RL.8.4: Word Choice, Figurative Language and Allusion in Stories
In plain English: RL.8.4 is the Common Core grade 8 ELA standard that asks students to determine what words and phrases mean as they are used in a text, including figurative and connotative meanings, and to analyze how specific word choices shape meaning and tone. At grade 8 this includes analogies and allusions to other texts. It builds on RL.7.4.
Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone, including analogies or allusions to other texts.
Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts & Literacy · Domain: Reading Standards for Literature · Cluster: Craft and Structure · Official standard
Students determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a story, including figurative meanings (words used to mean more than their literal sense, as in a simile) and connotative meanings (the feelings a word carries beyond its dictionary definition). They then analyze the impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone, including analogies (comparisons that explain one thing through another) and allusions (brief references to another text, such as the Bible or a play by Shakespeare). The move the standard asks for goes beyond a definition: students say what the word means here, what it adds, and how it shapes the tone.
The text is O. Henry's The Gift of the Magi (1906), printed whole in five passages. A young couple with almost no money each sells a treasure to buy the other a Christmas present. O. Henry's playful vocabulary, his similes and his allusions to the Bible make it a strong text for word choice. Students read the first three passages with the teacher and the last two on their own; the quiz uses the last two. The homework uses the opening of another O. Henry story, The Cop and the Anthem, which alludes to Greek myth and to the story of Julius Caesar and Brutus.
Learning Objectives
By the end of this lesson, students will be able to:
Determine the meaning of an unfamiliar word or phrase from the way it is used in a story
Explain the figurative meaning of similes, metaphors and personification, and what each comparison adds
Explain the connotation of a word choice by comparing it with a plainer word of similar meaning
Analyze how word choices, analogies and allusions to other texts shape the meaning and tone of a story
Prior Knowledge Required
Students should already be comfortable with:
Determining figurative and connotative meanings and the effect of rhymes and repeated sounds RL.7.4
Using context clues to find the meaning of a word L.7.4
Telling a simile, which uses "like" or "as," from a metaphor, which does not
Describing the tone of a passage with a precise word, such as playful, bitter or tender
"Four people describe the same classmate who spends very little money: thrifty, careful, cheap, stingy. Rank the words from the kindest to the harshest. Then answer: if a friend said your new jacket 'looks like a million dollars,' is the statement true? What does it mean?"
Collect rankings and point out that all four words have about the same dictionary meaning, the denotation, but carry different feelings, the connotation. The jacket line is figurative: it is not literally true, but it means the jacket looks expensive and great. Tell students that authors choose each word for its connotation and use figures of speech on purpose, and that RL.8.4 asks them to explain what those choices do.
Direct Instruction20 minutes
Terms to know:
Denotation: the dictionary meaning of a word. Connotation: the feelings and ideas a word carries beyond that meaning. "Stingy" and "thrifty" have similar denotations and opposite connotations.
Figurative language: words used to mean more than they literally say. A simile compares with "like" or "as"; a metaphor says one thing is another; personification gives human actions to things.
Context clues: nearby words that help you work out what a word means as it is used.
Tone: the writer's attitude toward the subject, such as playful, tender or mocking. Word choice creates tone.
Analogy: a comparison that explains one thing by showing how it is like another.
Allusion: a short reference to a well-known text, person or event, such as a story from the Bible or a play by Shakespeare. The writer expects the reader to know the source and borrows its meaning.
Introduce the text: O. Henry was the pen name of William Sydney Porter, an American writer known for short stories with surprise endings. The Gift of the Magi takes place in a small rented apartment in New York the day before Christmas, in the early 1900s. Words to know: imputation (a suggestion that someone did something wrong), instigates (starts, causes), predominating (making up the largest part), subsiding (calming down), flat (apartment), vestibule (entrance hall), appertaining thereunto (belonging to it; a very formal phrase), prosperity (a time of having money), sterling (of high quality; sterling silver is solid silver), pier-glass (a tall, narrow mirror), longitudinal strips (long, thin slices), conception (idea), airshaft (a narrow open space between buildings), depreciate (make something seem less valuable), Her Majesty (a title for a queen), faltered (hesitated) and Mme. (Madame). Read the first two passages aloud while students follow the numbered paragraphs. Paragraph numbers restart in each passage.
1One dollar and eighty-seven cents. That was all. And sixty cents of it was in pennies. Pennies saved one and two at a time by bulldozing the grocer and the vegetable man and the butcher until one’s cheeks burned with the silent imputation of parsimony that such close dealing implied. Three times Della counted it. One dollar and eighty-seven cents. And the next day would be Christmas.
2There was clearly nothing to do but flop down on the shabby little couch and howl. So Della did it. Which instigates the moral reflection that life is made up of sobs, sniffles, and smiles, with sniffles predominating.
3While the mistress of the home is gradually subsiding from the first stage to the second, take a look at the home. A furnished flat at $8 per week. It did not exactly beggar description, but it certainly had that word on the lookout for the mendicancy squad.
4In the vestibule below was a letter-box into which no letter would go, and an electric button from which no mortal finger could coax a ring. Also appertaining thereunto was a card bearing the name “Mr. James Dillingham Young.” The “Dillingham” had been flung to the breeze during a former period of prosperity when its possessor was being paid $30 per week. Now, when the income was shrunk to $20, the letters of “Dillingham” looked blurred, as though they were thinking seriously of contracting to a modest and unassuming D. But whenever Mr. James Dillingham Young came home and reached his flat above he was called “Jim” and greatly hugged by Mrs. James Dillingham Young, already introduced to you as Della. Which is all very good.
5Della finished her cry and attended to her cheeks with the powder rag. She stood by the window and looked out dully at a grey cat walking a grey fence in a grey backyard. Tomorrow would be Christmas Day, and she had only $1.87 with which to buy Jim a present. She had been saving every penny she could for months, with this result. Twenty dollars a week doesn’t go far. Expenses had been greater than she had calculated. They always are. Only $1.87 to buy a present for Jim. Her Jim. Many a happy hour she had spent planning for something nice for him. Something fine and rare and sterling—something just a little bit near to being worthy of the honour of being owned by Jim.
