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RH.9-10.6Common CoreELALiteracy in History/Social StudiesGrades 9-10

RH.9-10.6: Comparing Authors' Points of View on the Same Event

In plain English: RH.9-10.6 is the Common Core literacy standard for history that asks students in grades 9-10 to compare the point of view of two or more authors writing about the same or similar topics, including which details each includes and emphasizes. The key idea is that what an author puts in, leaves out and dwells on shows where that author stands. It is usually taught in World History or U.S. History.

Compare the point of view of two or more authors for how they treat the same or similar topics, including which details they include and emphasize in their respective accounts.

Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts & Literacy · Domain: Reading Standards for Literacy in History/Social Studies 6-12 · Cluster: Craft and Structure · Official standard

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Lesson Plan

60-75 min

Overview

Students compare the point of view of two or more authors who write about the same event, looking closely at which details each author includes, which he leaves out and which he emphasizes. Point of view here means where an author stands toward the event: who he is, which side he writes from, whom he writes for and what he wants readers to feel about it. A detail is emphasized when the author gives it more space, puts it first or last, describes it vividly or explains it. The lesson gives students a four-question routine for any pair of accounts: Who is writing, when and for whom? What does each account include that the other leaves out? What does each account emphasize? What do those choices show about each author's point of view?

The event is the Battle of Hastings on 14 October 1066, when William, Duke of Normandy, defeated and killed Harold, the English king, and began the Norman conquest of England. Students read three accounts in nineteenth-century translations: the Anglo-Saxon Chronicle, kept by English monks; the Roman de Rou of Wace, a poet who wrote for the Norman court of Henry II almost a century later; and the Chronicle of the Kings of England by William of Malmesbury, an English monk who says that the blood of both peoples flows in his veins. The quiz uses Malmesbury's account of the battle, and the homework uses his account of Harold before it.

Learning Objectives

By the end of this lesson, students will be able to:

  • Describe each author's point of view on the Battle of Hastings (who he is, when he wrote, which side he writes from) and quote the words that show it
  • Identify details that one account includes and another leaves out, and explain what the difference suggests about each author
  • Explain how an author emphasizes a detail through space, placement, vivid words or explanation, citing the paragraph
  • Compare two or three authors' treatment of the same moment, such as Harold's death or the English defeat, in a written comparison with quotations from each

Prior Knowledge Required

Students should already be comfortable with:

  • Identifying words and choices that reveal an author's point of view or purpose, such as loaded language or leaving out a fact RH.6-8.6
  • Citing specific evidence from a primary source with quotation marks and a paragraph number RH.9-10.1
  • Summarizing the central ideas of a primary source RH.9-10.2
  • Basic background: when King Edward of England died in January 1066, Harold, the most powerful English earl, took the crown. William, Duke of Normandy, claimed that Edward had promised the throne to him. In September 1066, Harold defeated a Norwegian invasion in the north, at Stamford Bridge; days later, William landed in the south

Lesson Procedure

60-75 minutes of class time across 5 phases.

  1. Warm-Up5-10 minutes

    Read the prompt aloud and give students three minutes to write.

    Warm-Up Prompt

    "Two school newspapers report the same basketball final. The winners' paper begins: 'A last-second three by Dana Ruiz sealed a 58-56 win and the city title.' The losers' paper begins: 'Missing their injured captain, the Hawks fell 58-56 on a disputed last-second shot.' Both reports are accurate. List what each one includes that the other leaves out, and what each puts first. What does each choice tell you about the writer?"

    Collect answers. Students usually notice that the winners' paper names the hero and the title, and the losers' paper names the missing captain and calls the shot "disputed." Neither report is false; each writer chose and arranged true details from where he or she stands. Name the skill: an author's point of view is his position toward the event, and it shows in the details he includes, the ones he leaves out and the ones he emphasizes. RH.9-10.6 asks students to compare two or more authors in exactly this way.

  2. Direct Instruction20 minutes

    Part 1: Who is writing? Show the table and Diagram 2. Point out that none of the three authors saw the battle, so each account shows what its author chose to believe, keep and stress. Students copy the four questions of the routine: Who is writing, when and for whom? What does each include that the other leaves out? What does each emphasize? What do those choices show?

    The three accounts of the Battle of Hastings on this page
    AccountAuthor and positionWhen writtenLanguage and translation
    Anglo-Saxon Chronicle (T1)Anonymous English monks writing for English readersKept year by year; the date this entry was written is not knownOld English prose; James Ingram's translation, 1823
    Roman de Rou (T2, T3)Wace, a poet from Jersey, writing for the court of Henry II, William's great-grandsonHe gives the year 1160French verse; Edgar Taylor's prose translation, 1837
    Chronicle of the Kings of England (T4-T7)William of Malmesbury, an English monk of English and Norman parentsFinished about 1125Latin prose; John Sharpe's translation (1815), revised by J. A. Giles, 1847

    Part 2: Model the comparison. Read T1 aloud. In the Chronicle, "Earl William" is the duke of Normandy, "the Frenchmen" are his army, and "child Edgar" is Edgar, a teenage member of the old English royal family. Then read T2, the first four paragraphs of Wace's chapter on the fight. Students mark each detail of the battle in one color and each word that judges a side in another. Work the three examples, then show Diagram 1.

