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RI.11-12.7Common CoreELAReading Informational TextGrades 11-12

RI.11-12.7: Integrating and Evaluating Sources in Words, Numbers and Images

In plain English: RI.11-12.7 is the Common Core ELA standard that asks students in grades 11-12 to integrate and evaluate sources presented in different media or formats, such as tables, charts and images as well as words, to address a question or solve a problem. Students combine what each source shows and judge its reliability and limits. It is usually taught in English 11 or 12.

Integrate and evaluate multiple sources of information presented in different media or formats (e.g., visually, quantitatively) as well as in words in order to address a question or solve a problem.

Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts & Literacy · Domain: Reading Standards for Informational Text · Cluster: Integration of Knowledge and Ideas · Official standard

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Lesson Plan

65-75 min

Overview

Students address one question with sources in three formats: What killed most British soldiers in the war in the East in 1854-1856, and which reform does the evidence best support? They read a letter printed in The Times in October 1854 and four passages from Sir Edward Cook's 1913 Life of Florence Nightingale, work with Nightingale's own monthly figures for deaths in the British army in the East (real data from her 1858 report), and study two charts drawn from those figures for this page, one of them a rose diagram in the style she used to persuade Parliament.

The standard asks for two moves, and the lesson practices both on every source. Students integrate: they combine what the words describe with what the numbers count and what the charts show. They evaluate: they ask what each source measures, who made it and why, and where two sources seem to disagree, whether a difference in method explains it. The lesson ends with a problem to solve: which reform the evidence best supports.

Learning Objectives

By the end of this lesson, students will be able to:

  • Integrate information from written sources, a data table and charts to answer a research question
  • Evaluate each source's purpose, method and limits, including what a number or percentage is out of
  • Test claims made in words against quantitative data, and explain agreements and differences
  • Evaluate how a visual design, such as a rose diagram, can inform or persuade
  • Use integrated, evaluated evidence to recommend a solution to a problem

Prior Knowledge Required

Students should already be comfortable with:

  • Analyzing accounts of a subject in different mediums RI.9-10.7
  • Citing strong and thorough textual evidence, including where a text leaves matters uncertain RI.11-12.1
  • Percentages, ratios and reading a bar chart
  • Basic background on the Crimean War (1853-1856)

Lesson Procedure

65-75 minutes of class time across 5 phases.

  1. Warm-Up10 minutes

    Warm-Up Prompt

    "Two statements describe the same winter. (1) 'The state of the hospitals was disgraceful.' (2) 'In December 1854, 1,725 soldiers in an army of about 32,800 died of disease.' Which one persuades you more? Which one would you trust more? What would you need to know before you relied on either?"

    Students usually find the words more moving and the number more trustworthy, until someone asks where the number came from, who counted and what "died of disease" included. Write the lesson question on the board: What killed most British soldiers in the war in the East in 1854-1856, and which reform does the evidence best support? Tell students that RI.11-12.7 asks them to answer questions like this one by integrating sources in several formats (a newspaper letter, a biography, a table of numbers and two charts) and by evaluating what each source can and cannot show.

  2. Direct Instruction20 minutes

    Part 1: Integrate, then evaluate. To integrate sources is to combine what they show into one answer, noticing where they agree, where one fills a gap in another, and where they conflict. To evaluate a source is to judge how far it can be trusted for this question: who made it, when, for what purpose, what it counts or describes, and what it leaves out. A source can be strong for one question and weak for another.

    Questions to ask of each format
    FormatWhat it does wellQuestions to ask before relying on it
    Words (report, letter, biography)Describes conditions, causes and motives; gives testimonyWho wrote it, when, for whom, and why? Is the writer an eyewitness?
    Numbers (table)Counts and compares across months and causesWhat is counted, and out of what total? Who collected it, and how?
    Visual (chart, diagram)Shows patterns and size at a glanceWhat does length or area stand for? What scale? What is left out?
    All togetherEach covers another's gapsDo the sources agree? If not, which difference in method explains it?

    Part 2: The sources. In 1854 Britain and France joined the Ottoman Empire in its war against Russia; the British army fought in the Crimea, on the Black Sea, and sent its sick and wounded to hospitals at Scutari, across the water from Constantinople. Florence Nightingale arrived at Scutari with a party of nurses in November 1854. Read Passage 1, a letter printed in The Times of London, and Passage 2, from the 1913 biography of Nightingale by Sir Edward Cook, who drew on her papers and on official reports. Then study the table, Nightingale's own monthly figures, and Diagram 1, a chart drawn from them for this page. Model the worked examples.

