RI.7.7: Comparing a Text with Its Audio, Video and Multimedia Versions
In plain English: RI.7.7 is the Common Core grade 7 ELA standard that asks students to compare and contrast a text with an audio, video or multimedia version of the same text, analyzing how each medium portrays the subject. For example, students explain how a speaker's pauses and tone change the impact of a speech's words. It builds on RI.6.7 and leads to RI.8.7.
Compare and contrast a text to an audio, video, or multimedia version of the text, analyzing each medium's portrayal of the subject (e.g., how the delivery of a speech affects the impact of the words).
Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts & Literacy · Domain: Reading Standards for Informational Text · Cluster: Integration of Knowledge and Ideas · Official standard
Students compare and contrast a text with an audio, video or multimedia version of the same text, and analyze how each medium portrays the subject. A version can keep every word of a text and still change how it comes across, through a speaker's delivery (pace, pauses, volume and tone), through added sound, music and pictures, or through what it cuts. The standard's example, how the delivery of a speech affects the impact of the words, is the model for the lesson.
Every version is described in words, so no screen or recording is needed. The teacher models with Abraham Lincoln's Farewell Address at Springfield (1861) and two recordings of it (Passages 1 and 2). Pairs compare John Wesley Powell's account of entering the Grand Canyon in 1869 with an interactive museum feature (Passages 3 and 4). Students work alone on Amelia Earhart's account of reaching land in 1928 and a documentary video (Passages 5 and 6) for the quiz. The homework pairs the end of Mark Twain's toast "The Babies" (1879) with a filmed stage performance (Passages 7 and 8). The texts are public domain; the recordings, museum feature and videos are invented for this page. All eight passages are printed in the lesson plan.
Learning Objectives
By the end of this lesson, students will be able to:
Compare a text with an audio, video or multimedia version of it, naming what the version keeps
Contrast a text with its version, naming what the version cuts, adds or changes
Explain how delivery (pace, pauses, volume and tone) affects the impact of a speech's words
Analyze how the text and the version each portray the subject, with evidence from both
Prior Knowledge Required
Students should already be comfortable with:
Integrating information presented in different media or formats as well as in words RI.6.7
Comparing the experience of reading a story with listening to or viewing an audio or live version of it RL.6.7
Citing several pieces of textual evidence with a passage and paragraph number RI.7.1
Using context to work out the meaning of an unfamiliar word
"Say the sentence 'Oh, great, we have a test today' two ways: once as if you are thrilled, and once as if you are not. The words did not change. What did?"
Have two or three volunteers say the sentence both ways. List on the board what changed: speed, loudness, pauses, which word was stressed, the look on the speaker's face. Tell students that these choices are called delivery: how words are spoken, not which words are used. Then ask: if you only read the sentence on paper, which meaning would you pick, and why? Explain that RI.7.7 asks students to compare a text with an audio, video or multimedia version of the same text, and to notice how each version changes the way the subject comes across.
Direct Instruction15 minutes
Teach the terms and leave them on the board:
Medium (plural media): the form a text comes in. A print text is words on a page. An audio version is the text in sound, such as a recording. A video version has moving pictures and sound. A multimedia version mixes several forms, such as text, pictures, sound, maps and buttons a visitor can click.
Version: the same text presented again, whole or in part, sometimes with changes.
Compare: tell how two things are alike. Contrast: tell how they are different.
Portrayal: the way a text or version presents its subject, and what that makes the subject seem like (brave, sad, dangerous, funny). The subject is the person, event or idea the text is about.
Delivery: how a speaker says the words: pace (speed), pauses (silences), volume (loudness), tone (the feeling in the voice) and emphasis (extra force on a word).
Impact: the effect the words have on the audience.
What to notice in each medium
Medium
Questions to ask
Print text
What do the words alone say? What must the reader imagine: sound, tone, setting?
Audio
How are the words delivered? What sounds or music are added? Is anything cut?
Video
What do the pictures show? Are scenes acted out? Does the music tell viewers how to feel?
Multimedia
What can the audience click, drag or play? What is added, left out or mixed from other times?
Every version
Does it keep the facts of the text? How does it portray the subject compared with the text?
Introduce the text. On February 11, 1861, Abraham Lincoln left Springfield, Illinois, where he had lived and worked for many years, to travel by train to Washington, D.C., and become president. Seven Southern states had already declared that they were leaving the Union. Standing on the train, he spoke a few words to the neighbors who had come to see him off. Lincoln married in Springfield, and his son Eddie died there in 1850, before his fourth birthday. Words to know: oppressive (heavy, crushing), the most cherished ties of earth were assumed (the closest bonds of his life were formed, such as his marriage), checkered (full of good and bad times), assume a task (take on a job), devolved upon (fell to), prevail (win out), forsake (abandon), commend (hand over to someone's care) and invoke (call on, pray for). Lincoln spoke without a written text, and the newspapers and books that printed the speech afterward give it in different wordings; Passage 1 is the version printed in a 1905 edition of his writings, and both recordings in Passage 2 use it. Read Passage 1 aloud without expression, as flatly as you can. Then read Passage 2, which describes two recordings of the same speech, invented for this page.
1MY FRIENDS:--One who has never been placed in a like position cannot understand my feelings at this hour, nor the oppressive sadness I feel at this parting. For more than twenty-five years I have lived among you, and during all that time I have received nothing but kindness at your hands. Here the most cherished ties of earth were assumed. Here my children were born, and here one of them lies buried. To you, my friends, I owe all that I have, all that I am. All the strange checkered past seems to crowd upon my mind. To-day I leave you. I go to assume a task more difficult than that which devolved upon General Washington. Unless the great God who assisted him shall be with and aid me I cannot prevail; but if the same almighty arm that directed and protected him shall guide and support me I shall not fail; I shall succeed. Let us pray that the God of our fathers may not forsake us now. To Him I commend you all. Permit me to ask that with equal sincerity and faith you will all invoke His wisdom and goodness for me.
2With these words I must leave you; for how long I know not. Friends, one and all, I must now wish you an affectionate farewell.
