SL.11-12.4Common CoreELASpeaking and ListeningGrades 11-12
SL.11-12.4: Presenting a Distinct Perspective and Answering Other Views
In plain English: SL.11-12.4 is the Common Core ELA standard that asks students in grades 11-12 to present information, findings and supporting evidence that convey a clear and distinct perspective, with a line of reasoning listeners can follow. Students address alternative and opposing perspectives and adapt their presentations to a range of formal and informal tasks. It is usually taught in English 11 or 12.
Present information, findings, and supporting evidence, conveying a clear and distinct perspective, such that listeners can follow the line of reasoning, alternative or opposing perspectives are addressed, and the organization, development, substance, and style are appropriate to purpose, audience, and a range of formal and informal tasks.
Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts & Literacy · Domain: Speaking and Listening Standards · Cluster: Presentation of Knowledge and Ideas · Official standard
Students learn to present findings with a perspective of their own and to answer the perspectives that compete with it. The historical anchor is the second half of Abraham Lincoln's address at the Cooper Institute in New York on February 27, 1860, where he takes the charges against his party one at a time ("You say we are sectional") and answers each, often by granting a fact and disputing the conclusion drawn from it. The modern anchors are model presentations written for this page: a senior's formal testimony to a school board on an invented open-lunch pilot, the same findings retold on a student podcast, and a junior's proposal to a student senate with some strong moves and some weak ones.
The standard asks for three things beyond clear presentation: a clear and distinct perspective, an answer to alternative or opposing perspectives, and a range of formal and informal tasks. Students practice all three: they restate a partner's view until the partner accepts it, move one set of findings from a hallway conversation to board testimony, and answer a respondent's objection on the spot. The homework asks for a formal presentation and an informal one built from the same research notes.
Learning Objectives
By the end of this lesson, students will be able to:
State a clear and distinct perspective on a set of findings, and explain how it differs from the other positions in play
Build a line of reasoning from findings to perspective that listeners can follow, with signposts at each step
Address alternative and opposing perspectives by acknowledging them fairly, conceding what is true, responding with evidence and naming limits
Adapt the organization, development, substance and style of one presentation to formal and informal tasks while keeping its perspective and evidence
Analyze how a historical speaker answers opposing views, including where he answers and where he only mocks
Prior Knowledge Required
Students should already be comfortable with:
Presenting findings and evidence clearly, concisely and logically for a purpose, audience and task SL.9-10.4
Evaluating a speaker's reasoning and use of evidence, including fallacies SL.9-10.3
Distinguishing a claim from a counterclaim in written argument
Students write for three minutes, then share in pairs. Ask two or three volunteers to read the other person's best point aloud, and ask the class whether it sounds like something that person would actually say.
Warm-Up Prompt
"Think of a disagreement you had about a decision, at home, on a team or in a club. What was the other person's best point? Did you answer that point, or a weaker one?"
Tell students that SL.11-12.4 asks for three things at once: a clear and distinct perspective on the findings, a line of reasoning listeners can follow, and an honest answer to other perspectives, the strongest ones and not the weakest. It also asks them to present across a range of tasks, from a school board meeting to a hallway conversation. Show Diagram 1.
Direct Instruction20 minutes
Part 1: The words in the standard. Use the table to unpack the new demands of the 11-12 standard.
The key terms in SL.11-12.4 and a question to ask about each
Term
What it means in a presentation
Question to ask
Clear perspective
The speaker's position on the findings, stated early in one sentence
"Could a listener say where I stand?"
Distinct perspective
A position that differs from the other available ones and is not a slogan or a fence-sit
"How is my view different from the others in the room?"
Line of reasoning
The path from findings to perspective that listeners can follow step by step
"Does each step follow from the last?"
Opposing perspective
A view that disagrees with the speaker's
"Have I stated it so its supporters would agree?"
Alternative perspective
A different view that is not simply the opposite, such as a third option
"What other options is the audience weighing?"
Concession
Granting what is true in another view
"What do they get right?"
Range of formal and informal tasks
From board testimony to a club meeting or a podcast
"What does this task need that another does not?"
Part 2: A historical model. On February 27, 1860, Abraham Lincoln, then a lawyer and former congressman from Illinois, spoke at the Cooper Institute in New York City, a hall now known as Cooper Union. His audience was mostly Northern. He argued that the federal government had the power to keep slavery out of the federal territories, and he spent the last part of the speech answering the charges that Southern leaders made against his Republican Party. Notice that the Southern people he addresses were not in the room: "if they would listen,--as I suppose they will not." Read the first excerpt aloud; paragraphs are numbered for citation. The first worked example below comes from paragraph 3.
1And now, if they would listen,--as I suppose they will not,--I would address a few words to the Southern people.
2I would say to them: You consider yourselves a reasonable and a just people; and I consider that in the general qualities of reason and justice you are not inferior to any other people. Still, when you speak of us Republicans, you do so only to denounce us as reptiles, or, at the best, as no better than outlaws. You will grant a hearing to pirates or murderers, but nothing like it to "Black Republicans." In all your contentions with one another, each of you deems an unconditional condemnation of "Black Republicanism" as the first thing to be attended to. Indeed, such condemnation of us seems to be an indispensable prerequisite--license, so to speak--among you to be admitted or permitted to speak at all. Now, can you or not be prevailed upon to pause and to consider whether this is quite just to us, or even to yourselves? Bring forward your charges and specifications, and then be patient long enough to hear us deny or justify.