    It is with feelings of surprise and anger that the public will learn that no sufficient preparations have been made for the proper care of the wounded. Not only are there not sufficient surgeons--that, it might be urged, was unavoidable; not only are there no dressers and nurses--that might be a defect of system for which no one is to blame; but what will be said when it is known that there is not even linen to make bandages for the wounded? The greatest commiseration prevails for the sufferings of the unhappy inmates of Scutari, and every family is giving sheets and old garments to supply their wants. But why could not this clearly foreseen want have been supplied? Can it be said that the Battle of the Alma has been an event to take the world by surprise? Has not the expedition to the Crimea been the talk of the last four months? And when the Turks gave up to our use the vast barracks to form a hospital and depot, was it not on the ground that the loss of the English troops was sure to be considerable when engaged in so dangerous an enterprise? And yet, after the troops have been six months in the country, there is no preparation for the commonest surgical operations! Not only are the men kept, in some cases, for a week without the hand of a medical man coming near their wounds; not only are they left to expire in agony, unheeded and shaken off, though catching desperately at the surgeon whenever he makes his rounds through the fetid ship; but now, when they are placed in the spacious building, where we were led to believe that everything was ready which could ease their pain or facilitate their recovery, it is found that the commonest appliances of a workhouse sick-ward are wanting, and that the men must die through the medical staff of the British army having forgotten that old rags are necessary for the dressing of wounds. If Parliament were sitting, some notice would probably be taken of these facts, which are notorious and have excited much concern; as it is, it rests with the Government to make inquiries into the conduct of those who have so greatly neglected their duty.

    Special Correspondent of The Times, quoted by Sir Edward Cook, Passage 1: The Times, October 12, 1854, letter from "Our Special Correspondent," dated Constantinople, September 30 (the closing paragraph, complete), as quoted in The Life of Florence Nightingale (1854; this edition 1913). Public domain (published 1913). Source text.

    [...] The ships which brought the sick and wounded from the Crimea were painfully ill-equipped. The voyage from Balaclava to Scutari usually took eight days and a half. During the first four months of the war, there died on a voyage, no longer than from Tynemouth to London, 74 out of every 1000 embarked. The landing arrangements added to the men's sufferings. To an unpractised eye the buildings used as hospitals at Scutari were imposing and convenient; and this fact accounts for some of the rose-coloured descriptions by which persons in high places were for a time misled. Even the Principal Medical Officer on the spot was naïvely content with whitewash as a preparation to fit the Barrack for use as a hospital. In fact, however, the buildings were pest-houses. Underneath the great structures "were sewers of the worst possible construction, loaded with filth, mere cesspools, in fact, through which the wind blew sewer air up the pipes of numerous open privies into the corridors and wards where the sick were lying."[90] There was also frightful overcrowding. For many months the space for each patient was one-fourth of what it ought to have been. And there was no proper ventilation. "It is impossible," Miss Nightingale told the Royal Commission of 1857, "to describe the state of the atmosphere of the Barrack Hospital at night. I have been well acquainted with the dwellings of the worst parts of most of the great cities in Europe, but have never been in any atmosphere which I could compare with it." Lastly, hospital comforts, and even many hospital necessaries, were deficient.[91] The supply of bedsteads was inadequate. The commonest utensils, for decency as well as for comfort, were lacking. The sheets, said Miss Nightingale, "were of canvas, and so coarse that the wounded men begged to be left in their blankets. It was indeed impossible to put men in such a state of emaciation into those sheets. There was no bedroom furniture of any kind, and only empty beer or wine bottles for candlesticks." Necessary surgical and medical appliances were often either wanting or not forthcoming. There was no machinery, until Miss Nightingale came, for providing any hospital delicacies. The result of this state of things upon patients arriving after a painful voyage in an extreme state of weakness and emaciation, from wounds, from frost-bite, from dysentery, may be imagined, and it is no wonder that cholera and typhus were rife. In February 1855 the mortality per cent of the cases treated was forty-two. No words are necessary to emphasize so terrible a figure.

