WHST.6-8.1Common CoreELAWriting in History, Science and Technical SubjectsGrades 6-8
WHST.6-8.1: Writing Science Arguments with Data, Sources and Opposing Claims
In plain English: WHST.6-8.1 is the Common Core literacy standard for grades 6-8 that asks students to write arguments about the content of science, history and technical subjects. Students introduce a claim, acknowledge and answer opposing claims, support their reasons with accurate data from credible sources, link ideas with clear transitions, keep a formal style and end with a conclusion that follows.
Write arguments focused on discipline-specific content.
a.Introduce claim(s) about a topic or issue, acknowledge and distinguish the claim(s) from alternate or opposing claims, and organize the reasons and evidence logically.
b.Support claim(s) with logical reasoning and relevant, accurate data and evidence that demonstrate an understanding of the topic or text, using credible sources.
c.Use words, phrases, and clauses to create cohesion and clarify the relationships among claim(s), counterclaims, reasons, and evidence.
d.Establish and maintain a formal style.
e.Provide a concluding statement or section that follows from and supports the argument presented.
Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts & Literacy · Domain: Writing Standards for Literacy in History/Social Studies, Science, and Technical Subjects 6-12 · Cluster: Text Types and Purposes · Official standard
Students learn to write a science argument that a careful reader would trust: a clear claim, reasons backed by accurate data, credible sources, a fair answer to the other side and a conclusion that follows. The lesson is built on a question every middle schooler has an opinion about: is food safe to eat if it is picked up within five seconds? Three real studies have tested the "five-second rule," and students read short summaries of them (Sources A-C), written for this page with the facts taken from the published study or press release. A fourth source, a blog post, is invented so that students can practice judging credibility. Students then study a model argument, diagnose a weak draft and plan their own argument on a related question.
The lesson follows the five parts of WHST.6-8.1: introducing a claim, acknowledging and distinguishing it from opposing claims and organizing reasons and evidence logically (a); supporting the claim with logical reasoning and relevant, accurate data from credible sources (b); using words, phrases and clauses that create cohesion and show how claims, counterclaims, reasons and evidence relate (c); keeping a formal style (d); and ending with a conclusion that follows from and supports the argument (e). This page does not ask students to grow bacteria or to handle food.
Learning Objectives
By the end of this lesson, students will be able to:
Write a claim about a science question and acknowledge an opposing or alternate claim in the introduction
Support reasons with relevant, accurate data from sources and explain how the data prove the reason
Judge whether a source is credible by asking who wrote it, where it appeared, what data it gives and what the writer gains
Use transitions that link claims, counterclaims, reasons and evidence, and keep a formal style
Write a conclusion that follows from and supports the argument
Prior Knowledge Required
Students should already be comfortable with:
Writing opinion pieces that support a point of view with reasons and information W.5.1
Citing evidence from science texts RST.6-8.1
Reading percentages and short data tables
Knowing that bacteria are living things too small to see without a microscope
"You drop a cracker on the kitchen floor and pick it up two seconds later. Would you eat it? Write your answer and one reason. Then write one piece of evidence that could change your mind."
Give students three minutes, then take a quick hand count for "eat it" and "throw it out." Write two or three reasons from each side on the board. Point out that most reasons are opinions or personal stories. Ask what kind of evidence would settle the question, and steer students toward measurement: someone would have to put bacteria on a floor, drop food on it and count what moves. Tell students that scientists have done exactly that, and that today they will write an argument: a text that states a claim and proves it with reasons and evidence, while answering the other side.
Direct Instruction20 minutes
Define the parts of an argument with Diagram 1. A claim is the writer's position on a question that people can disagree about. A reason says why the claim is true, and evidence is the data or facts that prove the reason. An opposing claim (also called a counterclaim) is a position against the writer's claim; an alternate claim is a different answer to the same question. A credible source is one a reader has good reason to trust. In science, data are measurements, such as a percentage or a number of seconds. Work through the five examples below, then read the model argument aloud.
Stating a claim
Vague draft claim: Germs on food are a big deal. It names a topic but takes no position that a reader could agree or disagree with.
Result: Revision: Bacteria can reach dropped food in less than a second, so picking food up quickly does not make it safe to eat. (The claim takes a position and hints at the reason that will follow.)
Acknowledging and answering an opposing claim
Opposing claim from Source D: germs need a few seconds to climb onto food. A writer who ignores it leaves the reader's doubt unanswered.
Result: Revision: Some people believe that germs need a few seconds to climb onto food. Laboratory measurements do not support that belief: in the Rutgers study, some bacteria reached the food in less than one second (Source A).