    Meantime Earl William came up from Normandy into Pevensey on the eve of St. Michael's mass; and soon after his landing was effected, they constructed a castle at the port of Hastings. This was then told to King Harold; and he gathered a large force, and came to meet him at the estuary of Appledore. William, however, came against him unawares, ere his army was collected; but the king, nevertheless, very hardly encountered him with the men that would support him: and there was a great slaughter made on either side. There was slain King Harold, and Leofwin his brother, and Earl Girth his brother, with many good men: and the Frenchmen gained the field of battle, as God granted them for the sins of the nation.

    Archbishop Aldred and the corporation of London were then desirous of having child Edgar to king, as he was quite natural to them; and Edwin and Morkar promised them that they would fight with them. But the more prompt the business should ever be, so was it from day to day the later and worse; as in the end it all fared.

    This battle was fought on the day of Pope Calixtus: and Earl William returned to Hastings, and waited there to know whether the people would submit to him. But when he found that they would not come to him, he went up with all his force that was left and that came since to him from over sea, and ravaged all the country that he overran, until he came to Berkhampstead; where Archbishop Aldred came to meet him, with child Edgar, and Earls Edwin and Morkar, and all the best men from London; who submitted then for need, when the most harm was done. It was very ill-advised that they did not so before, seeing that God would not better things for our sins. And they gave him hostages and took oaths: and he promised them that he would be a faithful lord to them; though in the midst of this they plundered wherever they went. Then on midwinter's day Archbishop Aldred hallowed him to king at Westminster, and gave him possession with the books of Christ, and also swore him, ere that he would set the crown on his head, that he would so well govern this nation as any before him best did, if they would be faithful to him. Nevertheless he laid very heavy tribute on men, and in Lent went over sea to Normandy, taking with him Archbishop Stigand, and Abbot Aylnoth of Glastonbury, and the child Edgar, and the Earls Edwin, Morkar, and Waltheof, and many other good men of England. Bishop Odo and Earl William lived here afterwards, and wrought castles widely through this country, and harassed the miserable people; and ever since has evil increased very much. May the end be good, when God will!

    The Anglo-Saxon Chronicle (anonymous English monks), translated by James Ingram, The Anglo-Saxon Chronicle, entry for 1066: from William's landing to the end of the entry's account of the conquest (one paragraph in the source, printed here as three) (1823). Public domain (published 1823). Source text.

    From nine o'clock in the morning, when the combat began, till three o'clock came, the battle was up and down, this way and that, and no one knew who would conquer and win the land. Both sides stood so firm and fought so well, that no one could guess which would prevail. The Norman archers with their bows shot thickly upon the English; but they covered themselves with their shields, so that the arrows could not reach their bodies, nor do any mischief, how true soever was their aim, or however well they shot. Then the Normans determined to shoot their arrows upwards into the air, so that they might fall on their enemies' heads, and strike their faces. The archers adopted this scheme, and shot up into the air towards the English; and the arrows in falling struck their heads and faces, and put out the eyes of many; and all feared to open their eyes, or leave their faces unguarded.

    The arrows now flew thicker than rain before the wind; fast sped the shafts that the English call 'wibetes'. Then it was that an arrow, that had been thus shot upwards, struck Harold above his right eye, and put it out. In his agony he drew the arrow and threw it away, breaking it with his hands: and the pain to his head was so great, that he leaned upon his shield. So the English were wont to say, and still say to the French, that the arrow was well shot which was so sent up against their king; and that the archer won them great glory, who thus put out Harold's eye.

    The Normans saw that the English defended themselves well, and were so strong in their position that they could do little against them. So they consulted together privily, and arranged to draw off, and pretend to flee, till the English should pursue and scatter themselves over the field; for they saw that if they could once get their enemies to break their ranks, they might be attacked and discomfited much more easily. As they had said, so they did. The Normans by little and little fled, the English following them. As the one fell back, the other pressed after; and when the Frenchmen retreated, the English thought and cried out, that the men of France fled, and would never return.

    Thus they were deceived by the pretended flight, and great mischief thereby befell them; for if they had not moved from their position, it is not likely that they would have been conquered at all; but like fools they broke their lines and pursued.

    Wace, translated by Edgar Taylor, Master Wace, His Chronicle of the Norman Conquest, chapter XXI, "How the Archers Smote Harold's Eye" (the first four paragraphs) (1837). Public domain (published 1837). Source text.
    • Why the English lost: two explanations (T1 paragraph 1, T2 paragraphs 3-4)

      T1: "William, however, came against him unawares, ere his army was collected" and "the Frenchmen gained the field of battle, as God granted them for the sins of the nation." T2: the Normans "arranged to draw off, and pretend to flee," and the English "like fools they broke their lines and pursued."

      Result: The Chronicle includes two causes, surprise before Harold's army was ready and God's judgment on the sins of the English, and gives no tactics at all. Wace includes the tactic, the pretended flight, and blames the English soldiers for falling for it. The details match each author's point of view: the English monk treats the defeat as a punishment the whole nation earned, not as a failure of Harold's men, while the Norman court poet credits Norman cleverness and calls the English "fools."

    • The moment Harold is hit: one clause against a paragraph (T1 paragraph 1, T2 paragraph 2)

      T1: "There was slain King Harold, and Leofwin his brother, and Earl Girth his brother, with many good men." T2: an arrow "struck Harold above his right eye, and put it out"; Harold broke the arrow, leaned on his shield, and "the English were wont to say, and still say to the French, that the arrow was well shot."

