RI.6.5: How a Sentence, Paragraph, Section or Chapter Fits the Structure of a Text
In plain English: RI.6.5 is the Common Core grade 6 ELA standard that asks students to analyze how one part of a nonfiction text, such as a sentence, paragraph, section or chapter, fits into the structure of the whole text and helps develop its ideas. Students ask where the part fits, what job it does there and what it adds. It builds on RI.5.5 and leads to RI.7.5.
Analyze how a particular sentence, paragraph, chapter, or section fits into the overall structure of a text and contributes to the development of the ideas.
Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts & Literacy · Domain: Reading Standards for Informational Text · Cluster: Craft and Structure · Official standard
Students analyze how one part of a nonfiction text fits into the overall structure of the whole text (the way the whole is put together: its parts and the order they come in) and how that part contributes to the development of the ideas (what it adds, explains or proves). The standard names four sizes of parts: a sentence, a paragraph, a section (a group of paragraphs about one stage or one topic) and a chapter (a large numbered part of a book). For any part, students ask two questions: Where does it fit, and what does it add?
The text is Sailing Alone Around the World (1900) by Joshua Slocum, a sea captain who rebuilt a very old sloop, the Spray, with his own hands and then sailed it around the world by himself between 1895 and 1898. The book is built in clear layers: every chapter starts with a summary line that lists its sections in order, and chapter I moves from Slocum's life at sea, to the gift of a rotting boat, to its rebuilding and launch. Students work from the whole book (the contents, Passage 1) down to chapter I (Passages 2-4) and single sentences. The quiz uses the opening of chapter II (Passage 5), and the homework uses a later part of chapter II (Passage 6). All six passages are printed in the lesson plan.
Learning Objectives
By the end of this lesson, students will be able to:
Explain how a chapter fits into the overall structure of a book, using the chapter lines of a table of contents
Identify where a section begins and ends, using transitions, time words and turning points
Explain how a particular sentence or paragraph fits into the structure around it, naming what comes before and after
Explain how a particular part contributes to the development of the ideas, citing words from the text
Prior Knowledge Required
Students should already be comfortable with:
Comparing the overall structure of events or ideas in texts, such as chronology or problem and solution RI.5.5
Determining a central idea of a text and the details that convey it RI.6.2
Quoting accurately from a text to support an answer RI.6.1
Recognizing time words and transitions such as then, the next day, but and however
"The pages of a comic book have come loose and fallen on the floor, and the page numbers are torn off. How would you put the story back in order? Name two clues you would look for."
Take answers: time words ("the next morning"), a character who is introduced before we see him again, a question on one page that is answered on another, the first and last pages. Tell students that every part of a well-built text has a place and a job, and today they will find both in a true story written by a sea captain who rebuilt an old boat and sailed it around the world alone.
Direct Instruction15 minutes
Teach seven terms and leave them on the board with Diagram 2:
Structure: the way a text is put together, its parts and the order they come in.
Section: a group of paragraphs that belong together because they cover one stage of events or one topic. A chapter can have several sections.
Chronological order: time order, telling events in the order they happened.
Transition: a word, sentence or paragraph that connects one part to the next, such as "Thus," "The next day" or "One midwinter day."
Turning point: the place where events change direction, so the text starts a new stage.
Flash-forward: a jump ahead in time to tell something that happens later, before going back to the story.
Develop an idea: to add to an idea by explaining it, showing it with examples or giving evidence for it.
Introduce the writer. Joshua Slocum (born 1844) was a Nova Scotia-born American sea captain. In 1895, at 51, he set out from Boston in the Spray, a 37-foot sloop (a sailboat with one mast), and came home in 1898 after more than 46,000 miles, the first person known to sail alone around the world. His book about the voyage came out in 1900. Show Passage 1, which comes from the book's table of contents: under each chapter number, Slocum wrote a line of short phrases that list the chapter's parts in order. Words to know in Passage 1:blue-nose (a nickname for a person from Nova Scotia, in Canada), Yankee (here, a person from the United States, especially New England), proclivities (leanings, habits), bark and canoe (two kinds of boats), conundrums (puzzling problems), calking (an older spelling of caulking: packing the seams between planks so water cannot get in), projected (planned), dory (a small rowboat), sargasso (floating seaweed) and jibstay (a rope that holds up the mast).
1CHAPTER I
2A blue-nose ancestry with Yankee proclivities--Youthful fondness for the sea--Master of the ship Northern Light--Loss of the Aquidneck--Return home from Brazil in the canoe Liberdade--The gift of a "ship"--The rebuilding of the Spray--Conundrums in regard to finance and calking--The launching of the Spray.
3CHAPTER II
4Failure as a fisherman--A voyage around the world projected--From Boston to Gloucester--Fitting out for the ocean voyage--Half of a dory for a ship's boat--The run from Gloucester to Nova Scotia--A shaking up in home waters--Among old friends.
5CHAPTER III
6Good-by to the American coast--Off Sable Island in a fog--In the open sea--The man in the moon takes an interest in the voyage--The first fit of loneliness--The Spray encounters La Vaguisa--A bottle of wine from the Spaniard--A bout of words with the captain of the Java--The steamship Olympia spoken--Arrival at the Azores.
[...]
7CHAPTER XXI
8Clearing for home--In the calm belt--A sea covered with sargasso--The jibstay parts in a gale--Welcomed by a tornado off Fire Island--A change of plan--Arrival at Newport--End of a cruise of over forty-six thousand miles--The Spray again at Fairhaven.
Joshua Slocum, Sailing Alone Around the World, Contents (Passage 1: the chapter lines for chapters I, II, III and XXI; chapters IV-XX are cut, marked [...]) (1900). Public domain (published 1900). Source text.
Read Passage 2 aloud. It comes near the start of chapter I, after Slocum describes his family and his first years at sea. Words to know: freighter and trader (captain of a ship that carries goods to sell), the Spice Islands (islands in what is now Indonesia), coil up one's ropes on land (retire from the sea), when times for freighters got bad (when cargo ships found less work), professions (kinds of work), stout (strong), gales (very strong winds), narrate (tell), cast up from old ocean (washed ashore; he means he had come to live on land), cogitating (thinking hard), apply for a command (ask to be the captain of a ship), whaling-captain (the captain of a ship that hunted whales), wants (here, needs), fit the craft for sea (get the boat ready to sail), society (here, a workers' club you had to pay to join), coal-barges (flat boats towed along to carry coal), ignominiously (shamefully) and Sailors' Snug Harbor (a home in New York for old, retired sailors).