    Sir Edward Cook, Passage 2: The Life of Florence Nightingale, Volume I, on the hospitals at Scutari (the end of a long paragraph; its opening is omitted where [...] appears; Cook's footnote numbers are kept in brackets) (1913). Public domain (published 1913). Source text.
    Deaths in the British army in the East, by month and cause, April 1854 to March 1856 (real figures: Florence Nightingale's 1858 tables, as transcribed in the HistData "Nightingale" data set). The last column is the annual death rate from disease per 1,000 soldiers: deaths x 12 x 1,000 / average strength.
    MonthAverage strength of the armyDeaths from diseaseDeaths from woundsDeaths from other causesDisease rate per 1,000 per year
    Apr 18548,5711051.4
    May 185423,33312096.2
    Jun 185428,33311064.7
    Jul 185428,722359023150.0
    Aug 185430,246828130328.5
    Sep 185430,2907888170312.2
    Oct 185430,643503132128197.0
    Nov 185429,736844287106340.6
    Dec 185432,7791,725114131631.5
    Jan 185532,3932,761833241022.8
    Feb 185530,9192,12042361822.8
    Mar 185530,1071,20532172480.3
    Apr 185532,2524774857177.5
    May 185535,4735084937171.8
    Jun 185538,86380220931247.6
    Jul 185542,64738213433107.5
    Aug 185544,61448316425129.9
    Sep 185547,7511892762047.5
    Oct 185546,852128531832.8
    Nov 185537,853178333256.4
    Dec 185543,21791182825.3
    Jan 185644,2124224811.4
    Feb 185643,485240196.6
    Mar 185646,140150353.9
    • Integrate words and numbers

      Passage 1, dated September 30, 1854, is about the wounded: there is "not even linen to make bandages for the wounded." The table's row for September 1854 shows 81 deaths from wounds and 788 from disease.

      Result: 788/81 is about 9.7. The letter is accurate about neglect, but the numbers add what it misses: even in the month of the Battle of the Alma, disease killed almost ten times as many soldiers as wounds did. Together the sources point toward sickness, not surgery, as the main problem.

    • Evaluate a statistic: out of what?

      Passage 2 says "In February 1855 the mortality per cent of the cases treated was forty-two." The table's February 1855 row shows 2,120 + 42 + 361 = 2,523 deaths in an army of 30,919.

      Result: 2,523/30,919 is about 8.2 percent of the whole army in one month. The two figures do not conflict: 42 percent is out of the patients treated in the hospital, and 8.2 percent is out of every soldier. Always ask what a percentage is "of."

    • Read the visual

      In Diagram 1, the red segment (wounds) is tallest in November 1854, the month of the Battle of Inkerman: 287 deaths. The blue segment (disease) for the same month is 844.

      Result: The chart makes the comparison visible at once: even in the worst month for wounds, disease was about three times as deadly (844/287 is about 2.9). A reader of Passage 1 alone would never see this.

    • Evaluate a rate: why "per year"?

      The table's last column turns one month's deaths into an annual rate per 1,000 soldiers. For December 1854: 1,725 x 12 x 1,000 / 32,779.

      Result: The result is about 631.5 per 1,000 per year, which means that at December's pace almost two soldiers in three would die within a year. Annual rates let months with different army sizes be compared fairly; they are a way of scaling a month, not a prediction.

    • Integrate everything to answer the question

      Over all 24 months, the table records 14,476 deaths from disease out of 17,982 deaths from all causes. Passage 2 describes sewers "loaded with filth," overcrowding and "no proper ventilation."

      Result: 14,476/17,982 is about 80.5 percent. The numbers show that disease, not battle, killed about four soldiers in five; the words suggest why (conditions that spread disease). A strong answer to the lesson question needs both, and it names what neither shows (for example, how many of the dead had passed through Scutari).

  3. Guided Practice15 minutes

    Pairs read Passage 3 and test one claim against the table: Cook's statement that "the death-rate in the hospitals fell, as the result of their reforms, with remarkable rapidity," and Nightingale's judgment that the Sanitary Commission "saved the British Army."

    [...] When the Government was reconstituted after the fall of Lord Aberdeen, with Lord Panmure as Secretary for War, this lesson was taken faithfully to heart, and a Commission of Three--Dr. John Sutherland, Dr. Hector Gavin, and Mr. Robert Rawlinson, C.E.--was sent out to the East with full executive powers. They received their instructions on February 19, 1855, and within three days they sailed. "The tone of the instructions," says Kinglake, "is peculiar, and such as to make one believe that they owed much to feminine impulsion. The diction of the orders is such that, in housekeeper's language, it may be said to have 'bustled the servants.'" The credit for the bustling at home belongs, however, to Lord Shaftesbury, who had pressed the appointment of the Commissioners upon Lord Panmure, and who was employed to draft their instructions.[131] The duties of these Sanitary Commissioners were laid down with a minuteness of detail which Miss Nightingale herself could not have excelled; and they were then told that "the utmost expedition must be used in the execution of all that is necessary at the place of your destination. It is important that you be deeply impressed with the necessity of not resting content with an order, but that you see instantly, by yourselves or your agents, to the commencement of the work and to its superintendence day by day until it is finished."[132] It is from the Report of the Sanitary Commissioners that I drew many of the statements about the condition of the hospitals given in an earlier chapter. They set about the work of sanitary engineering with great dispatch, and the death-rate in the hospitals fell, as the result of their reforms, with remarkable rapidity.[133] "The sanitary conditions of the hospitals of Scutari," Miss Nightingale told the Royal Commission of 1857, "were inferior in point of crowding, ventilation, drainage, and cleanliness, up to the middle of March 1855, to any civil hospital, or to the poorest homes of the worst parts of the civil population of any large town that I have ever seen. After the sanitary works undertaken at that date were executed (June), I know no buildings in the world which I could compare with them in these points, the original defects of construction of course excepted." It was this Commission, as Miss Nightingale said afterwards to Lord Shaftesbury, that "saved the British Army." [...]

