RL.8.1: Choosing the Strongest Evidence for What a Story States and Suggests
In plain English: RL.8.1 is the Common Core grade 8 ELA standard that asks students to cite the textual evidence that most strongly supports their analysis of a story, poem or play. Students weigh several possible quotations for what the text states directly and for the inferences they draw, then choose the most direct piece and explain why it beats the others. It builds on RL.7.1.
Cite the textual evidence that most strongly supports an analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.
Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts & Literacy · Domain: Reading Standards for Literature · Cluster: Key Ideas and Details · Official standard
Students learn to cite the textual evidence that most strongly supports an analysis of a story, both for what the text says explicitly and for inferences drawn from it. In grade 7, students gathered several pieces of evidence. In grade 8 they choose among them: they list the candidate quotations, test each one, and explain why the one they pick beats the others. The modeled reading is the opening of Robert Louis Stevenson's Treasure Island (1883), where a scarred old seaman arrives at the Admiral Benbow inn and asks for a quiet place to watch the ships.
Students then read the scene from chapter VIII in which Jim Hawkins meets Long John Silver, a friendly tavern keeper who may not be what he seems. Because Jim tells the story years later, students also weigh whose words they can trust: young Jim, the older narrator, or Silver himself. The homework uses the apple barrel scene from chapter XI.
Learning Objectives
By the end of this lesson, students will be able to:
List several candidate quotations for a claim and choose the one that supports it most strongly
Explain, with a sentence frame, why the chosen evidence is stronger than another piece that seems to fit
Choose the strongest evidence for an inference: a detail that is hard to explain another way
Judge how far a speaker can be trusted, including a narrator looking back and a character who may be lying
Prior Knowledge Required
Students should already be comfortable with:
Citing several pieces of textual evidence for what a text says explicitly and for inferences drawn from it RL.7.1
Putting copied words inside quotation marks and adding a paragraph number
Telling a character's spoken words apart from the narrator's words
"The last slice of pizza is gone. Your little brother says he didn't eat it. Here are four clues: (1) he was home all afternoon; (2) he loves pizza; (3) there is tomato sauce on his sleeve; (4) the empty box is in his room. Rank the clues from strongest to weakest, and write one sentence explaining why your top clue is the strongest."
Collect rankings and push for reasons. Clues 1 and 2 fit almost anyone in the house, so they prove little. Clue 3 is closer but could have another cause. Clue 4 points most directly at him and is hardest to explain another way. Tell the class that in grade 8 they do the same with a story: instead of listing every quotation that seems related, they choose the evidence that most strongly supports the point.
Direct Instruction15 minutes
Review three terms and add two:
Textual evidence: exact words from the text that back up what you say about it. You cite it by copying the words in quotation marks and giving the paragraph number.
Explicit: stated directly in the words of the text.
Inference: a conclusion the text supports but does not state, reached by joining clues with what you know about people.
Strongest evidence (new): the quotation that supports a claim most directly and leaves the fewest other ways to read it. Use the four tests in Diagram 2: it speaks to the exact claim, it names a specific detail, it is hard to explain another way, and it comes from a speaker you can trust.
First-person narrator (new): a character who tells the story using "I." In Treasure Island the narrator, Jim Hawkins, tells the story years after it happened, so he sometimes knows more than he knew at the time.
Introduce the text: Robert Louis Stevenson's Treasure Island (first published as a book in 1883) is set in the 1700s. Jim's parents run the Admiral Benbow, an inn on a quiet stretch of the English coast. In this passage a strange old seaman arrives to stay. Words to know: plodding (walking slowly and heavily), hand-barrow (a small cart pushed by hand), tarry (covered in tar, which sailors used on their hair), sabre (a curved sword), livid (pale and bluish), capstan bars (poles that sailors push while singing to wind up a ship's anchor), handspike (a wooden bar used as a lever on ships), connoisseur (an expert judge of fine food or drink), sittyated (situated, in the captain's accent), grog-shop (a cheap bar), berth (a place to stay), head (a headland, a cliff that sticks out into the sea), mought (might), threshold (doorstep), before the mast (as a common sailor), mate or skipper (officers who command a ship) and the mail (the mail coach, which also carried passengers). Read the passage aloud while students follow the numbered paragraphs.
1I remember him as if it were yesterday, as he came plodding to the inn door, his sea-chest following behind him in a hand-barrow--a tall, strong, heavy, nut-brown man, his tarry pigtail falling over the shoulder of his soiled blue coat, his hands ragged and scarred, with black, broken nails, and the sabre cut across one cheek, a dirty, livid white. I remember him looking round the cove and whistling to himself as he did so, and then breaking out in that old sea-song that he sang so often afterwards:
2“Fifteen men on the dead man’s chest-- Yo-ho-ho, and a bottle of rum!”
3in the high, old tottering voice that seemed to have been tuned and broken at the capstan bars. Then he rapped on the door with a bit of stick like a handspike that he carried, and when my father appeared, called roughly for a glass of rum. This, when it was brought to him, he drank slowly, like a connoisseur, lingering on the taste and still looking about him at the cliffs and up at our signboard.
4“This is a handy cove,” says he at length; “and a pleasant sittyated grog-shop. Much company, mate?”
5My father told him no, very little company, the more was the pity.
6“Well, then,” said he, “this is the berth for me. Here you, matey,” he cried to the man who trundled the barrow; “bring up alongside and help up my chest. I’ll stay here a bit,” he continued. “I’m a plain man; rum and bacon and eggs is what I want, and that head up there for to watch ships off. What you mought call me? You mought call me captain. Oh, I see what you’re at--there”; and he threw down three or four gold pieces on the threshold. “You can tell me when I’ve worked through that,” says he, looking as fierce as a commander.