1My voyages were all foreign. I sailed as freighter and trader principally to China, Australia, and Japan, and among the Spice Islands. Mine was not the sort of life to make one long to coil up one's ropes on land, the customs and ways of which I had finally almost forgotten. And so when times for freighters got bad, as at last they did, and I tried to quit the sea, what was there for an old sailor to do? I was born in the breezes, and I had studied the sea as perhaps few men have studied it, neglecting all else. Next in attractiveness, after seafaring, came ship-building. I longed to be master in both professions, and in a small way, in time, I accomplished my desire. From the decks of stout ships in the worst gales I had made calculations as to the size and sort of ship safest for all weather and all seas. Thus the voyage which I am now to narrate was a natural outcome not only of my love of adventure, but of my lifelong experience.
2One midwinter day of 1892, in Boston, where I had been cast up from old ocean, so to speak, a year or two before, I was cogitating whether I should apply for a command, and again eat my bread and butter on the sea, or go to work at the shipyard, when I met an old acquaintance, a whaling-captain, who said: "Come to Fairhaven and I'll give you a ship. But," he added, "she wants some repairs." The captain's terms, when fully explained, were more than satisfactory to me. They included all the assistance I would require to fit the craft for sea. I was only too glad to accept, for I had already found that I could not obtain work in the shipyard without first paying fifty dollars to a society, and as for a ship to command--there were not enough ships to go round. Nearly all our tall vessels had been cut down for coal-barges, and were being ignominiously towed by the nose from port to port, while many worthy captains addressed themselves to Sailors' Snug Harbor.
Joshua Slocum, Sailing Alone Around the World, chapter I (Passage 2: from sailor to a captain with no ship) (1900). Public domain (published 1900). Source text.
Chapter: how chapter I fits the whole book
Passage 1 gives the lines for chapters I, II, III and XXI. How is the book organized, and where does chapter I fit?
Result: The chapters follow the voyage in chronological order: chapter II has "A voyage around the world projected" and "From Boston to Gloucester," chapter III says "Good-by to the American coast," and chapter XXI begins "Clearing for home." Chapter I is the only one of these that comes entirely before the voyage. It ends with "The launching of the Spray," so its job in the structure is to set up the voyage: it shows who Slocum is and where his boat came from, so readers trust him when the voyage begins.
Sentence: closing a section
Passage 2, paragraph 1, ends: "Thus the voyage which I am now to narrate was a natural outcome not only of my love of adventure, but of my lifelong experience." How does this sentence fit, and what does it contribute?
Result: It is a transition at the end of a section. "Thus" means "so, because of all this," which tells readers that the sentence sums up everything before it: a life of foreign voyages and years of study of the sea and of ships. "The voyage which I am now to narrate" points forward to the rest of the book. It contributes by stating the idea the background section has been building: the voyage was not a stunt, but the result of a whole life at sea.
Sentence: a question that sets up what comes next
In the same paragraph, Slocum asks, "And so when times for freighters got bad, as at last they did, and I tried to quit the sea, what was there for an old sailor to do?" What job does this question do?
Result: It sets up a problem: Slocum is out of work and does not know what to do next. The rest of paragraph 1 starts to answer it (he turns to ship-building, the next thing he knows best), and paragraph 2 gives the real answer, the offer of a ship. A question like this pulls the reader forward, so it helps the chapter move from background to the story of the Spray.
Paragraph: a turning point
Passage 2, paragraph 2, begins "One midwinter day of 1892." How does this paragraph fit into chapter I, and what does it add to the ideas?
Result: It is the turning point of the chapter. The time phrase "One midwinter day of 1892" moves from years of general background to one day, and a new section begins, "The gift of a 'ship'" in Slocum's chapter line. The captain's words "I'll give you a ship. But... she wants some repairs" set up the next section, the rebuilding. The last two sentences explain why Slocum said yes: he could not get shipyard work "without first paying fifty dollars to a society," and "there were not enough ships to go round." They add the reason an experienced captain would accept an old, broken boat.
Map the chapter. Show Diagram 1. The top row is the whole book in time order; the rows below zoom in on chapter I, with section names based on Slocum's own chapter line. Rows 1 and 2 are filled in from the worked examples. Give students the sentence frame: "The ___ (sentence, paragraph, section, chapter) that begins ___ comes after ___ and before ___. Its job is to ___, and it develops the idea that ___."
Guided Practice15 minutes
Read Passage 3 aloud. Words to know: antiquated (very old), sloop (a sailboat with one mast), built in the year 1 (a joke: impossibly old), thrifty (careful with money), the gossip exchange (a joke: the place where the town traded news, like a stock exchange trades stocks), felled (cut down), keel (the backbone that runs along the bottom of a boat), frame and ribs (the curved timbers that give a boat its shape), steam-box (a box where wood is softened with steam so it can bend), saplings (young trees), supple (bendable), tangible (real, something you can touch), stem (the post at the very front of a boat), survey (inspect), "A 1" (first-rate), breast-hooks (strong braces inside the front of a boat), "cut in bow-head" (go whaling: cut up a bowhead whale), butt (the thick lower end of a tree trunk), blemish (a mark or flaw), hard upon March (almost March), hove in sight (came into view), adz (a tool for shaping wood) and "gammed" (chatted; a whalers' word). Pairs fill in row 3 of Diagram 1 after the discussion.
1The next day I landed at Fairhaven, opposite New Bedford, and found that my friend had something of a joke on me. For seven years the joke had been on him. The "ship" proved to be a very antiquated sloop called the Spray, which the neighbors declared had been built in the year 1. She was affectionately propped up in a field, some distance from salt water, and was covered with canvas. The people of Fairhaven, I hardly need say, are thrifty and observant. For seven years they had asked, "I wonder what Captain Eben Pierce is going to do with the old Spray?" The day I appeared there was a buzz at the gossip exchange: at last some one had come and was actually at work on the old Spray. "Breaking her up, I s'pose?" "No; going to rebuild her." Great was the amazement. "Will it pay?" was the question which for a year or more I answered by declaring that I would make it pay.
