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RST.6-8.6Common CoreELALiteracy in Science and Technical SubjectsGrades 6-8

RST.6-8.6: Author's Purpose in Science Explanations, Procedures and Experiments

In plain English: RST.6-8.6 is the Common Core grades 6-8 literacy standard that asks students to analyze why a science or technical author provides an explanation, describes a procedure or discusses an experiment. Students explain what that part does for the reader, such as making a result make sense, letting others repeat the work or showing that a test was fair. It is usually taught in middle school science.

Analyze the author's purpose in providing an explanation, describing a procedure, or discussing an experiment in a text.

Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts & Literacy · Domain: Reading Standards for Literacy in Science and Technical Subjects 6-12 · Cluster: Craft and Structure · Official standard

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Lesson Plan

55-65 min

Overview

Students learn to analyze why a science author includes an explanation, a procedure or the account of an experiment, and what each part does for the reader: help the reader understand, let others repeat the work, show that a test is fair, or answer a question with evidence. The main text is the chapter "Experiments" from Jean-Henri Fabre's The Mason-Bees (translated 1914), in which Fabre criticizes an older experiment, designs a better one with paper walls, explains why strong bees die behind a thin paper cone, and describes how he carried bees miles from home to see whether they could find their nests.

The teacher models with Fabre's critique of Duhamel's experiment (Passage 1) and his procedure for carrying and marking bees (Passage 2). Pairs analyze his reed-cell experiment (Passage 3). Students work alone on the two-nest experiment (Passage 4), Fabre's explanation of it (Passage 5) and a modern explanation written for this page (Passage 6). The homework uses his first homing trials (Passage 7). No one in the lesson handles bees.

Learning Objectives

By the end of this lesson, students will be able to:

  • Tell whether a passage, or part of one, explains, describes a procedure or discusses an experiment
  • State the author's purpose for including an explanation and support it with words from the text
  • Explain the purpose of the steps and precautions in a described procedure
  • Analyze why an author discusses an experiment, including its design, its results and what the author infers from them

Prior Knowledge Required

Students should already be comfortable with:

  • Explaining procedures and ideas in a scientific text, including what happened and why RI.4.3
  • Citing textual evidence from science and technical texts RST.6-8.1
  • Knowing that a fair test changes one thing and keeps the others the same
  • Knowing that insects have a head, a thorax and an abdomen

Lesson Procedure

55-65 minutes of class time across 5 phases.

  1. Warm-Up5-10 minutes

    Project the three short notes from a bread-baking blog. Give pairs two minutes to answer the question under them.

    Warm-Up Prompt

    Note A: "Yeast is a tiny living thing. It feeds on sugar in the dough and gives off a gas, and the bubbles of gas make the dough puff up." Note B: "Stir the yeast into warm water, not hot water, and wait 10 minutes before you add the flour." Note C: "We made two bowls of the same dough. One sat in a warm kitchen and one in the refrigerator. After an hour, only the warm dough had doubled in size." Which note explains, which gives a procedure, and which discusses an experiment? Why would the writer include each one?

    Take answers. Note A is an explanation: it tells why dough rises, so a baker understands what is happening. Note B is a procedure: it gives steps, and "not hot water" is there to keep the reader from making a mistake (very hot water kills yeast). Note C discusses an experiment: two bowls that differ in one way, and a result that shows warmth matters. Tell students that RST.6-8.6 asks them to do this with science texts: analyze the author's purpose, the reason an author includes an explanation, a procedure or the account of an experiment, and what that part does for the reader.

  2. Direct Instruction15 minutes

    Part 1: Words for talking about purpose. Keep this table up for the whole lesson.

    Words for analyzing an author's purpose in a science text
    TermWhat it meansA question to ask
    Author's purposeThe reason an author includes a part of a text: what the author wants that part to do for the readerWhy is this here?
    ExplanationA part that tells how or why something happensWhat is the author helping me understand?
    ProcedureA part that gives the steps for doing something, often with the reasons for the stepsCould I repeat this? Why this step?
    ExperimentA test that a scientist sets up on purpose to answer a questionWhat question is being tested?
    PrecautionA step taken to prevent harm or a mistakeWhat could go wrong without it?
    ResultWhat actually happened in a testWhat did the author see or measure?
    InferenceA conclusion reasoned out from evidenceWhat does the author decide the result means?