    Sir Edward Cook, Passage 3: The Life of Florence Nightingale, Volume I, on the Sanitary Commission of 1855 (the middle of a paragraph; its opening and close are omitted where [...] appears; footnote numbers kept) (1913). Public domain (published 1913). Source text.

    Guide the pairs with three steps. (1) Dates: when did the Commission sail, and when, by Nightingale's account, were the works begun and finished? (2) Numbers: copy the disease deaths for January to July 1855 from the table. When did the fall begin? (3) Judgment: does the table support, weaken or leave open the claim that the Commission caused the fall? What else would you need? Pairs should find that disease deaths fell from 2,761 in January to 2,120 in February and 1,205 in March, so the decline began before the Commission's works, which Nightingale dates from "the middle of March" to June; that deaths rose again to 802 in June; and that the table covers the whole army in the East, not only the hospitals Passage 3 describes. A careful conclusion is that the evidence fits the claim in part but does not prove it, and that a researcher would want hospital figures before and after the works.

  4. Independent Practice15-20 minutes

    Students read Passages 4 and 5 and study Diagram 2, a rose diagram in the style of the ones Nightingale published in 1858, drawn for this page from the table. Then they answer the quiz on their own with the table and both diagrams open. Calculators are allowed.

    [...] She had "identified herself," as we have heard, "with the heroic dead," and she knew that many of her "children," as she called them, had died, not of necessity, but from neglect. "No one," she wrote,[223] "can feel for the Army as I do. These people who talk to us have all fed their children on the fat of the land and dressed them in velvet and silk, while we have been away. I have had to see my children dressed in a dirty blanket and an old pair of regimental trousers, and to see them fed on raw salt meat, and nine thousand of my children are lying, from causes which might have been prevented, in their forgotten graves. But I can never forget. People must have seen that long, long dreadful winter to know what it was." Others might know the facts, but she felt them. The strength of her character and powers lay, however, in the combination of intense feeling with intellectual grasp. She not only felt the neglect which had sacrificed her children's lives, but she tabulated the causes. The facts which had come under her eye, the figures in which she summarized and analysed them, filled her with a passion of resentment. During her residence in the Eastern hospitals she had seen 4600 soldiers die. And as she studied the figures, the conclusion was irresistibly borne in upon her that the greater number need not have died at all. Many of the diseases to which they had succumbed were induced, and others were aggravated, in the hospitals themselves. Her personal observation told her that it was so; statistical inquiry proved it. "We had," she pointed out, "during the first seven months of the Crimean campaign, a mortality among the troops at the rate of 60 per cent per annum from disease alone, a rate of mortality which exceeds that of the Great Plague in London, and a higher ratio than the mortality in cholera to the attacks." By a series of reforms, largely the result of Miss Nightingale's own untiring efforts and vehement expostulations, this terrible rate of mortality was reduced. "We had, during the last six months of the war, a mortality among our sick not much more than among our healthy guards at home, and a mortality among our troops, in the last five months, two-thirds only of what it is among our troops at home." It was obvious from this comparison that the mortality during the first period was largely preventable. [...]

    Sir Edward Cook, Passage 4: The Life of Florence Nightingale, Volume I, on Nightingale's figures after the war (the middle of a paragraph; its opening and close are omitted where [...] appears; footnote number kept) (1913). Public domain (published 1913). Source text.