2My ax felled a stout oak-tree near by for a keel, and Farmer Howard, for a small sum of money, hauled in this and enough timbers for the frame of the new vessel. I rigged a steam-box and a pot for a boiler. The timbers for ribs, being straight saplings, were dressed and steamed till supple, and then bent over a log, where they were secured till set. Something tangible appeared every day to show for my labor, and the neighbors made the work sociable. It was a great day in the Spray shipyard when her new stem was set up and fastened to the new keel. Whaling-captains came from far to survey it. With one voice they pronounced it "A 1," and in their opinion "fit to smash ice." The oldest captain shook my hand warmly when the breast-hooks were put in, declaring that he could see no reason why the Spray should not "cut in bow-head" yet off the coast of Greenland. The much-esteemed stem-piece was from the butt of the smartest kind of a pasture oak. It afterward split a coral patch in two at the Keeling Islands, and did not receive a blemish. Better timber for a ship than pasture white oak never grew. The breast-hooks, as well as all the ribs, were of this wood, and were steamed and bent into shape as required. It was hard upon March when I began work in earnest; the weather was cold; still, there were plenty of inspectors to back me with advice. When a whaling-captain hove in sight I just rested on my adz awhile and "gammed" with him.
Joshua Slocum, Sailing Alone Around the World, chapter I (Passage 3: the "ship" in the field) (1900). Public domain (published 1900). Source text.
How paragraph 1 connects back. Ask: which words from Passage 2 does "my friend had something of a joke on me" answer? Teacher note: the captain's "But... she wants some repairs." The joke is revealed in the next sentences: the "ship" is a "very antiquated sloop" that has sat "propped up in a field" for seven years. The quotation marks around "ship," in the text and in the chapter line (Passage 1), show Slocum's humor about the gift.
The neighbors' questions. Ask: what does the conversation at "the gossip exchange" add to the chapter? Teacher note: it shows how strange the plan looked to the people of Fairhaven ("Breaking her up, I s'pose?" "No; going to rebuild her."). The last question, "Will it pay?", shows their doubt. Tell students to watch for whether this question comes back later in chapter I.
Where a new section starts. Ask: which sentence begins the section Slocum calls "The rebuilding of the Spray"? Teacher note: paragraph 2, "My ax felled a stout oak-tree near by for a keel." After that, the steps come in chronological order: the keel, the frame, the steamed ribs, the stem, the breast-hooks. Each step develops the idea that Slocum can build a ship with his own hands, and "Something tangible appeared every day to show for my labor."
A flash-forward. Ask: which sentence in paragraph 2 jumps ahead in time? Teacher note: "It afterward split a coral patch in two at the Keeling Islands, and did not receive a blemish." The Keeling Islands are in the Indian Ocean, far along the voyage. The flash-forward proves that the whaling-captains' praise ("fit to smash ice") was right, and it tells readers, early, that the Spray will survive the voyage.
Independent Practice15 minutes
Students read Passage 4 on their own. It ends chapter I. Words to know: hull (the body of a boat), partitioned off (divided into rooms), grave fears were entertained (people were seriously afraid), advisability (whether it was wise), calking-iron (a tool like a blunt chisel used to drive cotton into the seams), seams (the narrow gaps between planks), "It'll crawl!" (the cotton will creep out of the seams), Bruno (Slocum's dog), a noted authority (a well-known expert), totter (be unsteady), sperm-whale (a large whale), oakum (rope fiber soaked in tar), copper paint (paint that keeps sea creatures off the bottom), white lead (a white paint made with lead, now known to be poisonous), bulwarks (the low walls around the deck), rudder (the flat piece at the back that steers the boat), shipped (put in place), over all (from end to end), hold (the space below the deck), tonnage (a measure of the space inside a ship, not its weight), appurtenances (small fittings and equipment), sails were bent (the sails were tied on), trial-trip (a test sail) and overtime (the extra months).
1The hull of my vessel being now put together as strongly as wood and iron could make her, and the various rooms partitioned off, I set about "calking ship." Grave fears were entertained by some that at this point I should fail. I myself gave some thought to the advisability of a "professional calker." The very first blow I struck on the cotton with the calking-iron, which I thought was right, many others thought wrong. "It'll crawl!" cried a man from Marion, passing with a basket of clams on his back. "It'll crawl!" cried another from West Island, when he saw me driving cotton into the seams. Bruno simply wagged his tail. Even Mr. Ben J----, a noted authority on whaling-ships, whose mind, however, was said to totter, asked rather confidently if I did not think "it would crawl." "How fast will it crawl?" cried my old captain friend, who had been towed by many a lively sperm-whale. "Tell us how fast," cried he, "that we may get into port in time."
[...]
2However, I drove a thread of oakum on top of the cotton, as from the first I had intended to do. And Bruno again wagged his tail. The cotton never "crawled." When the calking was finished, two coats of copper paint were slapped on the bottom, two of white lead on the topsides and bulwarks. The rudder was then shipped and painted, and on the following day the Spray was launched. As she rode at her ancient, rust-eaten anchor, she sat on the water like a swan.
3The Spray's dimensions were, when finished, thirty-six feet nine inches long, over all, fourteen feet two inches wide, and four feet two inches deep in the hold, her tonnage being nine tons net and twelve and seventy-one hundredths tons gross.
4Then the mast, a smart New Hampshire spruce, was fitted, and likewise all the small appurtenances necessary for a short cruise. Sails were bent, and away she flew with my friend Captain Pierce and me, across Buzzard's Bay on a trial-trip--all right. The only thing that now worried my friends along the beach was, "Will she pay?" The cost of my new vessel was $553.62 for materials, and thirteen months of my own labor. I was several months more than that at Fairhaven, for I got work now and then on an occasional whale-ship fitting farther down the harbor, and that kept me the overtime.
Joshua Slocum, Sailing Alone Around the World, chapter I (Passage 4: calking and launching; an illustration is cut, marked [...]) (1900). Public domain (published 1900). Source text.
On the handout, students answer three questions about Passage 4: (1) What job does the sentence "Grave fears were entertained by some that at this point I should fail" do in paragraph 1? (2) Why does Slocum repeat "It'll crawl!" and then give two more people saying almost the same thing? (3) Which word begins paragraph 2, and how does paragraph 2 answer paragraph 1? Then they fill in row 4 of Diagram 1.