    Part 2: Model with Passages 1 and 2. Jean-Henri Fabre (1823-1915) was a French teacher and scientist who spent his life watching insects. The Mason-bee of the Walls builds a hard nest of mud on a stone. Each cell holds one young bee, which spends the winter inside and in spring chews its way out through the mud. Before Fabre, the French scientist Reaumur reported a test by his friend Duhamel: a nest was put inside a glass funnel whose mouth was covered with a piece of gauze. The bees chewed through the hard mud but never cut the gauze, and they died under the glass. Reaumur concluded that insects know only how to do what they do in nature. Passage 1 is Fabre's reply. Passage 2 comes later in the chapter, where Fabre starts testing whether bees carried far away can find their nests. Words to know for Passage 1: gauze (thin, loose cloth), navvy (a laborer who digs), earthen dome (the mud cap of the nest), deliverance (escape), futile (useless), obstinacy (stubbornness), renewed (done again), stout (strong), partition (a thin wall), mandibles (an insect's jaws), membrane (a thin sheet). For Passage 2: Cerceris-wasps (wasps Fabre had tested the same way), maim (injure), forceps and pincers (tools like tweezers), screw of paper (a twist of paper), botanizing-case (a tin box for carrying plants), gum arabic (a natural glue), fleece (the bee's fuzzy hair), abdomen (the rear part of an insect's body), thorax (the middle part, where the wings attach). Diagram 1 shows the three kinds of passage. Passage 2 is a procedure to read and analyze, not to carry out: no one in this lesson catches, marks or handles bees.

    The experiment does not satisfy me, for two reasons: first, to ask workers equipped with tools for cutting clay as hard as granite to cut a piece of gauze does not strike me as a happy inspiration; you cannot expect a navvy's pick-axe to do the same work as a dressmaker's scissors. Secondly, the transparent glass prison seems to me ill-chosen. As soon as the insect has made a passage through the thickness of its earthen dome, it finds itself in broad daylight; and to it daylight means the final deliverance, means liberty. It strikes against an invisible obstacle, the glass; and to it glass is nothing at all and yet an obstruction. On the far side, it sees free space, bathed in sunshine. It wears itself out in efforts to fly there, unable to understand the futile nature of its attempts against that strange barrier which it cannot see. It perishes, at last, of exhaustion, without, in its obstinacy, giving a glance at the gauze closing the conical chimney. The experiment must be renewed under better conditions.

    The obstacle which I select is ordinary brown paper, stout enough to keep the insect in the dark and thin enough not to offer serious resistance to the prisoner's efforts. As there is a great difference, in so far as the actual nature of the barrier is concerned, between a paper partition and a clay ceiling, let us begin by enquiring if the Mason-bee of the Walls knows how or rather is able to make her way through one of these partitions. The mandibles are pickaxes suitable for breaking through hard mortar: are they also scissors capable of cutting a thin membrane? This is the point to look into first of all.

    Jean-Henri Fabre, translated by Alexander Teixeira de Mattos, The Mason-Bees, chapter II, "Experiments" (Passage 1: a better test than Duhamel's) (1879; this edition 1914). Public domain (published 1914). Source text.

    To come to facts: it is a matter of repeating with the Mason-bee of the Walls my former experiments with the Cerceris-wasps (Cf. "Insect Life": chapter 19.--Translator's Note.), of carrying the insect, in the dark, a long way from its nest, marking it and then leaving it to its own resources. In case any one should wish to try the experiment for himself, I make him a present of my manner of operation, which may save him time at the outset. The insect intended for a long journey must obviously be handled with certain precautions. There must be no forceps employed, no pincers, which might maim a wing, strain it and weaken the power of flight. While the Bee is in her cell, absorbed in her work, I place a small glass test-tube over it. The Mason, when she flies away, rushes into the tube, which enables me, without touching her, to transfer her at once into a screw of paper. This I quickly close. A tin box, an ordinary botanizing-case, serves to convey the prisoners, each in her separate paper bag.

    The most delicate business, that of marking each captive before setting her free, is left to be done on the spot selected for the starting-point. I use finely-powdered chalk, steeped in a strong solution of gum arabic. The mixture, applied to some part of the insect with a straw, leaves a white patch, which soon dries and adheres to the fleece. When a particular Mason-bee has to be marked so as to distinguish her from another in short experiments, such as I shall describe presently, I confine myself to touching the tip of the abdomen with my straw while the insect is half in the cell, head downwards. The slight touch is not noticed by the Bee, who continues her work quite undisturbed; but the mark is not very deep and moreover it is in a rather bad place for any prolonged experiment, for the Bee is constantly brushing her belly to detach the pollen and is sure to rub it off sooner or later. I therefore make another one, dropping the sticky chalk right in the middle of the thorax, between the wings.

    Jean-Henri Fabre, translated by Alexander Teixeira de Mattos, The Mason-Bees, chapter II, "Experiments" (Passage 2: how to carry and mark a bee) (1879; this edition 1914). Public domain (published 1914). Source text.
    • Purpose of discussing another scientist's experiment

      Passage 1, paragraph 1. Why does Fabre discuss Duhamel's experiment instead of simply describing his own?

      Result: To show that the old result does not prove what Reaumur thought, and so to justify a new test. Fabre names "two reasons": jaws made for mud are the wrong tool for cloth ("you cannot expect a navvy's pick-axe to do the same work as a dressmaker's scissors"), and the clear glass tricks the bee, which sees daylight and "wears itself out in efforts to fly there." His last sentence states the purpose: "The experiment must be renewed under better conditions."