    She had worked indefatigably, and through many channels, and she continued so to work, in order to focus and stimulate public opinion in the sense of Lord Ebrington's Resolutions. By the end of 1857 the Sub-Commissions on Army Medical Reform were making good progress, and the Report of the Royal Commission was about to be published. She devised an effective means of forcing its salient feature upon the attention of every person most concerned in the evils or most influential towards securing the necessary remedies. I have referred already (p. 352) to her diagrams illustrative of the mortality in the British Army. As finally prepared with Dr. Farr's assistance, they showed most effectively at a glance, by means of shaded or coloured squares, circles and wedges, (1) the deaths due to preventable causes in the Hospitals during the Crimean War, and (2) the rate of mortality in the British Army at home: "our soldiers enlist," as she put it, "to Death in the Barracks." She now wrote a memorandum, explaining the diagrams and pointing their moral, and had 2000 copies printed. This anonymous publication--entitled Mortality of the British Army--is called in her correspondence Coxcombs, primarily from the shape and colours of her diagrams. She had proposed, and Mr. Herbert agreed, that the memorandum and diagrams should be included as an appendix in his Report, in order that her pamphlet might appear as "Reprinted from the Report of the Royal Commission," and thus be given the greater authority. So soon as the Report was issued, she distributed her Coxcombs to the Queen and other members of the Royal Family, to Ministers, to leading members of both Houses of Parliament, and to Medical and Commanding Officers throughout the country, in India and in the colonies. She had a few copies of the diagrams glazed and framed, and three of these she sent to the War Office, the Horse Guards, and the Army Medical Department. I do not know whether these Departments hung up the present. "It is our flank march upon the enemy," she wrote in sending an early copy to Sir John McNeill, "and we might give it the old name of God's Revenge upon Murder."

    Sir Edward Cook, Passage 5: The Life of Florence Nightingale, Volume I, on the "Coxcombs" diagrams of 1858 (one paragraph, complete) (1913). Public domain (published 1913). Source text.
  5. Closure5-10 minutes

    Exit ticket: "Answer the lesson question in two sentences. Name one source in words and one in numbers or images that you relied on, and one limit of either." Sort the tickets into "one source only," "several sources, not weighed" and "integrated and evaluated" to plan the next lesson.

    Teacher note. Cook's biography (1913) admires Nightingale, and students should weigh that. Passages 2, 3, 4 and 6 keep Cook's footnote numbers in brackets exactly as printed. The table's figures are Nightingale's own, from her 1858 report to the government; they are real, and no numbers on this page are invented. Diagrams 1 and 2 are new drawings of those figures, made for this page.

    Homework passage. Passage 6 turns from the war to the army's barracks in England in peacetime. Students use it with the table and the diagrams for the homework.

    [...] If the medical service in the field were deficient, if the lessons of sanitary science were neglected in war hospitals, it was probable, she perceived, that there were like defects at home. She put her thesis to the test of figures, and was appalled at the verification which they supplied. The idea had first occurred to her on meeting Dr. Farr, the statistician in the Registrar-General's office, at dinner with her friends Colonel and Mrs. Tulloch. Dr. Farr had talked of mortality tables in civil life, and Miss Nightingale resolved to compare them with the death-rate in British barracks. She found that in the Army, from the age of twenty to thirty-five, the mortality was nearly double that which it was in civil life. This was the case even in the Guards, who yet were select lives, the pick of the recruits. "With our present amount of sanitary knowledge," she wrote to Sir John McNeill (March 1, 1857), "it is as criminal to have a mortality of 17, 19, and 20 per 1000 in the Line, Artillery, and Guards in England, when that of Civil life is only 11 per 1000, as it would be to take 1100 men per annum out upon Salisbury Plain and shoot them--no body of men being so much under control, none so dependent upon their employers for health, life, and morality as the Army." And again (March 28): "This disgraceful state of our Chatham Hospitals, which I have been visiting lately,[225] is only one more symptom of a system which, in the Crimea, put to death 16,000 men--the finest experiment modern history has seen upon a large scale, viz. as to what given number may be put to death at will by the sole agency of bad food and bad air." [...]

    Sir Edward Cook, Passage 6: The Life of Florence Nightingale, Volume I, on "Death in the Barracks" (the middle of a paragraph; its opening and close are omitted where [...] appears; footnote number kept) (1913). Public domain (published 1913). Source text.

Differentiation Strategies

For Struggling Students

  • Give the Source Log with the first row filled in for Passage 1, and let students use calculators for every rate
  • Highlight in the table only the rows each question needs, and read Passages 2-5 aloud with older words glossed (pest-houses, privies, expostulations, salient)
  • Offer the frame: "Source ___ shows ___; source ___ adds ___; they differ because ___; so the best answer is ___."