O. Henry, The Gift of the Magi (opening) (1906). Public domain (published 1906). Source text.
1There was a pier-glass between the windows of the room. Perhaps you have seen a pier-glass in an $8 flat. A very thin and very agile person may, by observing his reflection in a rapid sequence of longitudinal strips, obtain a fairly accurate conception of his looks. Della, being slender, had mastered the art.
2Suddenly she whirled from the window and stood before the glass. Her eyes were shining brilliantly, but her face had lost its colour within twenty seconds. Rapidly she pulled down her hair and let it fall to its full length.
3Now, there were two possessions of the James Dillingham Youngs in which they both took a mighty pride. One was Jim’s gold watch that had been his father’s and his grandfather’s. The other was Della’s hair. Had the Queen of Sheba lived in the flat across the airshaft, Della would have let her hair hang out the window some day to dry just to depreciate Her Majesty’s jewels and gifts. Had King Solomon been the janitor, with all his treasures piled up in the basement, Jim would have pulled out his watch every time he passed, just to see him pluck at his beard from envy.
4So now Della’s beautiful hair fell about her, rippling and shining like a cascade of brown waters. It reached below her knee and made itself almost a garment for her. And then she did it up again nervously and quickly. Once she faltered for a minute and stood still while a tear or two splashed on the worn red carpet.
5On went her old brown jacket; on went her old brown hat. With a whirl of skirts and with the brilliant sparkle still in her eyes, she fluttered out the door and down the stairs to the street.
6Where she stopped the sign read: “Mme. Sofronie. Hair Goods of All Kinds.” One flight up Della ran, and collected herself, panting. Madame, large, too white, chilly, hardly looked the “Sofronie.”
7“Will you buy my hair?” asked Della.
8“I buy hair,” said Madame. “Take yer hat off and let’s have a sight at the looks of it.”
9Down rippled the brown cascade. “Twenty dollars,” said Madame, lifting the mass with a practised hand.
10“Give it to me quick,” said Della.
O. Henry, The Gift of the Magi (the hair) (1906). Public domain (published 1906). Source text.
Meaning from context
Della saved pennies "by bulldozing the grocer and the vegetable man and the butcher until one's cheeks burned with the silent imputation of parsimony that such close dealing implied" (first passage, paragraph 1). What does "the silent imputation of parsimony" mean?
Result: Context clues: she argues over every penny, and her cheeks burn, so she feels ashamed. "Close dealing" means bargaining hard. An imputation is a suggestion that someone did wrong, and parsimony is stinginess. The phrase means that the shopkeepers never said so, but their looks accused her of being cheap. O. Henry uses a grand, formal phrase for a small, painful moment, which makes it funny and sad at once.
Connotation
O. Henry writes that Della saved "by bulldozing the grocer" (first passage, paragraph 1) and that there was "nothing to do but flop down on the shabby little couch and howl" (paragraph 2). Why these words and not plainer ones?
Result: "Bargaining with" would have about the same denotation, but "bulldozing" connotes pushing hard, like a machine flattening everything in its way. "Flop down ... and howl" connotes a dramatic, almost childish collapse; "sit and cry" would be sad and nothing more. The narrator then turns it into a joke: life is "sobs, sniffles, and smiles, with sniffles predominating" (paragraph 2). The connotations make the tone gently comic, so the reader feels sympathy without despair (Diagram 1).
Word play and tone
The flat "did not exactly beggar description, but it certainly had that word on the lookout for the mendicancy squad" (first passage, paragraph 3). How does the word play work, and what tone does it create?
Result: "To beggar description" is an idiom: to be too amazing to describe. O. Henry pretends to take "beggar" literally. A mendicant is a beggar, and the "mendicancy squad" was the police unit that picked up beggars. So the flat is not quite so poor that the police would come for it, but close. The joke tells the reader the flat is very poor while keeping the tone light and witty instead of pitying.
Figurative meaning: simile and metaphor
"So now Della's beautiful hair fell about her, rippling and shining like a cascade of brown waters. It reached below her knee and made itself almost a garment for her" (second passage, paragraph 4). What do the two comparisons mean?
Result: The simile compares the hair to a cascade, a waterfall: long, flowing, shining and full of movement. The metaphor "almost a garment" says the hair is so long it nearly clothes her. Together they show how rich and beautiful her one treasure is, which makes the reader feel how much she gives up when she sells it a few paragraphs later.
Allusion and analogy
"Had the Queen of Sheba lived in the flat across the airshaft, Della would have let her hair hang out the window some day to dry just to depreciate Her Majesty's jewels and gifts" (second passage, paragraph 3). King Solomon appears in the next sentence. What do the allusions add?
Result: In the Bible (1 Kings 10), the Queen of Sheba visits King Solomon with gold, spices and precious stones, and Solomon is famous for his riches. O. Henry imagines both of them as neighbors: Della's hair would make the queen's jewels look cheap, and Jim's watch would make Solomon "pluck at his beard from envy." The comparison is a deliberate exaggeration. It shows that to this poor couple the hair and the watch are worth more than a king's treasure, and the tone is playful and proud (Diagram 2).
Meaning, choice, effect. Model the three moves with each example: state what the word or phrase means here, using context clues; explain the choice, by naming the figure of speech or comparing the word with a plainer one; and describe the effect on meaning and tone. Give two sentence frames: "In paragraph __, '___' means ___; a plainer word would be ___, but O. Henry's word suggests ___." and "The allusion to ___ reminds readers of ___, which shows ___ and makes the tone ___."
Guided Practice15 minutes
Read the third passage aloud. Words to know: ransacking (searching roughly), platinum (a precious silver-white metal), fob chain (a chain for a pocket watch), proclaiming (announcing), on the sly (secretly), prudence (good sense and caution), curling irons (heated tools for curling hair), truant (skipping school) and chops (cuts of meat).
1Oh, and the next two hours tripped by on rosy wings. Forget the hashed metaphor. She was ransacking the stores for Jim’s present.