      Result: The Chronicle gives Harold's death one clause, in a list of the English dead, and mentions no arrow. Wace gives the arrow a whole paragraph of vivid detail and ends it with the English admitting that the shot was a good one. Emphasis by space and vivid words turns a death the Chronicle mourns into a Norman triumph. The Chronicle's phrase "with many good men" includes the ordinary English dead; Wace's paragraph is about the king alone.

    • What each account puts at the end (T1 paragraphs 2-3, T2 paragraph 4)

      T1 spends paragraphs 2 and 3 on what followed the battle: William "ravaged all the country that he overran," "laid very heavy tribute on men," and with Bishop Odo "wrought castles widely through this country, and harassed the miserable people." It ends: "May the end be good, when God will!" T2 ends: "but like fools they broke their lines and pursued."

      Result: Two of the Chronicle's three paragraphs, 354 of its 481 words, are about the aftermath, and the account ends with a prayer. Placement and space make the suffering of the English the Chronicle's main subject; the battle itself gets less than a paragraph. Wace's excerpt ends on the English mistake. Each author ends where his point of view points: the English monk on the cost of the conquest, the Norman poet on the English error that made the victory possible.

  3. Guided Practice15 minutes

    Read T3, Wace's account of Harold's death, and T4, the opening of William of Malmesbury's preface to his book on William the Conqueror. A standard and a gonfanon are battle flags; Harold's standard marked where the English king stood. Pairs answer two questions before the class works the examples: What does Wace say he does not know? What does Malmesbury say about the Norman and English writers before him?

    And now the Normans had pressed on so far, that at last they reached the standard. There Harold had remained, defending himself to the utmost; but he was sorely wounded in his eye by the arrow, and suffered grievous pain from the blow. An armed man came in the throng of the battle, and struck him on the ventaille of his helmet, and beat him to the ground; and as he sought to recover himself, a knight beat him down again, striking him on the thick of his thigh, down to the bone.

    Gurth saw the English falling around, and that there was no remedy. He saw his race hastening to ruin, and despaired of any aid; he would have fled, but could not, for the throng continually increased. And the duke pushed on till he reached him, and struck him with great force. Whether he died of that blow I know not, but it was said that he fell under it, and rose no more.

    The standard was beaten down, the golden gonfanon was taken, and Harold and the best of his friends were slain; but there was so much eagerness, and throng of so many around, seeking to kill him, that I know not who it was that slew him.

    The English were in great trouble at having lost their king, and at the duke's having conquered and beat down the standard; but they still fought on, and defended themselves long, and in fact till the day drew to a close. Then it clearly appeared to all that the standard was lost, and the news had spread throughout the army that Harold, for certain, was dead; and all saw that there was no longer any hope, so they left the field, and those fled who could.

    I do not tell, and I do not indeed know, for I was not there to see, and have not heard say, who it was that smote down king Harold, nor by what weapon he was wounded; but this I know, that he was found among the dead. His great force availed him nothing; amidst the slain he was found slain also.

    The English who escaped from the field did not stop till they reached London, for they were in great fear, and cried out that the Normans followed close after them. The press was great to cross the bridge, and the river beneath it was deep; so that the bridge broke under the throng, and many fell into the water.

    William fought well; many an assault did he lead, many a blow did he give, and many receive, and many fell dead under his hand. Two horses were killed under him, and he took a third when necessary, so that he fell not to the ground, and lost not a drop of blood. But whatever any one did, and whoever lived or died, this is certain, that William conquered, and that many of the English fled from the field, and many died on the spot. Then he returned thanks to God, and in his pride ordered his gonfanon to be brought and set up on high, where the English standard had stood; and that was the signal of his having conquered, and beaten down the standard. And he ordered his tent to be raised on the spot among the dead, and had his meat brought thither, and his supper prepared there.

    Wace, translated by Edgar Taylor, Master Wace, His Chronicle of the Norman Conquest, chapter XXIV, "How Harold Was Slain and the English Fled" (seven consecutive paragraphs) (1837). Public domain (published 1837). Source text.

    Normans and English, incited by different motives, have written of king William: the former have praised him to excess; extolling to the utmost both his good and his bad actions: while the latter, out of national hatred, have laden their conqueror with undeserved reproach. For my part, as the blood of either people flows in my veins, I shall steer a middle course: where I am certified of his good deeds, I shall openly proclaim them; his bad conduct I shall touch upon lightly and sparingly, though not so as to conceal it; so that neither shall my narrative be condemned as false, nor will I brand that man with ignominious censure, almost the whole of whose actions may reasonably be excused, if not commended. Wherefore I shall willingly and carefully relate such anecdotes of him, as may be matter of incitement to the indolent, or of example to the enterprising; useful to the present age, and pleasing to posterity. But I shall spend little time in relating such things as are of service to no one, and which produce disgust in the reader, as well as ill-will to the author. There are always people, more than sufficient, ready to detract from the actions of the noble: my course of proceeding will be, to extenuate evil, as much as can be consistently with truth, and not to bestow excessive commendation even on good actions. For this moderation, as I imagine, all true judges will esteem me neither timid, nor unskilful. And this rule too, my history will regard equally, with respect both to William and his two sons; that nothing shall be dwelt on too fondly; nothing untrue shall be admitted.