    • Purpose of explaining a choice of materials

      Passage 1, paragraph 2. Why does Fabre explain why he chose brown paper, and what does he want to find out first?

      Result: Each property of the paper answers one of Duhamel's flaws: it is "stout enough to keep the insect in the dark" (no daylight to fool the bee) and "thin enough not to offer serious resistance." Explaining the choice shows the reader the new test is fair. He then names the first question: are the mandibles "also scissors capable of cutting a thin membrane? This is the point to look into first of all."

    • Purpose of describing a procedure in detail

      Passage 2. Why does Fabre give so many small steps for catching, carrying and marking a bee?

      Result: He states one purpose: "In case any one should wish to try the experiment for himself, I make him a present of my manner of operation, which may save him time at the outset." The details let others repeat the test. Many steps also carry a reason, which is a second purpose: to keep the bee able to fly home, so a failure to return is not caused by the handling. "There must be no forceps employed, no pincers, which might maim a wing." A mark on the abdomen gets rubbed off, so he marks the thorax instead.

  3. Guided Practice15 minutes

    Pairs read Passage 3, which follows Passage 1 in the chapter. Words to know: perfect state (adult form), cocoons (silk cases the young bees rest in), node (the solid joint of a reed stem), stopper (a plug), sorghum (a tall grass with soft pith inside its stem), bell-glass (a glass cover shaped like a bell), perforated (pierced with a hole), orifice (an opening), impediment (an obstacle), incapacity (not being able). Pairs mark each sentence P (procedure) or E (experiment result), then decide why Fabre ran this test before any other.

    In February, by which time the insect is in its perfect state, I take a certain number of cocoons, without damaging them, from their cells and insert them each in a separate stump of reed, closed at one end by the natural wall of the node and open at the other. These pieces of reed represent the cells of the nest. The cocoons are introduced with the insect's head turned towards the opening. Lastly, my artificial cells are closed in different ways. Some receive a stopper of kneaded clay, which, when dry, will correspond in thickness and consistency with the mortar ceiling of the natural nest. Others are plugged with a cylinder of sorghum, at least a centimetre (.39 inch--Translator's Note.) thick; and the remainder with a disk of brown paper solidly fastened by the edge. All these bits of reed are placed side by side in a box, standing upright, with the roof of my making at the top. The insects, therefore, are in the exact position which they occupied in the nest. To open a passage, they must do what they would have done without my interference, they must break through the wall situated above their heads. I shelter the whole under a wide bell-glass and wait for the month of May, the period of the deliverance.

    The results far exceed my anticipations. The clay stopper, the work of my fingers, is perforated with a round hole, differing in no wise from that which the Mason-bee contrives through her native mortar dome. The vegetable barrier, new to my prisoners, namely, the sorghum cylinder, also opens with a neat orifice, which might have been the work of a punch. Lastly, the brown-paper cover allows the Bee to make her exit not by bursting through, by making a violent rent, but once more by a clearly defined round hole. My Bees therefore are capable of a task for which they were not born; to come out of their reed cells they do what probably none of their race did before them; they perforate the wall of sorghum-pith, they make a hole in the paper barrier, just as they would have pierced their natural clay ceiling. When the moment comes to free themselves, the nature of the impediment does not stop them, provided that it be not beyond their strength; and henceforth the argument of incapacity cannot be raised when a mere paper barrier is in question.

    Jean-Henri Fabre, translated by Alexander Teixeira de Mattos, The Mason-Bees, chapter II, "Experiments" (Passage 3: the reed cells) (1879; this edition 1914). Public domain (published 1914). Source text.
    • Why an experiment comes first

      Pairs explain the purpose of the reed-cell experiment in Passage 3 and why Fabre ran it before his main test.

      Result: The reed cells test one thing only: can the bee cut a barrier that is not mud? Paragraph 1 is the procedure: the cocoons go into reeds "with the insect's head turned towards the opening," closed with clay, sorghum or paper, so the bees are "in the exact position which they occupied in the nest." Paragraph 2 gives the results: a round hole in the clay, in the sorghum and in the paper. The purpose is to rule out one explanation before the main test: "henceforth the argument of incapacity cannot be raised when a mere paper barrier is in question." If bees later fail to cut paper, weak jaws cannot be the reason.

    Debrief: Why does Fabre put the reeds "standing upright, with the roof of my making at the top"? (So the only new thing is the material of the lid; everything else is as in the real nest.) Then start Activities 1-3.

