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RH.9-10.1Common CoreELALiteracy in History/Social StudiesGrades 9-10

RH.9-10.1: Citing Evidence from Primary and Secondary Sources, with Date and Origin

In plain English: RH.9-10.1 is the Common Core literacy standard for history that asks students in grades 9-10 to cite specific evidence from primary and secondary sources to support their analysis, and to weigh that evidence by its date and origin: who produced it, when, from where and how they knew. It is usually taught in World History or U.S. History.

Cite specific textual evidence to support analysis of primary and secondary sources, attending to such features as the date and origin of the information.

Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts & Literacy · Domain: Reading Standards for Literacy in History/Social Studies 6-12 · Cluster: Key Ideas and Details · Official standard

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Lesson Plan

65-75 min

Overview

Students cite specific evidence from primary and secondary sources to answer a historical question, and they weigh each piece of evidence by its date and origin: who made the source, when, where the author was, how the author knew and why the source was made. The goal is a habit historians call sourcing: before using a quotation as evidence, students ask what the source could and could not know.

The case is one question that survivors argued about in 1912: did the Titanic break in two before it sank? Students read Lawrence Beesley, who watched from a lifeboat and denied the break, and Archibald Gracie, who went down with the ship and weighed other survivors' statements. For the quiz they read Jack Thayer's account, printed in a book compiled weeks after the disaster, and a secondary source written for this page that uses evidence found long after 1912. For homework they read the British inquiry's finding. All primary sources are quoted from editions of 1912 and 1913.

Learning Objectives

By the end of this lesson, students will be able to:

  • Tell primary from secondary sources, and explain how one document can be a primary source for some claims and a secondary source for others
  • Identify the date and origin of a source (author, time, place, vantage point, how the author knew, purpose) and cite the words that show them
  • Cite specific, exact quotations from primary and secondary sources to support an analysis of a historical question
  • Explain how the date and origin of a piece of evidence make it stronger or weaker for a particular claim

Prior Knowledge Required

Students should already be comfortable with:

  • Citing specific textual evidence from primary and secondary sources in grades 6-8 RH.6-8.1
  • Quoting exact words and using quotation marks correctly
  • The basic story of the Titanic: a British passenger liner that struck an iceberg on its first voyage in April 1912

Lesson Procedure

65-75 minutes of class time across 5 phases.

  1. Warm-Up10 minutes

    Pose a school-sized version of the problem before any history appears.

    Warm-Up Prompt

    "Something fell off the stage during Friday's assembly. Three people describe it: a student in the front row who says she saw it happen, a student in the back row who heard it and saw it only afterward, and a student who wrote about it for the school newsletter on Monday after talking to both. They disagree about what fell. Whose account would you trust for what fell, and whose for what the crowd did? What would you want to know about each one first?"

    Collect the questions students ask (where were you? when did you write this? did you see it or hear about it? why are you telling me?). Label them on the board as date and origin. Tell students that RH.9-10.1 asks them to cite evidence from historical sources while paying attention to exactly these features, and that the answer to "whose account is best" depends on the question being asked.

  2. Direct Instruction20 minutes

    Part 1: Primary, secondary, date, origin. A primary source was made by someone who took part in or witnessed the events, or at the time of them: a survivor's account, a letter, an official report of 1912. A secondary source is made later by someone who was not there and who works from other sources: a textbook, a historian's article. Present Diagram 1: every source gets five sourcing questions before any of its words are used as evidence. Then give the frame for an evidence sentence: claim + exact quotation + date and origin tag + what the tag means for this claim.

    Sourcing questions and what to look for in the text
    QuestionLook forWhy it matters
    Who made it?Name, role, relation to the eventA survivor, an officer and an editor have different knowledge and different interests
    When?Dates, phrases like "five weeks after"Soon after: fresher memory. Later: more information, but more retelling
    Where was the author?Distance, position, light, what blocked the viewVantage point limits what a witness could see
    How did the author know?"I saw," "I heard," "he told me," "the report reads"Firsthand and secondhand claims in the same document carry different weight
    Why was it made?Stated purpose, audience, publisherA purpose can shape which details are included or stressed

    Part 2: Model with Beesley. Lawrence Beesley, a science teacher traveling in second class, left the ship in lifeboat 13. Read his preface aloud. It tells students when and why the book was written, so it is itself evidence about origin. Model worked examples 1 and 2 with it.

    The circumstances in which this book came to be written are as follows. Some five weeks after the survivors from the Titanic landed in New York, I was the guest at luncheon of Hon. Samuel J. Elder and Hon. Charles T. Gallagher, both well-known lawyers in Boston. After luncheon I was asked to relate to those present the experiences of the survivors in leaving the Titanic and reaching the Carpathia.