Abraham Lincoln, Farewell Address at Springfield, Illinois, February 11, 1861 (Passage 1, the complete speech in one printed version) (1861; this edition 1905). Public domain (published 1905). Source text.
1Recording A comes from the audio tour of a history museum. The speech takes 2 minutes and 5 seconds. Before the actor speaks, listeners hear rain falling on a wooden roof and a steam engine hissing. There is no music and no narrator.
2The actor speaks slowly and quietly, as if he were talking to neighbors standing close to him. After "Here my children were born," he stops for about three seconds. His voice drops almost to a whisper for "and here one of them lies buried."
3He speaks faster and louder for "I go to assume a task more difficult than that which devolved upon General Washington." At "I shall not fail; I shall succeed," his voice is firm but not loud. On "for how long I know not," his voice seems to catch, and he takes a breath before going on. The recording ends with a train whistle, then silence.
4Recording B comes from a radio drama about Lincoln's life. The speech takes 1 minute and 30 seconds. A narrator begins: "Springfield, Illinois. The President-elect says goodbye." A brass band plays softly under the whole speech.
5The actor speaks loudly and quickly, like a politician at a campaign rally, and his voice stays strong from beginning to end. The sentence "All the strange checkered past seems to crowd upon my mind" is left out. A crowd cheers after "I shall succeed," and cheers again at the end.
6When the speech is over, the band grows louder, and the narrator says: "And with those words, Abraham Lincoln rode off to save the Union."
7Neither recording uses Lincoln's own voice, because no recording of Lincoln's voice exists. Both actors read from the version of the speech printed in Passage 1.
Written for this page, Two Recordings of the Farewell Address (Passage 2: invented audio versions, described in words, written for this page). Original passage written for this page.
Compare: what the text and Recording A share
Passage 2 says both actors "read from the version of the speech printed in Passage 1," and Recording A leaves nothing out. How are the printed speech and Recording A alike in the way they present Lincoln's goodbye?
Result: Both present the goodbye through the same words in the same order, from the opening sadness to the "affectionate farewell." In both, Lincoln tells his neighbors, "To you, my friends, I owe all that I have, all that I am" (Passage 1, paragraph 1), so both portray a man who feels deeply in debt to the town. Recording A adds sound, but it adds no new claims and removes none, so a reader and a listener meet the same ideas.
Contrast: what Recording B cuts and adds
Recording B leaves out "All the strange checkered past seems to crowd upon my mind" and opens with a narrator: "Springfield, Illinois. The President-elect says goodbye." How does Recording B differ from the printed speech?
Result: The cut removes the one sentence where Lincoln looks back over a life of good and bad times, a private, mixed feeling. The narrator's opening adds a frame the text does not have: before Lincoln says a word, listeners are told this is an official event starring "The President-elect," not a neighbor talking to friends. Recording B is shorter and more formal than the printed speech.
Delivery: a pause and a whisper
In Recording A, "After 'Here my children were born,' he stops for about three seconds. His voice drops almost to a whisper for 'and here one of them lies buried.'" How does this delivery affect the impact of the words?
Result: In print, the sentence "Here my children were born, and here one of them lies buried" goes by in a moment, and a reader may not stop at all. The pause splits the happy half from the sad half, and the whisper makes the second half sound like grief shared with close friends. The delivery makes the loss of his son hit the audience harder than the printed words alone.
Delivery: a voice that works against the words
In Recording B, "The actor speaks loudly and quickly, like a politician at a campaign rally, and his voice stays strong from beginning to end." The first sentence of the speech speaks of "the oppressive sadness I feel at this parting." What happens to the impact of that sentence?
Result: The words say Lincoln is weighed down by sadness, but a loud, quick, strong voice sounds confident and excited. The listener hears confidence, so the sadness in the words is easy to miss. The same words have a weaker emotional impact in Recording B than in print, where nothing competes with them.
Analyzing each medium's portrayal
Put the three versions side by side. How does each one portray the subject, Lincoln's farewell to Springfield?
Result: The printed speech has only words, so its portrayal comes from what they say: a humble man who asks his neighbors to pray for him ("you will all invoke His wisdom and goodness for me"). Recording A adds sound effects and a quiet voice, and portrays a private, grieving goodbye. Recording B adds a band, a narrator and cheering, and portrays a public, confident send-off. Recording A stays close to the portrayal in the words; Recording B changes it.
Keep, change, effect. Show Diagram 1, a delivery map of Recording A drawn to scale, and model three moves with the examples: find what the version keeps from the text (compare); find what it cuts, adds or delivers differently (contrast); explain what each difference does to the portrayal of the subject (analyze). Give students a frame: "Both the text and the version ___. But the version ___, while the text ___. Because of this, the text makes [the subject] seem ___, and the version makes it seem ___."
Guided Practice15 minutes
Introduce the text. In 1869, John Wesley Powell, a geologist (a scientist who studies rocks and the earth) who had lost his right arm below the elbow in the Civil War, led a small group of men in wooden boats down the Colorado River, making the first recorded trip by boat through the Grand Canyon. Powell wrote his account later from his journal, in the present tense, as if he were keeping a diary. Passage 3 is his entry for August 13, the day the party entered the Grand Canyon itself. Words to know: chafe (rub), buoyant (floating easily), rations (food supplies), resifted (sifted again), portage (carrying the boats and supplies around a rapid on land), insignificance (seeming unimportant), puny (small and weak), pigmies (an old word the author uses to mean tiny people; see the teacher note in Closure), beset (crowd around, trouble), conjecture (guess), jests are bandied about (jokes are passed back and forth), somber (gloomy), ghastly (horrible) and misgiving (doubt). Then read Passage 4, an interactive museum feature about the same day, invented for this page. Interactive means the visitor clicks, drags or scrolls to control what appears.