  4. Independent Practice15-20 minutes

    Students read Passages 4, 5 and 6 on their own and answer quiz questions 1-20. Passage 4 follows Passage 3 in the chapter, and Passage 5 follows Passage 4. Passage 6 is a modern explanation written for this page. Words to know: intervening (in between), enclosures (walls around something), inferences (conclusions reasoned from evidence), suicidal inaction (doing nothing, which leads to death), well-endowed (well supplied), metamorphosis (the change from young insect to adult), proviso (condition), stimulus (an inner push to act), emergence (coming out), abode (home), destined (meant), instinct (a behavior an animal is born able to do).

    In addition to the cells made out of bits of reed, I put under the bell-glass, at the same time, two nests which are intact and still resting on their pebbles. To one of them I have attached a sheet of brown paper pressed close against the mortar dome. In order to come out, the insect will have to pierce first the dome and then the paper, which follows without any intervening space. Over the other, I have placed a little brown paper cone, gummed to the pebble. There is here, therefore, as in the first case, a double wall--a clay partition and a paper partition--with this difference, that the two walls do not come immediately after each other, but are separated by an empty space of about a centimetre at the bottom, increasing as the cone rises.

    The results of these two experiments are quite different. The Bees in the nest to which a sheet of paper was tightly stuck come out by piercing the two enclosures, of which the outer wall, the paper wrapper, is perforated with a very clean round hole, as we have already seen in the reed cells closed with a lid of the same material. We thus become aware, for the second time, that, when the Mason-bee is stopped by a paper barrier, the reason is not her incapacity to overcome the obstacle. On the other hand, the occupants of the nest covered with the cone, after making their way through the earthen dome, finding the sheet of paper at some distance, do not even try to perforate this obstacle, which they would have conquered so easily had it been fastened to the nest. They die under the cover without making any attempt to escape. Even so did Reaumur's Bees perish in the glass funnel, where their liberty depended only upon their cutting through a bit of gauze.

    Jean-Henri Fabre, translated by Alexander Teixeira de Mattos, The Mason-Bees, chapter II, "Experiments" (Passage 4: two nests, two paper walls) (1879; this edition 1914). Public domain (published 1914). Source text.

    This fact strikes me as rich in inferences. What! Here are sturdy insects, to whom boring through granite is mere play, to whom a stopper of soft wood and a paper partition are walls quite easy to perforate despite the novelty of the material; and yet these vigorous housebreakers allow themselves to perish stupidly in the prison of a paper bag, which they could have torn open with one stroke of their mandibles! They are capable of tearing it, but they do not dream of doing so! There can be only one explanation of this suicidal inaction. The insect is well-endowed with tools and instinctive faculties for accomplishing the final act of its metamorphosis, namely, the act of emerging from the cocoon and from the cell. [...] Moreover--and this is an important proviso, except for which the outfit would be useless--it has, I will not say the will to use those tools, but a secret stimulus inviting it to employ them. When the hour for the emergence arrives, this stimulus is aroused and the insect sets to work to bore a passage. It little cares in this case whether the material to be pierced be the natural mortar, sorghum-pith, or paper: the lid that holds it imprisoned does not resist for long. Nor even does it care if the obstacle be increased in thickness and a paper wall be added outside the wall of clay: the two barriers, with no interval between them, form but one to the Bee, who passes through them because the act of getting out is still one act and one only. With the paper cone, whose wall is a little way off, the conditions are changed, though the total thickness of wall is really the same. Once outside its earthen abode, the insect has done all that it was destined to do in order to release itself; to move freely on the mortar dome represents to it the end of the release, the end of the act of boring. Around the nest a new barrier appears, the wall made by the paper bag; but, in order to pierce this, the insect would have to repeat the act which it has just accomplished, the act which it is not intended to perform more than once in its life; it would, in short, have to make into a double act that which by nature is a single one; and the insect cannot do this, for the sole reason that it has not the wish to. The Mason-bee perishes for lack of the smallest gleam of intelligence. [...]

    Jean-Henri Fabre, translated by Alexander Teixeira de Mattos, The Mason-Bees, chapter II, "Experiments" (Passage 5: Fabre's explanation; two cuts marked [...]) (1879; this edition 1914). Public domain (published 1914). Source text.

    Jean-Henri Fabre ran his mason bee experiments in the south of France in the 1870s. Scientists still read his reports, partly because he described his procedures so carefully that others could repeat them. This passage explains how scientists today understand two of his results.

    The first result is the paper cone. A mason bee spends the winter as an adult inside its mud cell. In spring it chews its way up through the mud cap. No one teaches it how: this is an instinct, a behavior an animal is born able to do. Many instincts work like a chain of steps. Each step starts the next one, and a step that is finished is not usually repeated. Once Fabre's bees were out of their cells, the chewing-out step of the chain was over, so a second wall a centimeter away did not start it again. Scientists today explain this result in much the same way Fabre did, although they no longer use his phrase "a secret stimulus."