    When I had done so, Mr. Robert Lincoln O'Brien, the editor of the Boston Herald, urged me as a matter of public interest to write a correct history of the Titanic disaster, his reason being that he knew several publications were in preparation by people who had not been present at the disaster, but from newspaper accounts were piecing together a description of it. He said that these publications would probably be erroneous, full of highly coloured details, and generally calculated to disturb public thought on the matter. He was supported in his request by all present, and under this general pressure I accompanied him to Messrs. Houghton Mifflin Company, where we discussed the question of publication.

    Messrs. Houghton Mifflin Company took at that time exactly the same view that I did, that it was probably not advisable to put on record the incidents connected with the Titanic's sinking: it seemed better to forget details as rapidly as possible.

    However, we decided to take a few days to think about it. At our next meeting we found ourselves in agreement again,--but this time on the common ground that it would probably be a wise thing to write a history of the Titanic disaster as correctly as possible. I was supported in this decision by the fact that a short account, which I wrote at intervals on board the Carpathia, in the hope that it would calm public opinion by stating the truth of what happened as nearly as I could recollect it, appeared in all the American, English, and Colonial papers and had exactly the effect it was intended to have. This encourages me to hope that the effect of this work will be the same.

    Another matter aided me in coming to a decision,--the duty that we, as survivors of the disaster, owe to those who went down with the ship, to see that the reforms so urgently needed are not allowed to be forgotten.

    Whoever reads the account of the cries that came to us afloat on the sea from those sinking in the ice-cold water must remember that they were addressed to him just as much as to those who heard them, and that the duty, of seeing that reforms are carried out devolves on every one who knows that such cries were heard in utter helplessness the night the Titanic sank.

    Lawrence Beesley, The Loss of the S. S. Titanic: Its Story and Its Lessons, Preface (1912). Public domain (published 1912). Source text.

    Now read what Beesley says he saw at the end. Model worked examples 3-5, and ask after each: what could Beesley know from where he was?

    At about 2.15 A.M. I think we were any distance from a mile to two miles away. It is difficult for a landsman to calculate distance at sea but we had been afloat an hour and a half, the boat was heavily loaded, the oarsmen unskilled, and our course erratic: following now one light and now another, sometimes a star and sometimes a light from a port lifeboat which had turned away from the Titanic in the opposite direction and lay almost on our horizon; and so we could not have gone very far away.

    [...]

    And then, as we gazed awe-struck, she tilted slowly up, revolving apparently about a centre of gravity just astern of amidships, until she attained a vertically upright position; and there she remained--motionless! As she swung up, her lights, which had shone without a flicker all night, went out suddenly, came on again for a single flash, then went out altogether. And as they did so, there came a noise which many people, wrongly I think, have described as an explosion; it has always seemed to me that it was nothing but the engines and machinery coming loose from their bolts and bearings, and falling through the compartments, smashing everything in their way. It was partly a roar, partly a groan, partly a rattle, and partly a smash, and it was not a sudden roar as an explosion would be: it went on successively for some seconds, possibly fifteen to twenty, as the heavy machinery dropped down to the bottom (now the bows) of the ship: I suppose it fell through the end and sank first, before the ship. But it was a noise no one had heard before, and no one wishes to hear again: it was stupefying, stupendous, as it came to us along the water. It was as if all the heavy things one could think of had been thrown downstairs from the top of a house, smashing each other and the stairs and everything in the way. Several apparently authentic accounts have been given, in which definite stories of explosions have been related--in some cases even with wreckage blown up and the ship broken in two; but I think such accounts will not stand close analysis. In the first place the fires had been withdrawn and the steam allowed to escape some time before she sank, and the possibility of explosion from this cause seems very remote. Then, as just related, the noise was not sudden and definite, but prolonged--more like the roll and crash of thunder. The probability of the noise being caused by engines falling down will be seen by referring to Figure 2, page 116, where the engines are placed in compartments 3, 4, and 5. As the Titanic tilted up they would almost certainly fall loose from their bed and plunge down through the other compartments.

    No phenomenon like that pictured in some American and English papers occurred--that of the ship breaking in two, and the two ends being raised above the surface. I saw these drawings in preparation on board the Carpathia, and said at the time that they bore no resemblance to what actually happened.

    Lawrence Beesley, The Loss of the S. S. Titanic: Its Story and Its Lessons, chapter on the sinking (excerpt) (1912). Public domain (published 1912). Source text.
    • Date: when the account was written

      T1, paragraph 1: "Some five weeks after the survivors from the Titanic landed in New York" Beesley was asked to write; paragraph 4 adds that he first "wrote at intervals on board the Carpathia."

