RL.6.10: Reading Stories, Dramas and Poems with Three Genre Maps
In plain English: RL.6.10 is the Common Core grade 6 ELA standard that sets how challenging the literature students read should be. By the end of grade 6, they read and understand stories, dramas and poems in the grades 6-8 text complexity band proficiently, with scaffolding (temporary support, such as a context note or a glossary) as needed for the hardest texts in that range.
By the end of the year, read and comprehend literature, including stories, dramas, and poems, in the grades 6—8 text complexity band proficiently, with scaffolding as needed at the high end of the range.
Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts & Literacy · Domain: Reading Standards for Literature · Cluster: Range of Reading and Level of Text Complexity · Official standard
RL.6.10 does not name one reading skill. It names the range of literature sixth graders read, stories, dramas and poems, and how challenging it should be: texts in the grades 6-8 text complexity band (the span of difficulty the Common Core sets for middle school). Sixth graders are not expected to read the hardest texts of that band alone yet. The standard allows scaffolding as needed at the high end of the range: temporary support, such as a context note, a short glossary or a read-aloud, that helps a reader into a hard text and is then taken away.
This lesson gives students a genre map for each kind of literature: four questions that fit the way that genre carries meaning (Diagram 1). A genre is a kind of writing, such as a story, a drama (a play written to be acted) or a poem. The teacher models the story map on the opening of Carlo Collodi's Pinocchio (first published in 1883, here in a 1916 American edition). Pairs use the play map, with a context note and a glossary, on a scene from Lady Gregory's Irish comedy Spreading the News (1904), the hardest text of the lesson because of its Irish English. Each student then reads Walter de la Mare's poem "The Listeners" (1912) alone with only the headings of the poem map. The homework returns to the play and the story with no supports at all (Diagram 2).
Learning Objectives
By the end of this lesson, students will be able to:
Tell a story, a drama and a poem apart by their features (narrator, speaker names and stage directions, lines and stanzas) and choose the matching genre map
Use a story map, a play map and a poem map to build an accurate understanding of a passage in the grades 6-8 band
Use a fix-up strategy (reread, read aloud, picture it, read on) when their understanding breaks down
Say which support they needed for a hard text, and read a new text of the same genre with less of it
Support each answer with a quotation and its paragraph or line number
Prior Knowledge Required
Students should already be comfortable with:
Reading grade 5 stories, dramas and poems at the high end of the grades 4-5 band on their own RL.5.10
Citing textual evidence for what a text says and for inferences RL.6.1
Explaining how a chapter, scene or stanza fits into a whole text RL.6.5
Knowing that dialogue is what characters say, usually set off by quotation marks in a story
"Here are the first words of three texts you will read today. (1) 'There was once upon a time a piece of wood in the shop of an old carpenter.' (2) 'Mrs. Fallon: It's time for ourselves to be going home.' (3) 'Is there anybody there?' said the Traveller, / Knocking on the moonlit door. Which one is a story, which is a play, and which is a poem? Write the clue that told you."
Take answers and write the clues on the board in three columns. Students usually notice the storybook opening in (1), the name and colon in (2), and the short line with a capital letter in (3). Tell them that each genre gives the reader different jobs. A story has a narrator, the voice that tells it. A play has a cast (the list of characters), and stage directions, the words in parentheses and italics that tell actors what to do. A poem has a speaker, the voice of the poem, and is written in lines grouped in stanzas. Today students get a map of four questions for each genre, and the support they get will shrink as the lesson goes on.
Direct Instruction15-20 minutes
How hard is "grade level"? The Common Core places the reading of grades 6, 7 and 8 in one text complexity band. Some texts sit at the low end of the band (familiar words, events told in order) and some at the high end (old or unfamiliar words, a dialect, several meanings at once). In grade 6, students should read texts across the band well, and for the hardest ones a teacher may give scaffolding: a context note, a glossary, a read-aloud or a map with prompts. The goal is to need less of it over the year.
The story map (Diagram 1, left) asks four questions: Who is in it? Where and when? What is the problem? What changes? Hand out the story map with prompts, read the opening of Pinocchio aloud while students follow, and think aloud through the four worked examples below. Say out loud where you slow down and which fix-up strategy you choose. The paragraphs are numbered.
1There was once upon a time a piece of wood in the shop of an old carpenter named Master Antonio. Everybody, however, called him Master Cherry, on account of the end of his nose, which was always as red and polished as a ripe cherry.
2No sooner had Master Cherry set eyes on the piece of wood than his face beamed with delight, and, rubbing his hands together with satisfaction, he said softly to himself:
3"This wood has come at the right moment; it will just do to make the leg of a little table."
4He immediately took a sharp axe with which to remove the bark and the rough surface, but just as he was going to give the first stroke he heard a very small voice say imploringly, "Do not strike me so hard!"
5He turned his terrified eyes all around the room to try and discover where the little voice could possibly have come from, but he saw nobody! He looked under the bench--nobody; he looked into a cupboard that was always shut--nobody; he looked into a basket of shavings and sawdust--nobody; he even opened the door of the shop and gave a glance into the street--and still nobody. Who, then, could it be?
6"I see how it is," he said, laughing and scratching his wig, "evidently that little voice was all my imagination. Let us set to work again."
7And, taking up the axe, he struck a tremendous blow on the piece of wood.
8"Oh! oh! you have hurt me!" cried the same little voice dolefully.
9This time Master Cherry was petrified. His eyes started out of his head with fright, his mouth remained open, and his tongue hung out almost to the end of his chin, like a mask on a fountain. As soon as he had recovered the use of his speech he began to say, stuttering and trembling with fear:
10"But where on earth can that little voice have come from that said 'Oh! oh!'? Is it possible that this piece of wood can have learned to cry and to lament like a child? I cannot believe it. This piece of wood is nothing but a log for fuel like all the others, and thrown on the fire it would about suffice to boil a saucepan of beans. How then? Can anyone be hidden inside it? If anyone is hidden inside, so much the worse for him. I will settle him at once."