7And indeed bad as his clothes were and coarsely as he spoke, he had none of the appearance of a man who sailed before the mast, but seemed like a mate or skipper accustomed to be obeyed or to strike. The man who came with the barrow told us the mail had set him down the morning before at the Royal George, that he had inquired what inns there were along the coast, and hearing ours well spoken of, I suppose, and described as lonely, had chosen it from the others for his place of residence. And that was all we could learn of our guest.
Robert Louis Stevenson, Treasure Island, chapter I, "The Old Sea-dog at the Admiral Benbow" (the captain arrives) (1883; this edition 1915). Public domain (published 1915). Source text.
Explicit: choose the strongest of three
Claim: the captain chose the Admiral Benbow because it was lonely. Which of three possible pieces supports this best?
Result: Weak: "This is a handy cove" (paragraph 4) is about the place, not about how lonely it is. Stronger: he asks "Much company, mate?" (paragraph 4), hears there is "very little company" (paragraph 5), and answers "this is the berth for me" (paragraph 6), but the reader has to connect the three. Strongest: the barrow man reports that, hearing the inn "described as lonely," the captain "had chosen it from the others" (paragraph 7). It names the reason directly. Jim adds "I suppose," so part of the sentence is his guess, but it is still the only piece that says loneliness decided the choice.
Explicit: evidence that answers the other side
Claim: the captain does not look like an ordinary sailor. His "soiled blue coat" (paragraph 1) seems to say the opposite. What is the strongest evidence?
Result: The narrator states it outright: "bad as his clothes were and coarsely as he spoke, he had none of the appearance of a man who sailed before the mast, but seemed like a mate or skipper accustomed to be obeyed or to strike" (paragraph 7). This piece is strongest because it speaks to the exact claim and already accounts for the shabby coat, the detail that pointed the other way.
Inference: one piece rules out other readings
Claim: the captain means to keep watch for someone who might come by sea. Which piece supports this inference best?
Result: "still looking about him at the cliffs and up at our signboard" (paragraph 3) is on topic, but a new guest might look around out of plain curiosity. The strongest piece is his own list of wants: "rum and bacon and eggs is what I want, and that head up there for to watch ships off" (paragraph 6). Watching ships is one of only three things he asks for, which is hard to explain as idle interest.
Inference: a fact beats a mood
Claim: the captain has lived a violent life. The song "Fifteen men on the dead man's chest" (paragraph 2) and "the sabre cut across one cheek" (paragraph 1) both seem to fit. Which is stronger?
Result: The sabre cut is stronger. Anyone can sing a grim song, so the song sets a mood but proves little about the singer. A scar from a sword is a fact about his body that is hard to explain without a fight. "accustomed to be obeyed or to strike" (paragraph 7) makes a good second piece, because it shows he is used to hitting people.
Claim, candidates, choose, explain. Model the moves with the first example (Diagram 1): write the claim; list two or three candidate quotations; choose the strongest with the four tests; and explain in one sentence why it beats the others. Give two sentence frames: "The strongest evidence that ___ is ___ (paragraph __), because it ___." and "Although ___ (paragraph __) also fits, it is weaker because ___."
Guided Practice15 minutes
Read the next two paragraphs of chapter I aloud. Words to know: by custom (as a habit), parlour (the inn's sitting room), fog-horn (a loud horn that warns ships in fog), desirous (wanting), put up (stayed the night), a sharer in his alarms (someone who shared his fears), weather-eye open (keep a sharp lookout), fourpenny (a small silver coin worth four pennies), personage (person), diabolical (devilish) and abominable fancies (horrible imaginings).
1He was a very silent man by custom. All day he hung round the cove or upon the cliffs with a brass telescope; all evening he sat in a corner of the parlour next the fire and drank rum and water very strong. Mostly he would not speak when spoken to, only look up sudden and fierce and blow through his nose like a fog-horn; and we and the people who came about our house soon learned to let him be. Every day when he came back from his stroll he would ask if any seafaring men had gone by along the road. At first we thought it was the want of company of his own kind that made him ask this question, but at last we began to see he was desirous to avoid them. When a seaman did put up at the Admiral Benbow (as now and then some did, making by the coast road for Bristol) he would look in at him through the curtained door before he entered the parlour; and he was always sure to be as silent as a mouse when any such was present. For me, at least, there was no secret about the matter, for I was, in a way, a sharer in his alarms. He had taken me aside one day and promised me a silver fourpenny on the first of every month if I would only keep my “weather-eye open for a seafaring man with one leg” and let him know the moment he appeared. Often enough when the first of the month came round and I applied to him for my wage, he would only blow through his nose at me and stare me down, but before the week was out he was sure to think better of it, bring me my four-penny piece, and repeat his orders to look out for “the seafaring man with one leg.”
2How that personage haunted my dreams, I need scarcely tell you. On stormy nights, when the wind shook the four corners of the house and the surf roared along the cove and up the cliffs, I would see him in a thousand forms, and with a thousand diabolical expressions. Now the leg would be cut off at the knee, now at the hip; now he was a monstrous kind of a creature who had never had but the one leg, and that in the middle of his body. To see him leap and run and pursue me over hedge and ditch was the worst of nightmares. And altogether I paid pretty dear for my monthly fourpenny piece, in the shape of these abominable fancies.
Robert Louis Stevenson, Treasure Island, chapter I, "The Old Sea-dog at the Admiral Benbow" (the captain's habits) (1883; this edition 1915). Public domain (published 1915). Source text.
Write this claim on the board: The captain is hiding from one particular man. Pairs look at three candidates from paragraph 1 and test each one:
"Every day when he came back from his stroll he would ask if any seafaring men had gone by along the road." (paragraph 1). Teacher note: on topic and specific, but it can be read two ways. The text itself says the family first thought "it was the want of company of his own kind" that made him ask. Alone, it is weak.