3You say we are sectional. We deny it. That makes an issue; and the burden of proof is upon you. You produce your proof; and what is it? Why, that our party has no existence in your section--gets no votes in your section. The fact is substantially true; but does it prove the issue? If it does, then, in case we should, without change of principle, begin to get votes in your section, we should thereby cease to be sectional. You cannot escape this conclusion; and yet, are you willing to abide by it? If you are, you will probably soon find that we have ceased to be sectional, for we shall get votes in your section this very year. You will then begin to discover, as the truth plainly is, that your proof does not touch the issue. The fact that we get no votes in your section is a fact of your making, and not of ours.
4And if there be fault in that fact, that fault is primarily yours, and remains so until you show that we repel you by some wrong principle or practice. If we do repel you by any wrong principle or practice, the fault is ours; but this brings you to where you ought to have started--to a discussion of the right or wrong of our principle. If our principle, put in practice, would wrong your section for the benefit of ours, or for any other object, then our principle, and we with it, are sectional, and are justly opposed and denounced as such. Meet us, then, on the question of whether our principle, put in practice, would wrong your section; and so meet us as if it were possible that something may be said on our side. Do you accept the challenge? No! Then you really believe that the principle which "our fathers who framed the government under which we live" thought so clearly right as to adopt it, and indorse it again and again, upon their official oaths, is in fact so clearly wrong as to demand your condemnation without a moment's consideration.
Abraham Lincoln, Address at Cooper Institute, New York, February 27, 1860 (excerpt 1: four consecutive paragraphs as printed in Speeches and Letters of Abraham Lincoln) (1860; this edition 1912). Public domain (published 1912). Source text.
Part 3: A modern model. Read Model Presentation 1 aloud as testimony: an invented senior's report to an invented school board on a six-week pilot of open-campus lunch for seniors, with invented data. Students mark the perspective in one color, each opposing or alternative view in a second and each answer in a third.
1Good evening, members of the board. I'm Aisha Kamara, senior class representative on the student council. Last spring, the board approved a six-week pilot of open-campus lunch for seniors, and the council was asked to study it. Our position is that open lunch should continue for seniors next year, with the sign-out rule we tested in the last two weeks. I'll give you the benefits, then the problem the pilot revealed, and then how the sign-out rule answers it.
2First, seniors used it. Of our 410 seniors, 312 answered our survey, and 241 of them, more than three in four, said they left campus for lunch at least once a week. The students who stayed noticed a difference too: the food services manager's timings show that the average wait in the cafeteria line fell from 14 minutes to 9.
3Second, the problem. Attendance records show that tardies to fifth period among seniors rose from an average of 14 a day before the pilot to 19 a day during its first four weeks. That is about a third more, and the teachers who raised this concern were right to raise it. A policy that costs class time has to earn its place.
4Third, the answer. In weeks five and six, seniors signed out at the front office, and two tardies meant losing open lunch for a week. Tardies fell to 15 a day, one more than before the pilot. Two weeks is a short test, so we recommend that the board review the numbers again in January.
5Some parents have also asked about safety, because many seniors walk across Harbor Boulevard. We have no reports of an incident during the pilot, but six weeks without one does not prove the crossing is safe. That is why our proposal requires seniors to cross at the signal at Fifth Street, and why we have asked the city about a crossing guard.
6Others have asked why juniors should not have open lunch too. That may be worth studying, but our pilot included only seniors, so we have no evidence about juniors. We are not asking for that tonight.
7To sum up: seniors used open lunch, it shortened the cafeteria line, and it raised tardies until the sign-out rule brought them nearly back down. We ask the board to continue open lunch for seniors with that rule and to review it in January. Thank you. I'm happy to answer questions.
Written for this page (the student, school, pilot, streets and data are invented), Model Presentation 1: Findings on the Open-Lunch Pilot, to the School Board (formal). Original passage written for this page.
The student council's findings on the open-lunch pilot (invented data; the survey of 312 seniors is in paragraph 2)
"You say we are sectional. We deny it. That makes an issue; and the burden of proof is upon you. You produce your proof; and what is it? Why, that our party has no existence in your section--gets no votes in your section. The fact is substantially true; but does it prove the issue?"
Result: Lincoln states the opposing charge in its own words ("sectional": a party of one section only), states his perspective against it in three words, and then treats the opponents' evidence fairly: he grants that the fact is "substantially true" before asking whether it proves the charge. Conceding a true fact makes his answer more credible, and listeners can follow each step because each is a short sentence.
A clear and distinct perspective (Model Presentation 1, paragraph 1)
"Our position is that open lunch should continue for seniors next year, with the sign-out rule we tested in the last two weeks."
Result: The perspective is clear because it is one sentence in the opening. It is distinct because it differs from each position the board may hear: end open lunch, keep it unchanged, or extend it to more grades. Its condition ("with the sign-out rule") already tells listeners that Aisha has heard the objection she will answer in paragraphs 3 and 4.
Answering the opposing perspective with evidence (Model Presentation 1, paragraphs 3 and 4)
"Attendance records show that tardies to fifth period among seniors rose from an average of 14 a day before the pilot to 19 a day [...] That is about a third more." Then: "Tardies fell to 15 a day, one more than before the pilot."
Result: Aisha states the teachers' concern with the data that supports it (19 - 14 = 5, and 5/14 is about 0.36, "about a third more") and says they "were right to raise it." Her response is more evidence, not a dismissal: under the sign-out rule, tardies fell to 15, only 1 above the old average. She then limits her own claim ("Two weeks is a short test") and turns the limit into part of the request, a review in January.