Carlo Collodi (translator not named in this edition), Pinocchio: The Tale of a Puppet, chapter I, the opening (1883; this edition 1916). Public domain (published 1916). Source text.
Story map: who is in it, and where?
Paragraph 1: "There was once upon a time a piece of wood in the shop of an old carpenter named Master Antonio. Everybody, however, called him Master Cherry." Who is in the story so far, and where are we?
Result: Two "characters": an old carpenter with two names, Master Antonio and the nickname Master Cherry (from his red nose), and a piece of wood. The setting is his workshop. "Once upon a time" tells us the narrator will not give a real date, as in a fairy tale. Note it on the map: one person, one object, one room.
Story map: what is the problem?
Paragraph 4 ends with a "very small voice" saying "Do not strike me so hard!" Paragraph 5 describes the search: "He looked under the bench--nobody; he looked into a cupboard that was always shut--nobody." What is the problem, and how does the paragraph make us feel it?
Result: The problem: a voice speaks, and there is no one there. The paragraph repeats "nobody" after every place Master Cherry looks, so the reader searches with him and comes up empty each time. The dashes work like pauses before each disappointing answer. Map entry: a voice with no speaker; he cannot find it.
Fix-up: picture it
Paragraph 9: "His eyes started out of his head with fright, his mouth remained open, and his tongue hung out almost to the end of his chin, like a mask on a fountain." What does this look like, and what does it tell us?
Result: Picture an old stone fountain with a carved face whose mouth hangs open to let the water out. Master Cherry's face is frozen in the same shape. The comparison tells us he is too frightened to move or speak, which the next sentence confirms: he needs time to recover "the use of his speech."
Fix-up: reread a long sentence
Paragraph 10: "This piece of wood is nothing but a log for fuel like all the others, and thrown on the fire it would about suffice to boil a saucepan of beans." A student reads it once and says, "He is going to cook beans." Reread and fix the restatement.
Result: Reread in two halves. First half: the wood is only firewood, like any other log. Second half: burned, it would be just enough ("about suffice") to cook one small pot of beans. Master Cherry is not cooking; he is telling himself the log is ordinary and worth very little, so it cannot be talking. What changes on the map: he moves from delight (paragraph 2) to fear to trying to argue the fear away.
Teacher tip. Point out that paragraphs 6 and 10 give Master Cherry's explanations for the voice, and that the narrator does not tell us whether either one is right. Readers of a story must keep track of what a character believes as well as what happens. That job gets bigger in the play, where there is no narrator at all.
Guided Practice15 minutes
This scene is the hardest text in the lesson, so pairs get two supports along with the play map with prompts. Context note:The play is set on the day of a market fair in a small Irish town about 1904. Bartley Fallon is a farmer. His neighbor Jack Smith, on his way to cut hay in the Five Acre Meadow, has just hurried off into the crowd to help with a horse, leaving his hayfork behind. Mrs. Tarpey sells apples at a stall on the same stage and is there for the whole scene. The characters speak Irish English, a dialect: a form of English with its own grammar and words, such as "I have all I bought put in the basket" for "I have put everything I bought in the basket."Glossary card: hayfork, a long wooden fork for lifting hay; fair green, the open field where the fair is held; Glory be!, an exclamation of surprise; temperate, never drinking too much. Each speech and each stage direction has a number.
1Mrs. Fallon: It's time for ourselves to be going home. I have all I bought put in the basket. Look at there, Jack Smith's hayfork he left after him! He'll be wanting it. (Calls.) Jack Smith! Jack Smith!--He's gone through the crowd--hurry after him, Bartley, he'll be wanting it.
2Bartley: I'll do that. This is no safe place to be leaving it. (He takes up fork awkwardly and upsets the basket.) Look at that now! If there is any basket in the fair upset, it must be our own basket! (He goes out to right.)
3Mrs. Fallon: Get out of that! It is your own fault, it is. Talk of misfortunes and misfortunes will come. Glory be! Look at my new egg-cups rolling in every part--and my two pound of sugar with the paper broke----
[...]
4(Enter Tim Casey.)
5Tim Casey: Where is Bartley Fallon, Mrs. Fallon? I want a word with him before he'll leave the fair. I was afraid he might have gone home by this, for he's a temperate man.
6Mrs. Fallon: I wish he did go home! It'd be best for me if he went home straight from the fair green, or if he never came with me at all! Where is he, is it? He's gone up the road (jerks elbow) following Jack Smith with a hayfork.
7(She goes out to left.)
8Tim Casey: Following Jack Smith with a hayfork! Did ever any one hear the like of that. (Shouts.) Did you hear that news, Mrs. Tarpey?
9Mrs. Tarpey: I heard no news at all.
10Tim Casey: Some dispute I suppose it was that rose between Jack Smith and Bartley Fallon, and it seems Jack made off, and Bartley is following him with a hayfork!
11Mrs. Tarpey: Is he now? Well, that was quick work! It's not ten minutes since the two of them were here, Bartley going home and Jack going to the Five Acre Meadow; and I had my apples to settle up, that Jo Muldoon of the police had scattered, and when I looked round again Jack Smith was gone, and Bartley Fallon was gone, and Mrs. Fallon's basket upset, and all in it strewed upon the ground--the tea here--the two pound of sugar there--the egg-cups there--Look, now, what a great hardship the deafness puts upon me, that I didn't hear the commencement of the fight! Wait till I tell James Ryan that I see below; he is a neighbour of Bartley's, it would be a pity if he wouldn't hear the news!
Lady Gregory, Spreading the News, the hayfork (shortened) (1904; this edition 1916). Public domain (published 1916). Source text.