2She found it at last. It surely had been made for Jim and no one else. There was no other like it in any of the stores, and she had turned all of them inside out. It was a platinum fob chain simple and chaste in design, properly proclaiming its value by substance alone and not by meretricious ornamentation—as all good things should do. It was even worthy of The Watch. As soon as she saw it she knew that it must be Jim’s. It was like him. Quietness and value—the description applied to both. Twenty-one dollars they took from her for it, and she hurried home with the 87 cents. With that chain on his watch Jim might be properly anxious about the time in any company. Grand as the watch was, he sometimes looked at it on the sly on account of the old leather strap that he used in place of a chain.
3When Della reached home her intoxication gave way a little to prudence and reason. She got out her curling irons and lighted the gas and went to work repairing the ravages made by generosity added to love. Which is always a tremendous task, dear friends—a mammoth task.
4Within forty minutes her head was covered with tiny, close-lying curls that made her look wonderfully like a truant schoolboy. She looked at her reflection in the mirror long, carefully, and critically.
5“If Jim doesn’t kill me,” she said to herself, “before he takes a second look at me, he’ll say I look like a Coney Island chorus girl. But what could I do—oh! what could I do with a dollar and eighty-seven cents?”
6At 7 o’clock the coffee was made and the frying-pan was on the back of the stove hot and ready to cook the chops.
7Jim was never late. Della doubled the fob chain in her hand and sat on the corner of the table near the door that he always entered. Then she heard his step on the stair away down on the first flight, and she turned white for just a moment. She had a habit for saying little silent prayers about the simplest everyday things, and now she whispered: “Please God, make him think I am still pretty.”
8The door opened and Jim stepped in and closed it. He looked thin and very serious. Poor fellow, he was only twenty-two—and to be burdened with a family! He needed a new overcoat and he was without gloves.
O. Henry, The Gift of the Magi (the chain) (1906). Public domain (published 1906). Source text.
Pairs work through four phrases, one at a time. Ask each question before revealing the teacher note.
"Oh, and the next two hours tripped by on rosy wings. Forget the hashed metaphor." (paragraph 1). What does the first sentence mean, and why does the narrator add the second? Teacher note: the hours are given feet that trip along and wings that fly, a mix of two figures of speech that means the time passed quickly and happily. "Hashed" means chopped up and mixed, like hash; the narrator admits his metaphor is a jumble and jokes about it, which keeps the tone playful and friendly.
"a platinum fob chain simple and chaste in design, properly proclaiming its value by substance alone and not by meretricious ornamentation" (paragraph 2). Use context to find the meaning of "chaste" and "meretricious." Teacher note: the contrast gives the clue. "Chaste" here means pure and plain, and "meretricious" means showy but cheap. The words praise quiet quality over flash, and the next lines apply them to Jim: "Quietness and value" and "the description applied to both" are O. Henry's way of describing a person through a thing.
"went to work repairing the ravages made by generosity added to love. Which is always a tremendous task, dear friends" (paragraph 3). What tone do these words create? Teacher note: "ravages" means terrible damage, the kind left by war or a storm, and here it means a short haircut. The huge word for a small problem, plus "dear friends," makes the tone mock-serious: the narrator is teasing Della gently and inviting the reader to smile with him.
"he'll say I look like a Coney Island chorus girl" (paragraph 5). What does the reference mean? Teacher note: Coney Island was a famous New York amusement area, and its chorus girls danced in its shows. The reference is to a place and its performers, not to a text, but it works like an allusion: Della fears that her short curls make her look flashy rather than pretty and respectable.
Show Diagram 1 and have pairs add one row from the third passage: a word of their choice, a plainer word, and what O. Henry's word adds. Each pair then writes a two-sentence answer about one of the four phrases: what it means, and how it affects the tone.
Independent Practice15-20 minutes
Students read the last two passages on their own. Words to know: setter (a kind of hunting dog), quail (a small game bird), sentiments (feelings), laboriously (slowly, with great effort), idiocy (foolishness), enfolded (wrapped in his arms), scrutiny (a close look), assertion (statement), nimble (quick), ecstatic (overjoyed), tortoise shell (a hard, mottled brown material from a turtle's shell, once used for combs), singed (slightly burned), dandy (old slang for something excellent) and chronicle (a record of events told in order).
1Jim stopped inside the door, as immovable as a setter at the scent of quail. His eyes were fixed upon Della, and there was an expression in them that she could not read, and it terrified her. It was not anger, nor surprise, nor disapproval, nor horror, nor any of the sentiments that she had been prepared for. He simply stared at her fixedly with that peculiar expression on his face.
2Della wriggled off the table and went for him.
3“Jim, darling,” she cried, “don’t look at me that way. I had my hair cut off and sold because I couldn’t have lived through Christmas without giving you a present. It’ll grow out again—you won’t mind, will you? I just had to do it. My hair grows awfully fast. Say ‘Merry Christmas!’ Jim, and let’s be happy. You don’t know what a nice—what a beautiful, nice gift I’ve got for you.”
4“You’ve cut off your hair?” asked Jim, laboriously, as if he had not arrived at that patent fact yet even after the hardest mental labor.
5“Cut it off and sold it,” said Della. “Don’t you like me just as well, anyhow? I’m me without my hair, ain’t I?”
6Jim looked about the room curiously.
7“You say your hair is gone?” he said, with an air almost of idiocy.
8“You needn’t look for it,” said Della. “It’s sold, I tell you—sold and gone, too. It’s Christmas Eve, boy. Be good to me, for it went for you. Maybe the hairs of my head were numbered,” she went on with sudden serious sweetness, “but nobody could ever count my love for you. Shall I put the chops on, Jim?”
9Out of his trance Jim seemed quickly to wake. He enfolded his Della. For ten seconds let us regard with discreet scrutiny some inconsequential object in the other direction. Eight dollars a week or a million a year—what is the difference? A mathematician or a wit would give you the wrong answer. The magi brought valuable gifts, but that was not among them. This dark assertion will be illuminated later on.
10Jim drew a package from his overcoat pocket and threw it upon the table.
11“Don’t make any mistake, Dell,” he said, “about me. I don’t think there’s anything in the way of a haircut or a shave or a shampoo that could make me like my girl any less. But if you’ll unwrap that package you may see why you had me going a while at first.”