Teacher answer notes: (1) It sets up a problem and a little suspense: the reader now wonders whether the work will fail at the calking, the step that keeps water out. (2) The repetition builds the doubt, one voice after another, until even Slocum's old captain friend jokes about it; the more people doubt him, the bigger his success will look. (3) "However." It signals a turn: Slocum does what he "from the first" had intended, and the short sentence "The cotton never 'crawled.'" settles the question, so the two paragraphs work as a problem and its solution. Row 4: the calking section adds the idea that Slocum trusted his own knowledge more than the crowd's.
Closure5-10 minutes
Exit ticket: (1) Fill in row 5 of Diagram 1: what does the launching section add to chapter I? (2) Complete the frame: "One part of a text can fit into its structure by ___, and it can develop the ideas by ___."
Teacher note on the text: Slocum wrote in the 1890s, and some words and views are of his time. He writes "few men" and "one man" as if all sailors were men. In Passage 6, his story about a washerwoman in Samoa who wanted his half-dory, as a better "Yankee notion" than any "brought by missionaries to the islands," is a joke from a traveler of the period; discuss it as his point of view, not as a fact about Samoans. White lead paint, used on the Spray in Passage 4, is now banned in homes because lead is poisonous. After the book, Slocum kept sailing; in November 1909 he set out alone in the Spray again and was never seen after that voyage began.
For the quiz: students read Passage 5, printed below. It is the start of chapter II, whose summary line is in Passage 1. Words to know: craft (boat), cunning (skill), weigh anchor (pull up the anchor to leave), in earnest (for real), resolved on (decided on), fair (here, blowing the right way), filled away (let the wind fill the sails and moved off), moored (tied up), a short board... on the port tack (a short zigzag with the wind coming from the left side), coming about (turning), stood seaward (headed out to sea), boom (the pole along the bottom of the sail), with lively heels (quickly, leaning over), peak (the top corner of the sail), engaging in (starting), pertaining to (about), borne in upon me (made clear to me), league (about three miles), stranded (stuck on the rocks), ledge (a shelf of rock under the water), full-handed (with a full crew), bark (here, a poetic word for a boat), freshened (grew stronger), Deer Island light (a lighthouse in Boston Harbor) and knots (a sea measure of speed: seven knots is about 8 miles per hour).
1I spent a season in my new craft fishing on the coast, only to find that I had not the cunning properly to bait a hook. But at last the time arrived to weigh anchor and get to sea in earnest. I had resolved on a voyage around the world, and as the wind on the morning of April 24,1895, was fair, at noon I weighed anchor, set sail, and filled away from Boston, where the Spray had been moored snugly all winter. The twelve-o'clock whistles were blowing just as the sloop shot ahead under full sail. A short board was made up the harbor on the port tack, then coming about she stood seaward, with her boom well off to port, and swung past the ferries with lively heels. A photographer on the outer pier at East Boston got a picture of her as she swept by, her flag at the peak throwing its folds clear. A thrilling pulse beat high in me. My step was light on deck in the crisp air. I felt that there could be no turning back, and that I was engaging in an adventure the meaning of which I thoroughly understood. I had taken little advice from any one, for I had a right to my own opinions in matters pertaining to the sea. That the best of sailors might do worse than even I alone was borne in upon me not a league from Boston docks, where a great steamship, fully manned, officered, and piloted, lay stranded and broken. This was the Venetian. She was broken completely in two over a ledge. So in the first hour of my lone voyage I had proof that the Spray could at least do better than this full-handed steamship, for I was already farther on my voyage than she. "Take warning, Spray, and have a care," I uttered aloud to my bark, passing fairylike silently down the bay.
2The wind freshened, and the Spray rounded Deer Island light at the rate of seven knots.
Joshua Slocum, Sailing Alone Around the World, chapter II (Passage 5: the start of the voyage) (1900). Public domain (published 1900). Source text.
For homework: students read Passage 6, printed below. Slocum has stopped at Gloucester, a fishing town north of Boston, to get supplies. Words to know: made shift (managed), castaway (thrown away), athwartships (across the boat, from side to side), hoist (lift), throat-halyards and strop (a rope for raising a sail and a loop of rope), manifestly (clearly), perceived (noticed), answer for (work as), the former office (the first job he named), razeed (cut down), Samoa (islands in the South Pacific that he visited much later in the voyage), missionaries (people sent to spread a religion), chronometer (a very exact clock that sailors used to work out where they were), newfangled (newly invented), clean and rate it (clean it and check how fast or slow it runs), where the Dutchman left his anchor (an old saying: left behind at home), contriving (clever arranging), refitted (supplied and repaired again), gathering headway (starting to move), fairway (the channel boats use), puttied (filled with putty, a paste for cracks) and "With the main-sheet" (a sailor's joke: he will "pay out" his sail rope and leave).
1For a boat to take along, I made shift to cut a castaway dory in two athwartships, boarding up the end where it was cut. This half-dory I could hoist in and out by the nose easily enough, by hooking the throat-halyards into a strop fitted for the purpose. A whole dory would be heavy and awkward to handle alone. Manifestly there was not room on deck for more than the half of a boat, which, after all, was better than no boat at all, and was large enough for one man. I perceived, moreover, that the newly arranged craft would answer for a washing-machine when placed athwartships, and also for a bath-tub. Indeed, for the former office my razeed dory gained such a reputation on the voyage that my washerwoman at Samoa would not take no for an answer. She could see with one eye that it was a new invention which beat any Yankee notion ever brought by missionaries to the islands, and she had to have it.
2The want of a chronometer for the voyage was all that now worried me. In our newfangled notions of navigation it is supposed that a mariner cannot find his way without one; and I had myself drifted into this way of thinking. My old chronometer, a good one, had been long in disuse. It would cost fifteen dollars to clean and rate it. Fifteen dollars! For sufficient reasons I left that timepiece at home, where the Dutchman left his anchor. I had the great lantern, and a lady in Boston sent me the price of a large two-burner cabin lamp, which lighted the cabin at night, and by some small contriving served for a stove through the day.
3Being thus refitted I was once more ready for sea, and on May 7 again made sail. With little room in which to turn, the Spray, in gathering headway, scratched the paint off an old, fine-weather craft in the fairway, being puttied and painted for a summer voyage. "Who'll pay for that?" growled the painters. "I will," said I. "With the main-sheet," echoed the captain of the Bluebird, close by, which was his way of saying that I was off. [...]
Joshua Slocum, Sailing Alone Around the World, chapter II (Passage 6: half a boat and no chronometer; the end of the last paragraph is cut, marked [...]) (1900). Public domain (published 1900). Source text.