Who is on stage? (paragraphs 1-7). Pairs list the characters present at the start and mark every entrance and exit. Teacher note: Mrs. Fallon, Bartley and Mrs. Tarpey are on stage; Bartley leaves in paragraph 2 ("He goes out to right"), Tim Casey arrives in paragraph 4, and Mrs. Fallon leaves in paragraph 7. By paragraph 8 only Tim Casey and Mrs. Tarpey remain.
What do the actors do? (paragraphs 1, 6 and 8). Pairs read only the stage directions and act them out with their hands. Teacher note: "(Calls.)" in paragraph 1 means Mrs. Fallon turns and shouts into the crowd, then speaks to Bartley again; "(jerks elbow)" in paragraph 6 is a quick point up the road; "(Shouts.)" in paragraph 8 marks the moment Tim Casey turns the news into an announcement.
Who talks to whom? (paragraphs 5-8). Teacher note: Tim Casey asks Mrs. Fallon a question in paragraph 5, and she answers it in paragraph 6; in paragraph 8 he repeats her last words to himself before calling to Mrs. Tarpey. Remind pairs that in a play the speaker's name, not a narrator, tells them who is talking.
Who believes what? (paragraphs 1, 6 and 10). Pairs make two columns, What really happened and What Tim Casey believes. Teacher note: in paragraph 1 Mrs. Fallon sends Bartley to return the fork ("hurry after him, Bartley, he'll be wanting it"). In paragraph 6 she says only that he is "following Jack Smith with a hayfork." In paragraph 10 Tim Casey adds what no one said: "Some dispute I suppose it was." The audience knows the truth; the characters do not.
Ask pairs which support they used most: the context note, the glossary or the prompts. Many pairs say the context note, because it tells them why a man with a hayfork is walking after his neighbor. Tell students that the poem comes next and that they will read it alone, with only the headings of the poem map.
Independent Practice15 minutes
Each student reads "The Listeners" alone, using the poem map with headings only: Who speaks, and where? Read to the punctuation. What do you see and hear? What feeling is left? No glossary is given. Ask students to read the poem three times: once straight through, once stopping only at periods, colons and semicolons, and once aloud in a whisper. On a sticky note they write the line number where they got most confused and the fix-up strategy they tried there. Collect the notes to plan the next lesson. Questions 11-14 and 19 of the quiz use this poem.
1'Is there anybody there?' said the Traveller, Knocking on the moonlit door; And his horse in the silence champed the grasses Of the forest's ferny floor: 5And a bird flew up out of the turret, Above the Traveller's head: And he smote upon the door again a second time; 'Is there anybody there?' he said. But no one descended to the Traveller; 10No head from the leaf-fringed sill Leaned over and looked into his grey eyes, Where he stood perplexed and still. But only a host of phantom listeners That dwelt in the lone house then 15Stood listening in the quiet of the moonlight To that voice from the world of men: Stood thronging the faint moonbeams on the dark stair, That goes down to the empty hall, Hearkening in an air stirred and shaken 20By the lonely Traveller's call. And he felt in his heart their strangeness, Their stillness answering his cry, While his horse moved, cropping the dark turf, 'Neath the starred and leafy sky; 25For he suddenly smote on the door, even Louder, and lifted his head:-- 'Tell them I came, and no one answered, That I kept my word,' he said. Never the least stir made the listeners, 30Though every word he spake Fell echoing through the shadowiness of the still house From the one man left awake: Ay, they heard his foot upon the stirrup, And the sound of iron on stone, 35And how the silence surged softly backward, When the plunging hoofs were gone.
Walter de la Mare, The Listeners (1912; this edition 1916). Public domain (published 1916). Source text.
Closure5 minutes
Exit ticket: (1) Which genre map question helped you most today, and on which text? (2) Name one support you used on the play and say whether you could read the next scene without it.
Teacher note on language and content: the translation of Pinocchio is more than a hundred years old and keeps its old-fashioned words ("suffice," "woe"; "Indian corn," in chapter II, is an older name for maize), and in chapter II two old men insult each other and fight over wigs, played for comedy. Spreading the News is written in the Irish English of its time; present it as a real dialect, not as broken English. The homework scene jokes about a death that never happened: Mrs. Tarpey mistakes a sheet drying on a hedge for a sheet laid out for the dead. "The Listeners" is a mysterious poem set at night that some readers find unsettling. All passages are quoted exactly as printed.
For homework and the quiz: students read the two passages below. At the end of chapter I (not printed), Master Cherry beats the log against the wall and then starts to smooth it with his plane, until the little voice laughs, "Stop! you are tickling me all over!" He falls to the floor as if struck by lightning, and his red nose turns blue with fright. Chapter II begins at that moment. In the play, after the scene in T2, Mrs. Tarpey goes off to find James Ryan. Earlier that morning, a new magistrate (a local judge) and a policeman had walked through the fair; they are not part of the quarrel.
1At that moment some one knocked at the door.
2"Come in," said the carpenter, without having the strength to rise to his feet.
3A lively little old man immediately walked into the shop. His name was Geppetto, but when the boys of the neighborhood wished to make him angry they called him Pudding, because his yellow wig greatly resembled a pudding made of Indian corn.
4Geppetto was very fiery. Woe to him who called him Pudding! He became furious and there was no holding him.
5"Good-day, Master Antonio," said Geppetto; "what are you doing there on the floor?"
6"I am teaching the alphabet to the ants."
7"Much good may that do you."
8"What has brought you to me, neighbor Geppetto?"
9"My legs. But to tell the truth. Master Antonio, I came to ask a favor of you."
10"Here I am, ready to serve you," replied the carpenter, getting on his knees.
11"This morning an idea came into my head."
12"Let us hear it."