      Result: Two dates, two documents. The short Carpathia account was written within days; the book was begun more than a month later, after he had seen drawings being prepared for the newspapers and "Several apparently authentic accounts" (T2, paragraph 2). The book's memory is still recent, but it is no longer untouched by other people's versions.

    • Origin: why the account was written

      T1, paragraph 2: the editor of the Boston Herald urged him "to write a correct history" because other books were being written "by people who had not been present at the disaster."

      Result: Beesley's stated purpose is to correct secondhand accounts, and paragraph 5 adds a second purpose: that "reforms so urgently needed are not allowed to be forgotten." Citing these words lets a student explain why he stresses what he saw and argues against rumors.

    • Origin: vantage point

      T2, paragraph 1: "I think we were any distance from a mile to two miles away. It is difficult for a landsman to calculate distance at sea."

      Result: Beesley tells the reader his own limits: distance, a moving boat, and "landsman" (a person with no experience at sea). A careful citation keeps his hedges ("I think") because they are part of the evidence.

    • Evidence that limits the witness

      T2, paragraph 2: "her lights, which had shone without a flicker all night, went out suddenly, came on again for a single flash, then went out altogether."

      Result: The lights went out as the stern swung up, the moment a break would have happened. Beesley's own words show that he watched the key seconds in the dark from a mile or more away, which weakens his certainty on this one question without making him a poor witness on others.

    • A full evidence sentence

      Claim: Beesley rejected the break-up accounts he had heard.

      Result: Beesley, writing about five weeks after the landing, insists that "No phenomenon like that pictured in some American and English papers occurred--that of the ship breaking in two" (T2, paragraph 3). Because he watched from a lifeboat he placed "a mile to two miles away," his account is strong evidence for what could be seen from the boats and weaker evidence for what happened to the hull.

    Show Diagram 2 to place each source in time, and point out that the secondary source students read later was written in 2026, long after the others.

  3. Guided Practice15 minutes

    Pairs read Archibald Gracie's discussion of the same question. Gracie, a first-class passenger, went down with the ship and survived on an overturned lifeboat. He died on December 4, 1912, and his book appeared in 1913 with a closing note by another writer. Pairs highlight in one color what Gracie saw himself and in another what he reports from other people or documents.

    I was on the Carpathia when I first heard any one make reference to this point. The seventeen-year-old son of Mr. John B. Thayer, “Jack” Thayer, Jr., and his young friend from Philadelphia, R. N. Williams, Jr., the tennis expert, in describing their experiences to me were positive that they saw the ship split in two. This was from their position in the water on the starboard quarter. “Jack” Thayer gave this same description to an artist, who reproduced it in an illustration in the New York Herald, which many of us have seen. Some of the passengers, whose names I have just mentioned, are also cited by the newspapers as authority for the statements that the ship “broke in two,” that she “buckled amidships,” that she “was literally torn to pieces,” etc. On the other hand, there is much testimony available which is at variance with this much-advertised sensational newspaper account. Summing up its investigation of this point the Senate Committee’s Report reads: “There have been many conflicting statements as to whether the ship broke in two, but the preponderance of evidence is to the effect that she assumed an almost end-on position and sank intact.” This was as Lightoller testified before the Committee, that the Titanic’s decks were “absolutely intact” when she went down. On this point, too, Beesley is in accord, from his viewpoint in the lifeboat some distance away out of danger, whence, more composedly than others, he could see the last of the ill-fated ship as the men lay on their oars watching until she disappeared.

    [...]

    From my personal viewpoint I also know that the Titanic’s decks were intact at the time she sank, and when I sank with her, there was over seven-sixteenths of the ship already under water, and there was no indication then of any impending break of the deck or ship. [...]

    One explanation which I offer of what must be a delusion on the part of the advocates of the “break-in-two” theory is that when the forward funnel fell, as hereafter described, it may have looked as if the ship itself was splitting in two, particularly to the young men who are cited as authority.

    Archibald Gracie, The Truth about the Titanic, chapter III (excerpt, "Did the ship break in two?") (1913). Public domain (published 1913). Source text.

    Debrief with two questions. Which sentences make Gracie a primary source, and which make him a secondary source? His own experience ("when I sank with her") is primary; his summary of Thayer's statement and of the Senate report is secondhand. What does Gracie tell us about Beesley's origin? He notes that Beesley watched "from his viewpoint in the lifeboat some distance away out of danger." Point out that Gracie treats distance as an advantage (calm observation), while Worked Example 4 treated it as a limit. Both readings cite the same fact; students must say which claim they are judging.

    For Activity 2 (Fact-Check the Summary). The summary below was written for this page as practice. It is a secondary source, and it contains errors on purpose.

    The Titanic struck an iceberg late on the night of April 14, 1912, and sank early the next morning. Survivors in the lifeboats watched the end from a safe distance.