1AUGUST 13.--We are now ready to start on our way down the Great Unknown. Our boats, tied to a common, stake, chafe each other as they are tossed by the fretful river. They ride high and buoyant, for their loads are lighter than we could desire. We have but a month's rations remaining. The flour has been resifted through the mosquito-net sieve; the spoiled bacon has been dried and the worst of it boiled; the few pounds of dried apples have been spread in the sun and reshrunken to their normal bulk. The sugar has all melted and gone on its way down the river. But we have a large sack of coffee. The lightening of the boats has this advantage: they will ride the waves better and we shall have but little to carry when we make a portage.
2We are three quarters of a mile in the depths of the earth, and the great river shrinks into insignificance as it dashes its angry waves against the walls and cliffs that rise to the world above; the waves are but puny ripples, and we but pigmies, running up and down the sands or lost among the boulders.
3We have an unknown distance yet to run, an unknown river to explore. What falls there are, we know not; what rocks beset the channel, we know not; what walls rise over the river, we know not. Ah, well! we may conjecture many things. The men talk as cheerfully as ever; jests are bandied about freely this morning; but to me the cheer is somber and the jests are ghastly.
4With some eagerness and some anxiety and some misgiving we enter the canyon below and are carried along by the swift water through walls which rise from its very edge. [...]
J. W. Powell, Canyons of the Colorado, chapter XI, the entry for August 13 (Passage 3; the end of the fourth paragraph is left out and marked [...]) (1875; this edition 1895). Public domain (published 1895). Source text.
1Opening screen. A drone video, filmed in the Grand Canyon today, glides between red cliffs above a brown river. White words appear over it: "August 13, 1869. Nine men. Three boats. One unknown river." Soft guitar music plays. A button says "Begin the journey."
2Screen 1: The boats. Powell's first paragraph appears one sentence at a time as the visitor scrolls down. Beside it, a photograph shows a wooden boat that a museum built to match Powell's boats. Visitors can click the words "flour," "bacon," "apples" and "coffee" to see a drawing of each food. A counter in the corner reads "Rations left: about 30 days."
3Screen 2: The depths. A cross-section drawing shows the canyon walls rising on both sides of the river. A tiny boat sits at the bottom, and an arrow beside the wall is labeled "three quarters of a mile." Visitors drag a slider to make the walls grow from the river up to the rim.
4Screen 3: The unknown. A speaker button plays an actor reading the first two sentences of Powell's third paragraph over the roar of rushing water. The actor reads the words "we know not" louder each time. The rest of the paragraph, about the men's jokes and Powell's own dark mood, is not read aloud and does not appear on the screen.
5Screen 4: The map. A map traces the river through the canyon, with a dot for each camp. Clicking a dot shows the date and a short caption. The last caption says that on August 28, three of the men left the river to climb out of the canyon, and that they were never seen again.
6Photo gallery. Eight black-and-white photographs show the canyon walls and men in wooden boats. A line in small print under the gallery says: "Photographs from Powell's second expedition, 1871-1872. No photographs were taken on the 1869 trip."
Written for this page, Down the Great Unknown (Passage 4: an invented interactive museum feature, described in words, written for this page). Original passage written for this page.
Pairs fill in Diagram 2 for Passages 3 and 4, then answer the three questions below and share. Teacher notes:
The depths. Compare Screen 2 with Powell's second paragraph. Teacher note: both give the same depth, "three quarters of a mile." They contrast in portrayal: Powell measures the depth against the men themselves ("the waves are but puny ripples, and we but pigmies"), so the reader feels how small the party is, while the cross-section and slider turn the depth into a picture and a number that the visitor controls.
What Screen 3 leaves out. What happens to Powell's third paragraph? Teacher note: the feature drops "the men's jokes and Powell's own dark mood." In the text, the men are cheerful but "to me the cheer is somber and the jests are ghastly," so Powell portrays himself as a leader hiding his fear. Without those words, the feature portrays only an exciting adventure.
The photo gallery. What should a careful visitor notice? Teacher note: the pictures look as if they show the day in Passage 3, but the small print says they are from a later trip and that "No photographs were taken on the 1869 trip." A multimedia version can mix material from different times; the text is one writer's account of one day.
Independent Practice15 minutes
Introduce the text. In June 1928, Amelia Earhart crossed the Atlantic Ocean in the Friendship, a three-engine seaplane (an airplane that lands on water on floats), becoming the first woman to cross the Atlantic by air. She flew as a passenger and kept the flight's log (its written record). The pilot was Wilmer Stultz, called Bill, and the mechanic was Louis Gordon, called Slim. They took off from Trepassey, Newfoundland, on June 17. Passage 5 comes from the book Earhart published that same year. Words to know: ceiling (the height of the lowest clouds), altitude (height above the ground or sea), paralleled (ran alongside), nebulous (hazy, unclear), buoy (a floating marker anchored in place), taxied (moved slowly along the water), fuselage (the body of an airplane) and plane liner (an airliner). Students read Passage 5 and Passage 6, a documentary video about the same moment, invented for this page, and answer the quiz with Passages 1-6 open. They may fill in a fresh copy of Diagram 2 first.
1We could see only a few miles of water, which melted into the greyness on all sides. The ceiling was so low we could fly at an altitude of only 500 feet. As we moved, our miniature world of visibility, bounded by its walls of mist, moved with us. Half an hour later into it suddenly swam a fishing vessel. In a matter of minutes a fleet of small craft, probably fishing vessels, were almost below us. Happily their course paralleled ours. Although the gasoline in the tanks was vanishing fast, we began to feel land—some land—must be near. It might not be Ireland, but any land would do just then.
2Bill, of course, was at the controls. Slim, gnawing a sandwich, sat beside him, when out of the mists there grew a blue shadow, in appearance no more solid than hundreds of other nebulous “landscapes” we had sighted before. For a while Slim studied it, then turned and called Bill’s attention to it.
3It was land!
4I think Slim yelled. I know the sandwich went flying out the window. Bill permitted himself a smile.
5Soon several islands came into view, and then a coast line. From it we could not determine our position, the visibility was so poor. For some time we cruised along the edge of what we thought was typical English countryside.
6With the gas remaining, we worked along as far as safety allowed. Bill decided to land. After circling a factory town he picked out the likeliest looking stretch and brought the Friendship down in it. The only thing to tie to was a buoy some distance away and to it we taxied.