13"I thought I would make a beautiful wooden puppet; one that could dance, fence, and leap like an acrobat. With this puppet I would travel about the world to earn a piece of bread and a glass of wine. What do you think of it?"
14"Bravo, Pudding!" exclaimed the same little voice, and it was impossible to say where it came from.
15Hearing himself called Pudding, Geppetto became as red as a turkey-cock from rage and, turning to the carpenter, he said in a fury:
16"Why do you insult me?"
17"Who insults you?"
18"You called me Pudding!"
19"It was not I!"
20"Do you think I called myself Pudding? It was you, I say!"
21"No!"
22"Yes!"
23"No!"
24"Yes!"
25And, becoming more and more angry, from words they came to blows, and, flying at each other, they bit and fought, and scratched.
26When the fight was over Master Antonio was in possession of Geppetto's yellow wig, and Geppetto discovered that the grey wig belonging to the carpenter remained between his teeth.
27"Give me back my wig," screamed Master Antonio.
28"And you, return me mine, and let us be friends again."
29The two old men having each recovered his own wig, shook hands and swore that they would remain friends to the end of their lives.
Carlo Collodi (translator not named in this edition), Pinocchio: The Tale of a Puppet, chapter II, the opening (1883; this edition 1916). Public domain (published 1916). Source text.
1Tim Casey: Listen, Shawn Early! Listen, Mrs. Tully, to the news! Jack Smith and Bartley Fallon had a falling out, and Jack knocked Mrs. Fallon's basket into the road, and Bartley made an attack on him with a hayfork, and away with Jack, and Bartley after him. Look at the sugar here yet on the road!
2Shawn Early: Do you tell me so? Well, that's a queer thing, and Bartley Fallon so quiet a man!
3Mrs. Tully: I wouldn't wonder at all. I would never think well of a man that would have that sort of a mouldering look. It's likely he has overtaken Jack by this.
4(Enter James Ryan and Mrs. Tarpey.)
5James Ryan: That is great news Mrs. Tarpey was telling me! I suppose that's what brought the police and the magistrate up this way. I was wondering to see them in it a while ago.
6Shawn Early: The police after them? Bartley Fallon must have injured Jack so. They wouldn't meddle in a fight that was only for show!
7Mrs. Tully: Why wouldn't he injure him? There was many a man killed with no more of a weapon than a hayfork.
8James Ryan: Wait till I run north as far as Kelly's bar to spread the news! (He goes out.)
[...]
9Shawn Early: I'll give word of it beyond at the east of the green.
10(Is going out when Mrs. Tarpey seizes hold of him.)
11Mrs. Tarpey: Stop a minute, Shawn Early, and tell me did you see red Jack Smith's wife, Kitty Keary, in any place?
12Shawn Early: I did. At her own house she was, drying clothes on the hedge as I passed.
13Mrs. Tarpey: What did you say she was doing?
14Shawn Early: (Breaking away.) Laying out a sheet on the hedge. (He goes.)
15Mrs. Tarpey: Laying out a sheet for the dead! The Lord have mercy on us! Jack Smith dead, and his wife laying out a sheet for his burying! (Calls out.) Why didn't you tell me that before, Shawn Early? Isn't the deafness the great hardship? Half the world might be dead without me knowing of it or getting word of it at all! (She sits down and rocks herself.) O my poor Jack Smith! To be going to his work so nice and so hearty, and to be left stretched on the ground in the full light of the day!
Lady Gregory, Spreading the News, the rumor grows (shortened) (1904; this edition 1916). Public domain (published 1916). Source text.
Differentiation Strategies
For Struggling Students
Read T1 aloud with the student first, pausing after each paragraph to fill in one box of the story map together
Give a printed cast list with one sentence about each character before the student reads T2
Let the student read "The Listeners" with a partner, one reading and one listening, before working alone
Keep the map with prompts for the poem, and remove the prompts on the homework instead
For Advanced Students
Ask the student to write the context note a classmate would need for T5, in 60 words or fewer
Have the student read chapter III of Pinocchio with no supports and fill in a story map for it
Ask the student to rank the five passages from easiest to hardest and name what made each hard: words, dialect, sentence length or meaning below the surface
Assessment Guidance
What to Look For
Look for students who choose the right map for a text without being told, and who can point to the exact spot where their understanding broke down ("line 25, I did not know who was knocking") and say what they did about it. A strong answer keeps what a character believes separate from what happened, uses the speaker names and stage directions in a play, and reads a poem sentence by sentence rather than line by line. Watch for students who skip stage directions, who treat every line of a poem as a separate sentence, and who stop reading at the first unfamiliar word. In grade 6, a student may still need the context note on a text written in dialect; the aim is the same reading with less help as the year goes on.
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Classroom Activities
3 Activities
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Genre Card Sort
15 minPairs
Pairs sort nine short excerpts from other parts of the same three works into story, drama and poem, and name the clue for each card. The sort builds the first habit of the genre maps: know what kind of text you are reading before you read closely.
The Nine Cards
"Night was coming on and Pinocchio, remembering that he had eaten nothing all day, began to feel a gnawing in his stomach that very much resembled appetite."
"Magistrate: So that is the Fair Green. Cattle and sheep and mud. No system. What a repulsive sight!"
"All winter through I bow my head / Beneath the driving rain; / The North wind powders me with snow / And blows me black again;"
"It was a wild and stormy night. The thunder was tremendous and the lightning so vivid that the sky seemed on fire."
"(James Ryan comes in, pipe in mouth. Seeing Magistrate he retreats quickly, taking pipe from mouth.)"
"Softly along the road of evening, / In a twilight dim with rose, / Wrinkled with age, and drenched with dew / Old Nod, the shepherd, goes."
"Geppetto lived in a small ground-floor room that was only lighted from the staircase."