Alternative perspectives and honest limits (Model Presentation 1, paragraphs 5 and 6)
"We have no reports of an incident during the pilot, but six weeks without one does not prove the crossing is safe." "[O]ur pilot included only seniors, so we have no evidence about juniors."
Result: Not every other perspective is opposed. The parents' safety question and the proposal to include juniors are alternatives, and Aisha answers each by saying what her evidence can and cannot show. For safety, she changes the plan (the signal at Fifth Street); for juniors, she declines to claim more than she studied. Both answers keep her perspective distinct and her reasoning inside the evidence.
Formal and informal versions of one perspective (paragraph 1 of Model Presentations 1 and 2)
Board: "Good evening, members of the board [...] Our position is that open lunch should continue for seniors next year." Podcast: "Hey, everyone, it's Aisha from student council [...] Bottom line: I think we can keep it next year, but only if we deal with the tardy problem."
Result: The perspective is the same, and so is its condition. What changes is the task: the board version names its audience formally, uses "our position" and previews three parts, because the board must vote. The podcast version uses contractions and "bottom line," speaks in the first person singular, and puts the condition first, because student listeners care most about what they must do.
Guided Practice20 minutes
Half the groups work on the second Lincoln excerpt below and half on Model Presentation 2, the podcast version of Aisha's findings; then groups pair up to teach each other. Lincoln groups label each paragraph with a move from Diagram 1. Podcast groups list every change from Model Presentation 1 under the four headings of the standard: organization, development, substance and style.
1But you say you are conservative,--eminently conservative,--while we are revolutionary, destructive, or something of the sort.
2What is conservatism? Is it not adherence to the old and tried, against the new and untried? We stick to, contend for, the identical old policy on the point in controversy which was adopted by "our fathers who framed the government under which we live"; while you with one accord reject, and scout, and spit upon that old policy, and insist upon substituting something new.
3True, you disagree among yourselves as to what that substitute shall be. You are divided on new propositions and plans, but you are unanimous in rejecting and denouncing the old policy of the fathers. Some of you are for reviving the foreign slave-trade; some for a Congressional slave-code for the Territories; some for Congress forbidding the Territories to prohibit slavery within their limits; some for maintaining slavery in the Territories through the judiciary; some for the "gur-reat pur-rinciple" that "if one man would enslave another, no third man should object," fantastically called "popular sovereignty"; but never a man among you is in favour of Federal prohibition of slavery in Federal Territories, according to the practice of "our fathers who framed the government under which we live." Not one of all your various plans can show a precedent or an advocate in the century within which our government originated.
4Consider, then, whether your claim for conservatism for yourselves, and your charge of destructiveness against us, are based on the most clear and stable foundations.
5Again, you say we have made the slavery question more prominent than it formerly was. We deny it. We admit that it is more prominent, but we deny that we made it so. It was not we, but you, who discarded the old policy of the fathers. We resisted, and still resist, your innovation; and thence comes the greater prominence of the question. Would you have that question reduced to its former proportions? Go back to that old policy. What has been will be again, under the same conditions. If you would have the peace of the old times, readopt the precepts and policy of the old times.
Abraham Lincoln, Address at Cooper Institute, New York, February 27, 1860 (excerpt 2: five consecutive paragraphs, beginning "But you say you are conservative") (1860; this edition 1912). Public domain (published 1912). Source text.
1Hey, everyone, it's Aisha from student council. Quick update on open lunch, since a lot of you have been asking me about it in the hall. Bottom line: I think we can keep it next year, but only if we deal with the tardy problem. Here's why.
2Good news first. More than three out of four seniors in our survey went off campus at least once a week. And if you stayed on campus, you probably noticed the lunch line got shorter. It went from about 14 minutes to about 9.
3Now the part nobody loves hearing. Fifth-period tardies went up, from about 14 a day to about 19. Teachers noticed, and honestly, they had a point. If we're walking in late, that's a real cost, and it's on us.
4Here's what worked. For the last two weeks, we signed out at the office, and two tardies meant you lost open lunch for a week. Tardies dropped to about 15 a day. That's almost back to normal.
5So my take is this: signing out is the price of keeping open lunch, and it's worth paying. I'm presenting all of this to the school board on the 14th. If you've got questions, find me at the council table at lunch on Thursday. And please, cross at the light on Fifth.
Written for this page (the student, school, podcast and data are invented), Model Presentation 2: The Same Findings on the Student Podcast (informal). Original passage written for this page.
Debrief with four questions. (1) How does Lincoln answer the label "conservative" in paragraph 2 of the second excerpt? He asks "What is conservatism?" and defines it as "adherence to the old and tried, against the new and untried," then argues that his party, not its critics, keeps the founders' policy. Taking over the opponent's own key word is a strong way to address an opposing view, and listeners can follow it because the definition comes first. (2) Is paragraph 3 fair to the other side? Its list of Southern proposals is specific, but "gur-reat pur-rinciple" mocks the way the phrase was spoken, most likely a jab at Senator Stephen A. Douglas, whose "popular sovereignty" let settlers of a territory decide on slavery. The mockery may have pleased a friendly New York crowd; it answers nothing. The argument is the sentence that follows: none of the plans "can show a precedent or an advocate" from the founding era. (3) Which podcast changes are about style, and which about substance? Style: "Hey, everyone," contractions, "honestly," rounded numbers with "about." Substance: the podcast drops the board's formal request and the juniors question, and adds what students should do, find Aisha on Thursday and cross at the light. (4) What stays the same? The perspective, its condition and every number, rounded but not changed (Diagram 2).