7There at Burry Port, Wales—we learned its name later—on the morning of June 18, we opened the door of the fuselage and looked out upon what we could see of the British Isles through the rain. For Bill and Slim and me it was an introduction to the Old World. Curiously, the first crossing of the Atlantic for all of us was in the Friendship. None that may follow can have the quality of this initial voyage. Although we all hope to be able to cross by plane again, we have visions of doing so in a trans-Atlantic plane liner.
Amelia Earhart, 20 Hrs. 40 Min.: Our Flight in the Friendship, the sighting of land and the start of chapter IX (Passage 5) (1928). Public domain (published 1928). Source text.
1Shot 1 (0:00-0:30). Picture: gray fog seen through the window of an airplane cabin. Sound: the steady drone of three engines. On-screen text: "June 18, 1928. Somewhere over the Atlantic." Narrator: "After almost twenty hours in the air, the crew of the Friendship did not know where they were."
2Shot 2 (0:30-1:10). Picture: a close-up of a fuel gauge, its needle sinking toward empty. Sound: a clock ticks, louder and louder, over low, tense music. On-screen text: "One hour of fuel left."
3Shot 3 (1:10-2:00). Picture: a reenactment. An actress playing Amelia Earhart grips the controls and steers the plane down through the clouds. The actors playing Bill and Slim sit behind her, looking worried. The word "Dramatization" appears in one corner for two seconds.
4Shot 4 (2:00-2:40). Picture: fishing boats appear on the gray water below, then a dark coastline. The actress points and shouts, "Land!" The actor playing Slim tosses his sandwich into the air, and a cartoon "boing" sound plays as it flies out the window. The music turns bright and cheerful.
5Shot 5 (2:40-3:20). Picture: an animated map. A red line runs from Trepassey, Newfoundland, across the ocean to Burry Port, Wales. A clock beside the line counts up to "20 hours 40 minutes."
6Shot 6 (3:20-4:00). Picture: black-and-white photographs of cheering crowds in Wales. Narrator: "Amelia Earhart had become the first woman to cross the Atlantic by air. Soon her name was known around the world." For three seconds, small words appear at the bottom of the screen: "Earhart flew as a passenger. The pilot was Wilmer Stultz."
Written for this page, Friendship: Across the Atlantic (Passage 6: an invented documentary video, described in words, written for this page). Original passage written for this page.
Closure5-10 minutes
Exit ticket: (1) Name one thing a version kept from its text and one thing it changed, from any pair of passages. (2) Finish the sentence: "The same words can have a different impact in a recording because ___."
Teacher note on the sources and the facts. Passages 2, 4, 6 and 8 are invented for this page: the recordings, the museum feature, the documentary and the stage video do not exist, and the actors are imaginary. The facts they mention are real: no recording of Lincoln's voice exists; Powell's party of nine men in three boats entered the Grand Canyon on August 13, 1869, and on August 28 three men left the river and were never seen again; the photographs of Powell's trips come from his second expedition of 1871-1872; the Friendship flew from Trepassey, Newfoundland, to Burry Port, Wales, in 20 hours and 40 minutes, with Wilmer Stultz as pilot; and Mark Twain gave the toast "The Babies" in Chicago in November 1879, at a banquet for General Grant. Lincoln never came back to Springfield alive: he was buried there in 1865. On the wording of Passage 1: Lincoln spoke without notes, and reporters printed different versions of what he said. Passage 1 follows the 1905 Constitutional Edition of his writings, edited by Arthur Brooks Lapsley. The best-known version, the one in the Collected Works of Abraham Lincoln (edited by Roy P. Basler), is a text Lincoln wrote out afterward; it begins "My friends, No one, not in my situation, can appreciate my feeling of sadness at this parting." If students find that version online, explain that its words differ, and that every question on this page uses Passage 1. Passage 1 speaks of God and prayer, as speeches of its time often did. On dated language: in Passage 3, Powell uses "pigmies" to mean tiny people. The word began as the name of tiny people in ancient Greek legends and was later used by Europeans for some peoples of central Africa, so many readers today find it offensive when it is used for people. Name that plainly if students ask, and keep the focus on Powell's comparison of the men with the size of the canyon.
For homework: students read Passage 7, the last part of Mark Twain's toast "The Babies," and Passage 8, a video of an actor performing it on stage, invented for this page. A toast is a short speech at a dinner, before the guests drink in honor of someone or something. In November 1879, veterans of the Army of the Tennessee, who had fought under Ulysses S. Grant in the Civil War, held a banquet for him in Chicago; Grant had been president from 1869 to 1877. Twain was given the toast "The Babies," and he spoke directly to the old soldiers. Words to know: toast-master (the person who announces the toasts), schooner of State (the nation, pictured as a sailing ship), leviathan (a giant sea creature; here, something huge), Great Eastern (the largest steamship of its time), Farragut (David Farragut, a famous Union admiral), unarticulated (not put into words), profanity (swearing), languid (weak, lazy), wet-nurse (a woman hired to feed another family's baby), office-seekers (people who ask a president for government jobs), illustrious (famous and admired) and prophecy (a sign of what is to come). Twain later wrote to a friend that the toast had made Grant laugh.
1Yes, it was high time for a toast-master to recognize the importance of the babies. Think what is in store for the present crop! Fifty years from now we shall all be dead, I trust, and then this flag, if it still survive (and let us hope it may), will be floating over a Republic numbering 200,000,000 souls, according to the settled laws of our increase. Our present schooner of State will have grown into a political leviathan—a Great Eastern. The cradled babies of to-day will be on deck. Let them be well trained, for we are going to leave a big contract on their hands. Among the three or four million cradles now rocking in the land are some which this nation would preserve for ages as sacred things, if we could know which ones they are. In one of these cradles the unconscious Farragut of the future is at this moment teething—think of it! and putting in a world of dead earnest, unarticulated, but perfectly justifiable profanity over it, too. In another the future renowned astronomer is blinking at the shining Milky Way with but a languid interest poor little chap!—and wondering what has become of that other one they call the wet-nurse. In another the future great historian is lying—and doubtless will continue to lie until his earthly mission is ended. In another the future President is busying himself with no profounder problem of state than what the mischief has become of his hair so early; and in a mighty array of other cradles there are now some 60,000 future office-seekers, getting ready to furnish him occasion to grapple with that same old problem a second time. And in still one more cradle, some where under the flag, the future illustrious commander-in-chief of the American armies is so little burdened with his approaching grandeurs and responsibilities as to be giving his whole strategic mind at this moment to trying to find out some way to get his big toe into his mouth—an achievement which, meaning no disrespect, the illustrious guest of this evening turned his entire attention to some fifty-six years ago; and if the child is but a prophecy of the man, there are mighty few who will doubt that he succeeded.