    Eyewitnesses agreed that the ship's lights stayed on until the moment she disappeared beneath the water. As the stern rose into the air, a series of boiler explosions tore the ship in two, and every survivor who saw the sinking described the break. The official United States Senate inquiry of 1912 confirmed that the ship had split.

    One passenger, Lawrence Beesley, wrote a careful account of the disaster. Because he wrote his book on the night of the sinking, while the events were fresh, it is the most reliable account we have.

    Written for this page (a practice secondary source, not a published textbook), Practice Summary: The Last Minutes of the Titanic (contains deliberate errors for Activity 2). Original passage written for this page.
  4. Independent Practice15-20 minutes

    Students read two more sources and answer the quiz on their own. The first is Jack Thayer's account as printed in a book compiled in 1912 by Logan Marshall, an editor who was not on the ship. Ask students to notice the layers of origin: whose words are printed, and who put them on the page. The second is a secondary source written for this page in 2026. Students should keep T2 and T3 open for questions that compare sources.

    SEVENTEEN-YEAR-OLD SON OF PENNSYLVANIA RAILROAD OFFICIAL TELLS MOVING STORY OF HIS RESCUE--TOLD MOTHER TO BE BRAVE--SEPARATED FROM PARENTS--JUMPED WHEN VESSEL SANK--DRIFTED ON OVERTURNED BOAT PICKED UP BY CARPATHIA

    [...]

    The boy's own account of his experience as told to one of his rescuers is one of the most remarkable of all the wonderful ones that have come from the tremendous catastrophe:

    [...]

    "About five seconds after he jumped I jumped out, feet first. I was clear of the ship; went down, and as I came up I was pushed away from the ship by some force. I came up facing the ship, and one of the funnels seemed to be lifted off and fell towards me about 15 yards away, with a mass of sparks and steam coming out of it. I saw the ship in a sort of a red glare, and it seemed to me that she broke in two just in front of the third funnel.

    "This time I was sucked down, and as I came up I was pushed out again and twisted around by a large wave, coming up in the midst of a great deal of small wreckage. As I pushed my hand from my head it touched the cork fender of an overturned life-boat. I looked up and saw some men on the top and asked them to give me a hand. One of them, who was a stoker, helped me up. In a short time the bottom was covered with about twenty-five or thirty men. When I got on this I was facing the ship.

    "The stern then seemed to rise in the air and stopped at about an angle of 60 degrees. It seemed to hold there for a time and then with a hissing sound it shot right down out of sight with people jumping from the stern. The stern either pivoted around towards our boat, or we were sucked towards it, and as we only had one oar we could not keep away. There did not seem to be very much suction and most of us managed to stay on the bottom of our boat.

    Jack Thayer, in a book compiled by Logan Marshall, Sinking of the Titanic and Great Sea Disasters, edited by Logan Marshall, chapter XV, "Jack Thayer's Own Story of the Wreck" (excerpt) (1912). Public domain (published 1912). Source text.

    Until the 1980s, the question of whether the Titanic broke in two could be argued only from the memories of survivors. The two official inquiries of 1912, one by a committee of the United States Senate and one by the British Wreck Commissioner, both concluded that the ship went down in one piece. Their conclusion leaned heavily on the testimony of surviving officers such as Second Officer Charles Lightoller, who was still on board as the bow went under, and on passengers in lifeboats who watched from a distance after the ship's lights failed. Several of the witnesses who described a break, including seventeen-year-old Jack Thayer, had been in the water close to the ship, and newspapers had mixed some of their statements with rumors of explosions, which made their accounts easier to doubt.

    On September 1, 1985, a French-American expedition led by Jean-Louis Michel and Robert Ballard located the wreck about 3,800 meters (roughly 12,500 feet) below the surface of the North Atlantic. The bow and the stern lie about 600 meters apart, and a field of debris lies between them. The hull had broken apart. Researchers who have studied the wreck generally conclude that the break happened at or near the surface, in the last minutes before the ship sank, which supports the witnesses who said she split.

    The wreck does not show that the witnesses who disagreed were lying. A passenger in a distant lifeboat, an officer who went into the water with the bow and a teenager fighting to stay afloat each saw a different part of the same few minutes in the dark. Each described what he could see from where he was.

    Written for this page (a model secondary source), What the Wreck Showed (a secondary source written in 2026). Original passage written for this page.
  5. Closure5-10 minutes

    Exit ticket: "Write one evidence sentence about the sinking that quotes any source from today and includes a date and origin tag. Then write one sentence explaining what that tag does to the weight of your evidence." Sort the tickets into "quotation only," "tag added" and "tag explained" to plan the next lesson.