    William of Malmesbury, translated by John Sharpe, revised by J. A. Giles, William of Malmesbury, Chronicle of the Kings of England, Book III, preface (the opening sentences) (1815; this edition 1847). Public domain (published 1847). Source text.
    • What an author is unsure of and what he is sure of (T3 paragraphs 3, 5 and 7)

      Wace: "I know not who it was that slew him"; "I do not tell, and I do not indeed know, for I was not there to see, and have not heard say, who it was that smote down king Harold, nor by what weapon he was wounded." Then: "this is certain, that William conquered"; William "lost not a drop of blood."

      Result: Wace admits three times that he does not know something, twice about who killed Harold and once about whether Gurth died of the duke's blow, yet he is certain of William's victory and of William's courage, and he gives William the last and longest paragraph of the excerpt. The details he is sure of are the ones that honor the duke. Comparing accounts means noticing this pattern: an author's doubts and certainties are part of his point of view, just as his included details are.

    • A point of view stated openly (T4 sentences 1-2) and one shown through word choice (T1 paragraphs 1 and 3)

      T4: Norman writers "have praised him to excess," English writers "out of national hatred, have laden their conqueror with undeserved reproach. For my part, as the blood of either people flows in my veins, I shall steer a middle course." T1: "as God granted them for the sins of the nation"; "seeing that God would not better things for our sins"; "harassed the miserable people."

      Result: Malmesbury states his point of view: he names both sides' bias and promises balance, and he also admits he will touch William's bad conduct "lightly and sparingly." The Chronicle never states a point of view, but its pronoun "our sins" places the writer among the conquered, and "the miserable people" shows his sympathy. A stated point of view is a claim to be tested against the details an author actually includes; the quiz asks students to test Malmesbury's.

  4. Independent Practice15-20 minutes

    Students read T5 and T6, William of Malmesbury's account of the battle. "The earl" is William. A hauberk is a coat of mail; the song of Roland is a French poem about a hero of the emperor Charlemagne's army. Students fill a three-column chart (Chronicle, Wace, Malmesbury) with the details each account gives for the same four moments: the night before, the fighting, Harold's death and William's part. Then they take the quiz, which uses T5 and T6 with T1-T4.

    The courageous leaders mutually prepared for battle, each according to his national custom. The English, as we have heard, passed the night without sleep, in drinking and singing, and, in the morning, proceeded without delay towards the enemy; all were on foot, armed with battle-axes, and covering themselves in front by the junction of their shields, they formed an impenetrable body, which would have secured their safety that day, had not the Normans, by a feigned flight, induced them to open their ranks, which till that time, according to their custom, were closely compacted. The king himself on foot, stood, with his brother, near the standard; in order that, while all shared equal danger, none might think of retreating. This standard William sent, after the victory, to the pope; it was sumptuously embroidered, with gold and precious stones, in the form of a man fighting.

    On the other side, the Normans passed the whole night in confessing their sins, and received the sacrament in the morning: their infantry, with bows and arrows, formed the vanguard, while their cavalry, divided into wings, were thrown back. The earl, with serene countenance, declaring aloud, that God would favour his, as being the righteous side, called for his arms; and presently, when, through the hurry of his attendants, he had put on his hauberk the hind part before, he corrected the mistake with a laugh; saying, “My dukedom shall be turned into a kingdom.” Then beginning the song of Roland, that the warlike example of that man might stimulate the soldiers, and calling on God for assistance, the battle commenced on both sides. They fought with ardour, neither giving ground, for great part of the day. Finding this, William gave a signal to his party, that, by a feigned flight, they should retreat. Through this device, the close body of the English, opening for the purpose of cutting down the straggling enemy, brought upon itself swift destruction; for the Normans, facing about, attacked them thus disordered, and compelled them to fly. In this manner, deceived by a stratagem, they met an honourable death in avenging their country; nor indeed were they at all wanting to their own revenge, as, by frequently making a stand, they slaughtered their pursuers in heaps: for, getting possession of an eminence, they drove down the Normans, when roused with indignation and anxiously striving to gain the higher ground, into the valley beneath, where, easily hurling their javelins and rolling down stones on them as they stood below, they destroyed them to a man. Besides, by a short passage, with which they were acquainted, avoiding a deep ditch, they trod under foot such a multitude of their enemies in that place, that they made the hollow level with the plain, by the heaps of carcasses. This vicissitude of first one party conquering, and then the other, prevailed as long as the life of Harold continued; but when he fell, from having his brain pierced with an arrow, the flight of the English ceased not until night. The valour of both leaders was here eminently conspicuous.

    William of Malmesbury, translated by John Sharpe, revised by J. A. Giles, William of Malmesbury, Chronicle of the Kings of England, Book III: the Battle of Hastings (the first two paragraphs) (1815; this edition 1847). Public domain (published 1847). Source text.

    Harold, not merely content with the duty of a general in exhorting others, diligently entered into every soldier-like office; often would he strike the enemy when coming to close quarters, so that none could approach him with impunity; for immediately the same blow levelled both horse and rider. Wherefore, as I have related, receiving the fatal arrow from a distance, he yielded to death. One of the soldiers with a sword gashed his thigh, as he lay prostrate; for which shameful and cowardly action, he was branded with ignominy by William, and dismissed the service.