"Mrs. Tarpey: Business, is it? What business would the people here have but to be minding one another's business?"
"Clouded with snow / The cold winds blow, / And shrill on leafless bough / The robin with its burning breast / Alone sings now."
Procedure
Each pair gets the nine cards, cut apart and shuffled (the slashes on the page show where a poem's lines break; on the cards, each line is printed on its own row)
Sort the cards into three piles and write the clue for each card on the back: a narrator's sentence, a speaker name, a stage direction, or line breaks
For every card, say who is speaking: a narrator, a character, or the speaker of a poem
Compare with another pair and settle any card you placed differently
Answer Key for the Teacher
Story (from Pinocchio, chapters III, V and VI): cards 1, 4 and 7, each told by a narrator. Drama (from Spreading the News): cards 2, 5 and 8, shown by speaker names and a stage direction in parentheses. Poem (from de la Mare's The Listeners and Other Poems: "The Scarecrow," "Nod" and "Winter"): cards 3, 6 and 9, shown by line breaks. Card 3 is the one to discuss: its speaker says "I," and the title of the poem reveals that the speaker is a scarecrow. Card 5 has no speech at all; it is only a stage direction.
Discussion Questions
Which card was hardest to sort, and what made you change your mind?
Card 5 has no words for an actor to say. How would an audience know what it says?
Card 3 says "I." How is a poem's "I" different from a narrator who tells a story?
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Block the Scene
15 minGroups of 5
In the theater, blocking means planning where actors stand and move. Groups block the scene in T2 on a paper stage, moving name tokens every time a stage direction or a speech says someone enters, leaves or turns. If the tokens are in the wrong places, the group has misread the scene.
Procedure
Draw a stage on a sheet of paper: the apple stall at the back, "right" and "left" marked from the actors' point of view, facing the audience
Make five tokens: Mrs. Fallon, Bartley, Mrs. Tarpey, Tim Casey and the hayfork
One student reads the scene aloud slowly; the others move the tokens at every entrance, exit and stage direction, including the hayfork
At paragraph 8, freeze the tokens and check them against the text before reading on
Discussion Questions
Where is the hayfork at the end of the scene? Which paragraph tells you?
Who is left on stage at paragraph 11? Why does it matter that neither of them saw Bartley pick up the fork?
Which stage direction did your group read in two different ways?
Modification
For groups who need more support, give the tokens with the entrances and exits already listed on an index card in order, and ask the group to find the paragraph number for each one.
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Four-Panel Poem
15 minIndividual, then pairs
Students draw "The Listeners" as a four-panel storyboard, a row of pictures like a comic strip, with a caption of exact words under each panel. Drawing is a fix-up strategy: if you cannot draw a line, you have found a place to reread.
The Four Panels
Panel 1, lines 1-8: the arrival and the first knocks
Panel 2, lines 9-20: inside the house
Panel 3, lines 21-28: the loudest knock and the message
Panel 4, lines 29-36: what is heard as the Traveller goes
Procedure
Sketch each panel in pencil; no art skills needed, stick figures are fine
Under each panel, copy the words from the poem that the drawing shows, with the line numbers
Mark with a question mark any detail you could not draw, then trade with a partner who tries to answer it from the poem
Discussion Questions
Which panel was hardest to draw, and why?
What sounds would you add to each panel if it were a film?
Did drawing make you notice a word you had skipped on the first reading?
Variation: Two-Voice Reading
Instead of drawing, pairs read the poem aloud with two voices: one reads only the Traveller's spoken words, the other reads everything else. Then they switch and talk about what the change in voice showed them.
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Diagrams & Visual Aids
2 diagrams
Diagram 1: Three Genre Maps
Each genre map asks four questions that fit the way that kind of literature works: a story is told by a narrator, a play is shown through speeches and stage directions, and a poem is spoken by a speaker in lines. The fix-up strip at the bottom works for all three.
Diagram 2: The Supports Come Off
The same map is used four times, but the supports change. The teacher thinks aloud only on the story; the play, the hardest text, gets a context note and a glossary; the poem and the homework are read with the map headings alone. This is the path RL.6.10 describes: proficient reading of the grades 6-8 band, with scaffolding as needed at the high end.
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Homework Assignment
~30 min
RL.6.10 Homework: The Rumor Grows
Directions: Read the second scene from Spreading the News (T5) and the opening of chapter II of Pinocchio (T4), both at the end of the lesson plan (in Closure), with the note just above them. This time there is no glossary and no prompts: use the headings of the play map and the story map on your own. Cite a paragraph number for every quotation.
Part 1: The Play (Problems 1-2)
Play map, who is on stage: list every character in T5 in the order they appear, and quote the stage direction or speech that shows each entrance or exit in paragraphs 4, 8, 10 and 14.
Track the rumor. In a chart with three columns (speaker, paragraph, what they add), follow the story of the "fight" from Tim Casey in paragraph 1 to Mrs. Tarpey in paragraph 15. For each speaker, quote the words that add something nobody saw, and end with one sentence on what really happened, using T2.
Part 2: The Story (Problems 3-4)
Story map for T4: answer the four questions (who is in it, where and when, what is the problem, what changes) in one or two sentences each, with a paragraph number for each answer.
Fix-up, picture it: paragraph 15 says Geppetto "became as red as a turkey-cock from rage." Use the words around it to explain what a turkey-cock must be, describe the picture the comparison makes, and restate the sentence in plain words.
Part 3: Across the Genres (Problems 5-6)
In a story, a narrator can tell us how a character feels; in a play, we learn it from the character's own words and the stage directions. Choose one angry or upset moment in each text (for example Geppetto in T4 and Mrs. Tarpey in T5). For each, quote the line and explain how you learn what the character feels: through the narrator's description, or through speech and stage directions.