    Homework passage. Introduce the report of the British inquiry, led by Lord Mersey and published in July 1912. The U.S. Senate ordered it printed on August 20, 1912, and that printing is quoted here. Ask students to notice whose testimony each sentence rests on.

    The later stages of the sinking can not be stated with any precision, owing to a confusion of the times which was natural under the circumstances.

    The forecastle deck was not under water at 1.35 a. m. Distress signals were fired until two hours after the collision (1.45 a. m.). At this time the fore deck was under water. The forecastle head was not then submerged though it was getting close down to the water, about half an hour before she disappeared (1.50 a. m.).

    When the last boat, lowered from davits (D), left the ship, A deck was under water, and water came up the stairway under the boat deck almost immediately afterwards. After this the other port collapsible (B), which had been stowed on the officers' house, was uncovered, the lashings cut adrift, and she was swung round over the edge of the coamings of the deckhouse on to the boat deck.

    Very shortly afterwards the vessel, according to Mr. Lightoller's account, seemed to take a dive, and he just walked into the water. When he came to the surface all the funnels were above the water.

    Her stern was gradually rising out of the water, and the propellers were clear of the water. The ship did not break in two, and she did, eventually, attain the perpendicular, when the second funnel from aft about reached the water. There were no lights burning then, though they kept alight practically until the last.

    Before reaching the perpendicular, when at an angle of 50° or 60°, there was a rumbling sound which may be attributed to the boilers leaving their beds and crashing down on to or through the bulkheads. She became more perpendicular and finally absolutely perpendicular, when she went slowly down.

    After sinking as far as the after part of the boat deck she went down more quickly. The ship disappeared at 2.20 a. m.

    British Wreck Commissioner's Court (Lord Mersey, Wreck Commissioner), Report of the British Wreck Commissioner's inquiry, section on the final stages of the sinking, as printed by the U.S. Senate (Document No. 933, ordered printed August 20, 1912) (1912). Public domain (published 1912). Source text.

    Teacher note. More than 1,500 people died in the sinking, and the sources describe deaths directly. Some students may have a personal connection to disasters at sea; allow a quiet exit if needed. The 1912 texts use terms of their time, such as "steerage" (the cheapest passenger class) and "stoker" (a crewman who fed the boiler fires); they are quoted exactly as printed.

Differentiation Strategies

For Struggling Students

  • Give a sourcing chart with five rows (who, when, where, how known, why) and one quotation already filled in for each source
  • Provide the evidence sentence starter: "[Author], writing [when] from [where], says '___' ([text], paragraph __). This is strong/weak evidence for ___ because ___."
  • Gloss older words in the margin: landsman, preponderance, at variance, starboard quarter, forecastle, perpendicular

For Advanced Students

  • Read the rest of Gracie's chapter and list every witness he cites; classify each claim as firsthand or secondhand
  • Compare Beesley's short newspaper account from the Carpathia with the book version and explain what changed in five weeks
  • Write a paragraph evaluating which 1912 source came closest to the truth about the break, and why its origin made that possible

Assessment Guidance

What to Look For

Strong work quotes exact words, says which source and paragraph they come from, and adds a date and origin tag that is used, not just attached: the tag explains why the evidence is strong or weak for this particular claim. Watch for three errors: treating every eyewitness as equally reliable, treating a later source as more accurate only because it is later, and quoting a secondhand claim inside a primary source (Gracie reporting Thayer) as if the author saw it himself.

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Classroom Activities

3 Activities

1

Source Card Lineup

20 minGroups of 3-4

Groups receive six source cards that give only the date and origin of each source, not its content. They classify each card and rank the sources for two different questions, then defend the ranking with the card details.

The Cards

  1. Beesley's short account, written at intervals aboard the rescue ship Carpathia, April 1912, and printed in newspapers (T1, paragraph 4)
  2. Beesley's book, 1912, begun about five weeks after the survivors landed; he watched from lifeboat 13
  3. An illustration in the New York Herald, 1912, drawn by an artist from Jack Thayer's description (T3, paragraph 1)
  4. The report of the U.S. Senate committee, May 1912, based on testimony from survivors and crew
  5. Gracie's book, published in 1913 after his death on December 4, 1912; he went down with the ship and was rescued from an overturned lifeboat
  6. An invented card: a history textbook chapter written in 2020 by an author who used only the two 1912 inquiry reports

Procedure

  • Label each card primary or secondary, and write its date and origin in five words or fewer
  • Rank the six cards for Question A: What did people in the lifeboats see in the last minutes?
  • Rank them again for Question B: Did the ship break in two?
  • Write one sentence per ranking that names the card detail that decided first place

Discussion Questions

  • Did any card move a long way between the two rankings? What about its origin caused the move?
  • Card 6 is the most recent source. Is it the strongest evidence on Question B? What about its origin limits it?
  • Card 3 is a picture, not words. Whose knowledge does it really show: the artist's or Thayer's?