O. Henry, The Gift of the Magi (Jim comes home) (1906). Public domain (published 1906). Source text.
1White fingers and nimble tore at the string and paper. And then an ecstatic scream of joy; and then, alas! a quick feminine change to hysterical tears and wails, necessitating the immediate employment of all the comforting powers of the lord of the flat.
2For there lay The Combs—the set of combs, side and back, that Della had worshipped long in a Broadway window. Beautiful combs, pure tortoise shell, with jewelled rims—just the shade to wear in the beautiful vanished hair. They were expensive combs, she knew, and her heart had simply craved and yearned over them without the least hope of possession. And now, they were hers, but the tresses that should have adorned the coveted adornments were gone.
3But she hugged them to her bosom, and at length she was able to look up with dim eyes and a smile and say: “My hair grows so fast, Jim!”
4And then Della leaped up like a little singed cat and cried, “Oh, oh!”
5Jim had not yet seen his beautiful present. She held it out to him eagerly upon her open palm. The dull precious metal seemed to flash with a reflection of her bright and ardent spirit.
6“Isn’t it a dandy, Jim? I hunted all over town to find it. You’ll have to look at the time a hundred times a day now. Give me your watch. I want to see how it looks on it.”
7Instead of obeying, Jim tumbled down on the couch and put his hands under the back of his head and smiled.
8“Dell,” said he, “let’s put our Christmas presents away and keep ’em a while. They’re too nice to use just at present. I sold the watch to get the money to buy your combs. And now suppose you put the chops on.”
9The magi, as you know, were wise men—wonderfully wise men—who brought gifts to the Babe in the manger. They invented the art of giving Christmas presents. Being wise, their gifts were no doubt wise ones, possibly bearing the privilege of exchange in case of duplication. And here I have lamely related to you the uneventful chronicle of two foolish children in a flat who most unwisely sacrificed for each other the greatest treasures of their house. But in a last word to the wise of these days let it be said that of all who give gifts these two were the wisest. Of all who give and receive gifts, such as they are wisest. Everywhere they are wisest. They are the magi.
O. Henry, The Gift of the Magi (the gifts) (1906). Public domain (published 1906). Source text.
On the handout, students fill in a chart with four columns (Word or phrase, Meaning here, Figurative or connotative, Effect on tone) for five phrases of their choice, at least two from each passage. Then they answer in three or four sentences: what does the last paragraph of the story add by comparing Jim and Della to the magi? The quiz uses both passages; its answers are not discussed until students have finished the chart.
Closure5-10 minutes
Exit ticket: (1) In one sentence, explain the difference between the denotation and the connotation of a word, with an example from the story. (2) Choose one simile, metaphor or allusion from any passage, quote it with its passage and paragraph number, and explain what it adds to the tone.
Teacher note on language: O. Henry wrote in 1906, and some of his phrases reflect ideas of the time. In the fifth passage he describes Della's reaction as "a quick feminine change to hysterical tears"; discuss this as a dated view of women. The story's allusions come from the Bible (the Queen of Sheba, King Solomon, the magi and the saying that the hairs of one's head are numbered). Treat them as literary references that readers of the time would have known, and give students the background they need. Spellings such as "colour" and "honour" and slang such as "dandy" are O. Henry's and are kept exactly.
For homework: students read the opening of another O. Henry story from the same book, The Cop and the Anthem, printed below. Soapy is a homeless man in New York who, as winter comes, plans to get himself sent to jail on Blackwell's Island, where he will have a bed and meals until spring. Words to know: denizens (people who live in a place), pasteboard (here, a calling card), footman (a servant who opens doors and delivers messages), cognisant (aware), Committee of Ways and Means (the committee of Congress that plans how to raise money), rigour (harshness), soporific (sleepy), the Vesuvian Bay (the Bay of Naples in Italy), congenial (friendly), Boreas (the north wind in Greek myth), bluecoats (police officers, who wore blue coats), Blackwell's (Blackwell's Island in New York's East River, with a jail and a workhouse), Palm Beach and the Riviera (warm places where rich people spent the winter), hegira (a journey to escape), repulse (drive back), philanthropy (giving to help others), eleemosynary (supported by charity), encumbered (weighed down), inquisition (a harsh questioning) and Caesar and Brutus (the Roman ruler Julius Caesar was stabbed to death by a group of senators that included his friend Brutus; the story is best known from Shakespeare's play Julius Caesar, and "Caesar had his Brutus" was also a famous line in a 1765 speech by Patrick Henry).
1On his bench in Madison Square Soapy moved uneasily. When wild geese honk high of nights, and when women without sealskin coats grow kind to their husbands, and when Soapy moves uneasily on his bench in the park, you may know that winter is near at hand.
2A dead leaf fell in Soapy’s lap. That was Jack Frost’s card. Jack is kind to the regular denizens of Madison Square, and gives fair warning of his annual call. At the corners of four streets he hands his pasteboard to the North Wind, footman of the mansion of All Outdoors, so that the inhabitants thereof may make ready.
3Soapy’s mind became cognisant of the fact that the time had come for him to resolve himself into a singular Committee of Ways and Means to provide against the coming rigour. And therefore he moved uneasily on his bench.
4The hibernatorial ambitions of Soapy were not of the highest. In them there were no considerations of Mediterranean cruises, of soporific Southern skies drifting in the Vesuvian Bay. Three months on the Island was what his soul craved. Three months of assured board and bed and congenial company, safe from Boreas and bluecoats, seemed to Soapy the essence of things desirable.
5For years the hospitable Blackwell’s had been his winter quarters. Just as his more fortunate fellow New Yorkers had bought their tickets to Palm Beach and the Riviera each winter, so Soapy had made his humble arrangements for his annual hegira to the Island. And now the time was come. On the previous night three Sabbath newspapers, distributed beneath his coat, about his ankles and over his lap, had failed to repulse the cold as he slept on his bench near the spurting fountain in the ancient square. So the Island loomed big and timely in Soapy’s mind. He scorned the provisions made in the name of charity for the city’s dependents. In Soapy’s opinion the Law was more benign than Philanthropy. There was an endless round of institutions, municipal and eleemosynary, on which he might set out and receive lodging and food accordant with the simple life. But to one of Soapy’s proud spirit the gifts of charity are encumbered. If not in coin you must pay in humiliation of spirit for every benefit received at the hands of philanthropy. As Caesar had his Brutus, every bed of charity must have its toll of a bath, every loaf of bread its compensation of a private and personal inquisition. Wherefore it is better to be a guest of the law, which though conducted by rules, does not meddle unduly with a gentleman’s private affairs.