Reading self-report: which of the five passages was hardest for you? In one paragraph of 5-7 sentences, name it, quote the exact place where you got stuck, name what made it hard (old words, dialect, long sentences or a hidden meaning), say which support or fix-up strategy you used, and say whether you could read the next part without that support.
Rubric
Criterion
Full Credit (2 pts)
Partial Credit (1 pt)
No Credit (0 pts)
Accurate Understanding
Answers match the passage, keeping what characters believe separate from what happened
Gets the main events but mixes up one belief or one event
Misreads the passage
Use of the Genre Maps
Uses the right map and answers every question on it
Uses the map but skips a question
No map used
Evidence and Citation
Exact quotations with paragraph numbers
Evidence without numbers, or one misquotation
No evidence
Self-Monitoring
Names a specific place where understanding broke down and what helped
Says a text was hard without saying where
No reflection
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Quiz: 20 Questions
Interactive, with answers
Instructions
Questions 1-5 and 17 use chapter II of Pinocchio (T4, in Closure), questions 6-10 and 18 use the scene from Spreading the News (T2, in Guided Practice), and questions 11-14 and 19 use "The Listeners" (T3, in Independent Practice); all are in the lesson plan above, with paragraph or line numbers. Questions 15-16 need no passage, and question 20 asks about your own reading. Your score updates as you answer, and Reset quiz clears everything.
Multiple choice: pick an option to check it. Short answer: write your answer, then reveal the model answer.
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Question 1 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Geppetto asks, "what are you doing there on the floor?" and Master Antonio answers, "I am teaching the alphabet to the ants" (T4, paragraphs 5-6). Why does he give this answer?
Answer: A
The note before T4 says chapter II begins just after Master Cherry fell down in fright, and paragraph 2 says he could not even "rise to his feet." Admitting that a log frightened him would be embarrassing, so he answers with a silly joke, and Geppetto's reply, "Much good may that do you," treats it as nonsense. Choice B takes a joke literally. Choice C mixes in the wig, which is not mentioned until later and has nothing to do with ants. Choice D invents a detail the passage never gives.
Question 2 of 20 · Multiple Choice
"'Bravo, Pudding!' exclaimed the same little voice, and it was impossible to say where it came from" (T4, paragraph 14). Using chapter I (T1), who or what is speaking?
Answer: C
"The same little voice" points back to chapter I, where "a very small voice" cried out from the piece of wood, and, as then, no one can tell where it came from. Choice A has no support: Master Antonio is in plain sight in the room, while the narrator says no one could tell where the voice came from. Choice B takes the boys from paragraph 3, who call Geppetto Pudding at other times, but no boy is in this scene. Choice D makes no sense: Geppetto hates the name and would not call himself Pudding, as paragraph 20 shows.
Question 3 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Why does the quarrel between the two old men start (T4, paragraphs 15-18)?
Answer: B
Paragraph 15 says, "Hearing himself called Pudding, Geppetto became as red as a turkey-cock from rage," and paragraph 18 repeats the charge: "You called me Pudding!" Paragraph 4 has already told us that Geppetto becomes furious at that name. Choice A has no support: in the passage Geppetto has not yet asked for any wood. Choice C gets the order wrong: the voice, not Master Antonio, answers the plan. Choice D confuses the cause with the result: the wigs change hands during the fight, in paragraph 26.
Question 4 of 20 · Multiple Choice
"Geppetto was very fiery. Woe to him who called him Pudding! He became furious and there was no holding him" (T4, paragraph 4). What does "Woe to him who called him Pudding" mean?
Answer: D
"Woe" means trouble or sorrow, and the next sentence shows whose trouble it is: Geppetto "became furious and there was no holding him," so the person who used the name would suffer. "Fiery" in the sentence before points the same way. Choice A reverses the meaning. Choice B gives the sorrow to Geppetto instead of to the person who insults him. Choice C invents a reason; paragraph 3 says the boys used the name "to make him angry."
Question 5 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Geppetto explains his plan: "With this puppet I would travel about the world to earn a piece of bread and a glass of wine" (T4, paragraph 13). What does "earn a piece of bread" mean here?
Answer: B
The puppet would "dance, fence, and leap like an acrobat," so Geppetto means to earn money by showing it, and "a piece of bread and a glass of wine" stands for the plain food a poor man lives on. He hopes for a modest living, not a fortune. Choice A takes the words literally and gives the food to a wooden puppet. Choice C also reads the phrase literally; no bakers are mentioned. Choice D reverses the size of his hopes: a piece of bread is very little.
Question 6 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Mrs. Tarpey decides to tell James Ryan because "he is a neighbour of Bartley's, it would be a pity if he wouldn't hear the news!" (T2, paragraph 11). What does this show about her?
Answer: A
She calls it "a pity" for anyone to miss the story, as if news were a treat to share, and she has just admitted that she did not see or hear any fight. Choice B has no support: she never mentions helping Bartley or his family. Choice C invents a plan; she wants James Ryan to hear the news, not to act on it. Choice D has no support: she shows no fear, only eagerness.
Question 7 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Mrs. Tarpey says, "Look, now, what a great hardship the deafness puts upon me, that I didn't hear the commencement of the fight!" (T2, paragraph 11). What does "commencement" mean?
Answer: D
Earlier in the same speech she explains that she looked away to set out her apples, "and when I looked round again" both men were gone. She missed the start, so "commencement" means the beginning. Choice A reverses it: she thinks she missed the start, not the end. Choice B is a different question, why they fought, which she also does not know. Choice C does not fit the verb "hear."
Question 8 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Mrs. Tarpey never saw a fight. Which words in her speech (T2, paragraph 11) tell what she really did see of the two men, ten minutes earlier?