Independent Practice15-20 minutes
Students read Model Presentation 3, an invented junior's proposal to the student senate about the library's second floor. It has a clear perspective and some strong moves, and a few weak ones. Students answer quiz questions 1-10 with the transcript open, then questions 11-20, which return to the Lincoln excerpts and to Aisha's two presentations and apply the standard to new situations.
1Thank you, senators. I'm Leo Park, and I'm speaking for the research team from our junior English class. Our perspective is this: the library's second floor should become a group study space, with a smaller quiet zone kept at the back. Here's what we found and why we think the plan is fair to everyone.
2First, the quiet floor is mostly empty. The second floor has 60 seats. We counted the seats in use every period for two school weeks, and on average 11 were filled. The busiest period we saw, fourth period on a Tuesday, had 23.
3Second, group space is full. The first floor has four group study rooms. The librarian's sign-up sheet shows that in those same two weeks, 38 groups asked for a room and were turned away.
4Third, group study is simply better for learning. Everyone knows that students learn more when they work together.
5Now, the strongest objection. Some students told us they come upstairs because it's the only truly silent place in the building, especially before exams. They're right that silence matters, and our plan keeps it: 20 seats at the back would stay a quiet zone, separated from the group tables by the shelves. By our count, that's nearly twice the 11 seats in use on an average period.
6Some people say the whole library will get too loud. Honestly, those people just don't like change.
7So we're asking the senate to recommend this change to the principal, starting after winter break, with a new count in February to check that the quiet zone is big enough.
8To recap: the quiet floor is mostly empty, groups are being turned away, and our plan keeps a quiet zone for the students who need one. Thank you.
Written for this page (the student, school, library and counts are invented), Model Presentation 3: A Proposal for the Library's Second Floor, to the Student Senate. Original passage written for this page.
Closure5 minutes
Exit ticket: "State a perspective you hold on any school issue in one sentence. Then write the strongest objection to it, in words its supporters would accept." Collect the tickets; they become the topics for Activity 3.
Teacher note on the Lincoln excerpts. "Black Republicans" was an insulting name that opponents used for Lincoln's party because of its stand against slavery; Lincoln quotes it in order to object to it. The excerpts speak of slavery as a political question among white voters, and the enslaved people whose lives were at stake are not the speaker's audience. The words are quoted exactly as printed in the 1912 anthology. Lincoln's position in 1860 was to stop the spread of slavery into the territories, not to end it in the states where it existed; students can treat that as part of identifying his perspective precisely.
Homework. Tonight students build a formal and an informal presentation from the research notes below, each with a clear perspective and an answer to the strongest opposing view. The notes are mixed on purpose: some are strong evidence, some are weak, and some do not belong. Show the directions and rubric before students leave.
1Question: Should our school adopt late-start Mondays next year? Classes would begin at 9:00 instead of 8:00 on Mondays, and teachers would meet for planning from 8:00 to 8:50.
2Student survey: 260 students answered in advisory. 198 were in favor, 44 were against, and 18 were unsure.
3Teacher survey: 64 teachers answered. 41 were in favor, 15 were against, and 8 were unsure.
4Parent survey: 120 parents answered. 52 said a 9:00 start on Mondays would make it hard for them to get to work on time.
5The transportation office says Monday bus routes could run one hour later at no added cost.
6Each of the six Monday class periods would be 10 minutes shorter. Over the 36 Mondays in the school year, that is 360 minutes, or 6 hours, per class.
7The library could open at 7:30 on Mondays for students who need to arrive early. The librarian says this would need one staff member for 90 minutes.
8Two teachers who were against the change wrote that the lost class time would hurt courses that end in a big exam.
9A friend's cousin at another school says late start is "the best day of the week."
10The cafeteria's breakfast cart is moving to the courtyard in the spring.
Written for this page (the school, surveys and quotations are invented), Research Notes: Late-Start Mondays (notes for a presentation). Original passage written for this page.
Differentiation Strategies
For Struggling Students
Give students sentence frames for the four moves ("Some argue that ...," "They are right that ...," "But ...," "We cannot yet show ...") and have them fill one set before Activity 1
Before reading Lincoln, gloss "sectional" (a party of one region only), "burden of proof" and "conservative," and restate each paragraph in one plain sentence together
Let students practice the formal version for a partner before the class, with a notecard showing the perspective sentence
For Advanced Students
Read the two paragraphs on Washington's Farewell Address that come between the excerpts in the anthology, and explain how Lincoln turns an opponent's source into support for his own perspective
Find the weakest point an opponent could use against Model Presentation 3, rewrite the presentation to answer it, and deliver the new version in 90 seconds
Compare one answer to an opposing view in a recorded public hearing with Lincoln's pattern, and judge which is fairer to the other side
Assessment Guidance
What to Look For
Strong presentations have a perspective a listener can repeat after one hearing, and it differs from the other positions in the room. The line of reasoning runs from findings to perspective with signposts, and a detour to another view is clearly marked and returns to the main line. Opposing views are stated so that their supporters would accept the wording, true points are conceded, and answers rely on evidence or honest limits. Across tasks, look for changes in organization and style while the perspective and evidence stay fixed. Weak patterns: "some people say" with no real view behind it, answering the weakest objection, and informal versions that drop the evidence.
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Classroom Activities
3 Activities
1
Steelman Swap
15 minPairs
A "steelman" is the strongest fair version of a view you disagree with. Each pair takes a finding card with a perspective. Partner B states the strongest opposing or alternative view, and Partner A may not answer it until A can restate it well enough that B says, "Yes, that's my view."
Finding Cards (invented)
In a two-week count, the school's 3 microwaves had a line of 8 or more students on 7 of 10 days. Perspective: buy 2 more microwaves before buying new cafeteria tables.