    William too was equally ready to encourage by his voice and by his presence; to be the first to rush forward; to attack the thickest of the foe. Thus everywhere raging, everywhere furious, he lost three choice horses, which were that day pierced under him. The dauntless spirit and vigour of the intrepid general, however, still persisted, though often called back by the kind remonstrance of his body-guard; he still persisted, I say, till approaching night crowned him with complete victory. And no doubt, the hand of God so protected him, that the enemy should draw no blood from his person, though they aimed so many javelins at him.

    This was a fatal day to England, a melancholy havoc of our dear country, through its change of masters.

    William of Malmesbury, translated by John Sharpe, revised by J. A. Giles, William of Malmesbury, Chronicle of the Kings of England, Book III: Harold and William in the battle (two paragraphs and one sentence) (1815; this edition 1847). Public domain (published 1847). Source text.
  5. Closure5-10 minutes

    Exit ticket: On an index card, name one detail that Wace includes and the Chronicle leaves out, and one detail that the Chronicle emphasizes and Wace leaves out. Write one sentence on what the difference shows about the two authors.

    Teacher note on the sources and their language: All passages are quoted exactly as translated in the 1820s-1840s, with British spellings (valour, honourable) and old words (ere, before; wont, used to). The Chronicle calls the Norman army "the Frenchmen" and calls William, the Duke of Normandy, "Earl William." Ingram's "the estuary of Appledore" (T1) translates a phrase that modern translators read as "the hoar apple tree" (a grey, lichen-covered old tree), a landmark near the battlefield. Wace calls the English "fools" and Malmesbury calls Harold rash; discuss both as evidence of point of view. In T7, "parricide" means the killing of a close relative: Harold's brother Tostig died fighting on the Norwegian side at Stamford Bridge. The excerpts contain no slurs.

    Homework passage. Malmesbury's account of Harold before the battle, which comes just before T5 in his book. Use it with T1 for the homework problems.

    In the meantime Harold returned from the battle with the Norwegians; happy, in his own estimation, at having conquered; but not so in mine, as he had secured the victory by parricide. When the news of the Norman’s arrival reached him, reeking as he was from battle, he proceeded to Hastings, though accompanied by very few forces. No doubt the fates urged him on, as he neither summoned his troops, nor, had he been willing to do so, would he have found many ready to obey his call; so hostile were all to him, as I have before observed, from his having appropriated the northern spoils entirely to himself. He sent out some persons, however, to reconnoitre the number and strength of the enemy: these, being taken within the camp, William ordered to be led amongst the tents, and, after feasting them plentifully, to be sent back uninjured to their lord. On their return, Harold inquired what news they brought: when, after relating at full, the noble confidence of the general, they gravely added, that almost all his army had the appearance of priests, as they had the whole face, with both lips, shaven. [...] The king smiled at the simplicity of the relators, observing, with a pleasant laugh, that they were not priests, but soldiers, strong in arms, and invincible in spirit. His brother, Girth, a youth, on the verge of manhood, and of knowledge and valour surpassing his years, caught up his words: “Since,” said he, “you extol so much the valour of the Norman, I think it ill-advised for you, who are his inferior in strength and desert, to contend with him. Nor can you deny being bound to him, by oath, either willingly, or by compulsion. Wherefore you will act wisely, if, yourself withdrawing from this pressing emergency, you allow us to try the issue of a battle. We, who are free from all obligation, shall justly draw the sword in defence of our country. It is to be apprehended, if you engage, that you will be either subjected to flight or to death: whereas, if we only fight, your cause will be safe at all events: for you will be able both to rally the fugitives, and to avenge the dead.”

    His unbridled rashness yielded no placid ear to the words of his adviser, thinking it base, and a reproach to his past life, to turn his back on danger of any kind; and, with similar impudence, or to speak more favourably, imprudence, he drove away a monk, the messenger of William, not deigning him even a complacent look; imprecating only, that God would decide between him and the earl. He was the bearer of three propositions: either that Harold should relinquish the kingdom, according to his agreement, or hold it of William; or decide the matter by single combat in the sight of either army. For William claimed the kingdom, on the ground that king Edward, by the advice of Stigand, the archbishop, and of the earls Godwin and Siward, had granted it to him, and had sent the son and nephew of Godwin to Normandy, as sureties of the grant. If Harold should deny this, he would abide by the judgment of the pope, or by battle: on all which propositions, the messenger being frustrated by the single answer I have related, returned, and communicated to his party fresh spirit for the conflict.

    William of Malmesbury, translated by John Sharpe, revised by J. A. Giles, William of Malmesbury, Chronicle of the Kings of England, Book III: Harold before the battle (two paragraphs; one cut marked [...]) (1815; this edition 1847). Public domain (published 1847). Source text.