Evidence plus reasoning
Evidence alone: Watermelon picked up up to 97 percent of the bacteria. The number is accurate, but the reader is not told what it proves.
Result: Revision: Watermelon picked up as much as about 97 percent of the bacteria on a surface, while gummy candy picked up about 62 percent at most (Source A). Because watermelon is wet and the candy is dry, moisture seems to help bacteria move, so the same five seconds can be riskier for some foods than for others.
Words that create cohesion
Two sentences with no link: Longer contact moved more bacteria. Some bacteria moved in less than one second.
Result: Revision: Although longer contact moved more bacteria, some bacteria moved in less than one second. ("Although" tells the reader that the second idea limits the first.)
Formal style
Informal draft: The Clemson guys found out Salmonella hangs around on floors for like a month!!
Result: Revision: Researchers at Clemson University found that Salmonella survived on dry surfaces for up to four weeks (Source B). (The scientists and the bacterium are named exactly, the number comes from the source, and slang and exclamation marks are gone.)
On a second reading, students number the paragraphs, box the claim, write R1 and R2 in the margin next to each reason, underline each piece of evidence and circle every source label. Ask: in which paragraph does the writer turn to the other side, and what word marks the turn back to the writer's own claim?
1Almost everyone has heard the five-second rule: food dropped on the floor is safe to eat if it is picked up within five seconds. Some people treat the rule as a joke, while others believe that germs really do need a few seconds to reach food. To find out, food scientists have dropped food onto surfaces covered with bacteria and measured what moved. Their results show that the five-second rule should not be used to decide whether dropped food is safe to eat, because bacteria can reach food in less than one second and because the kind of food and floor matter as much as the time.
2The first reason is that bacteria do not wait. In a 2016 study at Rutgers University, Robyn Miranda and Donald Schaffner dropped watermelon, bread, buttered bread and gummy candy onto surfaces covered with bacteria. Some bacteria moved onto the food in less than one second, the shortest time they tested (Source A). A 2007 study at Clemson University found the same pattern with Salmonella, a bacterium that causes food poisoning: after only 5 seconds on a tile, bologna had picked up more than 99 percent of the bacteria on the tile (Source B). In other words, five seconds is more than enough time for bacteria to reach food.
3The second reason is that time is only one of several factors. In the Rutgers study, watermelon, the wettest of the four foods, picked up the most bacteria, and gummy candy picked up the least (Source A). The floor mattered too: carpet passed fewer bacteria to food than tile did in both studies (Sources A and B). Because a juicy fruit on a tile floor and a dry candy on a carpet pick up such different amounts, a rule that counts only seconds cannot tell anyone which dropped food is safe.
4Some evidence seems to support the rule. In 2014, a team at Aston University in England reported that food left on the floor longer picked up more bacteria, and that time was "a significant factor" (Source C). The Rutgers team also found that longer contact moved more bacteria (Source A). However, picking up more bacteria later is not the same as picking up none at first. The Aston results were announced in a press release, and the press release does not say that other scientists checked the work, while Sources A and B were published in scientific journals. Even the leader of the Aston team, Professor Anthony Hilton, warned that eating dropped food "still carries an infection risk" (Source C).
5The evidence leads to one conclusion: a dropped snack can pick up bacteria the moment it lands. Picking food up quickly may mean fewer bacteria, but it does not mean no bacteria, and whether those bacteria can make someone sick depends on germs that no one can see. For that reason, the number of seconds should not decide whether dropped food is eaten.
Written for this page (a model argument), Seconds Do Not Make Food Safe (model argument for science class, written for this page). Original passage written for this page.
Guided Practice15 minutes
Pairs read the four sources the model argument draws on. Sources A-C summarize real studies; the summaries were written for this page, and the facts and quoted words come from the published study or press release. Source D is an invented blog post. As they read, pairs fill in the chart below for each source. They will use the chart again in Activity 2 and in the homework.
Source chart (students fill in the last two columns)
Source
Who wrote it and where it appeared
What it tested or claims
Data it gives (with numbers)
A
Rutgers University scientists, science journal, 2016
B
Clemson University scientists, science journal, 2007
C
Aston University, press release, 2014
D
An invented food blogger, blog post
1Who and where: Robyn Miranda and Donald Schaffner, food scientists at Rutgers University in New Jersey, published this study in 2016 in the journal Applied and Environmental Microbiology. Before an article appears in this journal, other scientists check its methods and results.