O. Henry, The Cop and the Anthem (opening) (1906). Public domain (published 1906). Source text.
Differentiation Strategies
For Struggling Students
Give a word bank with the meanings of the passage vocabulary, so students can spend their effort on connotation and effect
Offer a plain word next to each of O. Henry's words, so the comparison is ready and students only explain the difference
Use the three-step card from Diagram 2 (source, lines, effect) for every allusion, with the source already filled in
For Advanced Students
Ask them to find three places where the narrator speaks directly to the reader and explain how those words shape the tone of the whole story
Have them trace the words "wise" and "foolish" through the last paragraph and explain how the change in meaning carries the story's message
Ask them to rewrite one paragraph in a serious, gloomy tone and explain which word changes made the biggest difference
Assessment Guidance
What to Look For
Check that each answer states what a word or phrase means as it is used, not only its dictionary definition, and supports the meaning with context. The best answers compare the word with a plainer one to show its connotation, name the figure of speech, and say precisely what it adds to the meaning and the tone. For allusions, look for the source named correctly and a clear link between the source and the story. Watch for students who define a word and stop, for students who call every comparison a metaphor, and for vague tone words such as "good" or "interesting."
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Classroom Activities
3 Activities
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Connotation Line-Up
15 minPairs
Pairs get 5 sets of 4 word cards (20 cards). In each set, one word is O. Henry's, from the first three passages, and the other three have a similar denotation. Pairs line up each set from the most positive connotation to the most negative, find O. Henry's word, and explain why he chose it over the others.
The Cards
Set A: worn, old, run-down, shabby ("the shabby little couch," first passage, paragraph 2)
Set B: hurried, rushed, fled, fluttered ("she fluttered out the door," second passage, paragraph 5)
Set C: cool, cold, frosty, chilly ("Madame, large, too white, chilly," second passage, paragraph 6)
Set D: searching, browsing, raiding, ransacking ("She was ransacking the stores," third passage, paragraph 1)
Set E: good, genuine, excellent, sterling ("Something fine and rare and sterling," first passage, paragraph 5)
Procedure
Pairs line up each set, then write one sentence per set: "O. Henry chose ___ because it suggests ___."
Pairs compare with another pair; if their line-ups differ, each explains its order
Notes for the teacher (other orders are fine with a reason). "Shabby" suggests worn out and a little embarrassing, which fits a poor flat seen with sympathy. "Fluttered" makes Della light and quick, like a bird, and shows her excitement once she has made her decision. "Chilly" describes a person, not the weather: Madame is unfriendly. "Ransacking" is the word for a burglar searching a house; it shows how wildly and thoroughly Della searches. "Sterling" names solid silver, so it praises something as genuine all the way through
Discussion Questions
Which of O. Henry's five words has a connotation that changes with the context? Explain.
In which set was it hardest to agree on an order? Why?
Swap O. Henry's word for the most negative word in its set. How does the sentence change?
Modification
For students who need support, use only Sets A, B and D, and give each set a line with a plus sign at one end and a minus sign at the other.
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Draw It Literally
15 minGroups of 3
Groups get 6 cards with figurative phrases from the first three passages. For each, one student sketches what the words would look like if they were literally true, a second writes what the phrase really means, and a third writes what the comparison adds. The funny literal drawings make the gap between literal and figurative meaning easy to see.
The Cards
"life is made up of sobs, sniffles, and smiles, with sniffles predominating" (first passage, paragraph 2)
"The 'Dillingham' had been flung to the breeze during a former period of prosperity" (first passage, paragraph 4)
"the letters of 'Dillingham' looked blurred, as though they were thinking seriously of contracting to a modest and unassuming D" (first passage, paragraph 4)
"Twenty dollars a week doesn't go far." (first passage, paragraph 5)
"her intoxication gave way a little to prudence and reason" (third passage, paragraph 3)
"tiny, close-lying curls that made her look wonderfully like a truant schoolboy" (third passage, paragraph 4)
Procedure
Roles rotate with each card: artist, meaning writer, effect writer
Groups post their best drawing with the phrase and its real meaning underneath
Notes for the teacher. Sobs and sniffles: a metaphor that says life is mostly small sorrows, with the sniffles joke keeping it light. Flung to the breeze: the long name was displayed proudly, like a flag, when Jim earned more. Contracting to a D: personification; the name seems to want to shrink to an initial, just as the family's money has shrunk. Doesn't go far: money is treated as a traveler; it means twenty dollars buys little. Intoxication: a metaphor that compares her excitement to being drunk, which now gives way to sense. Truant schoolboy: a simile that means her short curls make her look like a boy skipping school
Discussion Questions
Which two phrases use personification? What human actions do they give to things?
What do the Dillingham phrases suggest about Jim's money without stating it?
Which phrase would lose the most if it were rewritten in plain words?
Variation
Groups write one new figurative phrase about a detail of the flat, in O. Henry's style, and trade it with another group, which must explain its meaning.
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Flatten the Tone
10-15 minPairs
Pairs rewrite a short stretch of the story in the plainest words they can, then compare the two versions. What disappears in the plain version is exactly what O. Henry's word choices were doing.
Model
Original: "In the vestibule below was a letter-box into which no letter would go, and an electric button from which no mortal finger could coax a ring" (first passage, paragraph 4). Plain version: "The mailbox and doorbell downstairs were broken." What is lost: "no mortal finger could coax a ring" treats the doorbell as a stubborn creature that no human can persuade, which makes the poverty comic. The formal words ("vestibule," "mortal") also mock the flat's shabbiness by describing it grandly.
Procedure
Each pair chooses one or two sentences from the first three passages, other than the model
They write the plain version, then list two things that disappeared: a meaning, a feeling, or a sound
Pairs read both versions aloud to another pair, who name the tone of each
Variation
Instead of a plain version, pairs write a gloomy version of the same sentences, choosing words with dark connotations, and explain how the tone changed.