"at last we began to see he was desirous to avoid them" (paragraph 1). Teacher note: stronger. It rules out the wish for company. But it is a general conclusion about seamen as a group, not about one man.
"keep my 'weather-eye open for a seafaring man with one leg' and let him know the moment he appeared" (paragraph 1). Teacher note: strongest. It names one man, and the captain pays Jim every month to warn him. It passes all four tests in Diagram 2.
Show Diagram 2 and fill it in together. Point out that the weakest piece was not wrong: it becomes useful once the stronger piece explains it. Each pair writes a three-sentence answer: the claim, the strongest piece with its paragraph number, and one sentence on why it beats the first candidate.
Independent Practice15 minutes
Students read a scene from chapter VIII on their own, in two parts. What has happened since chapter I: the captain died, and in his sea-chest Jim found a map of an island where the pirate Captain Flint buried his treasure. Squire Trelawney (a wealthy country gentleman) has bought a ship in the port of Bristol and hired a one-legged tavern keeper, Long John Silver, as the ship's cook. Before the captain died, two of his old shipmates came to the inn looking for him: Black Dog, and a blind man named Pew. Jim now carries a note from the squire to Silver's tavern, the Spy-glass. In the lines left out of the second part, Morgan says that he and Black Dog were talking of keel-hauling (a cruel old punishment in which a sailor was dragged under a ship). Paragraph numbers restart in each part.
Words to know: dexterity (skill), buccaneer (pirate), landlord (the owner of a tavern), start (a sudden jump of surprise), cabin-boy (a boy who works as a servant on a ship), tallow-faced (pale, like candle wax), wanting (missing), score (a bill for drinks), two coppers (two pennies, almost nothing), Admiral Hawke (a famous British admiral), relinquishing (letting go of), swabs (a sailors' insult: worthless fellows), mahogany-faced (with dark, weathered skin), sheepishly (with embarrassment), quid (a lump of chewing tobacco), clapped your eyes on (seen), confidential (private, secret), shark (here, a greedy, dangerous man), Old Bailey judge (a judge in London's main criminal court), Bow Street runner (an early London police officer), narrowly (closely) and gone bail for (put up money to promise that someone is innocent).
1The customers were mostly seafaring men, and they talked so loudly that I hung at the door, almost afraid to enter.
2As I was waiting, a man came out of a side room, and at a glance I was sure he must be Long John. His left leg was cut off close by the hip, and under the left shoulder he carried a crutch, which he managed with wonderful dexterity, hopping about upon it like a bird. He was very tall and strong, with a face as big as a ham--plain and pale, but intelligent and smiling. Indeed, he seemed in the most cheerful spirits, whistling as he moved about among the tables, with a merry word or a slap on the shoulder for the more favoured of his guests.
3Now, to tell you the truth, from the very first mention of Long John in Squire Trelawney’s letter I had taken a fear in my mind that he might prove to be the very one-legged sailor whom I had watched for so long at the old Benbow. But one look at the man before me was enough. I had seen the captain, and Black Dog, and the blind man, Pew, and I thought I knew what a buccaneer was like--a very different creature, according to me, from this clean and pleasant-tempered landlord.
4I plucked up courage at once, crossed the threshold, and walked right up to the man where he stood, propped on his crutch, talking to a customer.
5“Mr. Silver, sir?” I asked, holding out the note.
6“Yes, my lad,” said he; “such is my name, to be sure. And who may you be?” And then as he saw the squire’s letter, he seemed to me to give something almost like a start.
7“Oh!” said he, quite loud, and offering his hand. “I see. You are our new cabin-boy; pleased I am to see you.”
8And he took my hand in his large firm grasp.
9Just then one of the customers at the far side rose suddenly and made for the door. It was close by him, and he was out in the street in a moment. But his hurry had attracted my notice, and I recognized him at glance. It was the tallow-faced man, wanting two fingers, who had come first to the Admiral Benbow.
10“Oh,” I cried, “stop him! It’s Black Dog!”
11“I don’t care two coppers who he is,” cried Silver. “But he hasn’t paid his score. Harry, run and catch him.”
12One of the others who was nearest the door leaped up and started in pursuit.
Robert Louis Stevenson, Treasure Island, chapter VIII, "At the Sign of the Spy-glass" (first part) (1883; this edition 1915). Public domain (published 1915). Source text.
1“If he were Admiral Hawke he shall pay his score,” cried Silver; and then, relinquishing my hand, “Who did you say he was?” he asked. “Black what?”
2“Dog, sir,” said I. “Has Mr. Trelawney not told you of the buccaneers? He was one of them.”
3“So?” cried Silver. “In my house! Ben, run and help Harry. One of those swabs, was he? Was that you drinking with him, Morgan? Step up here.”
4The man whom he called Morgan--an old, grey-haired, mahogany-faced sailor--came forward pretty sheepishly, rolling his quid.
5“Now, Morgan,” said Long John very sternly, “you never clapped your eyes on that Black--Black Dog before, did you, now?”
6“Not I, sir,” said Morgan with a salute.
7“You didn’t know his name, did you?”
8“No, sir.”
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9And then, as Morgan rolled back to his seat, Silver added to me in a confidential whisper that was very flattering, as I thought, “He’s quite an honest man, Tom Morgan, on’y stupid. And now,” he ran on again, aloud, “let’s see--Black Dog? No, I don’t know the name, not I. Yet I kind of think I’ve--yes, I’ve seen the swab. He used to come here with a blind beggar, he used.”
10“That he did, you may be sure,” said I. “I knew that blind man too. His name was Pew.”
11“It was!” cried Silver, now quite excited. “Pew! That were his name for certain. Ah, he looked a shark, he did! If we run down this Black Dog, now, there’ll be news for Cap’n Trelawney! Ben’s a good runner; few seamen run better than Ben. He should run him down, hand over hand, by the powers! He talked o’ keel-hauling, did he? I’LL keel-haul him!”