Differentiation Strategies

For Struggling Students

  • Give a three-column chart with the four moments filled in as rows (the night before, the fighting, Harold's death, after the battle) and the paragraph numbers where each account treats them
  • Provide a word bank for the old words in the passages: ere (before), wont (used to), hauberk (coat of mail), standard and gonfanon (battle flags), valour (courage), tribute (a tax paid to a ruler)
  • Read T2 paragraph 2 and T1 paragraph 1 aloud side by side, and have students underline only what each says happened to Harold

For Advanced Students

  • Find the scene of Harold's death in a photograph of the embroidered cloth kept at Bayeux, made within a few decades of the battle, and compare what it shows with T1, T3 and T6
  • Read the paragraph of the Chronicle before T1, on Harold's victory at Stamford Bridge, and compare the words the Chronicle uses for Harold there with the words Malmesbury uses in T7
  • Compare two present-day news reports of the same event from outlets on different sides of an issue, and chart the details each includes and emphasizes

Assessment Guidance

What to Look For

Strong work names a detail, says which author includes or emphasizes it and which leaves it out, quotes both, and explains what the difference shows about each author's point of view, in the form "By including (or stressing) X, the author shows ...". Watch for three errors: summarizing each account separately without comparing them; treating a missing detail as proof that the author did not know it (an author may choose to leave it out); and calling one account "biased" and another "true" instead of describing each author's position. Strong answers also notice emphasis, not only inclusion: two authors can mention the same detail and still treat it very differently.

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Classroom Activities

3 Activities

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Detail Map: Two Accounts, One Battle

20 minGroups of 3-4

Each group gets eight detail cards and a two-column map with the headings Chronicle (T1) and Wace (T2 and T3). For each card, the group decides whether each account emphasizes the detail (two or more sentences), mentions it (one sentence or less) or leaves it out, and writes the quotation that proves it.

The Eight Detail Cards

  1. Harold's army was not fully gathered
  2. The Norman archers and the arrow that hit Harold
  3. The Normans' pretended flight
  4. How Harold died
  5. William's own fighting
  6. God's part in the outcome
  7. Harm done to the English after the battle
  8. The author admits what he does not know

Procedure

  • Place each card on the map and mark each account: emphasized, mentioned or not in the excerpt
  • Write the quotation and paragraph number for every mark except "not in the excerpt"
  • Circle the two cards where the accounts differ most, and write one sentence for each on what the difference shows about the two authors
  • Compare your map with Diagram 1 and settle any disagreement with the text

Teacher Key

  • Details only the Chronicle includes: Harold's army not fully gathered ("ere his army was collected," mentioned) and harm after the battle (emphasized: ravaging, tribute, castles, "harassed the miserable people")
  • Details only Wace includes: the arrows, the pretended flight, William's own fighting and the author's doubts, all emphasized
  • Both include Harold's death (the Chronicle in one clause, Wace across several paragraphs) and God (the Chronicle three times: "as God granted them," "God would not better things," "when God will"; Wace once: William "returned thanks to God")
  • So the Chronicle leaves out four of the eight details and Wace leaves out two; the Chronicle emphasizes two details and Wace emphasizes five

Discussion Questions

  • Both accounts give God a part. Whose side is God on in each, and why does that fit each author?
  • The Chronicle leaves out the arrow. Does that mean its author did not know the story? What else could explain the choice?
  • Which single detail best shows the difference between the two points of view?

Variation for a Shorter Class

Use only cards 2, 6 and 7, one card that Wace emphasizes, one that both include and one that the Chronicle emphasizes.

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Retell It from the Other Side

15 minPairs

Pairs rewrite one short stretch of an account from the other author's point of view: T1 paragraph 1 as Wace might have written it, or T2 paragraph 2 as the Chronicle's monk might have written it. They may add, cut or reorder details, but every detail must come from one of the passages on this page.

Procedure

  • Choose the stretch to rewrite and the point of view to write from
  • List the details you will add, the ones you will cut and the one you will put last
  • Write the new version in four to six sentences
  • Swap with another pair, who must name each change and say what point of view it shows

Answer Key for the Teacher

  1. A strong rewrite of T1 paragraph 1 in Wace's voice adds the arrows and the pretended flight, moves Harold's death into the fighting, cuts "for the sins of the nation," and ends on William's victory.
  2. A strong rewrite of T2 paragraph 2 in the Chronicle's voice cuts the English praise of the archer, adds Harold's brothers and "many good men" to the dead, and ends by giving the outcome to God.
  3. Pairs should name each change as an inclusion, an omission or a change of emphasis.

Discussion Questions

  • Which change did the most to alter the point of view: adding a detail, cutting one or moving one?
  • Was it possible to change the point of view without writing anything false?

Modification for English Learners

Give pairs the details on strips (the arrow, the pretended flight, "many good men," "for the sins of the nation," "William conquered") and have them choose and order the strips before writing.

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Three Headlines for 14 October 1066

15 minGroups of 3, one author each

After the quiz, each student in a group takes one author (the Chronicle's monk, Wace or Malmesbury) and writes the headline and first sentence that author would give the battle, using only details that author includes. The group then compares the three headlines and explains every difference with a quotation.

Procedure

  • Choose the one detail your author would put first, and quote where he emphasizes it
  • Write a headline of eight words or fewer and a first sentence
  • Read the three headlines aloud; for each difference, find the quotation that explains it
  • Write a group sentence that compares all three points of view

Teacher Key

  • Chronicle: a headline about loss and God's judgment, such as "King Harold Slain; God Gives Field to the French," supported by T1 paragraph 1
  • Wace: a headline about Norman skill, such as "Archers and a Clever Retreat Win the Day for William," supported by T2 paragraphs 1-4
  • Malmesbury: a headline built from the details students found in T5 and T6 for the quiz; accept any headline that the group supports with quotations from those paragraphs

Discussion Questions

  • Which headline would a reader in Normandy in 1160 have liked best? A reader in an English monastery?
  • Can any of the three headlines be free of point of view? What would it have to leave out?