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Diagrams & Visual Aids
2 diagrams
Diagram 1: Same Meaning, Different Feeling
Four word choices from the first two passages of The Gift of the Magi, each set next to a plain word with about the same dictionary meaning. The right-hand column is the connotation: the feeling the word adds. T1 and T2 are the first and second passages.
Diagram 2: How an Allusion Works
The allusion in the fifth worked example, in three steps: the source text, O. Henry's lines, and what the comparison adds. Students use the same three steps for every allusion in the lesson.
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Homework Assignment
~30 min
RL.8.4 Homework: Word Choice in The Cop and the Anthem
Directions: Read the opening of The Cop and the Anthem at the end of the lesson plan (in Closure). Its paragraphs are numbered 1-5. Answer in complete sentences. Put every quotation in quotation marks and give its paragraph number. For each word or phrase, say what it means as it is used, and explain what the word choice adds to the meaning or the tone.
Part 1: Meaning in Context (Problems 1-2)
Soapy's "mind became cognisant of the fact that the time had come" (paragraph 3), and "The hibernatorial ambitions of Soapy were not of the highest" (paragraph 4). Use context to explain what "hibernatorial ambitions" means. What animal habit does the word compare Soapy to, and why is the long, grand word funny here?
"In Soapy's opinion the Law was more benign than Philanthropy" (paragraph 5). Use the sentences around it to work out what "benign" means, and explain in your own words what Soapy believes.
Part 2: Figurative and Connotative Meanings (Problems 3-4)
Explain the figurative meaning of paragraph 2, from "A dead leaf fell in Soapy's lap" to "may make ready." What kind of visitor is winter compared to, and what does the comparison add to the tone?
O. Henry calls the jail "the hospitable Blackwell's" (paragraph 5) and says it is better to be "a guest of the law." What are the connotations of "hospitable" and "guest"? Why are they surprising words for a jail, and what tone do they create?
Part 3: Allusions, Analogies and Tone (Problems 5-6)
"As Caesar had his Brutus, every bed of charity must have its toll of a bath, every loaf of bread its compensation of a private and personal inquisition" (paragraph 5). Using what you know about Caesar and Brutus, explain the analogy: what does charity have in common with Brutus, according to Soapy? What does the allusion add?
Soapy wants three months "safe from Boreas and bluecoats" (paragraph 4). Using the notes on both words, explain why O. Henry puts them side by side. Then write a paragraph of 5-7 sentences on the tone of the whole passage, using this phrase and two other word choices, and compare it with the tone of one word choice from The Gift of the Magi.
Rubric
Criterion
Full Credit (2 pts)
Partial Credit (1 pt)
No Credit (0 pts)
Meaning in Context
Correct meaning as used, supported by a context clue
A dictionary meaning with no link to the passage
Wrong or missing
Figurative and Connotative
Names the comparison or the connotation and explains it precisely
Names it without explaining
Treats the words literally
Allusion and Analogy
Names the source correctly and explains what it adds
Names the source without the link
Missing or wrong source
Tone
A precise tone word supported by specific word choices
A tone word with thin support
A vague word such as "good" or no tone
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Quiz: 20 Questions
Interactive, with answers
Instructions
Questions 2-8, 17 and 19 use the fourth passage of The Gift of the Magi (Jim comes home), and questions 9-16 and 18 use the fifth passage (the gifts); question 20 uses both. Both passages are in Independent Practice above. Question 1 asks about connotation in general. Paragraph numbers restart in each passage. Your score updates as you answer, and Reset quiz clears everything.
Multiple choice: pick an option to check it. Short answer: write your answer, then reveal the model answer.
0 of 20 answered · 0 correct
Question 1 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which pair of words has nearly the same denotation but very different connotations?
Answer: B
"Thrifty" and "stingy" both describe someone who spends little, but "thrifty" sounds like praise and "stingy" like an insult. Choice A has opposite denotations. Choice C has the same denotation and similar connotations. Choice D names two different things, so the denotations differ.
Question 2 of 20 · Multiple Choice
"Jim stopped inside the door, as immovable as a setter at the scent of quail" (fourth passage, paragraph 1). What does the simile suggest?
Answer: C
A setter is a hunting dog that freezes when it smells a bird. The simile shows Jim stopping completely still, staring at Della, and the next sentence confirms that "His eyes were fixed upon Della" (paragraph 1). Choice A reads the hunting image as violence, but the narrator says it "was not anger." Choice B takes the hunting comparison literally. Choice D gives a reason the passage never mentions.
Question 3 of 20 · Multiple Choice
The narrator says Jim's expression "was not anger, nor surprise, nor disapproval, nor horror, nor any of the sentiments that she had been prepared for" (fourth passage, paragraph 1). What is the effect of this list?
Answer: A
Each "nor" rules out a feeling, so the reader, like Della, keeps guessing; the sentence before says the expression "terrified her." Choice B reverses the list, which says he feels none of them. Choice C contradicts her terror. Choice D invents silly faces; the tone here is tense, not comic.
Question 4 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Jim asks about the hair "laboriously, as if he had not arrived at that patent fact yet even after the hardest mental labor" (fourth passage, paragraph 4). What does "patent" mean here?
Answer: D
The fact is Della's short hair, which is right in front of Jim, so "patent" means obvious; the joke is that Jim struggles to grasp something anyone could see. Choice A is the legal sense of "patent" used for inventions, which does not fit a fact. Choice B borrows "patent leather," a different use. Choice C is close to the opposite meaning.
Question 5 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Della says, "Maybe the hairs of my head were numbered," and then, "but nobody could ever count my love for you" (fourth passage, paragraph 8). Her words allude to a Bible saying that the very hairs of your head are all numbered. What does the allusion add?
Answer: B
The saying claims that even your hairs are counted; Della answers that hair can be counted and sold, but her love cannot be measured. The narrator says she speaks "with sudden serious sweetness," so the tone turns tender. Choice A misreads her tone. Choice C goes far beyond the text. Choice D is wrong because the line is serious, not comic.