    The second result is the trip home. Many bees learn the look of the land around their nest. On their first flights they circle in widening loops, facing back toward the nest, as if taking pictures of the place. Honeybees, and probably many other bees, can also use the position of the sun as a compass. A bee let go in a strange place may fly around until it sees landmarks it knows, and then head straight home. How Fabre's bees found their way back from two and a half miles away is still not fully explained. Fabre thought it was "certainly not memory." Scientists today think learned landmarks are part of the answer, but not all of it.

    Some of Fabre's bees died or were hurt in his experiments. Scientists who study insects today try to use as few animals as they can and to harm none. Bees in a school garden are for watching, not for catching.

    Written for this page, How Scientists Explain Fabre's Mason Bees Today (Passage 6, a modern explanation). Original passage written for this page.
  5. Closure5 minutes

    Exit ticket: "Choose one passage from today. Write one sentence: 'The author [explains / describes a procedure for / discusses an experiment on] ___ in order to ___.' Then quote the words that show the purpose." Sort the tickets into "purpose stated and supported," "retells the passage without a purpose" and "purpose not supported by the text."

    Teacher note on the science, the animals and the language. Fabre's observations are careful, and scientists today explain the paper-cone result much as he did: getting out of the cell is an instinct, and the bee does not repeat a finished step (Passage 6). How bees find their way home is still studied; landmarks learned on early flights and the sun's position are part of the answer, and Fabre's "certainly not memory" goes further than today's evidence. Today these bees are placed in the genus Megachile, with Chalicodoma kept as a subgroup: the Mason-bee of the Walls (Chalicodoma muraria) is now Megachile parietina, and C. sicula is Megachile sicula. Fabre's experiments killed and injured bees; say so plainly, and do not repeat them. Students should watch bees only from a distance and never catch or handle them, and any student allergic to stings should stay away from nests. The passages keep the words of the 1914 translation ("navvy," "vigour") and Fabre's strong opinions as published; the cut at the end of Passage 5 removes two sentences in which he argues against the idea that insects share "a germ of human reason."

    Homework passage. Passage 7 comes after Passage 2 in the chapter. Fabre has carried two bees, and then five, about two and a half miles (about 4 km) from their nests and let them go. Words to know: fully established (proved), faculty (an ability), vigour (strength), articulation (a joint), maimed (injured), aviators (fliers), sainfoin (a pink-flowered field plant), reckoning (count), requisite (needed), colony (group of nests), Chalicodoma sicula (a smaller kind of mason bee), C. muraria (the Mason-bee of the Walls), populous (crowded).

    It is therefore fully established that the Mason-bee of the Walls, carried to a distance of two and a half miles and released at a place which she has certainly never seen before, is able to return to the nest. But why do first one out of two and then two out of five fail to join their fellows? What one can do cannot another do? Is there a difference in the faculty that guides them over unknown ground? Or is it not rather a difference in flying-power? I remember that my Bees did not all start off with the same vigour. Some were hardly out of my fingers before they darted furiously into the air, where I at once lost sight of them, whereas the others came dropping down a few yards away from me, after a short flight. The latter, it seems certain, must have suffered on the journey, perhaps from the heat concentrated in the furnace of my box. Or I may have hurt the articulation of the wings in marking them, an operation difficult to perform when you are guarding against stings. These are maimed, feeble creatures, who will linger in the sainfoin-fields close by, and not the powerful aviators required by the journey.

    The experiment must be tried again, taking count only of the Bees who start off straight from between my fingers with a clean, vigorous flight. The waverers, the laggards who stop almost at once on some bush shall be left out of the reckoning. Moreover, I will do my best to estimate the time taken in returning to the nest. For an experiment of this kind, I need plenty of subjects, as the weak and the maimed, of whom there may be many, are to be disregarded. The Mason-bee of the Walls is unable to supply me with the requisite number: there are not enough of her; and I am anxious not to interfere too much with the little Aygues-side colony, for whom I have other experiments in view. Fortunately, I have at my own place, under the eaves of a shed, a magnificent nest of Chalicodoma sicula in full activity. I can draw to whatever extent I please on the populous city. The insect is small, less than half the size of C. muraria, but no matter: it will deserve all the more credit if it can traverse the two miles and a half in store for it and find its way back to the nest. I take forty Bees, isolating them, as usual, in screws of paper.

    Jean-Henri Fabre, translated by Alexander Teixeira de Mattos, The Mason-Bees, chapter II, "Experiments" (Passage 7: the first homing trials) (1879; this edition 1914). Public domain (published 1914). Source text.