Mark Twain, The Babies, the last paragraph of the toast (Passage 7) (1879; this edition 1910). Public domain (published 1910). Source text.
1The video is 3 minutes and 10 seconds long. It was filmed in a small theater set up to look like a hotel banquet hall in 1879, with long tables, candles and flags. A title card at the start reads: "Chicago, November 1879. A banquet for General Ulysses S. Grant. Mark Twain gives the fifteenth toast."
2The actor playing Mark Twain has bushy gray hair and a thick mustache. He speaks in a slow drawl and hardly smiles, even when the audience laughs. Before each joke, he waits. He stops for about two seconds after "the future great historian is lying," raises one eyebrow, and only then adds, "and doubtless will continue to lie until his earthly mission is ended."
3The camera often cuts to an actor playing General Grant at the head table. For most of the toast, Grant sits still with a serious face.
4The video leaves some sentences out. After "Think what is in store for the present crop!" the actor goes straight to "The cradled babies of to-day will be on deck." The sentences about the flag, the 200,000,000 people and the "schooner of State" are not spoken, and neither is the joke about the wet-nurse.
5Near the end, the actor slows down even more. He speaks the words about the future commander-in-chief softly, as if telling a secret, and turns toward Grant just before "to get his big toe into his mouth." Then he waits almost five seconds before the last words: "and if the child is but a prophecy of the man, there are mighty few who will doubt that he succeeded." The actor playing Grant bursts out laughing, and the audience in the theater claps and cheers.
6Captions are available in English.
Written for this page, The Babies on Stage (Passage 8: an invented video of a stage performance, described in words, written for this page). Original passage written for this page.
Differentiation Strategies
For Struggling Students
Give a card with the five terms from Direct Instruction (version, compare, contrast, portrayal, delivery) and one example of each from Passages 1 and 2
Read each text aloud twice before students read its version, and have them mark one sentence they want to hear delivered
For Guided Practice, assign only the "In both" and "Only in the version" columns of Diagram 2 first, then add the third column with a partner
For Advanced Students
Ask them to write a third recording of Passage 1, described in words, whose delivery portrays Lincoln as calm and hopeful, and explain each choice
Have them find the line in Passage 6 that corrects the video and argue whether three seconds of small print is enough
Ask them to rewrite Screen 3 of Passage 4 so that it keeps Powell's dark mood, and explain how the change affects the portrayal
Assessment Guidance
What to Look For
Check that each answer names a likeness and a difference between the text and the version, points to the exact words in the text and the exact sound, shot or feature in the version, and explains how the difference changes the way the subject comes across. The strongest answers explain the effect of delivery on specific words. A common weak answer lists differences without effects ("the video has music"); ask "What does the music make the subject seem like?" and "Which words in the text does it change?"
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Classroom Activities
3 Activities
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Say It Three Ways
15 minPairs
Each pair gets six line cards and three delivery cards, all written for this activity. One partner reads a line with a delivery; the other listens and writes what the speaker seems to feel. Then they compare what the printed line alone suggested.
The Six Line Cards
"The field trip is canceled."
"I finished the whole project by myself."
"We won by one point."
"Thank you all for coming tonight."
"The last bus leaves in five minutes."
"This is our final day together."
Procedure
The three delivery cards say: "Slow and quiet," "Fast and loud" and "Pause before the last word."
The reader draws a line card and a delivery card and says the line; the listener writes one word for the feeling it portrays, such as proud, worried, bored or sarcastic (8 minutes)
Partners switch after three lines. Then, for each line, they write what the printed card alone suggested and which delivery changed it most (5 minutes)
Two pairs compare and share one line whose meaning flipped (2 minutes)
Discussion Questions
Did any delivery make a line mean the opposite of what the words seem to say on the card?
Which carries more of the meaning in a short line: the words or the delivery? Does your answer change for a long speech?
Modification
For students who need support, use only cards 1, 3 and 6 and model the first line with all three deliveries before pairs begin.
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Storyboard Swap
15 minGroups of 3-4
Each group gets one of four short text cards, written for this activity (the events are invented), and turns it into a three-shot video storyboard. Then groups swap, and each group compares another group's storyboard with its text card.
The Four Text Cards
Lighthouse log, March 3: "Heavy fog since dawn. Rang the fog bell every two minutes for six hours. At noon one fishing boat passed close to the rocks and turned away in time."
Weather report: "A storm will reach the coast tonight with winds up to 60 kilometers per hour. Schools will open two hours late tomorrow. Bring outdoor furniture inside."
Library news: "The town library turns 100 this year. Its first books arrived by train in 1926, packed in twelve wooden crates. Today it also lends e-books and telescopes."
Game recap: "Down by two points with ten seconds left, the Hawks passed the ball three times and made a three-point shot at the buzzer. The final score was 48-47."
Procedure
The group plans three shots. For each, it writes the picture, the sound and any words on the screen (7 minutes)
Groups swap storyboards and text cards. The new group fills in Diagram 2: what the storyboard kept, what it cut, and what it added or changed (5 minutes)
Each group reports the biggest change and how it alters the portrayal of the subject, for example a calm log turned into a scary scene (3 minutes)
Discussion Questions
Did any storyboard add something that is not on its card, such as a scared crowd or a scene that is acted out? Is that a problem?