Question 6 of 20 · Multiple Choice
"For ten seconds let us regard with discreet scrutiny some inconsequential object in the other direction" (fourth passage, paragraph 9). What is the narrator asking readers to do?
Answer: C
Jim has just "enfolded his Della," and the narrator, in grand formal words, suggests we give them privacy by looking at something unimportant ("inconsequential") elsewhere. The long words for a simple idea keep the tone playful. Choice A misreads "scrutiny" as a search for clues. Choice B takes "ten seconds" as Jim's thinking time. Choice D confuses the unimportant object with the story.
Question 7 of 20 · Multiple Choice
"This dark assertion will be illuminated later on" (fourth passage, paragraph 9). What does the sentence mean?
Answer: A
"Dark" here means hard to understand, and "illuminated" means lit up, made clear: a figurative use of light and darkness. The statement about the magi's gifts is puzzling now and is explained in the last paragraph. Choice B misreads "dark" as sad and "illuminated" as forgotten. Choice C takes the words literally. Choice D assumes the statement is false, which the text never says.
Question 8 of 20 · Multiple Choice
"Della wriggled off the table and went for him" (fourth passage, paragraph 2). What does the word "wriggled" suggest that "stepped" would not?
Answer: B
"Wriggle" connotes twisting, restless movement, like a child or a nervous animal, which fits her terror a moment earlier. Choice A describes "stepped," not "wriggled." Choice C adds an injury the text never mentions. Choice D contradicts "went for him": she goes toward Jim, not away.
Question 9 of 20 · Multiple Choice
"the tresses that should have adorned the coveted adornments were gone" (fifth passage, paragraph 2). What does this phrase mean?
Answer: A
Tresses are long locks of hair, to adorn is to decorate, and coveted means strongly wanted. The combs were meant to decorate her hair, and the hair is gone; the play on "adorned" and "adornments" makes the loss sound neat and cruel at once. Choice B invents broken combs. Choice C invents fake jewels. Choice D is Della's hope in the next paragraph, not the meaning of this phrase.
Question 10 of 20 · Multiple Choice
The combs are ones "that Della had worshipped long in a Broadway window" (fifth passage, paragraph 2). What is the connotation of "worshipped" here?
Answer: C
"Worship" normally belongs to religion, so using it for combs in a shop window shows an intense, reverent longing; the same sentence says her heart "craved and yearned over them." Choice A takes the word literally. Choice B contradicts the longing. Choice D reverses the feeling.
Question 11 of 20 · Multiple Choice
"And then Della leaped up like a little singed cat and cried, 'Oh, oh!'" (fifth passage, paragraph 4). What does the simile show?
Answer: D
A singed cat is one that has been slightly burned and leaps at once. The comparison shows how suddenly she jumps, and the next paragraph explains why: "Jim had not yet seen his beautiful present" (paragraph 5). Choice A takes "singed" literally. Choice B reads the cat image as anger. Choice C misreads her excitement as fear.
Question 12 of 20 · Multiple Choice
"The dull precious metal seemed to flash with a reflection of her bright and ardent spirit" (fifth passage, paragraph 5). What does the sentence mean?
Answer: B
The metal is "dull," but it "seemed to flash": the light comes from Della's "bright and ardent" (passionate, eager) spirit, not from the chain. The figurative light shows her joy in the gift. Choice A takes the flash literally and forgets "dull"; the passage mentions no gaslight. Choice C invents fake metal; it is "precious." Choice D misreads "ardent" as anger.
Question 13 of 20 · Multiple Choice
According to the last paragraph of the story, who were the magi?
Answer: D
The last paragraph says the magi "were wise men" who "brought gifts to the Babe in the manger" (fifth passage, paragraph 9), an allusion to the wise men in the Bible's story of the birth of Jesus. Choice A describes Jim and Della, whom the narrator first calls "foolish children." Choice B mixes in Solomon from the second passage. Choice C invents a meaning based on "the art of giving Christmas presents."
Question 14 of 20 · Multiple Choice
In the last paragraph, the narrator first calls Jim and Della "two foolish children in a flat who most unwisely sacrificed" their treasures, then says "these two were the wisest." What is the effect of this change?
Answer: C
The narrator admits the gifts look foolish, since the combs have no hair and the chain has no watch, then reverses the word: "of all who give gifts these two were the wisest" (paragraph 9). The change turns the tone from teasing to admiring and states the meaning of the story. Choice A misses that the reversal is deliberate. Choice B keeps only the first half. Choice D confuses a small joke earlier in the paragraph with the main point.
Question 15 of 20 · Multiple Choice
The narrator says the magi's gifts were "possibly bearing the privilege of exchange in case of duplication" (fifth passage, paragraph 9). Why is this phrase funny?
Answer: A
"Duplication" means getting two of the same thing, and "the privilege of exchange" is store language for returning a gift. Giving the ancient magi a modern shopping habit is a playful joke. It also sets up the contrast with Jim and Della, whose gifts cannot be exchanged. Choice B invents theft. Choice C is not in the text: the couple keep their gifts. Choice D reads "duplication" as forgetting.
Question 16 of 20 · Short Answer
"Instead of obeying, Jim tumbled down on the couch and put his hands under the back of his head and smiled" (fifth passage, paragraph 7). What is the connotation of "tumbled," and what does the whole sentence suggest about how Jim takes the news he is about to share?
Model answer: "Tumbled" connotes falling loosely and carelessly, like a child or someone giving up, rather than sitting down with control. Together with the relaxed pose and the smile, it suggests that Jim takes the disaster calmly and even with humor: he knows the gifts are useless, and it does not make him bitter. Rubric: 2 points for the connotation of "tumbled" and a sensible reading of Jim's mood supported by the sentence; 1 point for one of the two; 0 points otherwise.
Question 17 of 20 · Short Answer
Jim says, "I don't think there's anything in the way of a haircut or a shave or a shampoo that could make me like my girl any less" (fourth passage, paragraph 11). What tone do these everyday words create, and why might O. Henry have Jim speak so plainly?