2What they did: The researchers spread a measured amount of a bacterium called Enterobacter aerogenes on four surfaces: stainless steel, ceramic tile, wood and carpet. They let the surfaces dry for 5 hours. Then they dropped four foods onto them from a height of 12.5 centimeters: watermelon, plain bread, bread with butter and gummy candy. Each food stayed on the surface for less than 1 second, 5 seconds, 30 seconds or 300 seconds, and then the researchers measured how many bacteria had moved onto it.
3What they found: Longer contact moved more bacteria, but the type of food and the type of surface mattered as much or more. Watermelon picked up the most bacteria, from about 0.2 percent to 97 percent of the bacteria on the surface, depending on the surface and the time. Gummy candy picked up the least, from about 0.1 percent to 62 percent. Carpet passed fewer bacteria to food than tile or stainless steel did.
4Their conclusion, in their own words: "Some transfer takes place 'instantaneously,' at times of <1 s, disproving the five-second rule."
Summary written for this page; the study is by Robyn C. Miranda and Donald W. Schaffner, Longer Contact Times Increase Cross-Contamination of Enterobacter aerogenes from Surfaces to Food (Source A: a 2016 Rutgers University study, summarized for this page). Original passage written for this page.
1Who and where: Paul Dawson and four colleagues at Clemson University in South Carolina published this study in 2007 in the Journal of Applied Microbiology. Before an article appears in this journal, other scientists check its methods and results.
2What they did: The team put Salmonella Typhimurium, a type of bacteria that can cause food poisoning, on tile, wood and carpet. They then laid bologna and bread on the surfaces, after the bacteria had been on the surfaces for 2, 4, 8 or 24 hours. They also measured how long the bacteria could stay alive on a dry surface.
3What they found: Salmonella survived for up to four weeks on dry surfaces, in numbers large enough to spread to food. More than 99 percent of the bacteria on the tile moved to the bologna after 5 seconds of contact. Carpet passed very few bacteria to the bologna, less than 0.5 percent, while wood and tile passed from 5 to 68 percent.
4Their conclusion: the bacteria "can be transferred to the foods tested almost immediately on contact."
Summary written for this page; the study is by Paul Dawson and colleagues, Residence Time and Food Contact Time Effects on Transfer of Salmonella Typhimurium from Tile, Wood and Carpet (Source B: a 2007 Clemson University study, summarized for this page). Original passage written for this page.
1Who and where: On 10 March 2014, Aston University in Birmingham, England, announced the results of a study in a press release, a news announcement that an organization writes about its own work. The study was carried out by final-year biology students led by Anthony Hilton, a professor of microbiology. The press release does not say that other scientists checked the work before it was announced.
2What they did: The team tested how two kinds of bacteria, E. coli and Staphylococcus aureus, moved from carpet, laminate and tile floors to toast, pasta, a cookie and a sticky candy. The foods stayed on the floor for 3 to 30 seconds.
3What they found: Time was "a significant factor": food left on the floor longer picked up more bacteria. Bacteria were least likely to move from carpet, and most likely to move from laminate or tile to moist foods left for more than 5 seconds. The team also surveyed people and reported that 87 percent said they would eat food dropped on the floor, or had already done so.
4What the lead scientist said: "Consuming food dropped on the floor still carries an infection risk as it very much depends on which bacteria are present on the floor at the time."
Summary written for this page; the press release is from Aston University, Researchers Prove the Five-Second Rule Is Real (Source C: a 2014 Aston University press release, summarized for this page). Original passage written for this page.
1I have followed the five-second rule my whole life, and I have never gotten sick from a dropped snack. Neither has anyone in my family. Floors in most homes are cleaner than people think, and germs need a few seconds to climb onto food, so if you are fast, you are fine.
2Scientists love to scare people about germs, but common sense says a quick pickup is safe. That is why I designed the Snack Talk Floor-Safe Bowl, which has a rubber base so it never tips over. Order yours today and stop wasting food!
3Posted by Casey R., food blogger
Written for this page (an invented blog post), Why I Trust the Five-Second Rule (Source D: a post from an invented food blog, Snack Talk; the writer, the blog and the bowl are invented for practice). Original passage written for this page.
Independent Practice20 minutes
Students read the weak draft below, which a student wrote after hearing about the five-second rule but before reading any sources. They number its seven sentences and label each one: claim, reason, evidence, opposing claim, conclusion or none. Then they list its problems under four headings: claim and opposing claim, data and sources, formal style, and conclusion. They do not rewrite it yet; that happens in Activity 3.
The five second rule is totally fake and honestly anyone who believes it is kind of gross. Germs are everywhere so obviously they get on your food. Scientists did a study and found out germs get on food. My friend dropped a cookie at lunch and ate it and got a stomachache the next day, so that proves it. Some people say the rule is real but they are just wrong. Also carpets are super dirty so food on a carpet gets the most germs. In conclusion, germs are bad and everyone should wash their hands more.