12All the time he was jerking out these phrases he was stumping up and down the tavern on his crutch, slapping tables with his hand, and giving such a show of excitement as would have convinced an Old Bailey judge or a Bow Street runner. My suspicions had been thoroughly reawakened on finding Black Dog at the Spy-glass, and I watched the cook narrowly. But he was too deep, and too ready, and too clever for me, and by the time the two men had come back out of breath and confessed that they had lost the track in a crowd, and been scolded like thieves, I would have gone bail for the innocence of Long John Silver.
Robert Louis Stevenson, Treasure Island, chapter VIII, "At the Sign of the Spy-glass" (second part, shortened) (1883; this edition 1915). Public domain (published 1915). Source text.
On the handout, students (1) write one explicit claim about each part and the single quotation that supports it best; (2) write one inference about Silver, list three candidate quotations from either part, rank them, and explain in two sentences why the top one is strongest; (3) write one inference about Jim and name one piece of evidence that seems to fit but is weaker, with the reason. The quiz uses both parts of the scene and the first chapter I passage.
Closure5-10 minutes
Exit ticket: (1) In one sentence, explain the difference between evidence that is related to a claim and evidence that most strongly supports it. (2) Write one claim about Silver from the Spy-glass scene and the single strongest quotation for it, with part and paragraph number.
Teacher note on language: Stevenson wrote in 1883 about sailors of the 1700s. Characters drink rum, trade insults such as "swabs," and talk of hanging, keel-hauling and killing; in chapter XI Jim says he would have "killed him through the barrel." Present these as part of a pirate adventure set long ago. The spellings that show accents, such as "sittyated," "mought," "on'y" and "'Tain't," are Stevenson's and are kept exactly. The second chapter VIII passage and the chapter XI passage are shortened for length; each cut is marked [...] and described in the source note under the passage.
For homework: students read a passage from chapter XI, printed below. The ship, the Hispaniola, is now at sea on its way to the island, with Silver as cook. One evening Jim climbs into the apple barrel on deck to get an apple and, hidden inside, hears Silver talking to a young sailor. In chapter VIII, in a speech not printed on this page, Silver had told Jim that he was "as smart as paint." Words to know: 'Tain't (it isn't), you may lay to it (you can bet on it), smart as paint (very clever), abominable (hateful), rogue (a dishonest man), swinging (being hanged), fighting-cocks (roosters raised for fighting, fed well), farthings (coins worth a quarter of a penny), a good fling (a wild time), by reason of suspicion (so as not to be suspected), set up gentleman (live as a rich man), figurehead (a carved figure on the front of a ship; here, a fine example), hands (sailors) and corruption (turning an honest person dishonest).
1“Well, it ain’t much use, after all,” said the young seaman.
2“’Tain’t much use for fools, you may lay to it--that, nor nothing,” cried Silver. “But now, you look here: you’re young, you are, but you’re as smart as paint. I see that when I set my eyes on you, and I’ll talk to you like a man.”
3You may imagine how I felt when I heard this abominable old rogue addressing another in the very same words of flattery as he had used to myself. I think, if I had been able, that I would have killed him through the barrel. Meantime, he ran on, little supposing he was overheard.
4“Here it is about gentlemen of fortune. They lives rough, and they risk swinging, but they eat and drink like fighting-cocks, and when a cruise is done, why, it’s hundreds of pounds instead of hundreds of farthings in their pockets. Now, the most goes for rum and a good fling, and to sea again in their shirts. But that’s not the course I lay. I puts it all away, some here, some there, and none too much anywheres, by reason of suspicion. I’m fifty, mark you; once back from this cruise, I set up gentleman in earnest. Time enough too, says you. Ah, but I’ve lived easy in the meantime, never denied myself o’ nothing heart desires, and slep’ soft and ate dainty all my days but when at sea. And how did I begin? Before the mast, like you!”
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5“Well, I tell you now,” replied the lad, “I didn’t half a quarter like the job till I had this talk with you, John; but there’s my hand on it now.”
6“And a brave lad you were, and smart too,” answered Silver, shaking hands so heartily that all the barrel shook, “and a finer figurehead for a gentleman of fortune I never clapped my eyes on.”
7By this time I had begun to understand the meaning of their terms. By a “gentleman of fortune” they plainly meant neither more nor less than a common pirate, and the little scene that I had overheard was the last act in the corruption of one of the honest hands--perhaps of the last one left aboard. But on this point I was soon to be relieved, for Silver giving a little whistle, a third man strolled up and sat down by the party.
Robert Louis Stevenson, Treasure Island, chapter XI, "What I Heard in the Apple-Barrel" (shortened) (1883; this edition 1915). Public domain (published 1915). Source text.
Differentiation Strategies
For Struggling Students
Give the two sentence frames on a card, and a chart with three rows for candidate quotations and columns for the four tests
Offer the candidates ready-made for the first claim, so students practice choosing before they practice finding
Read the Spy-glass scene aloud with them, stopping after each paragraph to ask "What does Silver say, and what does he do?"
For Advanced Students
Ask them to find the strongest piece of evidence against their own inference and explain why their inference still holds
Have them sort evidence from chapter VIII into what young Jim noticed at the time and what the older narrator adds looking back
Ask them to write a two-part test question with one correct quotation and three that are on topic but weaker
Assessment Guidance
What to Look For
Check that each claim is backed by one clearly chosen quotation, in quotation marks with its paragraph number, and a sentence explaining why it is the strongest. The best answers name a weaker candidate and the test it fails: it is off target, too general, open to another reading, or spoken by someone who may not be telling the truth. Watch for students who pick the longest or most dramatic quotation instead of the most direct one, and for students who treat Silver's words as proof. What Silver says is explicit evidence that he said it, not proof that it is true.