Differentiation Strategies

For Struggling Students

  • Give the frame "The author ___ (explains / describes / discusses) ___ so that the reader ___" for every answer
  • Have students mark each sentence of a passage E (explains), P (procedure) or X (experiment) before answering questions
  • Read Passage 6 first, so students know the science before reading Fabre's older English

For Advanced Students

  • Compare Fabre's purpose in Passage 5 with the purpose of Passage 6, and decide which one argues and which one only explains
  • Rewrite Passage 2 as a modern numbered procedure with a one-sentence purpose at the top, and decide which of Fabre's reasons a modern reader still needs
  • Design, on paper only, a test that could tell whether a bee uses landmarks or the sun to find home

Assessment Guidance

What to Look For

Strong answers name the kind of passage, state a purpose in terms of the reader (so that the reader can repeat, understand or trust something), and quote the words that show it. Watch for students who retell what happened instead of why the author tells it, who say every purpose is "to inform," who miss that one detail (such as the cocoons placed head toward the opening, or the reeds standing upright) is there to make a test fair, or who treat Fabre's opinions as measured results.

02

Classroom Activities

3 Activities

1

Explain, Procedure or Experiment?

15 minPairs

Pairs sort 8 sentence cards from Passages 1-3 into three piles: explains, procedure and discusses an experiment. On the back of each card they write the purpose the sentence serves for the reader.

The 8 Sentence Cards

  1. "you cannot expect a navvy's pick-axe to do the same work as a dressmaker's scissors" (Passage 1)
  2. "It strikes against an invisible obstacle, the glass; and to it glass is nothing at all and yet an obstruction." (Passage 1)
  3. "The experiment must be renewed under better conditions." (Passage 1)
  4. "I use finely-powdered chalk, steeped in a strong solution of gum arabic." (Passage 2)
  5. "There must be no forceps employed, no pincers, which might maim a wing" (Passage 2)
  6. "The cocoons are introduced with the insect's head turned towards the opening." (Passage 3)
  7. "The results far exceed my anticipations." (Passage 3)
  8. "My Bees therefore are capable of a task for which they were not born" (Passage 3)

Teacher Key

  • Explains: cards 1 and 2 (why Duhamel's bees failed: the wrong tool, and glass the bee cannot see)
  • Procedure: cards 4, 5 and 6 (how to mark a bee, how to handle it safely, how to place the cocoons as in the real nest)
  • Discusses an experiment: cards 3, 7 and 8 (the call for a better test, the results, and what they show)
  • Accept card 5 in "explains" too if the pair points to the reason it gives ("which might maim a wing").

Discussion Questions

  • Which card was hardest to place? What does that tell you about how explanations, procedures and experiments mix in real science writing?
  • Card 8 is a conclusion. Why does it belong with the experiment and not with the procedure?
2

Every Step Has a Reason

15 minGroups of 3

Groups make a three-column chart for Passage 2: the step, Fabre's reason (stated or implied) and what could go wrong without it. Diagram 2 shows the steps in order.

Roles and Procedure

  • Reader reads Passage 2 one sentence at a time; step finder names each step; reason finder finds or infers the reason; all three agree on what could go wrong
  • Mark each reason S (stated in the text) or I (inferred)

Teacher Key

  • Glass tube over the working bee: she flies into it, so Fabre never has to grab her (S: forceps "might maim a wing")
  • A separate screw of paper for each bee: the bees travel "in the dark" and apart (I: they cannot see the route or hurt one another)
  • Tin box: carries the prisoners safely (I)
  • Mark at the release spot, with chalk in gum arabic: the patch "soon dries and adheres to the fleece" (S)
  • Mark on the thorax, not the abdomen: the bee is "sure to rub it off sooner or later" from the abdomen (S)

Discussion Questions

  • Fabre says the details "may save him time at the outset." Which step would save another scientist the most trouble?
  • Why does a homing test need a mark that lasts?
3

Rewrite It as a Modern Procedure

10-15 minIndividual, then pairs

Students rewrite paragraph 1 of Passage 3 (the reed cells) as a numbered procedure with a one-sentence purpose at the top. Pairs compare versions and decide which of Fabre's reasons a modern procedure should keep.

Procedure

  • Write a purpose sentence: "Purpose: To test whether ___."
  • Turn each action in paragraph 1 into one numbered step, in order
  • Underline any step whose reason you kept, and put the reason in parentheses
  • With a partner, find one reason that, if cut, would let a reader make a mistake

Sample Answer

  • Purpose: To test whether mason bees can chew out through lids made of materials other than their own mud.
  • 1. In February, remove cocoons from their cells without damaging them. 2. Put each cocoon in a piece of reed, head toward the open end. 3. Close some reeds with dried clay, some with sorghum pith at least 1 cm thick and some with brown paper. 4. Stand the reeds upright in a box, lids on top (so the bees are in their natural position). 5. Cover everything with a bell-glass. 6. Wait until May and record how each bee gets out.
  • Reason worth keeping: "head turned towards the opening"; without it a bee might face the closed end and the test would fail for the wrong reason.

Discussion Questions

  • Modern procedures often leave out the reasons for steps. What does a reader lose?
  • Which is easier to follow, your version or Fabre's? Which is easier to trust? Why?