Written for this page (an invented student draft), The Five Second Rule (weak draft for revision, written for this page; the student writer is invented). Original passage written for this page.
Next, each student starts the plan for the homework argument, which asks a new question: Is carpet a safer place than tile to drop food? On a planning sheet they write a working claim, two reasons, one piece of data for each reason with its source label, and the strongest opposing claim they can think of. Collect the plans or check them at the door.
Closure5-10 minutes
Exit ticket: (1) Write one sentence that states an opposing claim about the five-second rule fairly. (2) Write the sentence that answers it, beginning with a transition. (3) Name one question you ask to decide whether a source is credible.
Teacher notes: Source D, its writer Casey R., the Snack Talk blog and the Floor-Safe Bowl are invented for practice, and so is the student who wrote the weak draft; say so when you hand them out. The summaries of Sources A-C were written for this page, so students should cite them as "Source A" and so on, not as the original articles. This lesson includes no lab. Do not culture bacteria from floors or food for it: growing unknown bacteria needs plates that are sealed and never reopened, and disposal by the teacher under your school's biosafety rules. Do not use real food in the activities, and never let students eat food that has touched the floor, desks or lab benches; check for food allergies before any food appears in class.
Differentiation Strategies
For Struggling Students
Give sentence frames: "I claim that ... because ... .", "Some people argue that ... . However, ... ." and "According to Source ..., ... ."
Highlight the numbers in Sources A-C before students read, so they can find the data quickly
Let students plan the homework argument by filling in Diagram 1 as an organizer before they write paragraphs
For Advanced Students
Ask students to explain why the Aston result (food left longer picks up more bacteria) does not contradict the Rutgers result, and write one sentence that uses both
Have students write a short paragraph on what the three studies cannot tell us, for example about floors at school or about which bacteria make people sick
Ask students to design a safe classroom model of the question that uses no bacteria and no food, naming what they would change and what they would keep the same
Assessment Guidance
What to Look For
Check that the introduction states a claim a reader could disagree with and names an opposing or alternate claim. Each reason should have its own evidence, with accurate numbers and a source label, and the writer should explain how the evidence proves the reason instead of dropping in a quotation and moving on. Look for a fair statement of the other side followed by a clear response, transitions that show the relationship between ideas (because, for example, however, even so, therefore), a formal style with no slang, exclamation marks or "you," and a conclusion that follows from the evidence instead of changing the subject.
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Classroom Activities
3 Activities
1
Claim, Reason or Evidence? Sentence Card Sort
15 minPairs
Pairs sort ten sentence cards about the five-second rule into the parts of an argument, then link each piece of evidence to the reason it supports. The activity builds parts a and b of the standard.
Sentence Cards
1. The five-second rule should not decide whether dropped food is eaten.
2. Germs need a few seconds to climb onto food.
3. Bacteria can reach food before anyone could pick it up.
4. In the Rutgers study, some bacteria moved to food in less than 1 second.
5. Food left on the floor longer picks up more bacteria, so a quick pickup helps.
6. At Clemson, more than 99 percent of the bacteria on a tile moved to bologna in 5 seconds.
7. The kind of food and floor matter as much as the time.
8. Watermelon picked up the most bacteria of the four foods in the Rutgers study.
9. Carpet passed fewer bacteria to food than tile did.
10. More bacteria later is not the same as no bacteria at first.
Procedure
Pairs sort the cards into five piles: claim, opposing or alternate claim, reason, evidence, and response to the other side
Teacher key: card 1 is the claim; cards 2 and 5 are opposing or alternate claims; cards 3 and 7 are reasons; cards 4, 6, 8 and 9 are evidence; card 10 is a response
Pairs place each evidence card under the reason it supports and write, on a sticky note, one sentence explaining the match
Pairs place the response card next to the claim it answers, and write one sentence that joins the two with a transition from the Activity 3 bank
Finally, pairs arrange all ten cards in the order an argument would present them and compare their order with another pair's
Discussion Questions
Card 2 and card 5 both disagree with the claim. How are they different, and which one is harder to answer?
Why does each reason need its own evidence cards? What would a reader think if a reason had none?
Where did you place the opposing claims in your order, and why there?
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Can We Trust This Source?
15 minGroups of 3-4
Groups rate the four sources with a four-question credibility check, then decide which sources belong in a science argument and how much weight each one can carry. The activity builds part b of the standard, the use of credible sources.