Differentiation Strategies
For Struggling Students
Start with the Activity 1 cards, a short modern article, before reading Slocum
Give a copy of Diagram 1 with the passage and paragraph numbers already highlighted, so students only decide the job of each part
Let students work on one paragraph at a time and answer only "What came just before this?" and "What does it add?"
For Advanced Students
Ask them to move the sentence beginning "Thus the voyage" to the very start of chapter I and explain what the chapter gains and loses
Ask them to write a chapter line, in Slocum's style, for a chapter of a book they have read, and check that every phrase names a real section
Ask them to find another flash-forward in Passages 3-6 and explain why Slocum might tell readers the future early
Assessment Guidance
What to Look For
Check that each answer does two things: it places the part in the structure (what comes before it, what comes after it, and what job it does there, such as introducing, closing a section, turning, setting up a problem or answering one), and it names the idea the part develops, with quoted words as evidence. A common weak answer only summarizes the part ("it tells about the boat"). Ask: "Why is this part here and not somewhere else, and what would the text lose without it?"
02
Classroom Activities
3 Activities
1
Section Shuffle
15 minPairs
Each pair gets six paragraph cards from a short news article written for this page, shuffled. Pairs put the article back in order and label the job of each paragraph in the structure.
The Six Cards (in the original order, for the teacher)
"Until this spring, the students who wait for the late bus on Park Street had two choices: stand, or sit on the curb."
"The wait can last twenty minutes, and on rainy days the curb is a puddle. Students with heavy backpacks said standing the whole time was hard."
"In March, Ms. Ortiz's sixth-grade class decided to do something about it. They wrote a letter to the city asking whether they could build a bench."
"After the city said yes, the class measured the space, drew plans on grid paper and raised $180 at a bake sale for wood and bolts. A parent who is a carpenter showed them how to use the tools safely."
"The bench went in on May 2. It is eight feet long, seats five people and has a small sign on the back: Built by Room 12."
"A bench does not solve every problem at a bus stop, but it shows something bigger: a class can spot a problem, make a plan and change a small corner of its town."
Procedure
Pairs order the cards and write a job label beside each one: introduces the topic, explains the problem, turning point, steps, result or conclusion
They circle every time word or transition that helped them decide
Answer key for the teacher: card 1 introduces the topic; card 2 explains the problem; card 3 is the turning point ("In March" and "decided to do something about it"); card 4 gives the steps in time order ("After the city said yes"); card 5 gives the result; card 6 concludes and states the central idea. The article moves from problem to solution, and inside the solution it uses chronological order
Discussion Questions
Which card was easiest to place, and which words gave it away?
Card 6 says the bench "shows something bigger." Which earlier cards give the evidence for that idea?
What would the article lose if card 2 were left out?
Modification
For students who need support, place cards 1 and 6 first, so pairs order only the four middle cards.
2
Move It and See
15 minPairs
Pairs test how a part fits by moving it. They take one sentence or paragraph from Passages 2 and 3, imagine it in a different place, and decide what goes wrong.
The Three Moves
Move "Thus the voyage which I am now to narrate was a natural outcome..." (Passage 2, paragraph 1) to the very first line of chapter I.
Move the captain's offer, "Come to Fairhaven and I'll give you a ship" (Passage 2, paragraph 2), after "My ax felled a stout oak-tree" (Passage 3, paragraph 2).
Move "It afterward split a coral patch in two at the Keeling Islands" (Passage 3, paragraph 2) to the end of the whole book.
Procedure
For each move, pairs write two sentences: "In the new place, the reader would not know ___. In its real place, the part ___."
Answer notes for the teacher: (1) at the start, "Thus" would have nothing to sum up, and the reader would not yet know the life at sea that makes the voyage a "natural outcome"; (2) the rebuilding would start before the reader knows where the boat came from, so the order of events breaks; (3) at the end, the sentence would report an old event, but in its real place it is a flash-forward that promises early that the stem will survive
Discussion Questions
Which move damaged the chapter the most? Why?
What does this test show about how a sentence can depend on the sentences before it?
Variation
Pairs trade the six cards from Activity 1 with another pair, move one card to a new place, and challenge the other pair to find the card that is out of place and explain how they knew.
3
Chapter Line Match
10 minGroups of 3-4
Groups match the phrases of Slocum's chapter I line (Passage 1) to the passages they read, then write a chapter line of their own.
Procedure
Groups copy the chapter I line from Passage 1 and write the passage and paragraph numbers next to each phrase that Passages 2-4 cover
They mark any phrase that more than one passage covers, and any passage that covers more than one phrase
Then each group writes a chapter line of 4-6 short phrases for a chapter about one real school day, in time order, and a partner group checks that each phrase names a real section
Answer notes for the teacher: Passage 2 paragraph 1 closes the life-at-sea phrases; "The gift of a 'ship'" covers Passage 2 paragraph 2 and Passage 3 paragraph 1; "The rebuilding of the Spray" is Passage 3 paragraph 2; "calking" is Passage 4 paragraphs 1-2, and "finance" comes up in the question "Will it pay?" in Passage 3 and again in Passage 4; "The launching of the Spray" is Passage 4 paragraphs 2-4. Sections can overlap, which is normal in real texts
Discussion Questions
Why might Slocum print a chapter line at the start of every chapter? How does it help a reader?
Which phrase in your own chapter line was hardest to write, and why?
03
Diagrams & Visual Aids
2 diagrams
Diagram 1: The Book and Chapter I, Part by Part
The top row shows the whole book in time order, from Passage 1. The rows below zoom in on chapter I: on the left, where each section fits and where it is printed in this lesson; on the right, what it adds to the ideas. Rows 1 and 2 are modeled in Direct Instruction; students fill in rows 3-5.
Diagram 2: Sentence, Paragraph, Section, Chapter, Book
The four sizes of parts named in RI.6.5, nested inside the whole book, with an example of each from chapter I. The same two questions work at every size.
04
Homework Assignment
~30 min
RI.6.5 Homework: Half a Boat and No Chronometer
Directions: Read Passage 6 at the end of the lesson plan (in Closure) and its words to know. It comes from chapter II, while Slocum is getting ready in Gloucester. Answer each problem in complete sentences, and quote the passage with a paragraph number whenever you use it.