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Diagrams & Visual Aids

2 diagrams

Diagram 1: A Detail Map of Two Accounts (T1 and T2-T3)

Which details each account includes and emphasizes Anglo-SaxonChronicle (T1) Wace(T2 and T3) Harold's army not fully gathered Norman archers; the arrow that hit Harold The Normans' pretended flight How Harold died William's own fighting God's part in the outcome Harm to the English after the battle The author admits what he does not know Emphasized (two or more sentences) Mentioned (one sentence or less) Not in excerpt
Each row is one detail of the battle. A filled circle means the excerpt gives the detail two or more sentences; an open circle means one sentence or less; a dash means the detail is not in the excerpt. The map describes only the excerpts on this page, not the whole works. The Chronicle leaves out most of the fighting and spends its space on God and on what came after; Wace spends his on the fighting itself.

Diagram 2: When Each Account Was Written

How far from the battle each author wrote (drawn to scale) 1050 1075 1100 1125 1150 1175 1066: the battle,14 October About 1125: William ofMalmesbury finishes hisChronicle of the Kings 1160: Wace's date forhis Roman de Rou 1154: Henry II, William'sgreat-grandson and Wace'spatron, becomes king Anglo-Saxon Chronicle: kept yearby year by English monks; noexact date for this entry
A timeline from 1050 to 1175, drawn to scale. William of Malmesbury finished his history in about 1125, almost sixty years after the battle; Wace gave 1160 as the year of his chronicle, almost a century after it, and wrote for the court of Henry II. The Anglo-Saxon Chronicle was kept year by year by English monks, and the date this entry was written is not known, so it has no point of its own on the timeline. None of the three authors saw the battle.

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Homework Assignment

~30 min

RH.9-10.6 Homework: Two Accounts of Harold Before the Battle

Directions: Use T7, Malmesbury's account of Harold before the battle, printed in the Closure phase of the lesson plan, and T1, the Chronicle, printed in Direct Instruction. Use T4 where a problem names it. Quote the words you use and give the text and paragraph number. Answer Problems 1-5 in 3-5 sentences each; Problem 6 is a paragraph.

Part 1: Comparing the Details (Problems 1-3)

  1. Both T1 and T7 explain why Harold met William without the army he could have had. Quote each explanation. Which author blames William's speed, and which blames Harold himself? What does each choice show about the author's point of view?
  2. T7 includes the story of Harold's scouts and the Normans who looked like priests. T1 includes nothing like it. What does the story show about Harold and about William, and why might Malmesbury have chosen to include it?
  3. T7 includes William's claim to the kingdom (the grant by King Edward and the hostages sent to Normandy) and the three offers William's monk brought. T1 includes neither. Explain how including the claim and the offers changes the way a reader judges the conquest.

Part 2: Comparing the Points of View (Problems 4-6)

  1. Compare the words each author uses about Harold: in T1, "the king, nevertheless, very hardly encountered him with the men that would support him"; in T7, "unbridled rashness," "impudence" and "imprudence." What does each author emphasize about Harold's decision to fight?
  2. In T4, Malmesbury promises to "steer a middle course." Judging from the details T7 includes about Harold and about William, does he keep that promise in this passage? Give one detail on each side.
  3. Write a paragraph of 150-200 words comparing the Chronicle's point of view on Harold (T1) with Malmesbury's (T7). Explain at least two details one account includes and the other leaves out, and one detail each emphasizes. Quote at least two phrases from each text.

Rubric

CriterionFull Credit (2 pts)Partial Credit (1 pt)No Credit (0 pts)
ComparisonCompares both authors on the same point in the same sentence or paragraphDescribes each account separatelyDescribes one account only
Included and Emphasized DetailsNames details one author includes and the other leaves out, and explains emphasisNames details without saying which author leaves them outNo specific details
Point of ViewExplains what each choice shows about the author's positionNames a point of view without linking it to the detailsNo point of view given
EvidenceQuotes both texts with paragraph numbersQuotes one text, or numbers are missingNo quotations

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Quiz: 20 Questions

Interactive, with answers

Instructions

The quiz uses T5 and T6, William of Malmesbury's account of the Battle of Hastings, printed in the Independent Practice phase of the lesson plan, and compares it with T1-T4. Questions ask which details each author includes and emphasizes and what those choices show about his point of view. Your score updates as you answer, and Reset quiz clears everything so you or your students can try again.

Multiple choice: pick an option to check it. Short answer: write your answer, then reveal the model answer.

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  1. Question 1 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    In T5 paragraph 1, how does Malmesbury say the English spent the night before the battle?

  2. Question 2 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Why does Malmesbury put the Normans' night (T5 paragraph 2) right after the English night (paragraph 1)?

  3. Question 3 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    According to T5 paragraph 1, what would have kept the English safe that day?

  4. Question 4 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    T2 and T5 both include the Normans' pretended flight. How does Malmesbury's treatment of the English who fell for it differ from Wace's?

  5. Question 5 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Which detail about the fighting does T5 include that Wace's T2 leaves out?

  6. Question 6 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Which statement about Harold's death is accurate for both Wace (T3) and Malmesbury (T5-T6)?

  7. Question 7 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Malmesbury includes a detail about Harold's death that Wace leaves out: William punished the soldier who gashed Harold's thigh. What does including this detail show?