The Four Questions
Who? Who wrote it, and what do they know about the topic?
Where? Where did it appear, and did anyone check it before it was shared?
What data? Does it give measurements, and does it say how they were collected?
Why? Does the writer gain anything, such as money or attention, if you believe it?
Procedure
Groups copy a chart with the four questions across the top and Sources A-D down the side
For each source, groups write a detail from the text that answers each question, then rate the source strong, useful with limits, or weak
Groups rank the four sources from most to least credible and write one sentence defending the top and the bottom choice
Each group writes one sentence that uses a source with limits fairly, naming the limit, for example "According to a press release from ..., ..."
Two groups compare rankings; where they differ, each explains which question decided its rating
Discussion Questions
Can a source be credible and still be less useful for your particular claim? Give an example from the packet.
Does a source have to agree with your claim to be worth citing?
What would you want to know about a source before you used it in a science class argument?
Modification for Distance Learning
Groups fill in a shared chart, one row per source, in an online document. Each group adds one comment on another group's rating that either agrees with a new detail or questions it.
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Draft Repair
20 minPairs
Pairs revise the weak draft (T6) into a formal argument paragraph of six to eight sentences, using the sources, a transition bank and a formal-style checklist, and end it with a conclusion that follows. The activity builds parts c, d and e of the standard.
Materials
The weak draft (T6), the list of problems from Independent Practice, and Sources A-C
Transition bank, by relationship: adding a reason (first, also, in addition, a second reason is), giving evidence (for example, according to, in one study), explaining (this means, in other words, this shows), answering the other side (admittedly, although, however, even so), concluding (therefore, for this reason, as a result)
Formal-style checklist: no slang ("totally," "super," "kind of"); no "you"; no exclamation marks; name the source and the scientists, not "scientists did a study"; exact numbers instead of "a lot"; claims no stronger than the evidence
Procedure
Replace the draft's sentence about carpets with a sentence that the sources support, and give its source label
Choose a claim for the paragraph and state it in a formal sentence
Replace the friend's story with a piece of data from Source A or Source B, and add a sentence that explains what the data show
Add a transition from the bank before every sentence that begins a new part of the argument
End with a conclusion that follows from the evidence in the paragraph
Trade with another pair and label every transition with the relationship it shows
Poster Variation
Pairs turn their paragraph into a food-safety poster for a school hallway: a one-sentence claim as the headline, two pieces of data with source labels, and one sentence that answers the five-second rule. They compare the two versions and say what the paragraph can do that the poster cannot.
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Diagrams & Visual Aids
2 diagrams
Diagram 1: The Parts of a Science Argument
An argument moves from a claim to reasons with evidence, then to a fair statement of the opposing claim and a response, and ends with a conclusion. The words in quotation marks are sample transitions that show how each part relates to the one before it.
Diagram 2: How Many Bacteria Moved to Each Food (Source A)
In the Rutgers study (Source A), the share of bacteria that moved from a surface to a food ranged widely. Each bar covers every surface and every contact time the researchers tested, from less than 1 second to 300 seconds, so a single bar mixes results from carpet and tile and from short and long drops.
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Homework Assignment
~30 min
WHST.6-8.1 Homework: Is Carpet a Safer Place Than Tile to Drop Food?
Directions: Write an argument of 300-450 words for your science teacher that answers the question Is carpet a safer place than tile to drop food? Use Sources A-D in Guided Practice and your plan from Independent Practice. Cite sources as (Source A) or (Source B, paragraph 3). Complete the six problems below; together they build your argument.
Part 1: Claim and Sources (Problems 1-2)
Write an introduction of two or three sentences that states your claim and names an alternate or opposing claim that some readers might hold.
Rate Sources A-D for this question with the four credibility questions from Activity 2. Name the two sources you will rely on most and explain why, and name one source you will not use and explain why not.
Part 2: Reasons and Evidence (Problems 3-4)
Write a body paragraph that gives one reason for your claim, supports it with at least two pieces of accurate data (with numbers and source labels), and explains in your own words how the data prove the reason.
Write a paragraph that states the strongest opposing claim fairly, then explains how your claim is different from it or why your claim still holds. Begin your response with a transition that shows you are answering the other side.
Part 3: Order, Style and Conclusion (Problems 5-6)
Write the order of your paragraphs as a short outline and explain in two sentences why that order is logical for a reader. Then underline three transitions in your argument and label the relationship each one shows.
Write a conclusion of two or three sentences that follows from your reasons and supports your claim. Then reread the whole argument and list two words or phrases you changed to keep a formal style.