In a class poll, 22 of 30 students said they concentrate better with music. Perspective: allow earbuds during independent work, with a one-earbud rule so students can hear the teacher.
The robotics club's records show that 14 of its 20 members joined after seeing the team's demonstration at the fall open house. Perspective: every club should get a table at the open house.
In the five minutes after third period, 310 students used the east stairwell and 90 used the west stairwell. Perspective: make the east stairwell up-only during passing periods.
Procedure
Partner A states the perspective and the finding in 30 seconds
Partner B states the strongest opposing or alternative view; Partner A restates it until B accepts the restatement
Partner A answers in 45 seconds using the four moves in Diagram 1: acknowledge, concede, respond, limit
Partners switch roles with a new card
Discussion Questions
Card 4: what would an alternative perspective be, one that is neither "up-only" nor "leave it alone"?
Did restating the other view change the perspective you ended with? Is that a weakness or a strength?
Variation for Online Classes
Run the swap in breakout rooms, and have Partner B type "accepted" in the chat when the restatement is fair, so the teacher can see which pairs are stuck.
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Formal-to-Informal Ladder
20 minGroups of 3
Groups present Aisha's open-lunch findings for three tasks on the range in Diagram 2, one student per task, and chart what they changed and what they kept.
The Three Tasks
A government class, 2 minutes, semi-formal. Purpose: explain how the pilot was studied as an example of evidence-based school policy.
The senior class council, 1 minute, informal. Purpose: decide who will run the sign-out table next fall.
A hallway conversation, 20 seconds. A sophomore asks, "Wait, are they ending open lunch?"
Procedure
Each student drafts one version, using only facts in Model Presentation 1
The group fills in a two-column chart copied from Diagram 2: what changed and what stayed the same
Each student delivers a version; the group checks that the perspective and the numbers survived, and that the teachers' concern was still treated fairly
Discussion Questions
In the 20-second version, is there room to address the opposing view? What is the shortest fair way to do it?
Which task made it most tempting to drop the teachers' concern, and why would dropping it weaken the perspective?
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Point-Counterpoint Panel
25 minWhole class, presenters, respondents and listeners
Students present findings with a perspective, face one opposing or alternative view from an assigned respondent, and answer it on the spot while the class scores both the presentation and the answer.
Procedure
Presenters use the perspective from their exit ticket, supported by at least two findings they can source (a survey, a count, a document or a published report)
Each presenter has 2 minutes; then a respondent, who has seen the topic but not the script, gives the strongest opposing or alternative view in 30 seconds
The presenter answers in 45 seconds using the moves in Diagram 1
Listeners score three questions on a card: Could I state the perspective? Was the other view stated fairly? Did the answer use evidence or honestly name a limit?
Discussion Questions
Which answers used the "limit" move, and did saying "we don't know yet" make the presenter more or less convincing?
Did any presenter change the perspective after hearing the respondent? Was the new version more distinct or less?
Modification for Large Classes
Run three panels at once, each with its own presenters, respondents and scorers, and have each panel send its best answer to an opposing view to the whole class at the end.
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Diagrams & Visual Aids
2 diagrams
Diagram 1: A Perspective That Answers Other Perspectives
The top row is the presenter's own line of reasoning: a clear and distinct perspective, the findings that support it, and a return to the perspective at the end. The bottom row is the detour SL.11-12.4 requires: when another perspective comes up, acknowledge it fairly, concede what is true in it, respond with evidence, and say honestly what the evidence cannot yet show. Signposts mark the detour so listeners never lose the main line.
Diagram 2: One Set of Findings, a Range of Tasks
SL.11-12.4 asks presenters to fit "a range of formal and informal tasks." The same findings can travel from a hallway conversation to school board testimony. Greeting, length, signposts, rounding and the choice of details change with the task; the perspective, the accuracy of the evidence, a followable line and fair treatment of other views do not.
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Homework Assignment
~30 min
SL.11-12.4 Homework: One Perspective, Two Tasks
Directions: Use the Research Notes on late-start Mondays at the end of the Closure phase of the lesson plan. Cite the notes by paragraph number. Problems 1-4 build a three-minute formal presentation to the school board. Problems 5-6 test your perspective in informal tasks.
Part 1: Perspective and Opposing Views (Problems 1-3)
Write your perspective on late-start Mondays in one sentence. It must be clear and distinct: more precise than "for" or "against," for example with a condition or a limit. Then explain in two sentences how it differs from at least two other positions a board member might hold.
Identify the strongest opposing perspective in the notes and the strongest alternative perspective (one that is not simply the opposite). For each, name the paragraph that supports it and write it in words its supporters would accept.
Write the paragraph of your presentation that addresses the strongest opposing perspective, using the four moves of Diagram 1: acknowledge, concede, respond and limit. Check every number you use against the notes.
Part 2: A Formal and an Informal Task (Problems 4-6)
Write the full three-minute board presentation, about 350 words. State your perspective in the opening, preview the line of reasoning, address the opposing and alternative perspectives, and cut every note that does not serve your purpose. List the notes you cut and why.
Adapt your presentation into a 60-second segment for the student morning video. Keep the perspective and your answer to the strongest opposing view. List one change in organization, one in development or substance and one in style, and explain why each fits the new task.
A parent at the board meeting asks, "Isn't this just a way for teachers to get an hour off?" Write your answer in three or four sentences. It must take the question seriously, answer it with evidence from the notes and keep your perspective.