Part 1: Sentences (Problems 1-2)
In paragraph 1, Slocum writes, "A whole dory would be heavy and awkward to handle alone." What job does this sentence do in the paragraph? Explain how it connects to the title of the book, Sailing Alone Around the World.
In paragraph 2, "Fifteen dollars!" is a sentence by itself. Why might Slocum give these two words a sentence of their own? Explain how this sentence leads to the sentence after it.
Part 2: Paragraphs (Problems 3-4)
Paragraph 1 ends with a story about a washerwoman at Samoa, something that happened much later in the voyage. What is this kind of jump in time called? Explain what it adds to a paragraph about half a rowboat.
Paragraph 2 begins, "The want of a chronometer for the voyage was all that now worried me." (Here "want" means "lack.") Explain how this sentence connects paragraph 2 to what came before it. What do the words "all that now worried me" tell you about the rest of the supplies?
Part 3: The Section (Problems 5-6)
Paragraph 3 begins, "Being thus refitted I was once more ready for sea, and on May 7 again made sail." Explain how this sentence closes one section of chapter II and opens the next. Use two phrases from the chapter II line in Passage 1 in your answer.
Write a paragraph of 5-7 sentences that analyzes how Passage 6 fits into the structure of chapter II and contributes to the development of an idea about Slocum. Name the idea, explain the job of at least two of the three paragraphs, and quote at least two sentences with paragraph numbers.
Rubric
Criterion
Full Credit (2 pts)
Partial Credit (1 pt)
No Credit (0 pts)
Fits the Structure
Explains where the part fits: what comes before and after it and what job it does there
Names the job without saying what it connects to
No placement, or a summary only
Develops the Ideas
Names the idea the part develops and explains how
Names an idea without explaining the link
No idea named
Structure Words
Uses terms such as section, transition, turning point or flash-forward correctly
Uses one term loosely
No structure terms
Evidence
Exact quotations with paragraph numbers in every answer
Some quotations, or quotations without paragraph numbers
No quotations
05
Quiz: 20 Questions
Interactive, with answers
Instructions
Questions 1, 2, 14, 18 and 20 give their own short texts, written for the quiz. Questions 3, 4 and 19 use Passage 1 (Direct Instruction), and question 16 uses Passage 1 with Passage 5. Questions 12, 13 and 17 use Passage 4 (Independent Practice). Question 9 uses Passage 3 (Guided Practice). Questions 5-8, 10, 11 and 15 use Passage 5, printed in Closure. Choose the best answer for each multiple-choice question and write two to four sentences for each short answer. Your score updates as you answer, and Reset quiz clears everything.
Multiple choice: pick an option to check it. Short answer: write your answer, then reveal the model answer.
0 of 20 answered · 0 correct
Question 1 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Read this plan for an article, written for the quiz: "Paragraph 1 introduces two ways students get to school, walking and riding the bus. Paragraph 2 describes walking. Paragraph 3 describes riding the bus. Paragraph 4 tells how the two ways are alike and how they are different." Which best describes the overall structure of the article?
Answer: C
The article is built around two subjects: paragraph 1 names them, paragraphs 2 and 3 describe one each, and paragraph 4 puts them side by side to show how they are alike and different. That is a compare-and-contrast structure. Choice A is wrong because the paragraphs are arranged by subject, not by time; no events happen one after another. Choice B is wrong because no problem is named and nothing is solved. Choice D is wrong because the article describes the two ways but never tells readers what to do, step by step.
Question 2 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Read this paragraph, written for the quiz: "(1) Our school library got 200 new books this fall. (2) Many are graphic novels and science books that students asked for in a survey. (3) Getting the books was only half the job, though. (4) Now the librarians need student helpers to label and shelve them." Which sentence closes the first part of the paragraph and opens the second?
Answer: D
Sentence 3 is a transition: "only half the job" closes the part about getting the books, and "though" turns to the second half, the work still to do, which sentence 4 explains. Choice A introduces the topic. Choice B adds detail to the first part. Choice C belongs to the second part but does not connect the two; it depends on sentence 3 to make sense.
Question 3 of 20 · Multiple Choice
The chapter III line in Passage 1 begins "Good-by to the American coast--Off Sable Island in a fog--In the open sea." What does the order of these three phrases show?
Answer: A
The phrases follow the trip: first Slocum leaves the coast, then he passes Sable Island (an island off Nova Scotia) in fog, then he is "In the open sea," with no land in sight. Each section takes the Spray a step farther from land, so the order of the chapter's sections is the order of events. Choice B picks out the fog, but the other two phrases are not about weather. Choice C invents a problem-and-solution pattern. Choice D is wrong because nothing in the line ranks the sections.
Question 4 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Chapter XXI's line in Passage 1 ends with "The Spray again at Fairhaven." Which earlier part of the book does this ending connect back to?
Answer: D
Fairhaven is where Slocum found the old Spray in a field and rebuilt her (Passage 3: "The next day I landed at Fairhaven"). The word "again" tells readers that the voyage ends where the boat's new life began, so the book closes in a circle. Choices A, B and C are all early stops or moments of the voyage, but none of them happened at Fairhaven.
Question 5 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Passage 5 begins chapter II with "I spent a season in my new craft fishing on the coast, only to find that I had not the cunning properly to bait a hook." How does this sentence fit into the structure?
Answer: B
Chapter I ended with the launch and a trial trip. This sentence covers the time in between (a season of failed fishing), and the next sentence starts the voyage. It matches the first phrase of the chapter II line in Passage 1, "Failure as a fisherman." Choice A overstates it: a joke about bait is not the book's main idea. Choice C is wrong because the sentence tells what came next, not what happened much later. Choice D is wrong because the failed fishing is not a problem that chapter II goes on to solve; the chapter is about starting the voyage.
Question 6 of 20 · Multiple Choice
In Passage 5, paragraph 1, which words mark the turn from that first season to the real voyage?
Answer: C
"But" signals a change of direction, and "at last the time arrived to weigh anchor and get to sea in earnest" moves from the failed fishing to the voyage. Choice A is still part of the first season. Choice B comes after the turn, when the voyage has already started. Choice D describes his feelings once he is under way.
Question 7 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Why does Slocum give the exact date and hour, "the morning of April 24,1895... at noon," in Passage 5?