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Diagrams & Visual Aids

2 diagrams

Diagram 1: Three Kinds of Passage and Their Purposes

Three kinds of passage and the purpose behind each EXPLANATION WHAT IT DOES Tells how or why something happens WHY AN AUTHOR USES IT Purpose: make a result or an idea make sense EXAMPLE IN FABRE Passage 1: why a pick-axe is not scissors PROCEDURE WHAT IT DOES Gives the steps for doing something WHY AN AUTHOR USES IT Purpose: let others repeat it and avoid mistakes EXAMPLE IN FABRE Passage 2: carrying and marking a bee EXPERIMENT WHAT IT DOES Reports a test: the setup, the results, what they show WHY AN AUTHOR USES IT Purpose: answer a question with evidence EXAMPLE IN FABRE Passage 3: the reed cells and their three lids Ask of any passage: what does it do, and why did the author include it here?
For the Direct Instruction phase and Activity 1. An explanation, a procedure and the account of an experiment each do a different job for the reader. Real science writing often mixes them in one paragraph, so ask of each part: what does it do, and why is it here?

Diagram 2: Fabre's Procedure for a Homing Trial

Fabre's procedure for a homing trial (Passage 2) 1 Glass tube over the working bee 2 Bee flies into the tube: no tweezers touch her 3 Into a closed twist of paper, one bee each 4 Carried in a tin box to the release place 5 White chalk and gum on the thorax 6 Released far away; watched for at the nest Each step keeps the bee unhurt or makes her easy to recognize when she comes home.
For Example 3 and Activity 2. The six steps of Passage 2 in order. Steps 1-3 keep the bee from being hurt and from seeing the route; step 5 makes her easy to recognize when she comes back.

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Homework Assignment

~30 min

RST.6-8.6 Homework: Why Fabre Tried Again

Directions: Read Passage 7 at the end of the lesson plan (in Closure). Its paragraphs are numbered. Answer in complete sentences and quote the passage to support each answer.

Part 1: What the First Trials Showed (Problems 1-2)

  1. What does Fabre say is "fully established" at the start of paragraph 1? Using the numbers in paragraph 1, tell how many bees in all came back from the two trials, out of how many.
  2. Right after that claim, Fabre asks four questions. What is his purpose in asking them before he describes his next experiment?

Part 2: Explaining the Missing Bees (Problems 3-4)

  1. Fabre gives two possible reasons why some bees did not come back. Name both, quote the words for each, and explain which kind of reason (a difference in the bees or a problem with his procedure) he thinks is more likely.
  2. Why does Fabre describe how the bees flew off when released ("darted furiously into the air" or "came dropping down a few yards away")? What does this detail let him do in the next experiment?

Part 3: The New Plan (Problems 5-6)

  1. In paragraph 2, Fabre changes his experiment in three ways. List the three changes and give the purpose of each.
  2. Fabre switches to a smaller bee and says it "will deserve all the more credit" if it finds its way home. Explain what he means, and write one sentence stating the purpose of Passage 7 as a whole.

Rubric

CriterionFull Credit (2 pts)Partial Credit (1 pt)No Credit (0 pts)
Author's PurposeStates why Fabre discusses the failures and plans a new test, in terms of what the reader learns or can trustNames a purpose that is too general ("to inform")Retells events with no purpose
Procedure and ReasonsLinks each change in the plan to the problem it fixesLists the changes without their purposesChanges missing or wrong
AccuracyNumbers and reasons match the passageOne number or reason is offSeveral statements the passage does not support
Use of the TextExact quotations with paragraph numbersParaphrase where a quotation is asked forNo citations

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Quiz: 20 Questions

Interactive, with answers

Instructions

Questions 1-4 and 19 use Passage 4 (the two-nest experiment), questions 5-10 and 16 use Passage 5 (Fabre's explanation), and questions 11-14 and 18 use Passage 6 (the modern explanation). All three are printed in the Independent Practice phase of the lesson plan, with numbered paragraphs. Questions 15, 17 and 20 use more than one of these passages. Your score updates as you answer, and Reset quiz clears everything so you can try again.

Multiple choice: pick an option to check it. Short answer: write your answer, then reveal the model answer.

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  1. Question 1 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    In paragraph 1 of Passage 4, why does Fabre describe exactly how each paper wall was attached to its nest?

  2. Question 2 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Paragraph 1 of Passage 4 says the two nests were put "under the bell-glass, at the same time" as the reed cells. Why does Fabre mention "at the same time"?

  3. Question 3 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Why does Fabre end Passage 4 with "Even so did Reaumur's Bees perish in the glass funnel"?

  4. Question 4 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Which sentence in Passage 4 states the result that Fabre's explanation in Passage 5 has to account for?

  5. Question 5 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Passage 5 begins, "This fact strikes me as rich in inferences." What does this opening signal?