Answer: B
"It's not ten minutes since the two of them were here," she says, and what she saw was ordinary: Bartley going home and Jack going to his hay. Everything else in her speech is guessing. Choice A is her reaction to Tim Casey's news, not something she saw. Choice C is something she saw after both men had gone, and paragraph 2 shows it was an accident. Choice D is her plan to spread the news.
Question 9 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Bartley says, "Look at that now! If there is any basket in the fair upset, it must be our own basket!" (T2, paragraph 2). What does this line show about him?
Answer: C
Out of every basket at the fair, he says, bad luck found his. He sees his own clumsy accident as proof that misfortune follows him, and his wife answers in paragraph 3, "Talk of misfortunes and misfortunes will come." Choice A has no support; he is leaving to return the fork. Choice B invents blame: he names no one. Choice D reads ahead in the play; Bartley never mentions Mrs. Tarpey.
Question 10 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Tim Casey wants to catch Bartley: "I was afraid he might have gone home by this, for he's a temperate man" (T2, paragraph 5). Using the glossary, why would a temperate man already have gone home?
Answer: A
The glossary card defines temperate as never drinking too much. A man who does not stay to drink after the buying and selling are done has no reason to linger, so Tim Casey expects him to leave early. Choice B confuses Bartley with his wife, who is the angry one in paragraphs 3 and 6. Choice C has no support in the scene. Choice D brings in a worry that is not in this scene and does not explain the word "temperate."
Question 11 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Use the poem map. Who is the speaker of "The Listeners" (T3)?
Answer: B
The poem calls him "the Traveller" and "he" from line 1 to line 36, so the speaker stands outside the scene and describes it; the only "I" in the poem is inside the Traveller's quoted words in lines 27-28. Choice A confuses his spoken lines with the speaker's voice. Choice C has no support: the listeners never speak, and the poem says "Never the least stir made the listeners." Choice D gives a voice to the horse, which the speaker only describes.
Question 12 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Read lines 9-12 to the punctuation: "But no one descended to the Traveller; / No head from the leaf-fringed sill / Leaned over and looked into his grey eyes, / Where he stood perplexed and still." What is the subject of the verb "Leaned"?
Answer: C
The sentence after the semicolon runs across three lines: "No head ... Leaned over and looked into his grey eyes." No face appeared at the window. Choice A takes the person being looked at. Choice B is where the head would have been, "from the leaf-fringed sill." Choice D is the object of "looked into," not the one doing the leaning.
Question 13 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Lines 13-17 describe "a host of phantom listeners / That dwelt in the lone house then" who "Stood thronging the faint moonbeams on the dark stair." Using the words around it, what does "phantom" mean here?
Answer: A
The house is "lone," "no one descended," and yet something stands "listening" in the moonbeams, a presence the Traveller feels in his heart (lines 21-22) but never sees. So phantom means like ghosts. Choice B contradicts "the quiet of the moonlight" and their "stillness." Choice C has no support in the lines. Choice D adds details the poem never gives.
Question 14 of 20 · Multiple Choice
The Traveller calls out: "'Tell them I came, and no one answered, / That I kept my word,' he said" (lines 27-28). Who is "them"?
Answer: B
He asks the listeners to pass a message on: "Tell them I came." So "them" must be someone else, the people to whom he gave his word that he would come; they are not there, and the poem never says who they were. Choice A cannot be right, because the listeners are the ones being asked to tell. Choice C is a detail from line 5, not a person he made a promise to. Choice D has no support in the poem.
Question 15 of 20 · Multiple Choice
A grade 6 class reads a play written in an old dialect. The teacher gives a context note and a glossary first, and then gives the next scene with no glossary. Which part of RL.6.10 does this match?
Answer: D
RL.6.10 asks sixth graders to read texts in the grades 6-8 band proficiently, "with scaffolding as needed at the high end of the range," and the aim is to need less support over time. Choice A avoids hard texts instead of supporting them. Choice B contradicts the standard, which names stories, dramas and poems. Choice C leaves out the scaffolding the standard allows; reading the high end of the band independently is the goal for the end of grade 8 (RL.8.10).
Question 16 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Paragraphs 16-23 of T4 are almost all quarreling voices: "Why do you insult me?" "Who insults you?" "You called me Pudding!" Why is this still part of a story and not a play?
Answer: C
The chapter is told by a narrator ("At that moment some one knocked at the door"), and even in the quarrel the lines are set in quotation marks with no names in front, so the reader works out who is speaking from the order of the lines. A play would print each speaker's name. Choice A is false: the lines do not rhyme. Choice B describes a play, and this chapter has no stage directions. Choice D is false: the lines go back and forth between the two men.
Question 17 of 20 · Short Answer
Check a summary. A classmate sums up T4, paragraphs 25-29, as: "Master Antonio and Geppetto fight, and Geppetto goes home angry with the wrong wig." Check this against the paragraphs, explain what it gets wrong, and write a corrected summary.
Model answer: The summary gets the fight right but the ending wrong. After the fight, "Master Antonio was in possession of Geppetto's yellow wig" and Geppetto had the carpenter's grey wig in his teeth (paragraph 26), but they give the wigs back ("The two old men having each recovered his own wig") and "swore that they would remain friends to the end of their lives" (paragraph 29). Corrected: the two old men fight and grab each other's wigs, then swap them back and promise to stay friends forever. Rubric: 2 points for naming the error with a quotation and a correct summary; 1 point for a correct summary without explaining the error; 0 points otherwise.
Question 18 of 20 · Short Answer
Mrs. Fallon says, "I wish he did go home! It'd be best for me if he went home straight from the fair green, or if he never came with me at all!" (T2, paragraph 6). Why is she so cross with Bartley? Use paragraph 3 to explain, and say what her words show about her.