For Advanced Students

  • Compute the annual disease rate for each quarter of the war from the table and write a paragraph on whether the Sanitary Commission's timing explains the pattern
  • Redraw Diagram 2 as a line chart and argue which design is more honest and which more persuasive
  • Research what else changed in the Crimea in early 1855 and add one new source to the Source Log, with its format and limits

Assessment Guidance

What to Look For

Strong answers use at least two formats, say what each contributes, and weigh them: they check a claim in words against the numbers, ask what a percentage or rate is out of, and notice who made a source and why. Watch for answers that quote one source and ignore the others, that treat numbers as automatically true or words as automatically biased, and that confuse a pattern in time with proof of a cause.

02

Classroom Activities

3 Activities

1

Source Log

15 minPairs

Pairs build a log of every source on the page, one row each, before they use any of them to answer the question. The log keeps integration and evaluation separate at first, then brings them together.

The Log

Columns: source; format (words, numbers, visual); who made it, and when; what it can show for the lesson question; what it cannot show; one question to ask before relying on it. Rows: Passages 1-5, the table, Diagram 1 and Diagram 2.

Procedure

  • Fill in the row for Passage 1 together as a class
  • Pairs complete the other rows, then star the two sources they would rely on most for the lesson question
  • Each pair shares one "cannot show" entry that surprised them

Discussion Questions

  • Passage 1 was printed in 1854, during the war; Passage 2 in 1913. What does each date give the writer, and what does it take away?
  • Diagram 1 and Diagram 2 were drawn from the same table. Why might a reader trust one more than the other?

Variation for a Shorter Class

Assign each pair only three sources, making sure every source is covered by at least one pair, and pool the log on the board.

2

Build the Rate

15 minPairs

Pairs compute annual death rates themselves from the counts in the table, then use them to compare months with very different army sizes.

Procedure

  • For August 1854, May 1855 and October 1855, compute the disease rate per 1,000 per year: deaths from disease x 12 x 1,000 / average strength. Check each result against the table's last column
  • Then compare August 1854 with June 1855: find the deaths from disease and the army's strength for each
  • Write one sentence that a newspaper might print using only the counts, and one using only the rates

Discussion Questions

  • August 1854 had 828 deaths from disease and June 1855 had 802, almost the same count, but the rates are 328.5 and 247.6. Why?
  • Which figure, the count or the rate, better answers the question "Was the army healthier in June 1855?"
  • When might a count matter more than a rate?
3

Brief the Commission

20 minGroups of 4

Groups act as advisers to the Royal Commission of 1857 and prepare a one-page brief recommending one reform. The brief must integrate sources in all three formats and say where the evidence is weakest.

The Brief

  • One recommendation, in one sentence
  • One number from the table, one quotation from a passage and one point from a diagram, each with a sentence on why it supports the recommendation
  • One limit: a question the evidence cannot yet answer, and the source that could answer it

Procedure

  • Groups draft the brief on chart paper in 12 minutes
  • Each group presents in 2 minutes; the class votes on the brief that best integrates and evaluates, not the one with the most evidence

Modification for Remote Classes

Groups write the brief in a shared document with the three pieces of evidence as links to the page sections, and comment on one other group's limit.

03

Diagrams & Visual Aids

2 diagrams

Diagram 1: Monthly Deaths by Cause, April 1854 to March 1856

Deaths per month in the army in the East, by cause (April 1854 to March 1856) 0 500 1,000 1,500 2,000 2,500 3,000 3,500 Apr 1854 Oct 1854 Apr 1855 Oct 1855 disease wounds other causes
Deaths per month in the British army in the East, stacked by cause and drawn to scale from the table: disease (blue), wounds (red) and other causes (light blue). The figures are Nightingale's own; the chart is a new drawing made for this page. Disease is the largest cause in every month from July 1854 to August 1855.

Diagram 2: Rose Diagrams of Annual Death Rates

Annual death rates per 1,000, drawn as rose diagrams (wedge area shows the rate) Apr 54 Jul 54 Oct 54 Jan 55 April 1854 to March 1855 Apr 55 Jul 55 Oct 55 Jan 56 April 1855 to March 1856 disease wounds other causes
Each rose has one wedge per month, running clockwise from the left, April first. For each cause, the area of the wedge, not its length, is proportional to the annual death rate per 1,000 in the table, so the radius grows with the square root of the rate. Both roses use the same scale. Nightingale published diagrams of this kind in 1858; this is a new drawing of her figures for this page, not a copy.

04

Homework Assignment

~30 min

RI.11-12.7 Homework: Death in the Barracks

Directions: Use Passage 6 in the Closure phase of the lesson plan, the monthly table in Direct Instruction and Diagrams 1-2. Show every calculation. Quote exact words or name the row or diagram for every point. Answer Problems 1-5 in 3-6 sentences each; Problem 6 is a paragraph.