Model answer: The words "haircut," "shave" and "shampoo" are ordinary barbershop words, so the tone is plain, warm and a little funny. Jim treats the loss of Della's famous hair as no more important than a trip to the barber, which is a loving way to tell her it changes nothing. His plain speech also contrasts with the narrator's fancy words, making Jim sound sincere. Rubric: 2 points for a precise tone word and a reason tied to the words; 1 point for a tone word with a thin reason; 0 points otherwise.
Question 18 of 20 · Short Answer
When Della bursts into tears over the combs, the narrator says this required "the immediate employment of all the comforting powers of the lord of the flat" (fifth passage, paragraph 1). What does the phrase mean in plain words, and what tone do the grand, formal words create?
Model answer: In plain words, Jim had to hug and comfort Della right away. "Employment" makes comforting sound like a job, "all the comforting powers" makes it sound like a great force, and "the lord of the flat" gives Jim a noble title for a tiny rented apartment. The grand words for a small, ordinary moment create a gently teasing, mock-serious tone, so the reader smiles at the scene instead of feeling only sadness. Rubric: 2 points for a correct plain meaning and a tone word supported by at least two of the formal words; 1 point for the meaning or the tone alone; 0 points otherwise.
Question 19 of 20 · Short Answer
"The magi brought valuable gifts, but that was not among them" (fourth passage, paragraph 9). The sentence before it asks what difference there is between "Eight dollars a week or a million a year." What does "that" refer to, and what does the narrator suggest about the value of gifts?
Model answer: "That" refers to the love Jim shows when he wraps Della in his arms, the thing that makes the difference between rich and poor meaningless. The narrator suggests that the most valuable gift is not one money can buy; even the magi's precious gifts did not include it. The last paragraph explains this "dark assertion" when it calls Jim and Della the wisest givers. Rubric: 2 points for identifying the love or embrace and explaining the idea about value; 1 point for one of the two; 0 points otherwise.
Question 20 of 20 · Short Answer
Write 4-6 sentences: O. Henry's tone in this story is both humorous and tender. Choose one word choice from the fourth or fifth passage that makes the tone humorous and one that makes it tender. Quote both, explain what each means, and explain how each shapes the tone.
Model answer: One humorous choice is "with an air almost of idiocy" (fourth passage, paragraph 7): the narrator describes Jim's shock with an exaggerated, slightly insulting word, which makes his confusion comic. One tender choice is Della's "My hair grows so fast, Jim!" (fifth passage, paragraph 3), said "with dim eyes and a smile"; she tries to comfort Jim even while crying over the useless combs. The humor keeps the story from being too sad, and the tenderness keeps the jokes from being cruel. Together they make the reader laugh at the couple and love them at the same time. Rubric: 2 points for two quoted choices, their meanings and their effect on tone; 1 point for one choice explained; 0 points otherwise.
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Frequently Asked Questions
10 Questions
What does RL.8.4 mean?
It means eighth graders work out what words and phrases mean as they are used in a story, poem or play, including figurative and connotative meanings, and analyze how specific word choices affect meaning and tone. At grade 8 the standard adds analogies and allusions to other texts, so students also explain what a comparison or a reference to another work adds.
How is RL.8.4 different from RL.7.4?
RL.7.4 asks about the effect of rhymes and repeated sounds, such as alliteration, on a section of a text. RL.8.4 keeps figurative and connotative meanings and adds analogies and allusions to other texts. The grade 8 focus moves from how words sound to what they borrow from other works and comparisons.
What is the difference between denotation and connotation?
Denotation is the dictionary meaning of a word; connotation is the feeling it carries. "Thrifty" and "stingy" have almost the same denotation, but one sounds like praise and the other like an insult. Comparing an author's word with a plainer one is a quick way to see its connotation.
What is an allusion, and why does it matter for RL.8.4?
An allusion is a brief reference to a well-known text, person or event that the author expects readers to recognize. It lets a few words carry the meaning of a whole story: a reference to Brutus brings betrayal with it. RL.8.4 asks students to name the source and explain what that borrowed meaning adds.
What if students do not know the source of an allusion?
Give them the background; the standard is about analyzing the effect, not memorizing sources. A short note, such as "Achilles was a Greek hero who could be wounded only in his heel," is enough for students to explain what an allusion to an "Achilles heel" adds.
What is the difference between an analogy and a simile?
A simile is a short comparison using "like" or "as"; an analogy is a longer comparison that explains one thing through its likeness to another, often point by point. A simile can be part of an analogy. A writer who spends a paragraph showing how a busy school is like a beehive, with workers, a queen and constant buzzing, is building an analogy.
How is RL.8.4 assessed?
Tests often quote a word or phrase and ask what it means in context, what a figure of speech suggests, or how a word choice affects the tone, with wrong choices that give a dictionary meaning that does not fit or a literal reading of a figure. Written answers should state the meaning in context, name the connotation or figure of speech, and describe the effect.
How can students describe tone precisely?
Use specific tone words, such as playful, mocking, tender, bitter or mock-serious, instead of "good" or "sad," and tie each to particular words in the text. A useful test is to swap an author's word for a plainer one and describe what feeling is lost.
How can parents help with RL.8.4 at home?
Point out word choices in everyday life: why an ad says a car "roars" instead of "drives," or why a sports announcer calls a team "giants." Ask your child what the word suggests beyond its meaning. When a book or show mentions a famous story, ask what the reference adds.
What comes after RL.8.4 in high school?
RL.9-10.4 asks students to analyze the cumulative impact of word choices on meaning and tone, such as how language evokes a sense of time and place or sets a formal or informal tone. Grade 8 work on single words, analogies and allusions prepares students to track how many choices work together across a whole text.
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Related Standards
5 standards
These standards connect to RL.8.4: prerequisites to review first, parallel standards at the same level, and next steps that build on it.
Before this lesson
RL.7.4Prerequisite
Determine figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the effect of repeated sounds
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Alongside
L.8.5Parallel
Understand figurative language, word relationships and nuances in word meanings
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L.8.4Parallel
Determine or clarify the meaning of unknown and multiple-meaning words and phrases
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RL.8.9Parallel
Analyze how a modern work draws on myths, traditional stories or the Bible
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After this lesson
RL.9-10.4Next step
Analyze the cumulative impact of word choices on meaning and tone