Rubric
Criterion
Full Credit (2 pts)
Partial Credit (1 pt)
No Credit (0 pts)
Claim and Opposing Claim
Clear claim in the introduction; opposing claim stated fairly and answered with evidence
Claim clear, but the opposing claim is missing or dismissed without reasons
No clear claim
Reasons, Data and Sources
Each reason has accurate data with source labels and an explanation; sources chosen for credibility
Data present but inaccurate, unexplained or unlabeled in places
No data, or data that do not fit the reasons
Organization and Transitions
Logical order; transitions show how claims, reasons, evidence and the other side relate
Order mostly clear; transitions repetitive or missing in places
Ideas in random order; no transitions
Formal Style and Conclusion
Formal throughout; conclusion follows from and supports the argument
Some informal lapses, or a conclusion that only repeats the claim
Informal throughout or no conclusion
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Quiz: 20 Questions
Interactive, with answers
Instructions
The questions use the model argument (T5) in Direct Instruction, Sources A-D (T1-T4) in Guided Practice and the weak draft (T6) in Independent Practice. Your score updates as you answer, and Reset quiz clears everything so you or your students can try again.
Multiple choice: pick an option to check it. Short answer: write your answer, then reveal the model answer.
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Question 1 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which writing task asks for an argument focused on science content?
Answer: B
B asks for a claim about a science question, supported with data, which is an argument about discipline-specific content. A asks for an explanation of a procedure (informative writing) and C for a story (narrative). D is an argument, but about taste, so no science data could settle it.
Question 2 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which sentence in paragraph 1 of the model argument (T5) states the writer's claim?
Answer: D
D takes a position a reader could disagree with and previews the two reasons, so it is the claim. A introduces the topic by defining the rule, B describes what other people believe (the opposing view), and C tells how the question was tested without taking a position.
Question 3 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which sentence is an arguable claim that a science argument could prove with data?
Answer: C
C takes a position that people could dispute and that measurements could support or refute. A is a fact that no one argues about, B is a question rather than a claim, and D is a personal feeling that no data could prove.
Question 4 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which sentence from paragraph 4 of the model argument (T5) first turns to the opposing claim?
Answer: A
A is the sentence that first turns to the other side and admits that some evidence favors the rule. B is the writer's response to that evidence, C is evidence the writer uses against the rule, and D comes after the turn: it adds a second source to the opposing evidence that A has already introduced.
Question 5 of 20 · Multiple Choice
How does the model argument (T5) distinguish its claim from the Aston finding that time is "a significant factor"?
Answer: B
Paragraph 4 accepts that longer contact moves more bacteria and then separates that point from the claim: "picking up more bacteria later is not the same as picking up none at first." A invents a criticism the text never makes, C misstates how the writer treats the study, and D is false: Source C says the team tested carpet, laminate and tile.
Question 6 of 20 · Multiple Choice
The model argument (T5) gives both reasons in paragraphs 2 and 3 and answers the opposing claim in paragraph 4. Why is this order logical?
Answer: A
By paragraph 4, readers already know that bacteria move in under a second, so the response "not the same as picking up none at first" makes sense. B turns one good choice into a false rule (arguments can answer the other side earlier), and C and D invent motives the text does not show.
Question 7 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which piece of evidence best supports the model argument's first reason, that "bacteria do not wait"?
Answer: C
The reason is about speed, and C shows transfer in less than one second. A is about how long bacteria survive, not how fast they move. B reports what people do, not what bacteria do. D is relevant to the second reason, about the kind of floor.
Question 8 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which sentence reports Source C (T3) accurately?
Answer: C
Source C says, "The foods stayed on the floor for 3 to 30 seconds." A reverses the finding that time was "a significant factor," B reverses the finding that bacteria were least likely to move from carpet, and D is wrong on both counts: the results were announced in a press release in 2014.
Question 9 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which is the strongest reason to doubt Source D (T4)?
Answer: C
Source D offers only the writer's own experience and ends by advertising the Floor-Safe Bowl, so the writer gains if readers believe the rule. A confuses length with credibility, B judges a source only by whether it agrees, and D overgeneralizes: many credible studies are published online.
Question 10 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Why does the model argument (T5) point out that Sources A and B were published in scientific journals?
Answer: D
Paragraph 4 contrasts the Aston press release, which "does not say that other scientists checked the work," with Sources A and B, "published in scientific journals," where other scientists check the methods first. A and B are claims the text never makes, and C names a fact that has nothing to do with credibility.
Question 11 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Choose the transition that best shows the relationship between these sentences from Source B (T2): Carpet passed less than 0.5 percent of the bacteria to the bologna. ____, wood and tile passed from 5 to 68 percent.