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Classroom Activities
3 Activities
1
Rank the Evidence Ladder
15 minPairs
Pairs get 3 claim cards and 11 quotation cards from the first chapter I passage. For each claim they build a ladder of three cards, strongest on top, and set aside the two cards that fit no claim. The goal is to practice choosing, not just finding: every card on a ladder is related to the claim, but only one is the strongest.
The Cards
Claims: A. The captain is used to giving orders. B. The captain has spent his life at sea. C. The captain is rough and not well kept.
Quotations:
"called roughly for a glass of rum" (paragraph 3)
"Here you, matey," he cried to the man who trundled the barrow; "bring up alongside and help up my chest." (paragraph 6)
"You mought call me captain." (paragraph 6)
"his sea-chest following behind him in a hand-barrow" (paragraph 1)
"that old sea-song that he sang so often afterwards" (paragraph 1)
"the high, old tottering voice that seemed to have been tuned and broken at the capstan bars" (paragraph 3)
"his tarry pigtail falling over the shoulder of his soiled blue coat" (paragraph 1)
"his hands ragged and scarred, with black, broken nails" (paragraph 1)
"bad as his clothes were and coarsely as he spoke" (paragraph 7)
"My father told him no, very little company, the more was the pity." (paragraph 5)
"the mail had set him down the morning before at the Royal George" (paragraph 7)
Procedure
Pairs place three cards under each claim, strongest on top, and write on the top card which of the four tests (Diagram 2) it passes that the others do not
Two cards are left over; pairs explain in one sentence why each fits none of the claims
Suggested key for the teacher (pairs may argue for another order if they give a reason). Claim A: the order to the barrow man, then "You mought call me captain," then "called roughly"; the order is strongest because he commands a stranger and expects to be obeyed, while a title he gives himself and a rough manner prove less. Claim B: "tuned and broken at the capstan bars," then the sea-song, then the sea-chest; years of ship's work have shaped his voice, while anyone might know a song or own a chest. Claim C: "ragged and scarred, with black, broken nails," then the tarry pigtail and soiled coat, then "bad as his clothes were"; the hands are the most specific detail, and the paragraph 7 phrase is direct but general. Left over: paragraph 5 (the father's answer) and paragraph 7 (where the mail coach left him), which are facts about the inn and his journey
Discussion Questions
For Claim C, the test "specific" and the test "speaks to the exact claim" point to different cards. Which test should win, and why?
Does "You mought call me captain" prove he was a captain? What does it prove?
Could a leftover card become the strongest evidence for a claim of your own? Write that claim.
Modification
For students who need support, give out only the nine cards that fit, already grouped by claim, so that the task is ranking alone.
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Evidence Tug-of-War: Should Jim Fear the Captain?
15 minGroups of 4
Groups use the second chapter I passage to argue a question the text never answers directly: should Jim be afraid of the captain himself? Two students find the strongest evidence for yes and two for no; then the group decides which side's best piece is stronger. The goal is to weigh the strongest evidence on both sides before settling on an inference.
Procedure
Each pair finds two candidate quotations for its side, with paragraph numbers, and chooses the stronger one
Pairs present only their strongest piece; the group tests both with Diagram 2
The group writes one sentence: "Jim should / should not fear the captain, because ___ (paragraph __), even though ___ (paragraph __)."
Evidence notes for the teacher. For yes: he stares Jim down instead of paying, since "he would only blow through his nose at me and stare me down" (paragraph 1), and he frightens everyone into silence, since he would "look up sudden and fierce and blow through his nose like a fog-horn" (paragraph 1). For no: he keeps his word in the end, since "before the week was out he was sure to think better of it, bring me my four-penny piece" (paragraph 1), and Jim's real terror is someone else, since "How that personage haunted my dreams" (paragraph 2) refers to the one-legged man
Discussion Questions
"To see him leap and run and pursue me over hedge and ditch was the worst of nightmares" (paragraph 2) is vivid. Is it evidence about the captain? Why or why not?
The same sentence in paragraph 1 gives evidence for both sides. How can that happen?
Which side's best piece passed more of the four tests?
Variation
Later in chapter I, Jim says he was "far less afraid of the captain himself than anybody else who knew him." Read the line aloud after the debate and let groups decide whether it settles the question, and whether Jim is a reliable judge.
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Write a Two-Part Question
10 minPairs
Pairs write a two-part reading question on chapter I: Part A asks for an inference, and Part B asks which of four quotations best supports it. Writing three wrong quotations that are on topic but weaker shows students exactly what makes the right one strongest.
Model Item
Part A: What does Jim mean when he says he was "in a way, a sharer in his alarms" (second chapter I passage, paragraph 1)? Part B: Which quotation best supports your answer to Part A? The model's key: Part A, Jim shares the captain's fear because the captain has hired him to watch for the man he dreads. Part B, "He had taken me aside one day and promised me a silver fourpenny on the first of every month" (paragraph 1). Weaker choices a pair might write: "all evening he sat in a corner of the parlour next the fire" (off target), "we and the people who came about our house soon learned to let him be" (about everyone, not Jim) and "On stormy nights, when the wind shook the four corners of the house" (sets a mood).
Procedure
Each pair writes Part A about a different inference from either chapter I passage
They write four quotations for Part B: one strongest and three that are related but fail at least one of the four tests
Pairs swap, answer each other's question, and name the test each wrong choice fails
Variation
For a quicker version, give pairs the model item with Part B's four choices mixed up and ask them to put the choices in order from strongest to weakest, with a reason for each place.
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Diagrams & Visual Aids
2 diagrams
Diagram 1: Choose the Strongest of Three
The first worked example as a picture. Three pieces from chapter I all relate to the claim, but only the barrow man's report in paragraph 7 states the reason itself, so it is the strongest.