Model answer: She is cross because Bartley has just knocked over her basket (paragraph 2), and in paragraph 3 she sees the damage: "Look at my new egg-cups rolling in every part--and my two pound of sugar with the paper broke." She even blames his gloomy talk: "Talk of misfortunes and misfortunes will come." Her words show that she is quick-tempered and fed up with his bad luck, but her anger is about the basket, not about Jack Smith. The joke is that her careless words about her husband are what Tim Casey carries off as news. Rubric: 2 points for the reason with a quotation from paragraph 3 and a sound point about her character; 1 point for one of the two; 0 points otherwise.
Question 19 of 20 · Short Answer
Restate lines 33-36 of "The Listeners" in plain words: "Ay, they heard his foot upon the stirrup, / And the sound of iron on stone, / And how the silence surged softly backward, / When the plunging hoofs were gone." Then say what "the sound of iron on stone" is.
Model answer: Yes, the listeners heard him put his foot in the stirrup to climb onto his horse, heard the horse's hooves strike the stones as he rode off, and heard the silence flow back in once the galloping was gone. "The sound of iron on stone" is the horse's iron horseshoes hitting the stony ground. The ending shows that the listeners heard everything but never answered, and that the quiet of the house returned as if he had never come. Rubric: 2 points for an accurate restatement and the horseshoe explained; 1 point for one of the two; 0 points otherwise.
Question 20 of 20 · Short Answer
Of the three passages the quiz uses (the story, the play and the poem), which was hardest for you to read on your own? Name one specific place, say what made it hard, and say which support or fix-up strategy helped.
Model answer: The play was hardest for me. In T2, paragraph 1, "I have all I bought put in the basket" confused me because the words are in an unusual order. The difficulty was the dialect. I used the context note, which gives the same sentence in everyday English, and then I reread the speech aloud. After that I could follow the rest of the scene, and by paragraph 11 I only needed to reread one long sentence. Rubric: 2 points for a specific quoted place, a clear reason and a support or strategy shown in use; 1 point if one of the three is missing or vague; 0 points for "it was hard" with no specifics.
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Frequently Asked Questions
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What does RL.6.10 mean?
It means that by the end of grade 6, students read and understand stories, dramas and poems that are as challenging as the grades 6-8 band calls for. It is the "range and level" standard for literature: instead of one skill, it sets how hard the texts should be and asks students to handle all three genres. For the hardest texts, a sixth grader may still get support.
How is RL.6.10 different from RL.7.10 and RL.8.10?
RL.6.10 and RL.7.10 use the same words: proficient reading of the grades 6-8 band, with scaffolding as needed at the high end. The difference is where students start and how much support they still need at the end of the year. RL.8.10 is the end point of the band: by the end of grade 8, students read at the high end of the band "independently and proficiently."
What is the grades 6-8 text complexity band?
It is the range of difficulty the Common Core expects for literature read in grades 6, 7 and 8. Appendix A of the standards judges complexity in three ways: numbers a formula can count (word and sentence length, word frequency), qualities a reader judges (levels of meaning, structure, language, and the knowledge a text expects), and the reader and the task. A short poem with a hidden meaning can be harder than a long, plain story.
What counts as scaffolding in grade 6 reading?
Any temporary support that helps a student read a text they cannot yet read alone: a short context note, a glossary, a read-aloud, a partner, or a map of questions with prompts. Scaffolding should be planned to come off. In this lesson the play gets a context note and a glossary, the poem gets only map headings, and the homework gets no support.
How can a teacher tell that a text is at the high end of the band for sixth graders?
Look beyond length. A text is harder when it uses a dialect or old words (Spreading the News), leaves important things unsaid ("The Listeners" never explains why the house is empty), shifts between what characters believe and what is true, or expects knowledge students may not have, such as what a market fair was like. Then think about your students: a text can be easy for one reader and hard for another.
Why use a different map for each genre?
Because each genre puts meaning in different places. In a story, a narrator tells you what happens. In a play, there is no narrator: you learn everything from speaker names, speeches and stage directions. In a poem, meaning is packed into lines, sounds and pictures, and sentences often run across line breaks. A map that fits the genre sends the reader to the right places.
Is RL.6.10 tested?
Usually not by itself. Tests and class assessments give students literature passages at grade level and ask questions about them for the other reading standards, such as citing evidence (RL.6.1) or finding a theme (RL.6.2). A student who cannot read the passage cannot answer. In class, a teacher can check RL.6.10 directly by giving a new passage with less support and looking at the student's summary, map and notes on where they got stuck.
Why read older texts like Pinocchio and a 1904 play with sixth graders?
They are rich, short and challenging in ways students need practice with: older words, a dialect, a narrator who jokes with the reader, and a poem that leaves questions open. They are also in the public domain, so they can be printed in full on the page. Pair them with modern books your school owns; the genre maps work the same way on a new novel, play or poem.
How can parents help a sixth grader with hard reading?
Ask your child what kind of text it is first: a story, a play or a poem. Then ask one map question, such as "Who is on stage?" or "What is the problem?" If they are stuck, suggest rereading the part aloud or picturing it. Reading a short summary of an earlier chapter is fair support, as long as the original text is still what they read.
What comes after RL.6.10?
RL.7.10 keeps the same band and the same wording for grade 7, with students expected to need support less often, and RL.8.10 asks for reading at the high end of the band independently by the end of grade 8. RI.6.10 sets the matching goal for literary nonfiction in grade 6.
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Related Standards
5 standards
These standards connect to RL.6.10: prerequisites to review first, parallel standards at the same level, and next steps that build on it.
Before this lesson
RL.5.10Prerequisite
Read grade 5 stories, dramas and poetry at the high end of the 4-5 band independently
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Alongside
RI.6.10Parallel
Read literary nonfiction in the grades 6-8 band, with scaffolding as needed
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RL.6.5Parallel
Analyze how a sentence, chapter, scene or stanza fits into a text's structure