Answer: C
The second sentence shows a difference from the first, which "In contrast" signals. "For example" would introduce an instance of the first idea, "As a result" an effect of it, and "Similarly" a second idea like the first; the numbers show the opposite.
Question 12 of 20 · Multiple Choice
In paragraph 4 of the model argument (T5), the sentence that begins with "However" links which two parts of the argument?
Answer: A
Before "However," the paragraph gives evidence that seems to support the rule; after it, the writer answers that evidence. The transition marks the turn from the other side back to the writer's claim. B, C and D name links the sentence does not make: it comes after both reasons and before the conclusion.
Question 13 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which revision of the weak draft's (T6) sentence Germs are everywhere so obviously they get on your food. keeps a formal style?
Answer: D
D names the organisms precisely, makes a claim no stronger than the evidence, and uses no slang. A keeps "literally" and "obviously," B addresses the reader as "you" and uses "totally," and C uses exclamation marks and a personal reaction.
Question 14 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which concluding statement best follows from and supports the model argument (T5)?
Answer: D
D restates the claim and ties it to the first reason, so it follows from the argument. A changes the subject, B draws a conclusion far larger than the evidence, and C contradicts the argument it is supposed to end.
Question 15 of 20 · Short Answer
The weak draft (T6) begins: "The five second rule is totally fake and honestly anyone who believes it is kind of gross." Rewrite it as a formal introduction of two sentences that states a claim and acknowledges an opposing claim.
Model answer: "Many people believe that food picked up within five seconds is safe, because they think bacteria need time to reach it. Studies of dropped food do not support that belief, so the five-second rule should not be trusted to keep food safe." Rubric line: 2 points for a claim that takes a clear position, an opposing claim stated fairly (not insulted), and a formal style with no slang; 1 point if one of the three is missing.
Question 16 of 20 · Short Answer
The weak draft (T6) says, "Scientists did a study and found out germs get on food." Rewrite the sentence so that it names a credible source and gives accurate data from it. Cite the source.
Model answer: "In a 2016 study at Rutgers University, published in the journal Applied and Environmental Microbiology, some bacteria moved from a surface onto food in less than one second (Source A)." Another correct answer uses Source B: more than 99 percent of the bacteria on a tile moved to bologna within 5 seconds. Rubric line: 2 points for a named source that is credible (A or B), accurate data with a number, and a source label; 1 point if the data are accurate but the source is vague, or the reverse.
Question 17 of 20 · Short Answer
The weak draft (T6) says, "My friend dropped a cookie at lunch and ate it and got a stomachache the next day, so that proves it." In two or three sentences, explain why this story does not prove the writer's claim, and name a better kind of evidence.
Model answer: "The story is one case, and a stomachache the next day could have many causes, such as something else the friend ate, so it does not show that the cookie picked up bacteria. No one measured anything. Better evidence would be data from a study that put bacteria on a surface and counted how many moved to dropped food, such as Source A or Source B." Rubric line: 2 points for naming a flaw in the reasoning (a single case, or another possible cause) and a better kind of evidence (measured data from a credible study); 1 point for one of the two.
Question 18 of 20 · Short Answer
The weak draft (T6) says, "Some people say the rule is real but they are just wrong." Rewrite this in two or three sentences that state the opposing claim fairly, give the evidence for it, and then distinguish the writer's claim from it, using a transition.
Model answer: "Some people argue that the rule has a basis, and in 2014 a team at Aston University did report that food left on the floor longer picked up more bacteria (Source C). Even so, that result does not show that food picked up quickly is safe, because in the Rutgers study some bacteria moved in less than one second (Source A)." Rubric line: 2 points for a fair statement of the opposing claim with its evidence, a transition that marks the response (even so, however, although), and a response that separates the two claims; 1 point if the opposing claim is fair but the response is missing, or the reverse.
Question 19 of 20 · Short Answer
Put these four sentences in a logical order for one paragraph of an argument, and name the job of each one (reason, evidence, explanation or link back to the claim). Then name the transition that links the paragraph back to the claim. (1) For this reason, a floor that looks clean is not proof that dropped food is safe. (2) Bacteria can stay alive on a floor long after anyone can see a spill. (3) In the Clemson study, Salmonella survived on dry surfaces for up to four weeks (Source B). (4) This finding means that bacteria from a spill can still reach food weeks later.
Answer: 2, 3, 4, 1. Sentence 2 is the reason, sentence 3 the evidence, sentence 4 the explanation of what the evidence means, and sentence 1 the link back to the claim, introduced by the transition "For this reason." ("This finding means" in sentence 4 also links the evidence to the reason.) Rubric line: 2 points for the correct order, the four jobs and the transition "For this reason"; 1 point for the correct order with one job or the transition missing.