Diagram 2: Four Tests for the Strongest Evidence
The Guided Practice candidates from the second chapter I passage, run through the four tests. The captain's order to watch for "a seafaring man with one leg" passes all four; the other two are useful only as support.
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Homework Assignment
~30 min
RL.8.1 Homework: The Strongest Evidence from the Apple Barrel
Directions: Read the chapter XI passage from Treasure Island at the end of the lesson plan (in Closure). Its paragraphs are numbered 1-7. Answer in complete sentences. Put every quotation in quotation marks and give its paragraph number. When a problem asks for the strongest evidence, choose one piece and explain why it is stronger than another piece that also seems to fit.
Part 1: What the Text Says Explicitly (Problems 1-2)
According to Silver in paragraph 4, what do most gentlemen of fortune do with their money, and what does Silver do instead? Quote the strongest piece of evidence for each part of your answer.
What do Silver and the young sailor mean by "gentleman of fortune"? Quote the sentence that states the meaning most directly, and explain why a line from Silver's own speech would be weaker evidence for the meaning.
Part 2: What the Text Suggests (Problems 3-4)
Jim says that if he had been able, he "would have killed him through the barrel" (paragraph 3). What makes Jim so angry? Make an inference, support it with the strongest piece of evidence, and explain why that piece is stronger than the words "this abominable old rogue."
What can you infer about how the young sailor felt about joining Silver before this talk, and how he feels after it? Quote the single strongest piece of evidence and explain your choice.
Part 3: Weighing Evidence (Problems 5-6)
Claim: Silver is gathering sailors for a pirate crew. Rank these three pieces from strongest to weakest and give a reason for each place: (a) "I'm fifty, mark you" (paragraph 4); (b) "a finer figurehead for a gentleman of fortune I never clapped my eyes on" (paragraph 6); (c) "the last act in the corruption of one of the honest hands" (paragraph 7).
Write a paragraph of 5-7 sentences answering: What does this scene suggest about how Silver gets people to do what he wants? Use the two strongest pieces of evidence from different paragraphs, label one as explicit and one as the basis for an inference, and name one piece you considered but rejected, with the reason.
Rubric
Criterion
Full Credit (2 pts)
Partial Credit (1 pt)
No Credit (0 pts)
Explicit Evidence
Exact quotations that answer the question, each with a paragraph number
A correct paraphrase, or quotations without paragraph numbers
Wrong or missing
Strongest Choice
Chooses the most direct piece and explains why it beats a named alternative
Chooses a good piece with no comparison
Chooses a piece that is off target
Inference
A sensible conclusion the text does not state, tied to a detail that is hard to explain another way
A sensible conclusion with thin support
A guess with no evidence, or a repeat of the text
Trusting the Source
Notes who is speaking and whether that speaker can be trusted
Mentions the speaker without judging
Treats every character's words as fact
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Quiz: 20 Questions
Interactive, with answers
Instructions
Questions 2-7 and 17 use the first part of the Spy-glass scene from chapter VIII, and questions 8-16 use the second part; questions 19 and 20 use both parts. They are in Independent Practice above. Question 18 uses the first chapter I passage in Direct Instruction. Question 1 asks about choosing evidence in general. Paragraph numbers restart in each passage. Your score updates as you answer, and Reset quiz clears everything.
Multiple choice: pick an option to check it. Short answer: write your answer, then reveal the model answer.
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Question 1 of 20 · Multiple Choice
RL.8.1 asks for the evidence that most strongly supports an analysis. What makes one quotation stronger than another?
Answer: B
The strongest evidence is aimed at the exact claim and leaves few other readings open. Choice A confuses length with strength: a long quotation can be mostly off target. Choice C treats position as proof; strong evidence can come from anywhere in a text. Choice D picks the most dramatic words, which the four tests do not reward if the words are about something else.
Question 2 of 20 · Multiple Choice
In the first part of the Spy-glass scene, how does Jim recognize the customer who hurries out of the tavern?
Answer: C
The text states it: "It was the tallow-faced man, wanting two fingers, who had come first to the Admiral Benbow" (first part, paragraph 9). "Tallow-faced" means pale, and "wanting" means missing. Choice A borrows the captain's coat from chapter I. Choice B gives the man Silver's crutch from paragraph 2. Choice D borrows the captain's song from chapter I.
Question 3 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Claim: Silver is friendly with his customers. Which quotation from the first part supports this claim most strongly?
Answer: A
Choice A shows Silver's behavior toward his guests, which is the exact claim. Choice B describes how he moves on his crutch, not how he treats people. Choice C describes his face; a smile is related but says nothing about the customers. Choice D is about the customers themselves and never mentions Silver.
Question 4 of 20 · Multiple Choice
What reason does Silver give for sending Harry after the man who ran out?
Answer: D
Silver says, "But he hasn't paid his score. Harry, run and catch him" (first part, paragraph 11); a score is a bill for drinks. Choice A is Jim's reason, which Jim gives in the second part, paragraph 2. Choice B mixes up Jim's cry "stop him!" with Silver's reason; Silver answers that he does not "care two coppers" who the man is. Choice C invents a theft the passage never mentions.
Question 5 of 20 · Multiple Choice
When Silver sees the squire's letter, Jim says "he seemed to me to give something almost like a start" (first part, paragraph 6). What does this detail most likely suggest?
Answer: B
A start is a sudden jump of surprise, and it comes at the moment Silver sees the letter that tells him who Jim is. He covers it at once: "'Oh!' said he, quite loud, and offering his hand" (paragraph 7). The words "seemed to me" and "almost" show that Jim was not sure, so this is a clue for an inference, not proof. Choice C contradicts the text, since Silver says "pleased I am to see you." Choice D reads "start" as a jolt of pain, which nothing supports. Choice A has no support: nothing shows that Silver cannot read.