Variation for a Shorter Class

Use cards 2, 4 and 5 only, and rank them for Question B.

2

Fact-Check the Summary

20 minPairs

Pairs test every claim in the practice summary (T4) against the primary sources T1-T3. Each claim gets a verdict and a citation, which shows students that a secondary source is only as good as the primary evidence behind it.

Procedure

  • Number the claims in the summary (there are ten)
  • For each claim, write a verdict: supported, contradicted, partly supported or not addressed by T1-T3
  • Quote the exact words from T1, T2 or T3 that decide each verdict, with the text and paragraph
  • Rewrite the summary in 100 words or fewer so that every claim is supported, and tag at least two claims with their source's date and origin

Discussion Questions

  • The summary says Beesley wrote "on the night of the sinking." Which words in T1 decide this claim?
  • Which claim can T1-T3 not check at all? What kind of source would you need?
  • The summary says eyewitnesses "agreed." What does Gracie's summary of the Senate report say about agreement?

Answer Key for the Teacher

  1. Struck an iceberg late on April 14, 1912: not addressed by T1-T3
  2. Sank early the next morning: supported: Beesley, "At about 2.15 A.M." (T2, paragraph 1), was still watching the ship
  3. Survivors in the lifeboats watched from a safe distance: partly supported: true of Beesley ("some distance away out of danger," T3, paragraph 1), but Gracie and Thayer were in the water
  4. The lights stayed on until she disappeared: contradicted: they "went out altogether" as she swung up (T2, paragraph 2)
  5. Boiler explosions tore the ship in two: contradicted by Beesley: "wrongly I think, have described as an explosion" (T2, paragraph 2)
  6. Every survivor who saw the sinking described the break: contradicted: "many conflicting statements" (T3, paragraph 1)
  7. The Senate inquiry confirmed the split: contradicted: the report says she "sank intact" (T3, paragraph 1)
  8. Beesley wrote a careful account: supported: T1 and T2
  9. He wrote his book on the night of the sinking: contradicted: the book was begun "Some five weeks after the survivors" landed (T1, paragraph 1)
  10. It is the most reliable account we have: not a fact but a judgment, and its reason is false
3

Tag the Evidence

15 minIndividual, then pairs

Students practice turning a bare quotation into a tagged evidence sentence. Each student writes three sentences from T2 and T3, then trades with a partner who checks the tags against the texts.

Procedure

  • Choose three quotations: one from Beesley (T2), one where Gracie reports his own experience, and one where Gracie reports someone else's
  • For each, write a sentence with the claim, the exact quotation, the text and paragraph, and a date and origin tag
  • Trade with a partner. The partner checks every quotation word for word, and underlines the tag if it is correct
  • Revise any sentence whose tag gives the wrong origin, for example a secondhand claim tagged as "Gracie saw"

Discussion Questions

  • Gracie writes that Thayer and Williams "were positive that they saw the ship split in two." Is this evidence of what Gracie saw or of what Thayer said? How should the tag read?
  • Which is harder to tag correctly: a quotation from Beesley or one from Gracie? Why?

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Diagrams & Visual Aids

2 diagrams

Diagram 1: Five Sourcing Questions Before You Cite

Five sourcing questions, answered for Beesley's account Who? A survivor:Beesley, apassenger ina lifeboat When? Book begunabout fiveweeks afterthe landing Where? "a mile totwo milesaway," inthe dark How known? Saw ithimself; alsoread others'accounts Why? To write "acorrecthistory" andpush reforms Evidence sentence = claim + quotation + date and origin tag + what the tag means Beesley, writing weeks later from a lifeboat "a mile to two miles away," deniesthe break; distance and darkness limit what that denial can prove.
Every source gets five questions before its words are used as evidence: who made it, when, where the author was, how the author knew and why it was made. The answers shown come from Beesley's preface (T1) and his account of the sinking (T2); the bottom row is the frame for a tagged evidence sentence.

Diagram 2: A Timeline of the 1912-1913 Sources

When the 1912-1913 sources were made (days after the sinking, to scale) May 1 Jun 1 Jul 1 Aug 1 Sep 1 Oct 1 Nov 1 Dec 1 Jan 1 1 1 Apr 15 (day 0): the ship sinks at 2:20 a.m. 2 2 Apr 18 (day 3): the Carpathia lands in New York 3 3 About May 23 (day 38): Beesley asked to write 4 4 May 28 (day 43): Senate report, "sank intact" 5 5 Jul 30 (day 106): British report (T7) 6 6 Aug 20 (day 127): Senate orders it printed 7 7 Dec 4 (day 233): Gracie dies; book in 1913 Off this scale: the secondary source T6 is written in 2026.
Days after the sinking on April 15, 1912, drawn to scale: the Carpathia landed 3 days later, Beesley was asked to write about 5 weeks after that (about day 38), the Senate committee reported on May 28 (day 43), the British report followed on July 30 (day 106) and was printed by the Senate on August 20 (day 127), and Gracie died on December 4 (day 233). Later sources fall far off this scale.