Which card was hardest to turn into pictures, and what did that group do instead?
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Two Readings
10 minWhole class
The teacher reads one short paragraph, written for this activity, twice, following two different delivery scripts. Students keep a two-column listening log and then compare both readings with the printed paragraph.
The Paragraph
"On the first morning of school, the hallway was loud and crowded. I did not know anyone. I found my locker, but the lock would not open. Then a girl I had never met stopped, turned the dial twice, and smiled. The lock opened. That was how I met my best friend."
Procedure
Reading 1: fast and bright, no pauses, with a laugh at "the lock would not open"
Reading 2: slow and quiet, with a three-second pause after "I did not know anyone" and another after "and smiled"
Students write, in each column, what the reading made the first day seem like and which delivery choice did it. Then they reread the printed paragraph silently and decide which reading is closer to it, with one reason
Variation
For a harder version, students write their own delivery script for the paragraph, marking pauses with a slash and stressed words with underlining, and explain how their script portrays the narrator.
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Diagrams & Visual Aids
2 diagrams
Diagram 1: A Delivery Map of Recording A
An original chart of Recording A in Passage 2, drawn to scale: each bar is a stretch of the speech, its width is the time it takes and its height is how loud the actor speaks. The gaps are the three-second pause after "Here my children were born" and the breath after "for how long I know not." The speech lasts 2 minutes and 5 seconds.
Diagram 2: Text and Version Organizer
Pairs copy this organizer in Guided Practice for Passages 3 and 4, and may use it again for Passages 5 and 6. They list what only the text has, what both share and what only the version has, then write how each medium portrays the subject.
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Homework Assignment
~30 min
RI.7.7 Homework: Mark Twain's Toast in Print and on Stage
Directions: Read Passage 7 and Passage 8 at the end of the lesson plan (in Closure). Cite them by passage and paragraph, for example (Passage 8, paragraph 2). Answer Problems 1-4 in 3-5 sentences each. For every answer, quote or name the words, sounds or pictures you are writing about.
Part 1: The Toast in Print (Problems 1-2)
In Passage 7, Twain imagines babies in their cradles who will grow up to be famous. Choose two of these babies, such as "the unconscious Farragut of the future" or "the future President." Explain how the printed words portray babies as important people, and how they make the comparison funny.
The last sentence of Passage 7 is very long, and the joke about General Grant comes only at the end. Explain what a reader of the print version has to do to get the joke, and why a reader might miss it on the page.
Part 2: The Toast on Stage (Problems 3-4)
In Passage 8, the actor "stops for about two seconds after 'the future great historian is lying,' raises one eyebrow, and only then adds" the rest of the sentence. Explain how this delivery affects the impact of the words, compared with reading the same sentence in Passage 7.
The video leaves out "The sentences about the flag, the 200,000,000 people and the 'schooner of State'" and the joke about the wet-nurse. Contrast the two versions: how does leaving these lines out change what the toast seems to be about?
Part 3: Compare, Contrast and Analyze (Problems 5-6)
Make a three-column chart with the headings "Only in the print text," "In both" and "Only in the video." Write at least two entries in each column, each with a quotation or a detail from Passage 7 or Passage 8.
Write a paragraph of 6-8 sentences: How does each version portray General Grant? Compare what the print text and the video share, contrast at least two differences (one of them about delivery), and explain how each difference changes the way Grant comes across.
Rubric
Criterion
Full Credit (2 pts)
Partial Credit (1 pt)
No Credit (0 pts)
Compare and Contrast
Names specific likenesses and differences between the text and the version
Names only likenesses or only differences, or names them vaguely
No comparison
Delivery and Medium
Explains how a delivery choice or a feature of the medium changes the impact of specific words
Names a delivery choice or feature without explaining its effect
Not addressed
Portrayal
Explains how each version makes the subject seem, and why
Describes one version's portrayal only
Summary only
Evidence and Accuracy
Quotes or names details from both passages, with passage and paragraph numbers; no misreadings
Some evidence, or one misreading
No evidence, or several misreadings
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Quiz: 20 Questions
Interactive, with answers
Instructions
Questions 1-3 are about the terms of the standard. Questions 4-8 and 17 use Passages 1 and 2 (Direct Instruction), questions 9-11, 18 and 19 use Passages 3 and 4 (Guided Practice), and questions 12-16 use Passages 5 and 6 (Independent Practice). Question 20 uses one pair of your choice. Your score updates as you answer, and Reset quiz clears everything.
Multiple choice: pick an option to check it. Short answer: write your answer, then reveal the model answer.
0 of 20 answered · 0 correct
Question 1 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which of these is an audio version of a text?
Answer: B
Choice B presents the same text in sound, so it is an audio version. Choice A is a picture, not a version of the text. Choice C confuses a version with a different text on the same topic. Choice D is a shorter print text, still in the same medium.
Question 2 of 20 · Multiple Choice
In the standard's example, "the delivery of a speech" means
Answer: C
Choice C: delivery is how words are spoken. Choice A describes the words themselves, which stay the same when the delivery changes. Choices B and D describe the occasion and the audience, not the way the words are spoken.
Question 3 of 20 · Multiple Choice
To analyze each medium's portrayal of the subject, a student asks
Answer: D
Choice D: a portrayal is how a version presents its subject and what the subject seems like as a result. Choices A and B ask about facts of production and length, which do not say how the subject comes across. Choice C replaces analysis with personal preference.
Question 4 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Passage 2: before the actor speaks in Recording A, listeners hear rain on a wooden roof and a steam engine hissing. What do these sounds add that the printed speech does not give?
Answer: A
Choice A: Passage 1 gives only Lincoln's words, and the sounds of rain and a steam engine set the scene of a departure by train. Choice B misreads the note that "no recording of Lincoln's voice exists." Choice C is wrong because only Recording B cuts anything. Choice D confuses the two recordings: the cheering is in Recording B, and Recording A has no crowd sounds.
Question 5 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Passage 2: in Recording A, the actor's voice "seems to catch" on "for how long I know not," and he takes a breath before going on. What does this delivery emphasize?