Question 6 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Silver's first words after Jim cries "It's Black Dog!" are "I don't care two coppers who he is" (first part, paragraph 11). Why might a careful reader find this suspicious?
Answer: A
Jim has just named a pirate, and Silver steers the talk away from who the man is to the unpaid bill. That is a clue that he may not want the name discussed. Choice B goes far beyond the text: Silver admits no such thing. Choice C contradicts paragraph 11, where he sends Harry. Choice D misreads the line, which is aimed at Black Dog, not at Jim.
Question 7 of 20 · Multiple Choice
What does Silver call Jim once he has seen the squire's letter?
Answer: C
Silver says, "I see. You are our new cabin-boy; pleased I am to see you" (first part, paragraph 7). Choice D is who Jim really is, and it may be what startles Silver, but Silver does not say it. Choices A and B are not in the passage.
Question 8 of 20 · Multiple Choice
In the second part, Silver asks Morgan, "You didn't know his name, did you?" (paragraph 7). What is Morgan's answer?
Answer: D
The next paragraph is Morgan's whole answer: "No, sir." (second part, paragraph 8). Choice C answers a different question; the talk of keel-hauling comes in the lines left out, after Silver asks what Black Dog was saying. Choices A and B are not in the passage.
Question 9 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which quotation from the second part most strongly supports the inference that Silver knows more about Black Dog than he admits?
Answer: A
Just after saying "No, I don't know the name, not I," Silver remembers that the man came with a blind beggar, before Jim has mentioned Pew. A detail like that is hard to explain unless he knew Black Dog. Choice B shows surprise and action, which an honest landlord might also show. Choice C shows that Silver wants the squire to hear good news, not what he knows about Black Dog. Choice D is Jim speaking and shows what Jim knows, not Silver.
Question 10 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Silver asks Morgan, "you never clapped your eyes on that Black--Black Dog before, did you, now?" (paragraph 5) and "You didn't know his name, did you?" (paragraph 7). What does the way these questions are worded suggest?
Answer: C
Both questions are built to get the answer "no": "did you, now?" and "did you?" tell Morgan what to say, and he says it. Morgan also "came forward pretty sheepishly" (paragraph 4), as if embarrassed. Choice A reads the pause in "Black--Black Dog" as confusion, but Silver repeats the name correctly. Choice B is the opposite of what such questions do: they close the answer down instead of opening it. Choice D reverses the relationship; Morgan answers "sir" and salutes.
Question 11 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Jim says Silver gave "such a show of excitement as would have convinced an Old Bailey judge or a Bow Street runner" (second part, paragraph 12). What does the word "show" suggest?
Answer: B
A "show" is something performed for others, and a judge or a police officer is exactly the kind of person a guilty man would need to fool. So the older narrator hints that the excitement was an act. Choice A takes "show" too literally. Choice C reads "show" as "show the way," a meaning that does not fit "a show of excitement." Choice D takes the excitement at face value, which the word "show" warns against.
Question 12 of 20 · Multiple Choice
By the end of the second part, what does young Jim believe about Silver?
Answer: D
The last sentence says that Jim "would have gone bail for the innocence of Long John Silver" (second part, paragraph 12): he was sure enough to risk money on it. Choice A is the fear Jim had before he met Silver, which one look ended. Choices B and C are inferences a careful reader might draw, but they are not what young Jim believed at the time.
Question 13 of 20 · Multiple Choice
The older Jim is telling this story years later. Which quotation most strongly suggests that he now knows Silver fooled him?
Answer: C
Only Choice C says that Silver beat Jim: he was "too clever for me." Choice A shows that Jim was suspicious at the time, not that he was fooled. Choice B shows Jim trying hard to see through Silver, not whether he succeeded. Choice D is about the chase and says nothing about Silver's trick.
Question 14 of 20 · Multiple Choice
What happens when the two men who chased Black Dog come back to the Spy-glass?
Answer: A
The text states that they "had come back out of breath and confessed that they had lost the track in a crowd, and been scolded like thieves" (second part, paragraph 12). Choice B is what Silver said he wanted, not what happened. Choice C is not in the passage. Choice D mixes up Black Dog with Pew, the blind man Jim names in paragraph 10.
Question 15 of 20 · Short Answer
Jim says Silver spoke to him "in a confidential whisper that was very flattering, as I thought" (second part, paragraph 9). What do the words "as I thought" suggest? Explain why this small phrase is strong evidence.
Model answer: At the time, Jim felt flattered that Silver shared a secret with him. The words "as I thought" show that the older Jim no longer sees it that way: the whisper only seemed like a sign of trust, and Silver was really using it to win Jim over. The phrase is strong evidence because it is the narrator's own comment, it is aimed at this exact moment, and it is hard to explain otherwise: a narrator who still believed the whisper was flattering would have no reason to add it. Rubric: 2 points for the inference and a reason the phrase is strong; 1 point for the inference alone; 0 points otherwise.
Question 16 of 20 · Short Answer
Silver whispers that Morgan is "quite an honest man, Tom Morgan, on'y stupid" (second part, paragraph 9). Is Silver's statement good evidence that Morgan is honest? Explain, and cite one other piece of evidence from the passage.
Model answer: No. Silver's words prove only what Silver says, and he has reasons to make Morgan look harmless in front of Jim. Other evidence points the other way: Morgan "came forward pretty sheepishly" (second part, paragraph 4), as if he were embarrassed or guilty, and Silver had to ask, "Was that you drinking with him, Morgan?" (paragraph 3), so Morgan had been sitting with a pirate. A character's opinion is weaker evidence than what the narrator shows. Rubric: 2 points for explaining why Silver's words are weak evidence and citing one other piece; 1 point for one of the two; 0 points otherwise.