Rubric
Criterion
Full Credit (2 pts)
Partial Credit (1 pt)
No Credit (0 pts)
Clear and Distinct Perspective
Stated early in one sentence, precise, and different from the other available positions
Present but vague, or only "for" or "against"
No perspective
Line of Reasoning and Evidence
Findings lead to the perspective step by step, with accurate numbers from the notes
Mostly followable, with a gap or an unchecked number
Hard to follow or unsupported
Opposing and Alternative Perspectives
States both fairly, concedes what is true, responds with evidence and names a limit
Addresses one fairly, or both thinly
Ignores or mocks other views
Range of Tasks
The formal and informal versions differ for clear reasons while the perspective and evidence stay the same
The versions differ only in length, or the informal one drops the evidence
Only one version
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Quiz: 20 Questions
Interactive, with answers
Instructions
Questions 1-10 are about Model Presentation 3, the library proposal in the Independent Practice phase of the lesson plan. Questions 11-14 are about the two Lincoln excerpts (Direct Instruction and Guided Practice), questions 18 and 19 compare Aisha's two presentations, and questions 15-17 and 20 apply the standard to new situations. Cite paragraph numbers. Your score updates as you answer, and Reset quiz clears everything so you or your students can try again.
Multiple choice: pick an option to check it. Short answer: write your answer, then reveal the model answer.
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Question 1 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which statement best describes Leo's perspective in Model Presentation 3?
Answer: C
Paragraph 1: "the library's second floor should become a group study space, with a smaller quiet zone kept at the back." The perspective is distinct because it differs from both keeping the floor silent and turning all of it over to groups. Choice A is the opposing view Leo answers in paragraph 5. Choice B overstates his plan, which keeps a quiet zone and never mentions the first floor. Choice D reverses his request in paragraph 7, which asks the senate to act now and count again in February.
Question 2 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which statement accurately describes the evidence in paragraph 2 of Model Presentation 3?
Answer: D
The average was 11 of 60 seats, and 11/60 is about 0.18, which is fewer than one in five (12 of 60). Choice A uses the busiest period, 23 of 60 (about 0.38), as if it were the average. Choice B gives the empty seats, 60 - 11 = 49, as the filled ones. Choice C treats the average as a maximum, though paragraph 2 says the busiest period had 23.
Question 3 of 20 · Multiple Choice
How does paragraph 4 of Model Presentation 3 affect the line of reasoning?
Answer: A
"Group study is simply better for learning. Everyone knows that students learn more when they work together." Leo's findings show demand for group rooms (38 groups turned away), not that group study improves learning, so this step claims more than he found. He could cut it, since paragraphs 2 and 3 carry the argument, or support it with evidence. Choice B mistakes an assertion for evidence. Choice C is wrong because the opposing view comes in paragraph 5. Choice D is wrong because paragraph 4 never mentions the sign-up sheet.
Question 4 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which moves does Leo make in paragraph 5 of Model Presentation 3?
Answer: B
"Some students told us they come upstairs because it's the only truly silent place in the building" states the view fairly; "They're right that silence matters" concedes; the 20-seat quiet zone and "nearly twice the 11 seats in use" respond with a plan and evidence. Choice A is wrong because paragraph 5 attacks no one and never mentions the busiest period; the attack on motives comes in paragraph 6, against a different group. Choice C is wrong because he engages the objection directly. Choice D goes too far: he keeps the proposal and changes it.
Question 5 of 20 · Multiple Choice
An opponent wants to challenge paragraph 5 with a fact from Leo's own presentation. Which fact would do it best?
Answer: D
"[N]early twice the 11 seats" is true of the average (20/11 is about 1.8), but paragraph 2 says the busiest period had 23 students on the quiet floor, 3 more than the proposed quiet zone holds. A strong presenter would address this, and Leo's February count in paragraph 7 only partly does. Choice A and choice B support Leo's side. Choice C describes the method, which strengthens his count.
Question 6 of 20 · Multiple Choice
What is the problem with paragraph 6 of Model Presentation 3?
Answer: B
"Honestly, those people just don't like change" answers a real concern, noise, with a guess about people's motives, and it undoes the fairness of paragraph 5. SL.11-12.4 asks that opposing perspectives be addressed, which means answered, not waved away. Choice A is wrong because paragraph 6 contains no numbers. Choice C reverses the problem. Choice D invents a rule; objections usually come after the findings, as paragraph 5 shows.
Question 7 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which revision of paragraph 6 best fits a formal presentation to the student senate?
Answer: A
Choice A states the concern fairly, answers it with a feature of the plan and adds a way to test it, all in the register of the senate. Choice B keeps the dismissal and makes the style less formal. Choice C says nothing about the plan. Choice D replaces an answer with an assertion that is not true of the group floor Leo is proposing.
Question 8 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Why does Leo place the objection in paragraph 5, after his findings and before his request?
Answer: C
The findings in paragraphs 2 and 3 give listeners the numbers they need to judge the quiet-zone answer (11 seats on average), and the request in paragraph 7 then builds the answer in: "a new count in February to check that the quiet zone is big enough." Choice A is wrong because the request and recap still follow. Choice B misreads paragraph 7, which refers back to the objection. Choice D is wrong because Leo calls it "the strongest objection."
Question 9 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Leo will repeat his findings to a few friends at lunch, an informal task. Which change is appropriate?
Answer: B
An informal task changes organization and style (no "Thank you, senators," a shorter opening), not the perspective or the accuracy of the evidence (Diagram 2). Choice A removes the substance that makes the perspective credible. Choice C gives up a distinct perspective to please the audience. Choice D adds detail no informal listener needs.