  8. Question 8 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    T5 ends: "The valour of both leaders was here eminently conspicuous." How does this sentence work in Malmesbury's account?

  9. Question 9 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Wace writes that William "lost not a drop of blood" (T3 paragraph 7), and Malmesbury writes that "the enemy should draw no blood from his person" (T6 paragraph 2). How do the two authors treat this shared detail?

  10. Question 10 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Which words in T6 show that Malmesbury writes, at least in part, from the English side?

  11. Question 11 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Why might Malmesbury include that William sent Harold's standard "to the pope" after the victory (T5 paragraph 1)?

  12. Question 12 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    T1 explains the outcome by God's judgment on "the sins of the nation." How does T5 treat God's part in the battle differently?

  13. Question 13 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    What does the story of William's hauberk, put on "the hind part before," emphasize (T5 paragraph 2)?

  14. Question 14 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Which statement best compares Malmesbury's point of view in T5-T6 with Wace's in T2?

  15. Question 15 of 20 · Short Answer

    Compare how T1 and T5 explain why the English lost. Name one detail each account includes that the other leaves out, and explain what each choice shows about the author.

  16. Question 16 of 20 · Short Answer

    In T4, Malmesbury promises to "steer a middle course" between Norman praise and English "national hatred." Does T5-T6 keep that promise? Support your answer with one detail that favors each side.

  17. Question 17 of 20 · Short Answer

    Compare how Wace (T3 paragraph 1) and Malmesbury (T6 paragraph 1) describe Harold's own fighting. Which author emphasizes it more, and how can you tell?

  18. Question 18 of 20 · Short Answer

    Name one detail that appears in all three accounts (T1, T2-T3 and T5-T6), and explain how each author treats it differently.

  19. Question 19 of 20 · Short Answer

    Malmesbury's account of the battle ends with "This was a fatal day to England" (T6 paragraph 3), right after his praise of William. Explain how that placement changes the effect of the praise.

  20. Question 20 of 20 · Short Answer

    Wace writes almost a century after the battle for the court of Henry II, William's great-grandson (see Diagram 2). How might his situation explain two details he includes or emphasizes in T2 and T3?

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Frequently Asked Questions

10 Questions

What does RH.9-10.6 mean?

RH.9-10.6 asks students in grades 9-10 to compare the point of view of two or more authors who write about the same or similar topics, including which details each includes and emphasizes. "RH" stands for Reading in History/Social Studies. In practice, students put two accounts of one event side by side and explain how each author's choices of detail show where he or she stands.

What is point of view in a history text?

Point of view is the author's position toward the subject: who the author is, which side he or she writes from, for whom and with what attitude. It is not the same as first or third person. In history texts, point of view shows most clearly in the details an author includes, leaves out and emphasizes, and in the words used to judge people and events.

How is RH.9-10.6 different from RH.11-12.6?

RH.9-10.6 asks students to compare authors' points of view, with attention to which details each includes and emphasizes. RH.11-12.6 asks students to evaluate differing points of view on the same event or issue by assessing each author's claims, reasoning and evidence. The 9-10 question "how do these accounts differ, and what does that show?" becomes the 11-12 question "which account's argument holds up better, and why?"

How can a student tell what an author emphasizes?

By looking at space, placement, vivid language and explanation. A detail an author gives several sentences to, puts first or last, describes in vivid words or stops to explain carries more weight than one mentioned in passing. In the lesson, the Chronicle gives Harold's death one clause and the aftermath two paragraphs; Wace gives the arrow that hit Harold a whole paragraph.

Does leaving out a detail mean an author is lying?

No. Every author selects, and a missing detail may mean the author did not know it, did not think it mattered, or chose not to stress it. Students should describe the omission and suggest reasons without calling the account false. Comparing accounts is how historians find what a single account leaves out.

Why use accounts of the Battle of Hastings for RH.9-10.6?

Because the three accounts come from clearly different positions on one well-known event. An English monk writes of God's judgment and English suffering, a poet for the Norman court writes of Norman skill, and William of Malmesbury, of English and Norman parents, says he will steer a middle course. The same details, such as the arrow and Harold's death, appear with very different emphasis.

How is RH.9-10.6 different from RH.9-10.9?

Both use more than one source. RH.9-10.9 asks students to compare and contrast how several primary and secondary sources treat a topic, which can include what information each gives. RH.9-10.6 focuses on the authors: their points of view and how those points of view show in the details they include and emphasize.

What mistakes do students make with RH.9-10.6?

A common mistake is summarizing each account in turn without ever comparing them. Another is labeling one source "biased" and another "objective" instead of describing each author's position. Students also notice what is included but miss emphasis, when two authors mention the same detail and treat it very differently. A two-column chart organized by moment, not by source, helps with all three.

How is RH.9-10.6 assessed?

Usually with two short passages on the same topic and questions that ask what one includes that the other does not, how each describes a shared detail, or which statement best compares the two points of view. Written tasks ask for a comparison that quotes both texts. The quiz on this page follows that pattern with a third account of Hastings.

Which class teaches RH.9-10.6?

RH.9-10.6 is a literacy standard for history and social studies, so it is usually taught in grade 9 or 10 World History or U.S. History, alongside the content of the course. English teachers work on a related skill with RI.9-10.6. It prepares students for RH.11-12.6, which asks them to evaluate authors' claims, reasoning and evidence.