Question 17 of 20 · Short Answer
Why does Jim wait at the door before he goes into the Spy-glass? Quote the strongest evidence, then quote the sentence that shows when he finally goes in.
Model answer: The text states the reason: "The customers were mostly seafaring men, and they talked so loudly that I hung at the door, almost afraid to enter" (first part, paragraph 1). He goes in once he has decided Silver is harmless: "I plucked up courage at once, crossed the threshold, and walked right up to the man" (first part, paragraph 4). Rubric: 2 points for both exact quotations with paragraph numbers; 1 point for one; 0 points otherwise.
Question 18 of 20 · Short Answer
In chapter I, the captain drank his rum "slowly, like a connoisseur, lingering on the taste" (first chapter I passage, paragraph 3). A connoisseur is an expert judge of fine food or drink. What might a reader infer from this, and what is the strongest other piece of evidence in that passage for the same inference?
Model answer: The captain may be used to more money and finer things than his shabby clothes suggest. The strongest other piece is that "he threw down three or four gold pieces on the threshold" (paragraph 6): gold coins are a concrete fact that shows he has money, and a poor sailor would not have them to throw down. Rubric: 2 points for a sensible inference and the gold pieces (or another strong, cited piece) with a reason; 1 point for the inference with weak support; 0 points otherwise.
Question 19 of 20 · Short Answer
By the end of chapter VIII, young Jim is sure Silver is innocent. Choose the two things Silver says or does that you think did the most to convince him, quote them, and explain why each one worked.
Model answer: First, the moment the man runs out, Silver acts: "Harry, run and catch him" (first part, paragraph 11). It looks like what an honest landlord would do. Second, he shouts "I'LL keel-haul him!" (second part, paragraph 11) while "stumping up and down the tavern on his crutch, slapping tables" (paragraph 12), so he seems angrier at Black Dog than Jim is. Both work because Jim judges Silver by what he can see and hear. Rubric: 2 points for two quoted pieces, each with a reason; 1 point for one; 0 points otherwise.
Question 20 of 20 · Short Answer
How good a judge of people is young Jim in the Spy-glass scene? Write 4-6 sentences with a claim, the two strongest pieces of evidence from different paragraphs or parts, and one piece you considered but rejected, with the reason.
Model answer: Young Jim is not a good judge of people in this scene, because he trusts looks and shows of feeling. He decides Silver cannot be a pirate after one look, since he "thought I knew what a buccaneer was like--a very different creature, according to me, from this clean and pleasant-tempered landlord" (first part, paragraph 3). Even after his suspicions return, the scene ends with him ready to have "gone bail for the innocence of Long John Silver" (second part, paragraph 12). I considered "His left leg was cut off close by the hip" (first part, paragraph 2), but it is a fact about Silver, not about how Jim judges him, so it is weaker. Rubric: 2 points for a clear claim, two strong cited pieces and a rejected piece with a reason; 1 point for a claim with one strong piece; 0 points otherwise.
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Frequently Asked Questions
10 Questions
What does RL.8.1 mean?
It means eighth graders must support what they say about a story, poem or play with the textual evidence that most strongly supports it. The standard covers two kinds of claims: what the text "says explicitly" and "inferences drawn from the text." For both, students choose the best quotation among several, cite it with a paragraph or line number, and explain why it is the best.
How is RL.8.1 different from RL.7.1?
RL.8.1 replaces "several pieces" with "the textual evidence that most strongly supports" the analysis. A grade 7 answer gathers two or three pieces. A grade 8 answer also weighs them: it picks the strongest and can say why another piece that seems to fit is weaker.
What makes textual evidence the "strongest"?
The strongest evidence speaks to the exact claim and leaves the fewest other ways to read it. This lesson uses four tests: it is aimed at the claim, it names a specific detail, it is hard to explain another way, and it comes from a speaker you can trust. A quotation that passes all four is usually the one to cite first.
Can a quotation be about the right topic and still be weak evidence?
Yes, and this is the key idea of RL.8.1. In chapter I of Treasure Island, "This is a handy cove" is about the inn's location, but it does not show that the captain wanted a lonely place. Related is not the same as strong.
Can a character's words be the strongest evidence?
Sometimes, but only for what the character says or believes. When Long John Silver says he does not know Black Dog, his words prove that he said it, not that it is true. What a character does, or what a trustworthy narrator reports, is often stronger evidence about that character.
What if the narrator tells the story years later?
Then the narrator may know more than the character did at the time, and small comments can be strong evidence. Jim Hawkins opens his story with "I remember him as if it were yesterday," a reminder that he is looking back and may know how things turned out. Students should ask which Jim is speaking: the boy in the scene or the older man telling it.
How is RL.8.1 assessed?
Reading tests often pair a question about a passage with a second question asking which quotation best supports the answer. The wrong choices are usually on topic but weaker, so students need to compare them, not just find one that fits. In class, short written answers with one cited quotation and a reason work well.
What should students do if two quotations seem equally strong?
Cite both, or choose one and explain why. Run each through the four tests; often one is more specific or harder to explain another way. If they really are equal, the best answer uses the stronger one first and the other as support.
How can parents help with RL.8.1 at home?
Ask "How do you know?" and then "What is your best proof?" when your child talks about a book, a show or a news story. Asking for the single best piece of proof, and why it beats the others, builds the same habit the standard asks for.
What comes after RL.8.1 in high school?
RL.9-10.1 asks students to cite "strong and thorough textual evidence." Choosing the strongest piece, as in grade 8, is the first half of that; high school adds thoroughness, using enough strong evidence to cover every part of a claim.
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Related Standards
5 standards
These standards connect to RL.8.1: prerequisites to review first, parallel standards at the same level, and next steps that build on it.
Before this lesson
RL.7.1Prerequisite
Cite several pieces of textual evidence for what a text says and for inferences