Question 10 of 20 · Short Answer
Rewrite paragraph 4 of Model Presentation 3 so that it strengthens Leo's line of reasoning instead of breaking it. You may use only facts from the presentation or say what evidence Leo would need. Then explain your change in one or two sentences.
Model answer: "Third, the demand is real. In two weeks, 38 groups asked for a room and were turned away, and the second floor would give them space without taking any away from students who need silence." Or: cut the claim about learning and say, "We have not measured whether group study improves grades, so we are asking for space because students are requesting it." Explanation: the original claimed a learning benefit that Leo never measured; the revision makes the step rest on his findings (the 38 turned-away groups) or honestly names the limit. Rubric: full credit for a revision that uses only presented evidence or names the missing evidence, plus a reason that mentions the gap; partial credit for a revision that removes "everyone knows" but still claims more than the findings show.
Question 11 of 20 · Multiple Choice
In paragraph 2 of the first Lincoln excerpt, Lincoln says, "Bring forward your charges and specifications, and then be patient long enough to hear us deny or justify." What is he asking of his opponents?
Answer: B
The paragraph complains that opponents will "grant a hearing to pirates or murderers, but nothing like it to 'Black Republicans,'" and then asks for specific charges and patience to hear the reply. He is asking for the conditions of a fair exchange of perspectives, which is what he goes on to model. Choice A reverses him: he invites more debate. Choice C reads "charges and specifications" too literally; no court is mentioned. Choice D is wrong because he asks them to speak, not to be silent.
Question 12 of 20 · Multiple Choice
In paragraph 3 of the first excerpt, Lincoln says that if getting no Southern votes made his party sectional, then "in case we should, without change of principle, begin to get votes in your section, we should thereby cease to be sectional." What does this reasoning show?
Answer: D
Lincoln follows the opponents' reasoning to a result they cannot accept: the same party, with the same principles, would stop being sectional as soon as it won some Southern votes. A test that gives that result does not measure principle, so their proof "does not touch the issue." Choice A contradicts "without change of principle." Choice B contradicts the fact he has just granted, that the party "gets no votes in your section." Choice C misreads "we shall get votes in your section this very year" as a concession, when it is part of his challenge.
Question 13 of 20 · Multiple Choice
In paragraph 4 of the first excerpt, Lincoln says, "Meet us, then, on the question of whether our principle, put in practice, would wrong your section." What is the purpose of this move?
Answer: A
Having shown that the vote count proves nothing, Lincoln names the real question: "a discussion of the right or wrong of our principle." Redirecting an opposing perspective to the issue that matters keeps the line of reasoning on track for listeners. Choice B misreads the conditional ("If our principle [...] would wrong your section") as an admission. Choice C finds a threat that is not in the paragraph. Choice D is wrong because the speech continues, and Lincoln expects that the Southern people will not listen at all.
Question 14 of 20 · Multiple Choice
In the last paragraph of the second excerpt, Lincoln says, "We admit that it is more prominent, but we deny that we made it so." Which move is this?
Answer: B
The charge is that Republicans "have made the slavery question more prominent." Lincoln grants the fact (it is more prominent) and disputes the cause: "It was not we, but you, who discarded the old policy of the fathers." Conceding a true fact while contesting the inference is a fair and strong way to address an opposing view. Choice A ignores "We admit." Choice C describes the paragraphs left out between the excerpts. Choice D is wrong because this paragraph answers the claim rather than attacking anyone's character.
Question 15 of 20 · Multiple Choice
A student has the same findings for three tasks: a five-minute presentation to the school board, a 60-second video for the school's social media and a question-and-answer session with classmates. Which plan fits the 60-second video?
Answer: C
A short, informal task still needs the perspective, one piece of evidence and a fair nod to the other side; the full treatment can live elsewhere. Choice A drops the clear and distinct perspective the standard requires. Choice B keeps formal-task substance and makes it impossible to follow. Choice D keeps the style of the platform and loses the substance.
Question 16 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which opening conveys the clearest and most distinct perspective on these invented findings: in a week-long audit, 58 percent of the cafeteria's trash by weight was food, and 12 percent was recyclable packaging?
Answer: D
Choice D states a position on the findings (start with food waste), makes it distinct from the obvious alternative (more recycling bins) and ties it to the evidence: 58 percent is almost five times 12 percent. Choice A promises "many sides" and takes none. Choice B is a slogan: it mentions lunch trash but proposes nothing the findings could support. Choice C presents data with no perspective at all.
Question 17 of 20 · Multiple Choice
A student argues that the school should replace paper hall passes with a digital pass system. Several classmates worry that the system will track them. Which response addresses that opposing perspective best?
Answer: C
Choice C acknowledges the concern in fair terms, concedes that it is reasonable and responds with facts about the plan and a limit written into it. Choice A dismisses the concern with an insult. Choice B concedes but never responds. Choice D ignores the concern and repeats a reason for the proposal.
Question 18 of 20 · Short Answer
Compare how Aisha presents the tardy finding in paragraph 3 of Model Presentation 1 and paragraph 3 of Model Presentation 2. Name two differences in style or development, and explain why each fits its task.
Model answer: "For the board, Aisha says tardies 'rose from an average of 14 a day before the pilot to 19 a day during its first four weeks' and adds 'about a third more,' because board members will weigh exact figures and need the time frame. On the podcast she says 'from about 14 a day to about 19,' since students need the size of the change, not the method. Her concession changes too: the board hears that teachers 'were right to raise it,' a formal acknowledgment, while students hear 'honestly, they had a point [...] it's on us,' which asks them to own the problem." Rubric: full credit for two accurate, quoted differences, each tied to the purpose or audience of its task; partial credit for differences that are accurate but not explained, or for one difference only.