Answer: A
The book follows the voyage in time order, and this is the moment it begins, so Slocum records it the way a ship's log would, down to the whistles "blowing just as the sloop shot ahead." Choice B has no support; he leaves at noon on purpose, when the wind "was fair." Choice C describes a comparison that is not in this paragraph. Choice D is wrong because the wind is "fair," not too strong, at the start.
Question 8 of 20 · Multiple Choice
"A thrilling pulse beat high in me. My step was light on deck in the crisp air." What do these two sentences contribute to Passage 5?
Answer: B
After the sailing details, Slocum turns to his feelings: his heart is pounding ("a thrilling pulse") and he feels light on his feet. The sentences develop the idea that he loves this adventure and is ready for it. Choice A reverses the mood, which is joyful. Choice C confuses them with the sentence before, about the photographer. Choice D describes the sailing sentences earlier in the paragraph.
Question 9 of 20 · Multiple Choice
In Passage 3, paragraph 1, how does the sentence "The people of Fairhaven, I hardly need say, are thrifty and observant" prepare for what comes later in the paragraph?
Answer: D
"Observant" means they notice everything, and "thrifty" means they are careful with money. Both words set up what follows: for seven years the town has watched the old Spray, the "gossip exchange" buzzes the day Slocum starts work, and the question people ask is about money, "Will it pay?" Choice A misreads "thrifty" as "poor." Choice B is wrong because the paragraph goes straight back to the Spray, not to the town's past. Choice C is wrong because the sentence says nothing about why the captain gave the boat away.
Question 10 of 20 · Multiple Choice
What is the job of the sentence "Take warning, Spray, and have a care" at the end of Passage 5, paragraph 1?
Answer: A
Just before, Slocum boasts that he is "already farther on my voyage" than the wrecked steamship. He ends the paragraph by warning his own boat to be careful, so the paragraph closes with caution as well as pride. Choice B is wrong because no repairs follow. Choice C contradicts "I felt that there could be no turning back." Choice D is wrong because he says he "had taken little advice from any one."
Question 11 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Passage 5, paragraph 2 is one short sentence: "The wind freshened, and the Spray rounded Deer Island light at the rate of seven knots." What does this paragraph do in the structure?
Answer: C
After a long paragraph about the start, a one-sentence paragraph moves the Spray past a landmark at a good speed, like a quick entry in a log. It keeps the chronological order going and speeds up the pace before the next stage, the run toward Gloucester. Choice A overstates a single step. Choice B is wrong because it tells what happens next, not what happened earlier. Choice D is wrong because paragraph 1 asks no question.
Question 12 of 20 · Multiple Choice
In Passage 4, paragraph 3 gives only the Spray's measurements: "thirty-six feet nine inches long," "fourteen feet two inches wide," and her tonnage. Why does it fit right after the launch?
Answer: D
The paragraph comes after the launch in paragraph 2, when the building is done, and reports the result: "The Spray's dimensions were, when finished." It works like the final numbers in a builder's report and develops the idea that the boat is real, exact and complete. Choice A confuses measurements with tools. Choice B belongs to paragraph 1, where people cry "It'll crawl!" Choice C is wrong because the paragraph gives no cost.
Question 13 of 20 · Multiple Choice
Passage 4, paragraph 2 ends, "As she rode at her ancient, rust-eaten anchor, she sat on the water like a swan." What does this image add?
Answer: C
The simile (a comparison using "like") pictures the Spray floating calmly and gracefully on her first day in the water. Coming right after "The cotton never 'crawled,'" it closes the calking-and-launching part on a note of success. Choice A reads too much into "rust-eaten"; the anchor is only old. Choice B names the comparison but not what it adds, which the question asks. Choice D contradicts "The cotton never 'crawled.'"
Question 14 of 20 · Multiple Choice
An article about a school's new compost program has four paragraphs. Paragraph 1 introduces the program. Paragraph 2 says that before the program, the cafeteria threw away about 40 pounds of food scraps every day. Paragraph 3 explains how the compost bins work. Paragraph 4 describes the school garden that now uses the compost. How does paragraph 2 contribute?
Answer: B
Paragraph 2 describes the situation before the program: a lot of food thrown away. The rest of the article shows the solution (paragraph 3) and its result (paragraph 4), so paragraph 2 sets up a problem-and-solution structure. Choice A confuses it with paragraph 3. Choice C is wrong because it comes second, not last. Choice D describes paragraph 4.
Question 15 of 20 · Short Answer
In Passage 5, paragraph 1, Slocum writes, "I had taken little advice from any one, for I had a right to my own opinions in matters pertaining to the sea." Explain how the sentences right after it connect to this sentence.
Model answer: The next sentences give proof for his opinion. He says "the best of sailors might do worse than even I alone," and then describes the Venetian, a steamship "stranded and broken" not a league from Boston. The sentence "So in the first hour of my lone voyage I had proof" names the connection: the wreck shows that his own judgment, not a big crew, can keep a ship safe. Rubric: 2 points for explaining that the later sentences support his claim, with a quotation; 1 point for a quotation or the link alone; 0 points otherwise.
Question 16 of 20 · Short Answer
The chapter II line in Passage 1 begins, "Failure as a fisherman--A voyage around the world projected--From Boston to Gloucester." Match the second and third phrases to the parts of Passage 5 they describe. What does the match show about how Slocum builds a chapter?
Model answer: "A voyage around the world projected" matches "I had resolved on a voyage around the world." "From Boston to Gloucester" matches the departure from Boston and the run out of the harbor, which continues after paragraph 2. The match shows that each chapter is made of sections in time order, and the chapter line lists them in the same order, like a map of the chapter. Rubric: 2 points for both matches with quotations and a statement about the order of sections; 1 point for one match or the statement alone; 0 points otherwise.
Question 17 of 20 · Short Answer
Passage 4, paragraph 4, says, "Sails were bent, and away she flew with my friend Captain Pierce and me, across Buzzard's Bay on a trial-trip--all right." How does this sentence help prepare readers for chapter II?
Model answer: A trial trip is a test sail before the real journey, and "all right" reports that the test worked. Placing it near the end of chapter I shows that the rebuilt boat can really sail, and with a friend on board, so the chapter ends with the boat ready. That prepares readers for chapter II, where Slocum sails alone on the real voyage. The sentence helps develop the idea that Slocum was careful and tested his work before trusting his life to it. Rubric: 2 points for explaining the test, where it falls in chapter I and the link to chapter II; 1 point for one of these; 0 points otherwise.