Answer: B
Choice B: "for how long I know not" means he does not know how long he will be gone, and the catch in the voice stresses that uncertainty and the sadness it brings. Choice C reverses the meaning of the words. Choice A has no support: Lincoln thanks his neighbors for "nothing but kindness." Choice D mistakes emotion for forgetting; the actor goes on with the next words.
Question 6 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Passage 2: Recording A speeds up and grows louder for "I go to assume a task more difficult than that which devolved upon General Washington." How does this change the sentence's impact, compared with the quiet lines before it?
Answer: C
Choice C: after the quiet, personal lines, the faster, louder delivery marks a shift to the huge job ahead, which Lincoln compares with Washington's. Choice A confuses emphasis with humor. Choice B is the opposite of the effect: a louder sentence stands out. Choice D has no support; Passage 2 says both actors read the version in Passage 1.
Question 7 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Passage 2: Recording B ends with the narrator saying, "And with those words, Abraham Lincoln rode off to save the Union." Which statement about this line is accurate?
Answer: A
Choice A: the printed speech ends with "I must now wish you an affectionate farewell," and Lincoln says he cannot succeed without God's help; he never claims he will save the Union. The narrator's line portrays his success as certain. Choice B misreads the speech's last sentence. Choice C confuses the narrator with the actor. Choice D is wrong because Recording A has "no music and no narrator."
Question 8 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Which statement is true of the printed speech (Passage 1) and both recordings (Passage 2)?
Answer: D
Choice D: the sentence is in Passage 1, Recording A speeds up for it, and the only sentence Recording B leaves out is the one about the "checkered past." Choice A is wrong because Recording B leaves that sentence out. Choice B is true only of Recording B. Choice C is true only of Recording B; Recording A ends with a train whistle, and the print text has no sound at all.
Question 9 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Passage 4 opens with the words "August 13, 1869. Nine men. Three boats. One unknown river." What does this opening do that Passage 3 does not?
Answer: A
Choice A: Passage 3 speaks of "Our boats" and "The men" but never counts them, so the feature adds facts from outside the passage. Choice B is wrong: Powell's first sentence is "We are now ready to start on our way down the Great Unknown." Choice C is wrong because the opening includes the date. Choice D has no support: the drone flies above the river, and Powell says "We are three quarters of a mile in the depths of the earth."
Question 10 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Screen 1 of Passage 4 has a counter that reads "Rations left: about 30 days." How does it present Powell's words "We have but a month's rations remaining"?
Answer: B
Choice B: "a month's rations" becomes "about 30 days," shown in a corner of the screen the whole time, which keeps the shortage in front of the visitor. Choice A misreads "a month's rations." Choice C is wrong because the counter is in the corner of the screen. Choice D misreads the passage: the bacon was spoiled but "dried and the worst of it boiled," and the men still had flour and "a large sack of coffee."
Question 11 of 20 · Multiple Choice
On the map in Passage 4, the last caption says that on August 28 three men left the river and "were never seen again." How does this change the way the day in Passage 3 comes across?
Answer: C
Choice C: Powell's entry stresses that the future is unknown ("an unknown river to explore"), but the map tells visitors about a loss still to come, so they read the day with a dread that Powell could only guess at. Choice A reverses the effect: the later loss supports his worry. Choice B has no support in either passage. Choice D is wrong: the passage's last sentence describes entering the canyon.
Question 12 of 20 · Multiple Choice
In Shot 3 of Passage 6, an actress playing Earhart "grips the controls and steers the plane down through the clouds." Which sentence from Passage 5 shows that this shot changes the facts?
Answer: A
Choice A: Earhart says the pilot, Bill, was flying the plane, so the reenactment puts her in a role she did not have. Choices B, C and D are accurate details of the flight and the landing, but none of them says who was flying.
Question 13 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Earhart writes, "I think Slim yelled. I know the sandwich went flying out the window." What does the printed account show here that Shot 4 of the video does not?
Answer: B
Choice B: "I think" and "I know" separate a guess from a certainty, a careful touch the video loses when it shows every action as fact. Choice A misreads "Slim, gnawing a sandwich." Choice C reverses the order: the fishing boats came first. Choice D describes the video, where Slim "tosses his sandwich into the air," not the text.
Question 14 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Shot 5 of Passage 6 shows a red line running to Burry Port, Wales. Passage 5 says the crew landed at Burry Port and "learned its name later." What is the difference between the two portrayals?
Answer: D
Choice D: in the text the crew "could not determine our position" and learned the town's name only after landing, while the map shows the destination from the start. Choice A is wrong: the video's map also ends in Wales. Choice B reverses the facts: the video's clock counts to "20 hours 40 minutes," while the words of Passage 5 give no flight time (only the book's title does). Choice C is wrong: the video never shows night, and the text says "on the morning of June 18."
Question 15 of 20 · Short Answer
Compare Passages 5 and 6: explain one way both portray the flight as dangerous near its end. Quote or name a detail from each passage.
Model answer: Both show that the plane was running out of fuel. Earhart writes that "the gasoline in the tanks was vanishing fast" (Passage 5, paragraph 1), and the video shows "a fuel gauge, its needle sinking toward empty," with the words "One hour of fuel left" (Passage 6, Shot 2). The text states the danger calmly in one clause, while the video stretches it out with a ticking clock and tense music. Rubric: 2 points for a shared portrayal supported by a detail from each passage; 1 point for a detail from only one passage; 0 points otherwise.
Question 16 of 20 · Short Answer
Contrast how Passages 5 and 6 portray Amelia Earhart and her place in the crew. Use at least two details from each passage.
Model answer: The text portrays a team, with Earhart as the one who watches and records. Slim is the one who "studied it, then turned and called Bill's attention to it," and the arrival is shared: "For Bill and Slim and me it was an introduction to the Old World." The video makes Earhart the hero: the actress "grips the controls," she is the one who "points and shouts, 'Land!'" and the narrator names only her. The correction, "Earhart flew as a passenger," appears in small words for only three seconds. The text portrays a shared adventure; the video portrays one person's triumph. Rubric: 2 points for a clear contrast with two details from each passage; 1 point for a contrast with thin evidence; 0 points otherwise.