Part 1: Integrate Words and Numbers (Problems 1-3)

  1. Nightingale gives death rates of "17, 19, and 20 per 1000 in the Line, Artillery, and Guards in England" and "only 11 per 1000" in civil life. Divide each army rate by the civil rate. Does Cook's summary, "nearly double," fit all three, or only some? Explain.
  2. Nightingale compares the extra deaths to taking "1100 men per annum out upon Salisbury Plain" and shooting them. Suppose the army at home had a death rate of 19 per 1,000, 8 more than civil life. How large an army would produce 1,100 extra deaths a year? What does your answer tell you about what her comparison assumes?
  3. In her letter of March 28, Nightingale writes of a system that "in the Crimea, put to death 16,000 men." Compare this figure with the table's totals for disease (14,476) and for all causes (17,982). Which total is closer, and what are two possible reasons her figure matches neither?

Part 2: Evaluate and Solve (Problems 4-6)

  1. Passage 6 mixes three kinds of source: Cook's summary, Nightingale's private letters and figures from Dr. Farr's "mortality tables in civil life." Evaluate each for this question: "Was the army at home unhealthy in the 1850s?" Which would you trust most, and why?
  2. Describe a simple chart (type, axes, labels, colors) that would show a member of Parliament in 1858 the comparison in Passage 6 between the army at home and civil life. Explain one choice that makes it clear and one way a design like it could mislead.
  3. Write a paragraph (150-200 words): In 1858, should the army's first reform have been in its war hospitals or in its barracks at home? Integrate at least three sources in at least two formats from this page, evaluate one of them, and state what further evidence would settle the question.

Rubric

CriterionFull Credit (2 pts)Partial Credit (1 pt)No Credit (0 pts)
IntegrationCombines sources in at least two formats into one answerUses several sources side by side without combining themOne source only
EvaluationJudges purpose, method or limits of each source used, including what numbers are out ofEvaluates one source brieflyNo evaluation
Quantitative AccuracyCorrect calculations, shown and interpretedMinor errors, or results not interpretedMissing or wrong calculations
SolutionA clear recommendation that follows from the evidence and names what is still uncertainA recommendation weakly tied to the evidenceNo recommendation

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Quiz: 20 Questions

Interactive, with answers

Instructions

Questions 1-14 use Passages 4 and 5 (Independent Practice), the monthly table (Direct Instruction) and Diagram 2; questions 15-20 also draw on Passages 1-3 and Passage 6. Calculators are allowed. Your score updates as you answer, and Reset quiz clears everything so you or your students can try again.

Multiple choice: pick an option to check it. Short answer: write your answer, then reveal the model answer.

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  1. Question 1 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Use the table. What was the annual death rate from all causes in January 1855, per 1,000 soldiers?

  2. Question 2 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Passage 4 quotes Nightingale: "during the first seven months of the Crimean campaign, a mortality among the troops at the rate of 60 per cent per annum from disease alone." Test it with the table for September 1854 through March 1855: add the deaths from disease, divide by 7, multiply by 12, and divide by the average strength for those months (about 30,981). What rate does the table give?

  3. Question 3 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Suppose a calculation from the table for those seven months does not exactly match Nightingale's 60 percent. What is the most reasonable evaluation?

  4. Question 4 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Nightingale also claims that "during the last six months of the war," deaths "among our sick" were "not much more than among our healthy guards at home." What evidence would you need to test this claim that the table does not contain?

  5. Question 5 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    According to Passage 5, what was the main purpose of the "Coxcombs" diagrams?

  6. Question 6 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Why did Nightingale want her pamphlet to appear as "Reprinted from the Report of the Royal Commission"?

  7. Question 7 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    In Diagram 2, wedge area is proportional to the rate. The table gives a disease rate of 631.5 for December 1854 and 171.8 for May 1855. How many times greater was the December rate?

  8. Question 8 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Diagram 2 draws both years at the same scale. What does this let a reader see at once that the table shows less directly?

  9. Question 9 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Which is a real limitation of the rose diagrams in Diagram 2 as evidence?

  10. Question 10 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Passage 4 says that in the Eastern hospitals Nightingale "had seen 4600 soldiers die," while the table records 17,982 deaths from all causes. Why is this not a contradiction?

  11. Question 11 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    For the question "Which cause killed the most soldiers?", which source on this page gives the most direct evidence?

  12. Question 12 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    For the question "How did Nightingale's evidence reach the people who made decisions?", which source is most useful?