Question 20 of 20 · Short Answer
The weak draft (T6) ends: "In conclusion, germs are bad and everyone should wash their hands more." Rewrite the conclusion in two formal sentences so that it follows from and supports an argument against the five-second rule.
Model answer: "Studies at Rutgers and Clemson found that bacteria can move onto dropped food within seconds, some in less than one second, and that wet foods and hard floors pick up and pass the most. For these reasons, the number of seconds food spends on the floor should not decide whether it is safe to eat." Rubric line: 2 points for a conclusion that sums up the evidence, returns to the claim and stays on topic, in a formal style; 1 point for a conclusion that only repeats the claim; 0 for a new topic such as hand washing.
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Frequently Asked Questions
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What does WHST.6-8.1 mean?
WHST.6-8.1 means that students in grades 6-8 can write arguments about the content of science, history and technical subjects: they state a claim and prove it with reasons, data and evidence.
Its five parts ask students to introduce the claim, acknowledge and distinguish it from opposing claims and organize the reasons logically (a); support it with logical reasoning and accurate data from credible sources (b); link the parts with words that show how they relate (c); keep a formal style (d); and end with a conclusion that follows (e).
What is the difference between WHST.6-8.1 and W.7.1?
W.7.1 is the English-class argument standard for grade 7, while WHST.6-8.1 asks for the same kind of writing in science, history and technical classes.
The WHST version adds "discipline-specific content" and asks for "data and evidence," not only evidence; both standards ask for credible sources and a formal style. In practice, a WHST argument is judged partly on whether its science or history is accurate.
Is WHST.6-8.1 taught in science class or English class?
It is meant for science, social studies and technical classes, as part of the Common Core literacy standards for those subjects.
English teachers often teach the moves of argument, and the content comes from the other class: a lab result, a set of studies or a historical question. Many schools coordinate the two so that students use the same words (claim, reason, evidence) in both.
What counts as a credible source for a middle school science argument?
A credible source is one a reader has good reason to trust: it names who wrote it, shows data and explains how the data were collected.
Studies published in science journals, university and government science pages, and science museums are usually strong. Press releases can be useful but tell only the organization's side of a story. For any source, ask who wrote it, where it appeared, what data it gives and why it was written.
What is the difference between an opposing claim and an alternate claim?
An opposing claim argues against the writer's claim; an alternate claim gives a different answer to the same question.
If the claim is "the five-second rule is not a safe guide," an opposing claim is "the rule is safe." An alternate claim is "the rule works for dry foods but not for wet ones." The standard asks students to acknowledge such claims and show how their own claim differs.
Does a science argument have to include numbers?
Not always, but the standard asks for "relevant, accurate data," and in science, data are usually measurements.
A percentage, a time or a count makes a reason much harder to dismiss than a general statement. Students should copy numbers exactly, give their units, and say where they came from.
What does a formal style mean for students in grades 6-8?
A formal style is the way a writer sounds when writing for a teacher or a public reader rather than a friend.
It avoids slang ("totally," "kind of"), exclamation marks and "you," names people and sources exactly, and uses precise words, for example "bacteria" instead of "stuff." It does not require long words or a dull voice.
How is WHST.6-8.1 different from WHST.9-10.1?
The grade 9-10 version asks for more precise claims and a fairer, fuller treatment of the other side.
WHST.9-10.1 asks students to develop claims and counterclaims fairly, pointing out the strengths and limitations of both, and to keep an objective tone that follows the norms of the discipline. At grades 6-8, students acknowledge and distinguish opposing claims and keep a formal style.
Is the five-second rule true?
Not as a safety rule: studies have found that bacteria can move onto food in less than one second.
Longer contact does move more bacteria, and wet foods and hard floors pass more than dry foods and carpet, but no study found a safe number of seconds. Whether dropped food makes someone sick depends on which bacteria are on the floor, which no one can see.
How can parents help with argument writing in science?
Ask your student to back up a claim with evidence and to say what the other side would argue.
Useful questions are "How do you know?", "Where did that number come from?" and "What would someone who disagrees say, and how would you answer?" These are the moves the standard asks students to write.
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Related Standards
5 standards
These standards connect to WHST.6-8.1: prerequisites to review first, parallel standards at the same level, and next steps that build on it.
Before this lesson
W.5.1Prerequisite
Write opinion pieces that support a point of view with reasons and information
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Alongside
W.8.1Parallel
Write arguments that support claims with clear reasons and relevant evidence