Question 17 of 20 · Short Answer
In Passage 2, both recordings include "I shall not fail; I shall succeed." Explain how each recording's delivery affects the impact of these words.
Model answer: In Recording A, "his voice is firm but not loud," so the words sound like a quiet promise to neighbors, which fits the text, where success depends on help: "Unless the great God who assisted him shall be with and aid me I cannot prevail" (Passage 1, paragraph 1). In Recording B, "A crowd cheers after 'I shall succeed,'" so the line sounds like a boast at a victory rally, and the humble condition before it is lost. The same words move from a hope to a sure thing. Rubric: 2 points for explaining the effect of both deliveries with evidence; 1 point for one recording only; 0 points otherwise.
Question 18 of 20 · Short Answer
In Screen 3 of Passage 4, "The actor reads the words 'we know not' louder each time." Explain how this delivery affects the impact of Powell's repeated words, compared with reading them in Passage 3.
Model answer: In print, the reader sees the pattern "What falls there are, we know not; what rocks beset the channel, we know not; what walls rise over the river, we know not" (Passage 3, paragraph 3), and can hear it quietly in the mind, almost like a list. Read louder each time over "the roar of rushing water," the words build like an alarm, and the danger seems to grow with every repetition. The delivery turns quiet worry into rising suspense. Rubric: 2 points for explaining how the delivery changes the impact, with evidence from both passages; 1 point for describing the delivery without its effect; 0 points otherwise.
Question 19 of 20 · Short Answer
The opening screen of Passage 4 is a drone video that "glides between red cliffs above a brown river" while "Soft guitar music plays." Contrast this portrayal of the canyon with Powell's second paragraph (Passage 3).
Model answer: Powell writes from the bottom of the canyon, where the river "dashes its angry waves against the walls" and the men are tiny, "running up and down the sands or lost among the boulders" (Passage 3, paragraph 2). His canyon is huge and threatening. The drone looks down from above with soft music, so the canyon seems calm and beautiful, and the viewer is safe and far away. The text portrays a place that makes people feel small and in danger; the video portrays scenery. Rubric: 2 points for a clear contrast with evidence from both passages; 1 point for evidence from only one; 0 points otherwise.
Question 20 of 20 · Short Answer
Choose one pair: Passages 1 and 2, Passages 3 and 4, or Passages 5 and 6. Write a paragraph that compares the text and its version, contrasts them, and analyzes how each medium portrays the subject.
Model answer (Passages 5 and 6): Both versions tell the same story in the same order: the fog, the fishing boats, the first sight of land and the landing at Burry Port. They differ in mood. The text is modest and a little funny ("Bill permitted himself a smile"), while the video uses ticking clocks, tense music and a cartoon "boing" to tell viewers how to feel. As a result, the text portrays a crew that stayed calm while it was lucky, and the video portrays a thriller with a happy ending. Rubric: 2 points each for a likeness, a difference and an analysis of each medium's portrayal, all supported by evidence (6 points); 1 point each when a part is present but unsupported.
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Frequently Asked Questions
10 Questions
What does RI.7.7 mean?
It means seventh graders compare a text with an audio, video or multimedia version of that same text. The standard asks students to "compare and contrast" the two and to analyze "each medium's portrayal of the subject": what each version keeps, what it changes, and how it makes the subject seem.
What is an example of RI.7.7 in class?
The standard's own example is a speech: students read the words, then listen to a delivery of them, and explain how the delivery "affects the impact of the words." A pause, a whisper or a cheering crowd can change what the same sentence seems to mean. Other examples are a news article and its video report, or a memoir and a documentary about it.
How is RI.7.7 different from RL.7.7?
They are the same skill for different kinds of text. RL.7.7 compares a story, drama or poem with its audio, filmed, staged or multimedia version. RI.7.7 does it for informational texts, such as speeches, articles, letters and memoirs, where accuracy and the facts of the subject matter as much as the effect.
Do students have to watch videos or listen to recordings for RI.7.7?
Not necessarily. A recording or video can be described in words, as this lesson does, which lets any class practice without screens and lets students quote the description exactly. Teachers who have a good recording of a speech or a documentary about a text can use it as well; the thinking is the same.
What does "portrayal of the subject" mean?
It means the way a version presents its subject, and what that makes the subject seem like. One recording of a farewell speech may make the speaker seem grieving and humble; another may make him seem confident and triumphant. Students name the portrayal and point to the choices that create it.
Is the original text always more accurate than the video version?
Not always, but versions often add, cut or change things, and students should check. A video may act out a scene, add music that tells viewers how to feel, or put someone in a role he or she did not have. A careful answer names what changed and whether the version marks it, for example with a small "Dramatization" label.
What should a strong RI.7.7 answer include?
A strong answer does three things: it names a likeness (compare), names a difference (contrast), and explains how the difference changes the way the subject comes across (analyze). It quotes the text and names the exact sound, shot or feature in the version. A list of differences with no effect explained is only half the job.
How is RI.7.7 different from RI.8.7?
RI.7.7 compares a text with a version of the same text and analyzes how each portrays the subject. RI.8.7, the next year, asks students to evaluate the advantages and disadvantages of different mediums for presenting a topic: which medium works better, and for what purpose.
How is RI.7.7 assessed?
Usually with a short text paired with a description, transcript or clip of a version, and questions such as "What does the recording add?", "Which detail from the text does the video change?" or "How does the speaker's delivery affect the impact of this sentence?" Written responses are scored on specific comparisons and evidence from both versions.
How can parents help with RI.7.7 at home?
Pick something your child has read, such as a news story or a famous speech, and watch or listen to a version of it together. Ask what the version kept, what it changed, and whether the speaker's voice or the music made the subject seem different from the page.
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Related Standards
6 standards
These standards connect to RI.7.7: prerequisites to review first, parallel standards at the same level, and next steps that build on it.
Before this lesson
RI.6.7Prerequisite
Integrate information presented in different media or formats with words