one author's choices.
How is RL.11-12.3 usually assessed?
Reading tests often ask why an author places an event or detail where it is, what effect a choice of setting or narration has, or how an author develops a character, and constructed responses ask students to analyze the effect of a structural choice with evidence. Practice with both multiple-choice and short-answer items, like the quiz on this page, prepares students for either form.
Are "Araby" and "Trifles" appropriate for grades 11-12?
Yes, for most classes, with a brief content note. "Trifles" is about a killing, and "Araby" suggests an uncle who drinks. Both are short, and both reward rereading, which suits an analysis of choices. The teacher note in Closure suggests how to introduce them.
07
Related Standards
5 standards
These standards connect to RL.11-12.3: prerequisites to review first, parallel standards at the same level, and next steps that build on it.
Before this lesson
RL.9-10.3Prerequisite
Analyze how complex characters develop, interact and advance the plot or theme