Question 19 of 20 · Short Answer
Model Presentation 2 leaves out the question about juniors that Aisha answers in paragraph 6 of Model Presentation 1. Was that a good choice for the podcast? Explain in two or three sentences.
Model answer: "Yes, mostly. The podcast's purpose is to tell seniors what they must do to keep open lunch, and the juniors question is a separate proposal Aisha is not making ('our pilot included only seniors, so we have no evidence about juniors'). But juniors hear the podcast too, so one sentence such as 'We only studied seniors, so we're not asking about juniors yet' would address an alternative perspective many listeners hold." A student may also argue that leaving it out is a weakness, if the reason is tied to the podcast's audience. Rubric: full credit for a judgment that names the podcast's purpose and audience and uses paragraph 6; partial credit for a judgment without a reason tied to the task.
Question 20 of 20 · Short Answer
Your findings: in a four-week count, the school's one lunchtime tutoring room was full every day, and on average 17 students a day were turned away at the door. Your perspective: the school should open a second tutoring room at lunch. The strongest opposing view: the tutors' time should go to after-school tutoring instead. Write a four-sentence passage that addresses this view with the four moves in Diagram 1.
Model answer: "Some teachers would rather put the tutors' time into after-school sessions, and they have a point: students who stay late can get longer help than a lunch period allows. But after-school tutoring does not reach the students who are being turned away now, and in our four-week count an average of 17 students a day were sent away from a room that was already full. We did not count how many students would stay after school, so we are not saying lunch tutoring should replace after-school help, only that a second lunch room answers the demand we measured." The first sentence acknowledges, the second concedes, the third responds with the finding and the fourth names a limit. Claims about how many students would use after-school tutoring, or what either option costs, should be marked as needing a source, since the findings do not give them. Rubric: full credit for all four moves in order, the opposing view stated fairly, and no invented numbers; partial credit for three moves, or for a response that dismisses rather than answers.
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Frequently Asked Questions
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What does SL.11-12.4 mean?
SL.11-12.4 asks students in grades 11-12 to present information, findings and supporting evidence that convey a clear and distinct perspective, so that listeners can follow the line of reasoning. The presentation must address alternative or opposing perspectives, and its organization, development, substance and style must suit the purpose, the audience and "a range of formal and informal tasks."
How is SL.11-12.4 different from SL.9-10.4?
SL.9-10.4 asks for findings presented clearly, concisely and logically for one purpose, audience and task. SL.11-12.4 adds three demands: a clear and distinct perspective, an answer to alternative or opposing perspectives, and a range of formal and informal tasks. Students move from reporting findings well to taking and defending a position on them in more than one setting.
What is a "clear and distinct perspective"?
It is a position on the findings that a listener can state after one hearing (clear) and that differs from the other positions in play (distinct). "Open lunch should continue for seniors, with a sign-out rule" is distinct; "open lunch has pros and cons" is not a perspective at all. A distinct perspective often includes a condition or a limit.
How should students address opposing perspectives in a presentation?
State the other view the way its supporters would, grant whatever is true in it, answer it with evidence or a change to the plan, and say honestly what the evidence cannot yet show. Diagram 1 on this page calls these moves acknowledge, concede, respond and limit. Mocking or ignoring the other side does not meet the standard.
Doesn't addressing the other side weaken an argument?
Usually the opposite. Listeners who hold the other view stop listening if it is ignored, and they start listening when it is stated fairly. A concession also makes the rest of the presentation more credible. In the Cooper Union excerpt, Lincoln grants that his party gets no Southern votes ("The fact is substantially true") before showing that the fact does not prove the charge.
What counts as "a range of formal and informal tasks" in SL.11-12.4?
Any presentations that differ in setting and formality: testimony to a school board or city council, a class presentation, a club meeting, a podcast or video segment, an interview, or a quick explanation to a classmate. Students show the range by presenting the same findings in more than one of these, keeping the perspective and evidence while changing organization and style.
Why use Lincoln's Cooper Union address for SL.11-12.4?
In the second half of the address, Lincoln takes the charges made against his party one at a time ("You say we are sectional," "you say you are conservative") and answers each, often by conceding a fact and disputing the conclusion drawn from it. The speech is often credited with helping Lincoln win the Republican nomination for president later in 1860. Students should also notice where he mocks rather than answers.
Is SL.11-12.4 just persuasive speaking?
No. The standard begins with "information, findings, and supporting evidence," so the perspective has to grow out of what the speaker found. A presentation of research findings with a recommendation, like the open-lunch testimony on this page, meets it as well as a persuasive speech does, and often better, because its evidence can be checked.
How is SL.11-12.4 related to writing arguments in W.11-12.1?
W.11-12.1 asks writers to develop claims and counterclaims fairly and thoroughly, which is the written form of addressing opposing perspectives. A spoken presentation has a harder job, because listeners hear each sentence once, so the presenter needs a clearer perspective sentence, more signposts and shorter concessions than an essay would.
How can SL.11-12.4 be assessed in an online class?
Students can record a formal presentation and an informal version of the same findings, and answer one opposing view live in a video meeting or in a recorded reply. Assess the perspective, the line of reasoning, the fairness of the answer to the other view and the differences between the formal and informal versions, using a rubric like the one in the homework.
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Related Standards
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These standards connect to SL.11-12.4: prerequisites to review first, parallel standards at the same level, and next steps that build on it.
Before this lesson
SL.9-10.4Prerequisite
Present findings and evidence clearly, concisely and logically for a task