04

Homework Assignment

~30 min

RH.9-10.1 Homework: Sourcing the British Inquiry Report

Directions: Use the passage from the British inquiry report (T7) printed in the Closure phase of the lesson plan, and the secondary source T6 from the Independent Practice phase. Quote exact words for every point and give the text and paragraph number. Answer Problems 1-5 in 3-5 sentences each; Problem 6 is a paragraph.

Part 1: Date and Origin (Problems 1-2)

  1. Identify the origin of T7: who produced it, when, and in what form you are reading it. Then find the sentence in which the report names the person whose account it follows for the moment the ship went under, and quote it.
  2. Paragraph 1 of T7 admits a limit of the evidence. Quote it and explain what it tells a historian about how the report's times should be used.

Part 2: Citing Evidence from a Primary Source (Problems 3-4)

  1. Quote the sentence in T7 that answers the question "Did the ship break in two?" Using the origin you found in Problem 1, explain why the officer the report relies on was, or was not, in a position to see a break.
  2. T7 says the rumbling sound "may be attributed to the boilers leaving their beds." What do the words "may be attributed" tell you about the kind of claim this is? Is it something a witness saw, or an explanation offered by the report?

Part 3: Primary and Secondary Sources Together (Problems 5-6)

  1. Is T7 a primary or a secondary source? Argue that it is both, depending on the claim: name one claim for which it is a primary source and one for which it depends on other people's testimony, and quote each.
  2. Write a paragraph (150-200 words) that answers this question: How should a historian today use the British report's statement about the break? Quote T7 at least twice and T6 at least once, and give each quotation a date and origin tag.

Rubric

CriterionFull Credit (2 pts)Partial Credit (1 pt)No Credit (0 pts)
Date and OriginIdentifies author, date, form and the testimony behind each claim, with quotationsIdentifies some features without quotationsDate and origin missing or wrong
CitationExact quotations with text and paragraph for every pointQuotations present but loose or unlocatedNo quotations
Primary and SecondaryExplains how the same document is primary for some claims and secondhand for othersLabels the source without explainingLabel missing or wrong
Analysis ParagraphTags are used to judge the weight of the evidence, and T6 is used correctlyTags attached but not usedSummary instead of analysis

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Quiz: 20 Questions

Interactive, with answers

Instructions

Questions 1-7 and 15-16 use Jack Thayer's account (T5) and questions 8-14 and 17-18 use the secondary source T6, both printed in the Independent Practice phase of the lesson plan. Some questions also use Beesley (T2) or Gracie (T3). Your score updates as you answer, and Reset quiz clears everything so you or your students can try again.

Multiple choice: pick an option to check it. Short answer: write your answer, then reveal the model answer.

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  1. Question 1 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    According to paragraph 2 of T5, how did Jack Thayer's words reach the page of Marshall's 1912 book?

  2. Question 2 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Which detail in T5 best shows how close Thayer was to the ship when he saw what he describes in paragraph 3?

  3. Question 3 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    In paragraph 3 of T5, Thayer says "it seemed to me that she broke in two just in front of the third funnel." What do the words "it seemed to me" add to this evidence?

  4. Question 4 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Paragraph 1 of T5 is the book's headline for the chapter: "SEVENTEEN-YEAR-OLD SON OF PENNSYLVANIA RAILROAD OFFICIAL TELLS MOVING STORY OF HIS RESCUE." What does it show about the origin of the book?

  5. Question 5 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    In paragraph 2 of T5, whose judgment is "one of the most remarkable of all the wonderful ones"?

  6. Question 6 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Thayer's account was printed in 1912, within weeks of the sinking. Which is a real strength of that date for a historian?

  7. Question 7 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Thayer says the stern "stopped at about an angle of 60 degrees" (T5, paragraph 5). Beesley says the ship reached "a vertically upright position" (T2, paragraph 2). Which statement best uses both sources?

  8. Question 8 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    T6 is a secondary source. Which sentence from T6 shows that it uses evidence that no 1912 writer could have had?

  9. Question 9 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    How many years passed between the sinking (1912) and the discovery of the wreck (T6, paragraph 2)?

  10. Question 10 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    T6, paragraph 1, says the inquiries' conclusion "leaned heavily on the testimony of surviving officers such as Second Officer Charles Lightoller." Which feature of the 1912 evidence does this point to?