  6. Question 6 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    What question is Fabre's explanation in Passage 5 meant to answer?

  7. Question 7 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    According to Fabre in Passage 5, why do the bees get through a paper sheet pressed tight against the nest?

  8. Question 8 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Why does Fabre add "though the total thickness of wall is really the same"?

  9. Question 9 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Fabre writes that the bee has, "I will not say the will to use those tools, but a secret stimulus inviting it to employ them." Why does he choose "stimulus" instead of "will"?

  10. Question 10 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    The last sentence kept in Passage 5 says, "The Mason-bee perishes for lack of the smallest gleam of intelligence." What does this sentence show about Fabre's purpose?

  11. Question 11 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    What is the purpose of the first paragraph of Passage 6?

  12. Question 12 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Why does Passage 6 define "instinct" and describe instincts as a chain of steps?

  13. Question 13 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Why does Passage 6 say that how Fabre's bees found their way back "is still not fully explained"?

  14. Question 14 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Why does Passage 6 end with a paragraph about the bees that were hurt in Fabre's experiments?

  15. Question 15 of 20 · Short Answer

    What question was the two-nest experiment in Passage 4 designed to answer? Explain how the way Fabre set up the two nests helps answer it, and cite both paragraphs.

  16. Question 16 of 20 · Short Answer

    Summarize Fabre's explanation in Passage 5 in two or three sentences. Then explain what purpose the explanation serves after the results in Passage 4.

  17. Question 17 of 20 · Short Answer

    Passage 5 and Passage 6 both explain why the bees died under the paper cone. Compare the two authors' purposes, and quote one sentence from each that shows the purpose.

  18. Question 18 of 20 · Short Answer

    Passage 6 says young bees fly "in widening loops, facing back toward the nest, as if taking pictures of the place." What is the purpose of this comparison in an explanation written for students?

  19. Question 19 of 20 · Short Answer

    Passage 4 contains both a description of a setup and a report of results. Quote one sentence of each, and explain why an author discussing an experiment needs both.

  20. Question 20 of 20 · Short Answer

    Write one sentence each for Passages 4, 5 and 6, using the frame "The author [explains / describes a procedure for / discusses an experiment on] ___ in order to ___."

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Frequently Asked Questions

10 Questions

What does RST.6-8.6 mean?

RST.6-8.6 asks students in grades 6-8 to analyze why the author of a science or technical text provides an explanation, describes a procedure or discusses an experiment. Students explain what that part of the text does for the reader, for example helping the reader understand a result, letting others repeat the work or showing that a test was fair.

What is the difference between an explanation, a procedure and an experiment in a science text?

An explanation tells how or why something happens. A procedure gives the steps for doing something. The account of an experiment reports a test: what was set up, what happened and what it shows. Real science writing mixes all three, often in the same paragraph.

How do students figure out an author's purpose when it is not stated?

They ask what the part does for the reader and what would go wrong without it. Clues include reason words ("so," "because," "in order to"), warnings, comparisons with other experiments and the place of the part in the text. Sometimes the author states it outright, as Fabre does when he offers his procedure to anyone who "should wish to try the experiment."

How is RST.6-8.6 different from RST.9-10.6?

RST.9-10.6 adds "defining the question the author seeks to address." In grades 6-8, students analyze the purpose of an explanation, procedure or experiment; in grades 9-10 they also name the scientific question the whole text is trying to answer.

Why teach RST.6-8.6 with Fabre's mason bee experiments?

Fabre explains why he designs each test the way he does, criticizes an older experiment, gives his procedures in detail and explains his results, so students meet every kind of purpose the standard names in one chapter. The experiments are also easy to picture. The English translation was published in 1914 and is in the public domain.

Is Fabre's science still accurate?

His observations are careful, and his explanation of the paper-cone result is close to how scientists see it today. His claim that homing bees are guided by "certainly not memory" goes further than today's evidence, which points to learned landmarks and the sun. Passage 6 and the teacher note in the Closure phase give the details.

Can one passage have more than one purpose?

Yes. Fabre's procedure for carrying bees lets others repeat his work and also protects the bees, so that a bee that fails to come home was not simply hurt. Students should name every purpose they can support with the text.

How is RST.6-8.6 assessed?

Usually with a science passage and questions such as "Why does the author include this step?", "Why does the author mention this earlier experiment?" or "What is the purpose of this paragraph?", plus a short written answer with quotations. The quiz on this page follows that pattern.

How does RST.6-8.6 connect to writing lab reports?

Students who understand why authors explain designs and give reasons for steps write better procedures and discussions themselves. The writing standard WHST.6-8.2 asks them to explain scientific ideas and procedures clearly.

How can parents help a child practice RST.6-8.6 at home?

With a recipe, a game's rules or the instructions for a kit, ask, "Why do you think they tell you to do this step?" and "What would happen if you skipped it?" Talking about the reason behind a step is the skill.