  13. Question 13 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Passage 4 says the rate was reduced "By a series of reforms, largely the result of Miss Nightingale's own untiring efforts and vehement expostulations." How should a researcher treat this sentence?

  14. Question 14 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    The table records 11,157 deaths from disease from April 1854 to March 1855 and 3,319 from April 1855 to March 1856. The second year's total was about what percent of the first year's?

  15. Question 15 of 20 · Short Answer

    Answer the lesson question (What killed most British soldiers in the war in the East in 1854-1856, and which reform does the evidence best support?) in 4-6 sentences. Use the table, Diagram 2 and Passage 4, and say what each contributes.

  16. Question 16 of 20 · Short Answer

    Evaluate Diagram 2 as a piece of persuasion. Explain one way the rose design helps Nightingale's argument and one way it could mislead a reader.

  17. Question 17 of 20 · Short Answer

    Nightingale claims that "in the last five months" of the war, the army's death rate was "two-thirds only of what it is among our troops at home." Her letter in Passage 6 puts the home rates at 17 to 20 per 1,000. Test the claim with the table for November 1855 to March 1856, and explain your result.

  18. Question 18 of 20 · Short Answer

    Passage 5 says the diagrams showed their point "most effectively at a glance" and were sent "to Ministers, to leading members of both Houses of Parliament, and to Medical and Commanding Officers." Why would a visual format suit this audience better than the table? What would that audience lose?

  19. Question 19 of 20 · Short Answer

    Solve the problem. You advise the Royal Commission of 1857 and may recommend only one reform first. State it and support it with evidence from at least two formats on this page, then name the weakest point in your evidence.

  20. Question 20 of 20 · Short Answer

    Which source on this page would you trust least for answering the lesson question, and why? Name what another source adds to make up for its weakness.

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Frequently Asked Questions

10 Questions

What does RI.11-12.7 mean?

RI.11-12.7 asks students to use several sources in different formats, such as tables, charts, images and written texts, to answer a question or solve a problem, and to judge how much each source can be trusted. "RI" is Reading Informational Text and "11-12" is the grade band. The official examples of formats are "visually" and "quantitatively."

What is the difference between integrating and evaluating sources?

Integrating means combining what the sources show into one answer: where they agree, where one fills a gap in another, and where they conflict. Evaluating means judging each source: who made it, when and why, what it measures and what it leaves out. RI.11-12.7 asks for both, and the evaluation often explains the conflicts found while integrating.

How is RI.11-12.7 different from RI.9-10.7?

RI.9-10.7 asks students to analyze accounts of one subject in different mediums and determine which details each emphasizes. RI.11-12.7 moves to research: students combine sources in words, numbers and images to address a question or solve a problem, and they evaluate the sources as they go.

Does RI.11-12.7 require math?

It requires reading quantitative information, such as tables, rates and charts, closely enough to use it as evidence. That can mean simple calculations, like the percentages and rates in this lesson, but the goal is reasoning about evidence. Knowing what a number is "out of" matters more than the arithmetic.

Why use Florence Nightingale's Crimean War data for RI.11-12.7?

Her monthly figures are real, public and famous, and they come with written sources that make claims about them: a newspaper letter, her own statements and a biography. Some claims match the numbers and some do not quite, so students must integrate and evaluate. Her rose diagrams are also a well-known example of a visual designed to persuade.

Are the numbers in this lesson real?

Yes. The table reproduces Nightingale's monthly figures for the British army in the East from April 1854 to March 1856, from her 1858 report, as transcribed in the HistData "Nightingale" data set. Every rate and percentage on the page is computed from them. The two diagrams are new drawings of those figures.

How do students evaluate a chart or diagram?

They ask what each part of the picture stands for (length, area, color), what scale is used, what data it was drawn from and who made it for what audience. Then they check a few values against the data. A chart can be accurate and still persuade by what it puts side by side, as Nightingale's two roses do.

How is RI.11-12.7 assessed?

Assessments often pair a passage with a graph or table and ask which conclusion both support, whether the data supports a claim in the text, or what a figure adds. Research tasks ask students to combine sources and explain their reliability. Answers are judged on accurate use of each format and on reasoning about the sources' limits.

What are common mistakes on RI.11-12.7 tasks?

Using only one source, treating numbers as automatically true, comparing percentages that are out of different totals, and taking a pattern over time as proof of what caused it. Another is evaluating a source only by its date or author, without asking what it can show for the question at hand.

How can students practice RI.11-12.7 at home?

Pick a news article that includes a chart. Ask: What does the chart show that the words do not? Does the text claim anything the chart does not support? Who made the chart and from what data? Then write a two-sentence answer to the article's main question that uses both.