  11. Question 11 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    What evidence does T6 give that the ship broke apart?

  12. Question 12 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    In paragraph 3 of T6, the author writes that "The wreck does not show that the witnesses who disagreed were lying." What is the author's point?

  13. Question 13 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    Which pair of quotations best supports the claim "Thayer's 1912 account of a break was supported by later evidence"?

  14. Question 14 of 20 · Multiple Choice

    A student writes: "T6 is the best source on every question about the sinking because it is the most recent." What is the flaw?

  15. Question 15 of 20 · Short Answer

    Gracie suggests (T3, paragraph 3) that the young witnesses may have mistaken the falling forward funnel for a break. Use Thayer's own words in T5 to test this explanation. Does T5 support or weaken Gracie's theory? Quote T5.

  16. Question 16 of 20 · Short Answer

    Is T5 a primary or a secondary source? Explain, and name one thing a historian should be careful about because of how Thayer's words reached print. Quote T5.

  17. Question 17 of 20 · Short Answer

    Describe the date and origin of T6: when it was written, by whom, and what evidence it draws on. Name one strength and one limit of T6 as evidence about the sinking. Quote T6.

  18. Question 18 of 20 · Short Answer

    T6 says "Researchers who have studied the wreck generally conclude that the break happened at or near the surface." What kind of claim is this, and why does it matter for judging Thayer as a witness?

  19. Question 19 of 20 · Short Answer

    Write one evidence sentence that supports the claim "Some survivors in 1912 believed the ship broke in two." Quote T5, give the paragraph, and include a date and origin tag.

  20. Question 20 of 20 · Short Answer

    Thayer writes, "There did not seem to be very much suction" (T5, paragraph 5). Explain why Thayer's position makes him a strong witness for this detail, and a weaker one for the exact angle of the stern.

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Frequently Asked Questions

10 Questions

What does RH.9-10.1 mean?

RH.9-10.1 asks students in grades 9-10 to cite specific evidence from primary and secondary history sources to support their analysis, while paying attention to features such as the date and origin of the information. "RH" stands for Reading in History/Social Studies. In practice, students quote exact words and also say who made the source, when and how the author knew.

What is the difference between a primary and a secondary source?

A primary source was made by a participant or witness, or at the time of the events: a survivor's account, a letter, a 1912 inquiry report. A secondary source is made later by someone who works from other sources, such as a textbook or a historian's article. The label depends on the question: Gracie's book is primary for his own experience and secondhand when he reports what Thayer said.

What does "date and origin of the information" mean?

Date is when the source was made and how long after the events. Origin is where the information came from: the author, the author's position and vantage point, whether the author saw it or heard about it, and why the source was made. Both help decide how much weight a quotation can carry for a particular claim.

How is RH.9-10.1 different from RH.11-12.1?

Both ask students to cite specific evidence from primary and secondary sources. RH.9-10.1 adds attention to the date and origin of the information. RH.11-12.1 instead asks students to connect insights from specific details to an understanding of the text as a whole. The 9-10 standard focuses on sourcing; the 11-12 standard focuses on how details build the meaning of a whole document.

Is an eyewitness always the most reliable source?

No. An eyewitness is strong evidence for what that person could see from where they were, and weaker evidence for anything beyond it. Beesley saw the sinking but was a mile or more away in the dark, so his account is strongest for what could be seen from the lifeboats.

How do I teach sourcing without making students distrust every source?

Frame sourcing as matching a source to a question, not as hunting for liars. Ask "What is this source good evidence for?" before "Is it reliable?" Activity 1 has students rank the same six sources twice, for two different questions, so they see that one source can be strong evidence on one point and weak on another.

How should students cite evidence in history writing?

Use the exact words in quotation marks, name the source and its location (page, paragraph or document number), and add a short tag that gives the date and origin, for example "Beesley, writing weeks later from a lifeboat, says ...". Then explain what the tag means for the claim. A quotation with no explanation is not yet analysis.

Which class teaches RH.9-10.1?

RH.9-10.1 is a literacy standard for history and social studies, so it is usually taught in World History or U.S. History in grades 9-10, often alongside English classes. It fits any unit that uses documents, and it prepares students for document-based questions, a common format in history classes.

Why use the Titanic for RH.9-10.1?

The sinking produced many accounts in 1912 and 1913 from witnesses in very different positions, and they disagreed about a clear question: did the ship break in two? Evidence found decades later settled it. That makes the effect of date and origin easy to see, and the sources are in the public domain, so the page can quote them.

Can a single document be both a primary and a secondary source?

Yes. A document is primary for what its author saw or did, and secondhand for what the author reports from others. Gracie's book is primary when he writes "when I sank with her" and secondhand when he reports Thayer's statement or the Senate report.