Question 18 of 20 · Short Answer
Read these sentences, written for the quiz, from a short report: "(1) Millions of monarch butterflies spend the winter in the mountains of central Mexico. (2) In spring, they begin flying north. (3) Along the way, they stop to lay eggs on milkweed plants. (4) The new butterflies that hatch keep flying north." Where would this sentence fit best: "Their trip starts in the fall, when they fly south from Canada and the United States"? Explain your choice.
Model answer: It fits best between sentences 1 and 2. The report is in time order (winter, then spring, then "along the way," then the new butterflies), and the new sentence tells how the butterflies got to Mexico in the first place, in the fall. It cannot come before sentence 1, because "Their" needs the butterflies to be named first. At the end, it would break the time order. Rubric: 2 points for a fitting position and a reason based on time order or transitions; 1 point for a fitting position without a reason; 0 points otherwise.
Question 19 of 20 · Short Answer
The chapter III line in Passage 1 includes "The first fit of loneliness." Using the chapter lines in Passage 1, explain how a section like this might fit into the book and contribute to its ideas.
Model answer: It comes in chapter III, right after "Good-by to the American coast" and "In the open sea," so it falls at the moment Slocum leaves land behind for the first time. Chapters I and II show him building the boat and getting ready with help from many people, like the neighbors and whaling-captains of Fairhaven. A section about loneliness would show the cost of the plan named in the title, Sailing Alone, and develop the idea that sailing alone takes courage of the mind as well as skill with a boat. Rubric: 2 points for placing the section with evidence from the chapter lines and naming an idea it develops; 1 point for one of the two; 0 points otherwise.
Question 20 of 20 · Short Answer
Read this short article, written for the quiz: "(Paragraph 1) People say someone is 'blind as a bat,' but the saying is wrong: bats can see. (Paragraph 2) Many bats also have a second way to find their way in the dark. They make very high squeaks and listen for the echoes that bounce back from trees, walls and insects. This is called echolocation. (Paragraph 3) Echolocation is so exact that a small bat can catch an insect the size of a mosquito in total darkness. (Paragraph 4) So the next time you hear 'blind as a bat,' remember that bats are experts at finding their way in the dark." Explain how paragraph 3 fits into the structure and what it contributes to the ideas.
Model answer: Paragraph 3 comes after paragraph 2 defines echolocation, and before the conclusion. Its job is to give an example that shows how good echolocation is: a bat can catch "an insect the size of a mosquito in total darkness." It develops the idea that bats are not helpless in the dark, which is what paragraph 4 concludes when it calls bats "experts at finding their way in the dark." Without paragraph 3, the conclusion would have less evidence. Rubric: 2 points for placing the paragraph (after the definition, before the conclusion) and naming the idea it supports, with a quotation; 1 point for one of the two; 0 points otherwise.
0 of 20 answered · 0 correct
06
Frequently Asked Questions
10 Questions
What does RI.6.5 mean?
It means sixth graders explain where one part of a nonfiction text fits and what it adds. The standard asks students to "analyze how a particular sentence, paragraph, chapter, or section fits into the overall structure of a text and contributes to the development of the ideas." In practice, students say what comes before and after the part, what job it does there, and which idea it helps build.
What is text structure in 6th grade reading?
Text structure is the way a text is put together: its parts and the order they come in. Common structures in nonfiction include chronological order (time order), problem and solution, cause and effect, compare and contrast, and description. RI.6.5 goes a step further than naming a structure: students explain how one particular part works inside it.
How is RI.6.5 different from RI.5.5?
RI.5.5 compares the overall structure of two or more texts; RI.6.5 zooms in on one part of one text. In grade 5, students might say one article uses time order and another uses problem and solution. In grade 6, they explain how a particular sentence, paragraph, section or chapter fits that structure and what it adds to the ideas.
What is the difference between RI.6.5 and RL.6.5?
They ask the same kind of question about different kinds of texts. RL.6.5 is for literature: how a sentence, chapter, scene or stanza fits and develops the theme, setting or plot. RI.6.5 is for informational text, and the part develops the ideas, such as a claim, an explanation or the meaning of true events.
What does "contributes to the development of the ideas" mean?
It means the part adds something to the text's ideas: it explains an idea, gives an example or evidence, raises a problem, answers a question or sums up. A good test is to cover the part and ask what the reader would lose. In this lesson, the sentence beginning "Thus the voyage" contributes the idea that Slocum's trip grew out of his whole life at sea.
How can students tell where a new section begins?
They look for signals. Time phrases ("One midwinter day of 1892"), transitions ("Thus," "The next day"), a change of place or topic, and a sentence that sums up what came before often mark the edges of a section. A table of contents or chapter summary, like Slocum's chapter lines, can also name the sections in order.
Is Sailing Alone Around the World a true story?
Yes. It is Joshua Slocum's own account of his voyage in the Spray from 1895 to 1898, the first known solo trip around the world, first published in 1900. Like any memoir, it tells events from the author's point of view, and Slocum adds jokes and sailors' tales, but the voyage itself is well documented.
How is RI.6.5 usually assessed?
Reading tests often ask how a particular sentence or paragraph fits into a passage, why an author includes a paragraph, or which sentence connects two parts. Some questions come in two parts: choose the role of a paragraph, then choose the words from the text that support that answer. Short written answers ask students to explain the role and cite evidence.
What mistakes do students make with RI.6.5?
A common one is summarizing the part ("it is about the boat") instead of explaining its job ("it closes the building section and shows the boat is finished"). Another is naming a job without saying what the part connects to. A third is forgetting the second half of the standard: the idea the part develops. The questions "Where does it fit?" and "What does it add?" catch all three.
What comes after RI.6.5 in grade 7 and grade 8?
In grade 7, RI.7.5 asks students to analyze the structure an author uses for a whole text, including how the major sections contribute to the whole. In grade 8, RI.8.5 zooms in on a single paragraph and the role of particular sentences in developing and refining a key concept. The habits from RI.6.5, placing a part and naming what it adds, carry into both.
07
Related Standards
6 standards
These standards connect to RI.6.5: prerequisites to review first, parallel standards at the same level, and next steps that build on it.
Before this lesson
RI.5.5Prerequisite
Compare the overall structure of events, ideas or information in two or more texts
Lesson coming soon
Alongside
RI.6.2Parallel
Determine a central idea and how particular details convey it; summarize